Yousei Teikoku - Deep Sea · forum

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Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-08-08T06:08:16+00:00

Kecco wrote:
[Kevin]

00:16:174 - Dovresti aggiungere una nota qui. Così segui esattamente il ritmo che hai usato sin dall'inizio ---> Ovvero 00:11:717 - vuoto ; 00:13:431 (4) - Pieno; 00:14:460 - Vuoto . Quindi per una specie di "consecutio" dovresti riempire lo spazio che ti ha detto. Una specie di cosa così Ho capito ciò che intendi, ma imho una nota in questo punto non ci starebbe per niente bene :\ se vedi qui ho seguito più che altro i kicks che venivano "suonati" lì
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La nota numero 4 è quella interessata
Proseguendo ho notato che hai "rotto" il ritmo, va bene così. Anzi fa molto figo perché "spezza".
00:27:145 - Stessa cosa qui. Anche se invece dei vuoti ora c'hai gli slider. Piazza una nota please. Tipo così Same
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La nota in questione è la 4.
00:30:060 - Stessa cosa qui. Piazza una nota. Same
00:43:602 - Stessa cosa qui. Piazza una nota. Same
00:49:088 - Omg qui il vuoto non ci sta proprio. Piazza nota. Qui l'ho aggiunta la nota, considerando pure il piano lì. Ho anche rearrangiato il pattern aumentando lo spacing su 00:50:117 (3,4) - visto che era decisamente basso e rovinava un po' il flow :p
00:53:202 (3) - Piazzalo nella stessa posizione di 00:52:517 (3) - . Poi premi CTRL + G. Carica il player di adrenalina visto che è nascosto, e così lo prepara ai jumps fantastici che hai fatto subito dopo. So che sembra strano quello che dico, ma fidati. Migliorerebbe il gameplay di molto. Tipo così. Sei. Un. Genio. Non ci avevo mai pensato, ma viene giocato davvero bene, senza contare che flowwa perfettamente con il pattern successivo <3 Ti lovvo
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Tenk iu so mach

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Damnae

Elite Storyboarder

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Damnae 2013-08-08T20:29:16+00:00

Hello,

General

I suggest using this hitsound as a drum-hitnormal to map sounds like 00:11:031 - , 00:12:060 - , 00:12:402 - etc., you just have to change the additions back to soft to keep your other hitsounds as they are.

Easy & Normal

Fine, except having only soft whistles as hitsound additions makes hitsounding repetitive for theses diffs. Soft claps doesn't really fit, but I hope this custom hitsound will help.

Hard

AR7 might be better for this diff, specially for the beginning where the stacking makes it hard to get the spacing = time feeling ... or you may want to unstack 00:10:688 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - a bit?

Nemis

Since this diff is too perfect, I'll try some suggestions :p. Brace yourself, the ctrlGs are coming!
I tried to put some screenshots to show the intended cursor movement after changes.

00:18:918 (4,5) - ctrl-g theses (http://puu.sh/3X3zi.jpg)
00:46:003 (4,5) - ctrl-g this too (swap hitsounds)

00:49:775 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - nice :3

01:00:403 (1) - movement feels better if 1 is like this : http://puu.sh/3X3Gy.jpg
01:00:918 (2) - guess what ? ctrl-g this (swap hitsounds)

01:03:146 (1,2) - more ctrl-g (swap hitsounds)

01:04:345 (8,1) - After all these circle motions, I don't really like the movement between these two objects:
01:04:518 (1) - 01:04:861 (2) - and 01:05:889 (1) - ctrl-g each one separately ? It fixes this and makes this whole pattern flow nicely, ending with a jump+pause on 01:06:403 (2) - .

01:10:518 (4) - feels better if flipped like this http://puu.sh/3X3Og.jpg

Kevin

Note: I modded this using the above diff, since it hasn't been updated yet.

Audio preview is different from the other diffs.

I think you keep the circle-ish movements in the same direction for too long, it makes them feel better if you revert the direction at some points. The 3 "ctrl-g" suggestions are attempts to help with this, specially the first and last one.

00:21:660 (4) - sounds a bit too loud, try ~30% volume?

00:34:345 (1) - ctrl-g this slider

00:48:402 (2,3) - ctrl-g these (swap hitsounds)

00:48:745 (1) - add a whistle on this slider's end, and remove it on 00:49:431 (1) - (you may want to replace it with a low volume normal hitsound or use my suggested custom hitsound here?)

00:52:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - it was nice before the previous mod, it's still nice but a bit confusing now...

01:06:402 (3) - ctrl-g this

Nemis

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Topic Starter

Nemis 2013-08-08T22:02:42+00:00

Thanks, really useful! I fixed almost all

Updated my difficulties and Kevin's last update

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2013-08-12T15:19:01+00:00

ohai

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-08-12T15:24:45+00:00

This song has potential for make Taiko diffs

La Cataline

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La Cataline 2013-08-12T18:15:15+00:00

Nemis, get Becoming Insane ranked FFS. This or I'll kill you!

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2013-08-12T18:24:33+00:00

Deleted all the unnecessary posts, if you guys continue I'll have to take action. Please avoid doing that :\

tiper

tiper 2013-08-12T18:48:27+00:00

Gj, kevin.
Nemis wanted me to answer him, so I'll do that and leave.
Everything is relative. Sapienti sat.

Nemis

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Topic Starter

Nemis 2013-08-12T19:12:51+00:00

Whoops I gave a kd to LC unvoluntarily, sorry xD

[DBF]

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[DBF] 2013-08-13T02:52:57+00:00

Very good work, go for ranked.

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-08-13T14:55:41+00:00

Wonderful work <3

Lally

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Lally 2013-08-18T14:34:12+00:00

hola o3o/

[Easy]

00:15:831 (6) - spostalo in una maniera simile:
SPOILER
01:14:802 (3) - non mi piace come flowa la fine perchè non lo stacchi con 01:12:060 (1) - ?
01:16:688 - finirei lo spinner qui

[Normal]

00:20:288 (2,3) - inverti la posizione del 2 con il 3 affinche la pattern 2 sia parallela con 00:19:260 (1) - che ti migliora il flow imo
00:24:402 (5) - io lo staccherei con 00:24:745 (1) -
01:10:002 (3) - lo staccherei con 01:10:345 (4) - perchè la pattern 01:08:631 (1,2,3,4) - in se è confusionale un pochino rispetto a tutto il resto
01:16:688 - finirei lo spinner qui

[Hard]

HP e OD +1
00:27:488 (1) - perchè sto overlap brutto? ._.
00:37:602 (4,1) - dinuovo ._. mi chiedo perchè rovini un flow cosi pulito
01:15:488 (1,2) - io ci avrei messo uno spinner qui dato che la diff in se è molto facile e per dare un minimo di varieta allo score come hai fatto nella easy e nella normal :V

[Nemis]

01:16:860 - aggoingi una nota qui perchè sembra mancante in questocaso

[Kevincelo]

00:15:660 (3) - mi sebra che con un ctrl+g flowerebbe un po' meglio
00:18:231 (2,3) - rispetto a tutto il resto questo jump sembra un po' troppo grande
00:41:202 (1) - io lo farei ancora un pochino piu' curvo

bellissimo mapset \o3o/ good luck

Nemis

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Nemis 2013-08-18T14:45:50+00:00

Changed some, in the hard difficulty I don't really want to remove the half-hidden sliders

Thanks Lally, updated!

Pizza Kun

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Pizza Kun 2013-08-18T15:28:11+00:00

[Kevin]

00:10:688 (1) - Accorcialo fino a farlo di 2/4 invece che 3/4 e poi aggiungi una nota tra "l'hold" e lo slider sucessivo 1 così:

SPOILER

00:53:202 (3) - Spostalo in 296 || 124 è un po brutto da vedere sovrapposto e si legge poco quel punto essendoci molti stack, e sistema un po gli stack non perfetti

00:59:031 (1,2) - Sampleset Normal e metti 1 con Additions Soft

[Nemis]

00:10:689 (1) - Idem per la prima cosa che ho detto a kevin

00:22:518 (2) - Abbassa il secondo punto di ancoraggio, fai la curva verso il basso

01:15:489 (1,5,9) - Whistle
01:16:517 (13,14,15,16) - Clap
01:16:174 (1) - NC

[Hard]

Nulla da dire

[General]

Map ordinata che segue bene la musica c'è poco da correggere ^^

Nemis

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Nemis 2013-08-18T15:37:41+00:00

Thanks Pizza

Changed some. I fixed 00:10:689 (1) - in another way:

Updated!

Leader

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Leader 2013-08-18T16:14:06+00:00

yo

[Kevin]

00:56:802 - Aggiungerei una nota qui, si sente eccome il suono
01:16:860 (1) - finish or nuke plz

[Nemis]

Nulla da dire

[Hard]

00:10:688 (1,2,1) - Come far bestemmiare sin dall'inizio
00:27:488 (1,2,3) - Muovi (1) sotto la freccia dello slider e (2,3) a destra, più o meno così: http://puu.sh/44Pqt.jpg (chissene frega dello spacing)
00:38:460 (1) - Che schifo. Prova così: http://puu.sh/44Qtu.jpg

[Normal]

00:11:031 (2) - Io lo farei o curvo o cambierei il pattern in modo che scenda verso il basso, secondo me rende meglio
00:37:431 (4) - Curvo rende meglio, sarebbe difficile provare a blankettare qualcosa con 00:35:717 (1) -, ma potresti anche provarci
00:38:460 (1) - Lo curverei un pochino di più in modo che scorra meglio il flow con 00:39:488 (2) -
00:42:574 (3) - Anche se non uscirebbe nessun blanket potresti farlo curvo comunque, tenendo (4) e (5) così dove sono

[Easy]

Mi stavo per addormentare

00:11:031 (1) - Preferirei fosse curvo, non è che sia quel granché uno slider così a inizio mappa http://puu.sh/44Q2a.jpg
00:17:888 (2,3) - Io invertirei facendo prima lo slider e poi il circle, così lo slider segue quel fischiettio (?)
00:34:345 (2,3) - Stessa cosa ^, sarebbe da rimappare se li dovessi seguire tutti però prova a sentire la canzone e a sistemare questi due e qualcun'altro magari
01:00:402 (1) - Fallo simmetrico (you wanted me naziii)
01:14:802 (3) - Io farei uno slider 1/1

Non ho molto da aggiungere, bella bella

Last edited by Leader 2013-08-18T16:31:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

shARPII

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shARPII 2013-08-18T16:22:01+00:00

Heyo Nemis, feel the french mod :3

[Easy]

00:16:517 (1) - One grid right (on the same X position like 00:14:460 (4,5) - )
00:54:231 (6) - ^ (like 00:52:174 (3,4) - )

Everything else is k for me

[Normal]

00:59:374 (3) - spacing? (1.38~ should be closer to 1.3 than 1.4)
01:07:260 (3) - Remove whistle on slider's end
01:07:945 (4) - Add whistle on slider's start (=> If you follow this rythm : 01:10:345 (4) - the whistle should be on (4) and not on (3))

Nothing else to say here, this is good for me

[Hard]

As I said to you this afternoon, you have a whistle part but you don't really follow the song and you stop before the song. For this part : 00:52:174 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I suggest that you continue to use whistle. You can put a whistle on : 00:52:174 (1) - 00:52:860 (3) - 00:53:717 (1) - and 00:54:231 (4) -. There is one problem for me here, the whistle noise on a circle isn't the same that slider one so, you can put a slider 00:53:717 - instead of 00:53:717 (1,2) - . Here is the result : http://puu.sh/44PxM.jpg and for the hitsounds : http://puu.sh/44Pjm.wav . I think that this is less empty so tell me what do you think about it.
If you apply what I tell you above, this part has to be changed too 01:03:145 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -

Except this detail, this is perfect for me ^^

I post it now because I'm not available for modding tonight. I'll update this post tomorrow even if I don't think that I have a lot of things to say about Nemis & Kevin diffs.
Good job Nemis

Nemis

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Topic Starter

Nemis 2013-08-18T16:40:32+00:00

Thanks! Fixed all from shARPII <3 I applied the whistle mod on [Nemis] too

Updated.

Azure

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Azure 2013-08-19T03:35:28+00:00

as your request :-D

[General]
change Yōsei Teikoku to 妖精帝國 ?

[Easy]
Nice

[Normal]
Nice

[Hard]

the suggestion is same as Nemis
01:15:317 (4) +clap?

[Nemis]

I think the whistle of slider broke the peace of this song ;_; like this 00:45:146 (1) just suggest you remove every whistle on slider or add green line to reduce the volume (15%)
00:53:717 (2,4,5,6) change to this? follow the music

SPOILER

[Kevin]

00:21:660 (4) change normal to drum-finish?
00:54:917 (1) stick with 00:53:374 (3) is better and +finish
01:16:860 add a green line and the volume is 30%

beautiful song and arrangement of this song <3
star one

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2013-08-19T07:25:35+00:00

Damnae wrote:
Kevin

00:21:660 (4) - sounds a bit too loud, try ~30% volume? Good idea, done

00:34:345 (1) - ctrl-g this slider Sorry, I really want to keep this kind of slider here. Imho reversing it would only ruin the pattern :\

00:48:402 (2,3) - ctrl-g these (swap hitsounds) I'm really unsure about this one... It isn't that bad, though I really wanted to continue the circular flow there finishing with a jump... So no change here, sorry :U

00:48:745 (1) - add a whistle on this slider's end, and remove it on 00:49:431 (1) - (you may want to replace it with a low volume normal hitsound or use my suggested custom hitsound here?) Done

00:52:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - it was nice before the previous mod, it's still nice but a bit confusing now... It could be a bit confusing, yet I love how this pattern flows

01:06:402 (3) - ctrl-g this I still prefer keeping the current direction, even though you're suggestion isn't bad at all... Sorry for that!

Lally wrote:
[Kevincelo]
00:15:660 (3) - mi sebra che con un ctrl+g flowerebbe un po' meglio È intenzionale, e mi piace come flowwa :U
00:18:231 (2,3) - rispetto a tutto il resto questo jump sembra un po' troppo grande Ridotto un po'
00:41:202 (1) - io lo farei ancora un pochino piu' curvo ok

Pizza Kun wrote:
[Kevin]

00:10:688 (1) - Accorcialo fino a farlo di 2/4 invece che 3/4 e poi aggiungi una nota tra "l'hold" e lo slider sucessivo 1 così: Non è male, ma iniziare la diff con un pattern del genere è decisamente esagerato... Dubito si possa subito reggere la combo 1/8 slider + tripletta quindi tengo così er ora

SPOILER

00:53:202 (3) - Spostalo in 296 || 124 è un po brutto da vedere sovrapposto e si legge poco quel punto essendoci molti stack, e sistema un po gli stack non perfetti Spostandolo lì mi si rovinerebbe tutto il pattern, sia struturalmente che per quanto riguarda il flow. Capisco cosa intendi, ma a me piace molto com'è ora, sorry!

00:59:031 (1,2) - Sampleset Normal e metti 1 con Additions Soft Imho non ci sta per niente, sorry

Leader wrote:
[Kevin]
00:56:802 - Aggiungerei una nota qui, si sente eccome il suono Peccato che in questa parte sto seguendo solo i "kick"... non sembrerebbe un po' troppo strano seguire all'improvviso un altro strumento? Preferisco lasciare così
01:16:860 (1) - finish or nuke plz Nuk- ahem, aggiunto :3

Azure wrote:
[Kevin]
00:21:660 (4) change normal to drum-finish? Cool idea, added
00:54:917 (1) stick with 00:53:374 (3) is better and +finish Added the finish there
01:16:860 add a green line and the volume is 30% Yep it fits pretty good. Done!

Thanks for the mods, guys!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Deep Sea.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 153646
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11031,22002,32974,43945,54917,65888,140274
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Deep Sea
TitleUnicode:Deep Sea
Artist:Yousei Teikoku
ArtistUnicode:Yōsei Teikoku
Creator:Nemis
Version:Kevin
Source:
Tags:-kevincela- kevincela ocean water blue stigma
BeatmapID:286033
BeatmapSetID:109554

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Deep Sea.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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Nemis

847 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Nemis 2013-08-19T10:25:57+00:00

Thanks! Updated

Kodora

Kodora 2013-08-21T18:26:22+00:00

hihi, sorry for delay
Very good map, so mostly suggestions

[General]

Kevin's diff have different preview time
You should add approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png

[Kevin]

00:10:688 (1) - Hmm, maybe try to do same volume change trick as Nemis did?
00:15:660 (3,4) - Its very hard to notice rhytm change here and very hard to read this stack due to low approach rate (i missed here twice), so i suggest you unstack this and move (4) out (better will be stack with 00:16:517 (1) ) - other parts like this playes well because of repetitive rhytm what can be learned while playing but unstack this one, please.
00:32:974 (1) - you can add whistle here to the beginning of slider and to sliderbody to emphazire this sound
00:43:945 (1) - add whistle for same reason?
00:52:517 (3,3) - cool <3
00:58:860 - Just wondering why you ignored this beat if you focusing on piano here. Add note maybe?
01:16:860 (1) - maybe add a little kiai fountain here?

Awesome!

[Nemis]

*I really prefer see this diff as hardest diff in mapset. So probably raise AR to 9 to have it more readable and OD 8 to have it more challenging

00:55:602 - This "hole" makes rhytm feels a bit inconsistent, please add here note with clap.
00:56:974 - Same. It feels a bit wrong if strong beat get ignored by slider (or you may set tick rate 2, silence ticks and add "clap tick" here - or just add storyboarded custom clap)
00:58:346 (5) - clap instead of whistle
01:16:860 - Add note with finish here.

Very good, just one little thing that moving only in "round" way may be a bit boring, but diff is cool anyway.

[Hard]

*AR8 please, it very hard to read with 7

00:10:688 (1,2) - Sounds not so good. Try to do repetitive 1/4 slider instead:
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[img]
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00:27:488 (1) - Looks a bit ugly, can you please rotate those slider by 180°?
00:32:974 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider?
00:37:602 (4,1) - same, rotate it please, half-hiding end of slider under slidertrack looks a bit messy.
00:43:945 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider?
00:54:574 (4) - add whistle here to sliderbody
01:15:488 (1) - end spinner at 01:16:860 - and add finish

[Normal]

00:54:917 - Just "no please". Dont use speedchanges on easiest diffs in mapset, it hard for beginners to play them.
00:54:917 (1) - i'd replace whistle on the end of slider with clap because this is drum sound in music
00:56:631 (4) - ^
00:57:660 (1) - ^
00:59:717 (4) - ^
01:15:488 (1) - end spinner at 01:16:860 - and add finish

[Easy]

*Current settings looks too low, esperially Approach rate. Raise everything (except circlesice if you want) by 1 tick

00:10:688 - 00:10:860 - you may add short 1/2 slider here to not ignore cool rhytm at this part.
00:32:974 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider?
00:43:945 (1) - ^
01:15:488 (1) - end spinner at 01:16:860 - and add finish

Good job, starred.

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-08-22T07:22:48+00:00

After you check that mod, let me know and I'll check the map.

Nemis

847 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Nemis 2013-08-22T11:07:20+00:00

Thanks! Updated my difficulties and fixed the preview time (for kevin too).

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,790 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-08-22T12:24:02+00:00

Kodora wrote:
[Kevin]

00:10:688 (1) - Hmm, maybe try to do same volume change trick as Nemis did? Done!
00:15:660 (3,4) - Its very hard to notice rhytm change here and very hard to read this stack due to low approach rate (i missed here twice), so i suggest you unstack this and move (4) out (better will be stack with 00:16:517 (1) ) - other parts like this playes well because of repetitive rhytm what can be learned while playing but unstack this one, please. Sorry, but I won't do that for now. I actually really like how it plays, even if it could be too unexpected...
00:32:974 (1) - you can add whistle here to the beginning of slider and to sliderbody to emphazire this sound Sure thing
00:43:945 (1) - add whistle for same reason? ^
00:52:517 (3,3) - cool <3 Thank you
00:58:860 - Just wondering why you ignored this beat if you focusing on piano here. Add note maybe? I started following the piano just in the next downbeat. Adding a note here would really be a sudden change of instrument which isn't that great
01:16:860 (1) - maybe add a little kiai fountain here? Done!

Fixed the preview time as well. Thanks!

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Artist:Yousei Teikoku
ArtistUnicode:妖精帝國
Creator:Nemis
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Source:
Tags:-kevincela- kevincela ocean water blue stigma
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Nemis

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Nemis 2013-08-22T12:26:01+00:00

Updated :>

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-08-22T17:35:17+00:00

Hello. Here is my mod that you have wished for. C:

[General]

Your kiai placement is really weird to me. You placed it at the calm section in between the more intense parts. It would be better from 01:00:402 to 01:05:888 imo.

[Kevin]

00:18:231 (2,3) - The jump to the 3 seems a little big for this portion of the song and doesn't feel very nice considering it's huge change in flow pattern. You could try placing the 2 at around (0,136). It will be similar in flow to what you currently have, just less dramatic. Also similar to the 00:15:488 (2,3). Try it, see if you like.
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00:21:317 (3) - Flows kind of weird to me considering the small spacing from the 2 after the jump between 1-2. Instead you could rotate it and create a circle flow with a drop off into the 00:21:660 (4) which might create a similar idea to what I think you were going for. Try it:
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00:32:974 (1) - Try curving it and pointing it upwards. I think it provides a much better turn around into the 2 and better flow to the 3.
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00:53:888 (1,2) - Imo it plays nicer if you repeat the spacing from the 00:53:545 (1,2). That way we have two sets of two similarly spacing doubles, instead of 3 doubles being larger spacing than the first.
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One of those maps that I could play again and again and again. Nice job.

[Nemis]

00:24:745 (1) - I'd like you to replace this with a 1/2 slider and a circle so that it's the same rhythm with 00:13:432 (4,5,1,2,3). Feels nicer imo since the music has repeated here.
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00:22:002 to 00:43:774 - I'd like it if you could add some sort of jump here to spice this section up a bit...The hard diff has more jumps than the Insane here. Basically anywhere that you have a 1/2 slider is a great place to make a jump, like 00:41:203 (1). The linear flow there is kinda meh anyways to be honest. Having more jumps, even small ones, could help spice up your roundish movement here.
00:43:946 (1,2) - Switch NC here reads a ton better to be honest. Since the phrase starts on the 00:44:118 (2) along with the jumping. Similar to 00:48:232 (1).

[Hard]

00:27:831 (2,3) - Try placing it a (176,272) so that with auto stacking, it will be under the tail of the 00:26:631 (3).
01:02:802 (3,4,1) - Auto stacking making it look not so great because it's overlapped by the slider 2. Try moving this to the right a bit, like (104,296) is nice.
01:06:917 (4) - Missing clap on the head I believe.

Others seem fine to me.

Pretty sweet mapset. I need some coffee.

Nemis

847 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Nemis 2013-08-22T18:30:41+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[General]

Your kiai placement is really weird to me. You placed it at the calm section in between the more intense parts. It would be better from 01:00:402 to 01:05:888 imo.
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[Nemis]

00:24:745 (1) - I'd like you to replace this with a 1/2 slider and a circle so that it's the same rhythm with 00:13:432 (4,5,1,2,3). Feels nicer imo since the music has repeated here. Done
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00:22:002 to 00:43:774 - I'd like it if you could add some sort of jump here to spice this section up a bit...The hard diff has more jumps than the Insane here. Basically anywhere that you have a 1/2 slider is a great place to make a jump, like 00:41:203 (1). The linear flow there is kinda meh anyways to be honest. Having more jumps, even small ones, could help spice up your roundish movement here. I think it's fine, I made big jumps in the piano part only (in this diff) except 00:19:089 (5,1) - here
00:43:946 (1,2) - Switch NC here reads a ton better to be honest. Since the phrase starts on the 00:44:118 (2) along with the jumping. Similar to 00:48:232 (1). right
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00:27:831 (2,3) - Try placing it a (176,272) so that with auto stacking, it will be under the tail of the 00:26:631 (3). Moved at 180 276 to keep (2) readable
01:02:802 (3,4,1) - Auto stacking making it look not so great because it's overlapped by the slider 2. Try moving this to the right a bit, like (104,296) is nice. okay
01:06:917 (4) - Missing clap on the head I believe. right
Others seem fine to me.

Pretty sweet mapset. I need some coffee.

Thanks >w< Updated my diffs!

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-kevincela- 2013-08-22T18:33:22+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Kevin]

00:18:231 (2,3) - The jump to the 3 seems a little big for this portion of the song and doesn't feel very nice considering it's huge change in flow pattern. You could try placing the 2 at around (0,136). It will be similar in flow to what you currently have, just less dramatic. Also similar to the 00:15:488 (2,3). Try it, see if you like. Even though I originally wanted to keep it, I see that more and more players are having issues with this jump, so I guess it should be better now.
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00:21:317 (3) - Flows kind of weird to me considering the small spacing from the 2 after the jump between 1-2. Instead you could rotate it and create a circle flow with a drop off into the 00:21:660 (4) which might create a similar idea to what I think you were going for. Try it: Cool pattern, though I prefer the drop off which happens between this slider and 00:21:660 (4) better...
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00:32:974 (1) - Try curving it and pointing it upwards. I think it provides a much better turn around into the 2 and better flow to the 3. Nice!
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00:53:888 (1,2) - Imo it plays nicer if you repeat the spacing from the 00:53:545 (1,2). That way we have two sets of two similarly spacing doubles, instead of 3 doubles being larger spacing than the first. I prefer to have the spacing constantly increasing there, to emphatize the piano chords which are being played there to switch then to the kicks. Sorry for that!
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One of those maps that I could play again and again and again. Nice job. Thank you!

Thanks for the mod

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