Mercusheigan wrote:

Insane- Object's end is not snapped! 03:59:322

no kudos... this is a great mapset!

256,268,143639,5,4,3:1:0:0:
184,300,143881,2,0,P|120:288|88:224,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,148,144607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,116,144849,2,0,P|228:128|260:192,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,145575,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:08:639 (2,3) - requires unstacking
2. 00:47:349 (2,3) - should be more dynamic, because player follows 2 and gets right to 3 not doing anything else. You should alter his movement somehow
3. 00:47:832 (3,4,5) - requires unstacking
4. 00:55:574 (3) - maybe you meant http://puu.sh/5wpIO.jpg
5. 00:56:058 (4,5) - uh.. unstack these?
6. 00:59:203 (3,4) - should be closer to each other
7. 01:02:832 (2,3) - same as 00:47:349 (2,3)
8. 01:03:316 (3,4,5) - same as 00:47:832 (3,4,5)
9. 01:25:090 (4,5) - requires spacing decrease
10. 01:31:865 (2,3,4) - I wouldn't make a straight line here
11. 01:38:155 (4) - http://puu.sh/5wqmv.jpg would be an ideal solution to avoid an uncomfortable movement
12. 01:46:865 (1,2,3,4) - looks really disbalanced
13. 01:47:832 (4,5,6,1) - plays bad. I move up, down, then I wanna move up again, but I have to go down instead
14. 01:48:800 (1) - bend it the other way, so its inner part should be closer to previous note http://puu.sh/5wqyi.jpg
15. 02:21:703 (8,1) - should have the same curve, shouldn't they?
16. 02:27:510 (1,2,3,4) - it's mirrored and copy-pasted and doesn't really flow
17. 02:32:833 (4,5) - unstack?
18. 02:36:219 (4,5,6) - ^
19. 02:44:445 (4,5) - ^
20. 02:47:590 (4,5) - requires spacing decrease
21. 02:55:574 (4,5,6) - unstack? the middle slider also looks poor
22. 03:14:929 (4) - move down a bit
23. 03:22:671 (3,4,5) - ^
24. 03:24:607 (3) - I'd reverse and move up
25. 04:00:413 (3) - add whistle? lol what a random suggestion

Yoeri wrote:

Pretty fun set.

[Easy]
00:06:220 - Hitsound volume is a bit loud. 60% seems good to me, if someone else says I'll lower.
01:08:397 - No spinner? Debated whether or not it'd be too short of a spinner, but ok, added.
01:20:736 - ^ Here, I wouldn't be able to make the space between the spinner and (1) long enough.
01:37:187 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:39:123 and end it at 01:41:058 Length between spinner and (1) would be too short
02:39:123 (1) - Remove finish. Huh. Interesting. I changed it to the drum hitset, sounds better i s'pose.
03:10:090 (1) - End spinner at 03:13:478 Ambient noise ends on that red tick.
03:19:768 (3,4) - Blanket could be better. done
03:41:058 (1) - Start spinner at 03:42:994 and end it at 03:44:929 or right before it. same reason as above


[Hard]
OD+1. hm. agreed.
00:13:397 (3) - I know it fits the vocals, but it just plays really weird. I understand, but there's nothing much else I can do other than cascading sliders ;~;
00:36:703 (3,1) - Switch the lengths of these around? understand your reasoning behind this but (1) is meant to stress that guitar strum.
01:20:736 - Add a spinner? yes yes yes. done.
01:46:381 (7) - Maybe blanket (6). I'm just concerned about the DS between (7) and (1), but I edited (7) a bit.
02:40:937 (1) - Remove finish. did same thing as easy.

[Insane]
00:13:840 (5) - Move a bit further away from (4). Now blankets (1).
00:33:195 (7,8) - This sudden jump might trip a lot of players up because the parts before and after it are perfectly snapped. Try decreasing the distance or maybe add a new combo to (8). NC'd (7), will let approach circles do the rest.
01:20:736 - Add a spinner? yes yes yes done
01:24:486 (3,4,5,6) - Make the distance between these exactly the same. fixed
02:41:058 (1) - Sliderend isn't snapped. Also remove the finish. good catch, fixed.
03:25:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Start the zigzag a bit later, at (3). Changed.
03:26:542 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - A stream here doesn't fit the music at all. but it kinda does :c and it plays awesome!

1. phaZ's 4# kiai ends different time than the other kiais on other difficulties, I know it's a GD but it would be cool to have the exact kiai times.
   
   Kiai

   
2. I don't think there's need for widescreen support and letterboxes so maybe disable them?
3. Every difficulty has some unsnapped objects to please check your AiMod

1. I was kinda dissapointed that you didn't map the long vocals? Some sliderart would be cool to see but oh well xD
2. Try Ar3, since the song is relaxing and the settings are kinda unbalanced right now. 4 feels anyway too high for the easiest difficulty. If you want to keep Ar4, use OD3 to balance the diff settings then!
3. 00:24:607 (2,3) - I don't think the flow is really that great between these notes, here's what I got for you! So basically I made a blanket with 2 and 3, and then stacked 4 with the slider's end. I think that has way more natural movement
   
   Example

   
4. 00:38:397 (1) - I think the volume starting here (20%) is kinda low compared to the actual song, try maybe 30 or 40? Feels better that way
5. 01:07:671 (2) - Not sure if the drum additions fits there, to be honest. I would remove it but you might wanna get more opinions on that.
6. 01:24:123 (2,3) - Not the most perfect blanket, it's near perfect but it can be improved a bit.
7. 01:30:413 (2,3,4) - Not really the best flow here, you can improve it! Here's some quick examples
   
   pls see

   
   
8. 02:26:784 (1) - Add some more volume on this slider, the music doesn't go that low imo, the 30-40% should be good
9. 02:50:252 (1,2) - Not a big fan of overlaps in Easy difficulties, you could consider doing it like this?
   
   ''This''

   
10. 03:21:703 (1) - Uhh, just my personal opinion here but this slider doesn't fit because of it's shape, maybe reshape it into something else?
11. Cool diff :3

1. 00:32:227 (2) - Slight DS error here, I assume?
2. 01:05:010 (5,6) - IMO kinda awkward movement here, try stacking them? Feels much better to me that way
3. 01:25:090 (2,3) - Flow isn't that great, if you move (3) more up, it would be fine
   
   If you didn't understand, check this!

   
4. 01:37:187 (1) - DS error here, right? Your difficulty's distance isn't as equal as I would want it to be. You might want to check your map and see if there's any other distance errors, this is a Normal diff after all :3
5. 01:47:832 (3,4) - Feels really weird because their ends are not properly stacked, try it maybe? Feels less awkward to me atleast
6. 03:10:574 (1) - Can you end this spinner earlier or remove the note right after it? I'm sure beginners wont be able to catch that
7. 03:29:445 (3) - Should have NC since the chorus starts
8. Interesting difficulty, kinda weird flow, sometimes it had a weird rhythm but it was cool

1. Seems that your distance is going crazy at the beginning, make sure to fix that
2. 00:10:816 (1,2) -
3. 00:12:510 (1,2) - Just some examples that the distance is quite messed up D:
4. 00:12:873 (2,3,4) - Maybe not the best flow here, try something like this maybe?
   
   Example

   
   If you like that, just create a correct blanket
5. 00:26:784 (1) - Unnecessary NC
6. 00:38:397 (1) - The same volume suggestion as in easy
7. 00:54:607 (1,2,3) - Bad flow imo, you could improve it or use an example like this?
   
   hello

   
   
   You would need to do some rearranging with next objects, but it shouldn't be that hard
8. 00:58:478 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing + flow is bad here, here's an example how I would do it
   
   Hello

   
9. 01:26:542 (4,5) - Would be cool if they would be paralel (did that even make sense?)
   
   See this picture

   
   Like that
10. 01:30:897 (6) - Slider's end 1 grid up to make a better blanket
11. 01:39:123 (6) - Spacing now?? pls
12. 01:48:558 (6) - If you move this note closer to 01:48:800 (1) - the flow will improve
    
    Example

    
13. 02:22:913 (1,2) - Unnecessary NC, imo this should belong to this combo 02:21:703 (8) -
14. 02:26:784 (1,2,3) - Instead of putting them at straight 1.6 spacing, how about gradually increasing the spacing? The song starts off low and then goes up so it would fit, I guess
15. 02:35:252 (2) - CTRL + G for better flow
16. 02:47:832 (5) - CTRL + J would improve the flow here
17. 03:38:034 (4,6,1) - Flow D:
18. This difficulty needs more work, too much random spacing, awkward flows. Sorry ;_; You can disagree, of course.

1. Well, this diff is MUCH better than the Hard, some suggestions only!
2. 00:20:736 (4) - CTRL + G works better imo, flow would be better
3. 00:38:397 (1,2,3) - maybe gradually increase the spacing? Feels weird when you start this from jumps >:
4. 00:39:123 (4) - Should have NC, atleast you NC'd this note / slider in Hard also?
5. 00:54:607 (4) - NC Maybe?
6. 00:57:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - This combo is waaaay too long, consider adding a NC 01:00:897 (12) - or something
7. 01:42:873 (9,1) - Nice one :3<3
8. 01:42:873 (9,1,7,8) - Make them correctly paralel (same kind of suggestion as in Hard)
9. 03:13:719 (1,2) - I think this is far too sudden even if it's Insane, I don't think many people can react so fast because the spinner ends so late and right after there's a HUGE jump so consider reducing the spacing a bit.
10. 03:26:542 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Agreeing with Yoeri, doesn't fit that well :s
11. 03:28:961 (1) - Unnecessary NC

Asphyxia wrote:

Hey there! Nice song you got there! M4M :3

General thoughts:

1. phaZ's 4# kiai ends different time than the other kiais on other difficulties, I know it's a GD but it would be cool to have the exact kiai times. i actually would advise to make SuperMIC's kiai like mine there
   
   Kiai

   
2. I don't think there's need for widescreen support and letterboxes so maybe disable them?
3. Every difficulty has some unsnapped objects to please check your AiMod not again lol

P's Normal:

1. 00:32:227 (2) - Slight DS error here, I assume? no, i want that so people dont press too early because now it is (well...) hard to catch that circle on the red tick before the blue one
2. 01:05:010 (5,6) - IMO kinda awkward movement here, try stacking them? Feels much better to me that way thank you man!
3. 01:25:090 (2,3) - Flow isn't that great, if you move (3) more up, it would be fine i actually want to keep this angle
   
   If you didn't understand, check this!

   
4. 01:37:187 (1) - DS error here, right? fixd Your difficulty's distance isn't as equal as I would want it to be. You might want to check your map and see if there's any other distance errors, this is a Normal diff after all :3 too lazy
5. 01:47:832 (3,4) - Feels really weird because their ends are not properly stacked, try it maybe? Feels less awkward to me atleast i tried to avoid stacking because its more clearly how that thing work imo
6. 03:10:574 (1) - Can you end this spinner earlier or remove the note right after it? I'm sure beginners wont be able to catch that haha modder before told me to make it longer
7. 03:29:445 (3) - Should have NC since the chorus starts didnt have done this at first kiai neither. and i dont want to change it anyway
8. Interesting difficulty, kinda weird flow, sometimes it had a weird rhythm but it was cool

That's all, hope it helps you. I would work on the Hard some more though.

gameon123321 wrote:

Hi! I just want to say that this mapset is very good and doesn't really need lots of work!
Now onto the review:

Insane:
The break between 4 and 5 on the combo starting at 30:050 seems long. Perhaps use a repeat slider or make it a new combo? Hmm, it is a bit long, bit I think because the spacing is quite large it is readable, and I don't want to just throw in a note because there is nothing to map to.
Starting at 46:381, it seems to be jumpy. I understand why (difficulty, song), but this would be frustrating to many players, especially those who aren't used to jumping. Perhaps you could gradually expand the jumps to where you want them to be, instead of having certain "sections" from which you change abruptly (especially during the beginning). The slider speed also seems slow near the end of the section - you're doing 4x jumps! Well, this is an Insane so experienced players would be playing it. It also has a relatively lower BPM, and I've had this map tested by quite a few people who think it's readable. As for the 4x jumps, sorry, which section are you referring to?


Hard:
During the 1st section (to 38:397) It feels like you're mapping to the singer or the accompanying guitar. That's OK most of the time, but it gets annoying when they both take a rest.
How man times have you used sliders with 1 repeat? 0? 2? 3? I feel like there's too little variety, and hards are supposed to be hard.
Otherwise, good job!
Yes, the intro probably needs some work and I'm sure I can get specifics in the future. Surprisingly, I find that more repeats mean easier difficulties as it makes a section easier. Thanks though!

PhaZ's normal:
The starting rhythm at 7:187 (1,2) is awkward. Perhaps change it to 2 circles?
10:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) The combo is long and should be split.
19:768 (5,6) really? This is so awkward.
41:058 (4) This is at the edge of the screen, and anyone w/o a widescreen monitor might have trouble.
53:881 (6) 56:781 (1) These sliders are too close, and it's hard to read
2:12:086 (2) This feels like overmapping, the repeat is completely unnecessary.
2:51:083 (1,2) The rhythm here is tricky for beginners. Change it to a 3rd repeat and a circle?
3:25:574 (2) This is a lot of repeats. Could you divide it up here into two sliders?
3:52:671 (1,2) This feels like a 2-beat gap, yet is a 1-beat gap in the middle of a phrase. Change?

Easy:
31:865 (2) A finish in the middle of nowhere? This is to follow the other difficulties.
2:16:381 (1,2,3) I think that the circle might surprise people, maybe take it out? Hmm, I think because of the 1/2 repeat slider earlier this will be mor readable. I understand, however, and I'll get more opinions on this.
3:56:542 (5,6,7) Same as previous Saem as above, will get more opinions.


Overall, good job! This mapset is very good and needs few corrections (the normal needs more work on its rhythm (it is a bit funky) and the easy at times seems to be a normal) but I like it!

P.S. PLEASE take my corrections with a grain of salt because this is my first time seriously doing this.

Roxas wrote:

This map is nice! Take my useless star!