Thank you so much for your help! This is a really good start to modding and your suggestions are valid and aiding.gameon123321 wrote:
Hi! I just want to say that this mapset is very good and doesn't really need lots of work!
Now onto the review:
Insane:
The break between 4 and 5 on the combo starting at 30:050 seems long. Perhaps use a repeat slider or make it a new combo? Hmm, it is a bit long, bit I think because the spacing is quite large it is readable, and I don't want to just throw in a note because there is nothing to map to.
Starting at 46:381, it seems to be jumpy. I understand why (difficulty, song), but this would be frustrating to many players, especially those who aren't used to jumping. Perhaps you could gradually expand the jumps to where you want them to be, instead of having certain "sections" from which you change abruptly (especially during the beginning). The slider speed also seems slow near the end of the section - you're doing 4x jumps! Well, this is an Insane so experienced players would be playing it. It also has a relatively lower BPM, and I've had this map tested by quite a few people who think it's readable. As for the 4x jumps, sorry, which section are you referring to?
Hard:
During the 1st section (to 38:397) It feels like you're mapping to the singer or the accompanying guitar. That's OK most of the time, but it gets annoying when they both take a rest.
How man times have you used sliders with 1 repeat? 0? 2? 3? I feel like there's too little variety, and hards are supposed to be hard.
Otherwise, good job!
Yes, the intro probably needs some work and I'm sure I can get specifics in the future. Surprisingly, I find that more repeats mean easier difficulties as it makes a section easier. Thanks though!
PhaZ's normal:
The starting rhythm at 7:187 (1,2) is awkward. Perhaps change it to 2 circles?
10:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) The combo is long and should be split.
19:768 (5,6) really? This is so awkward.
41:058 (4) This is at the edge of the screen, and anyone w/o a widescreen monitor might have trouble.
53:881 (6) 56:781 (1) These sliders are too close, and it's hard to read
2:12:086 (2) This feels like overmapping, the repeat is completely unnecessary.
2:51:083 (1,2) The rhythm here is tricky for beginners. Change it to a 3rd repeat and a circle?
3:25:574 (2) This is a lot of repeats. Could you divide it up here into two sliders?
3:52:671 (1,2) This feels like a 2-beat gap, yet is a 1-beat gap in the middle of a phrase. Change?
Easy:
31:865 (2) A finish in the middle of nowhere? This is to follow the other difficulties.
2:16:381 (1,2,3) I think that the circle might surprise people, maybe take it out? Hmm, I think because of the 1/2 repeat slider earlier this will be mor readable. I understand, however, and I'll get more opinions on this.
3:56:542 (5,6,7) Same as previous Saem as above, will get more opinions.
Overall, good job! This mapset is very good and needs few corrections (the normal needs more work on its rhythm (it is a bit funky) and the easy at times seems to be a normal) but I like it!
P.S. PLEASE take my corrections with a grain of salt because this is my first time seriously doing this.
P.S. In the future, you can actually talk about certain parts without manually writing the time... Go to the note you want to talk about in the editor, select it, and ctrl+c to copy it. Then just paste it here!
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^ examples
ill put a slider there 