happy30 wrote:

Hey there!
you asked in #modreq for a BATrequest.
I looked a bit over your map and I think the map needs some tidying up before it can be shown to BATs for easy rank~
Here's my mod to help you.

[Easy]
Sliders go a bit too fast for my taste, the spacing seems a little too small too, which hurts the flow imo. Somehow I think the patterns look better with circle-size 2.5 Yeah, The SV is a bit fast, and the spacing is a bit small, but I'm fine with it. It plays Easily enough and it really isn't worth a remap over. I'm perfectly fine with it. I did lower the CS to 2.5 though.
Oh well,
00:35:917 (1) - This note is a little too far from the previous sliderend. make the prev/next both 0.70x? Nice catch, fixed.
02:20:627 - add a clap Fixed.
03:21:906 (1) - make the end softer in volume. I don't think I can go softer than 5% X_x

[Normal]
00:55:550 (1) - this is a pretty boring slider, there's much more room in the song to come up with a more interesting pattern here. Even for the sake of symmetry I would change the rhythm to make it a bit more interesting. The main purpose of this slider was to avoid a complex rhythm due to the vocals. I think it is fine as is.
01:01:500 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. Fixed.
01:06:259 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make this a little neater, like: Sure, spruced this up a bit.

01:16:373 (5) - let this slider start 1/2 later and remove (6)? It would fit a lot better with the vocals here. I think this would cut off the drums a bit too much personally, and it really cuts off the symmetry if I do this. Might seem a bit Lazy this way, but I honestly like what I've come up with here. Players are still expecting to hit the drum note anyways from the previous ones.
02:14:678 - add finish Actually supposed to be a clap, neverthless, thanks for pointing out the missing hitsound.
03:21:906 (1) - make the end softer in volume. Same as Easy. I can't lower it past 5%

[Hard]
00:03:790 (4) - Could you move this a grid or so up to make the spacing in this combo equal? I moved the (2) before it so it'll be equal, and also dropped (3) up 1y

During the first kiai there are a lot of spacing inconsistencies. The spacing varies between 1.00x and 1.35x.
00:11:525 (1,2) - this might be understandable as a small jump, but 00:14:499 (5) - seems a little off since 00:13:309 (3) - has a normal 1.00x prev/next.
If this was intended, it's not really an issue in readability, but at least make the inconsitency consistent. Meaning that you should have a 1.2x prev/next at 00:19:259 (5) - as well, to be consistent with 00:14:499 (5) - I moved 14:499 to 1.0 just to simplify this.

00:15:540 (7) - make prev/next equal. Done. Yay me, and streams with distance snap over a year ago >_<.
00:20:746 (9,10,1) - I would put the NC on the first note of the stack. Especially since yellow is a much brighter color, and the past triples were spaced out I think this might confuse players. This is just a personal NC preference. I don't really like making lead-in notes the start of an NC. I've never noticed this blinding effect when I play through it, but I'll keep this in mind. I don't think there is a problem with it though.
00:26:101 (1,2,3) - I strongly suggest that the spacing in this combo should be equal. the blanketing looks nice, but the spacing makes the combo look messy! I actually like this setup. It's all 1.35 spacing from back at the previous (8) and slows itself down to create the 1/1 spacing at 1.0 DS. after starting on the (3)
00:29:968 (7) - the spacing here is inconsistent. Fixed this, and fixed 00:31:455 (2) -
00:30:265 (8,9,1) - If you applied the other suggestion of NC on the first note, add it here too. Ah nope, personal preference.
00:43:652 (7,8) - I don't really feel this jump here. It would play better in my opinion if this was just spaced 1.00x Eh. I thought it fit pretty well. I went with a 1.2 DS here so blanket nicely, so it's still a minor jump.
00:44:544 (8) - add a finish on the end? Clap fits better, changed the finish from Easy though (inconsistent)
00:48:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really like the spacing increase and curve of this stream. how about this? I'd rather keep what I have, but I tidied up my version a bit. The reason being is that I alternate between 1.0 and 0.7 streams throughout the song so I'm trying to keep variety.
00:57:930 (5) - instead of this long slider,I think it would be nicer if you map the drums in the song, they offer room for nice hitsounding. I actually really love that slider, so I want to keep it. It matches the vocals extremely well in feeling.
01:00:905 (4,1,2) - spacing looks messy and is inconsistent, maybe also make all sliders parallel? I don't really see anything here that I want to change. I'm happy with all the slider positions, and how they're laid out.
01:07:152 (4) - add a clap? I actually find this better to play without the clap. Kind of like a fade-out to hectic start feel. Not sure how to explain it better though.
01:13:101 (9) - move this a bit down to make prev/next equal Done.
01:16:373 (5) - spacing again >_< Actually, this is intended for only myself from a year ago would know the reason.
01:16:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try the slider-to-stream tool to make a nicely curved stream! If only I knew this thing existed way back in time. Anyways, done I guess.
01:22:174 (7) - prev/next are not equal, always disable grid snap with streams. For sure
01:36:006 (3) - again, not really fond of the spacing inconsistency here. Eh. I'm actually fine with this spacing.
01:36:899 (7,8,1) - NC suggestion as before. Same as above as well :3
01:43:741 (4) - make prev/next equal here too, the jump is fine though. I'd like to keep them different, but with the next mod, I made slight changes so that 01:43:443 (3,4) - are mirrors of 01:44:633 (1,2) -
01:44:931 (2) - ^
01:47:608 (2,5) - these sliders are kissing, can you make them not touch eachother? Nudged it up a little.
01:50:285 (1,2) - why suddenly these sliders instead of a stream? it's a bit anti-climatic. Try to keep things consistent Because I overuse streams a lot in this song, so I wanted a little bit of variety. This is also why I do it later on as you mentioned as well.
02:00:994 (3) - finish on start? Nope, much like the mod earlier, it feels better with claps instead of finishes.
02:02:779 (5) - prev/next ><
02:03:969 (7) - ^
02:05:159 (1) - ^ Fixed these.
02:05:456 (2,3) - why did you use the short slider here? I think 2 regular notes plays better, like you used at other similar parts. Variety. It's really the only time in the song I use it. I changed this around though and made it circles
02:05:754 (3) - I personally don't really like this long slider that much, I would place regular notes at 1/2 intervals to emphasize the lyrics here! Very true. I think the original reasoning for this was 1. to prepare for the upcoming onslaught of streams by giving a 1/1 break, and 2. to prepare the drums. Who knows what I was thinking in the past though. I honestly feel like I should keep this as is so it doesn't get so cramped up.
02:28:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - as well as for this stream, try the slider to stream tool. Fixed this and the previous with it.
02:35:203 (9) - prev/next done.
02:39:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ I manually fixed this one. It's too stupid to use a slider tool to create with.
02:43:234 (5) - again with the inconsistent spacing. This one was intentional, but now that I look at it. It's dumb, removed the extra spacing.
02:44:722 (8,9,1) - NC suggestion here too~ I'll just go hide in the corner >_<;
02:45:614 (2) - spacing Fixed this section.
02:47:399 (1,2,3) - aaaahhh. It's the final kiai. please make it a normal stream to build up that tension! lol lol. I honestly like the reverses so I want to keep them.
02:54:241 (10) - delete the finish on start? This can actually be heard in the background.
02:59:000 (8,9,1) - NC suggestion
03:08:519 (2,3,1) - ^ Same, going to stick with my preferences on them.
03:11:792 (5) - spacing I'm fine with this 1.12 to 1.24 increase.
03:13:576 (1,2,3,4) - this combo looks rather messy to me, the spacing is too inconsistent and doesn't really make it flow like it should. especially 4 and 5 don't really flow into eachother, and the jump from 5 to 6 is rather big too. I would rethink the patterns here if I were you. Alright. Changed this around quite a bit.
03:21:906 (1) - make the end softer in volume. Same as Easy/Normal 5% already.

paseli wrote:

Hey there, just a random mod flying by~
There's not much left to do, so i try to point out some last fixes maybe.

[Easy]
00:50:791 (2,3) - I'm not sure if distance changes within in an easy map are appropriate. Maybe NC at 3 to make it clear or equalize it. hmm, there isn't any distance changes in this song. Should all be 0.70.
01:27:082 - add a clap HS here. This is actually already here. not sure if it conflicted with the last mod or not.
01:55:640 (5) - nazi stuff, but maybe push down the end point of this slider a bit to align better with 01:57:127 (1) - http://puu.sh/aZMvD/a0f938acd8.jpg Alright. done.
02:02:481 (2,3) - check the blanket here again http://puu.sh/aZMxR/c51b7d434a.jpg removed the curve so it isn't blanketed or fake blanketed.
02:12:298 (2,3,4) - ^, i think this isn't symmetrical yet. The middle anchor of slider 3 should be put a little 4 pixels to the right. Fixed this.
02:49:779 (1) - 30% vol. on this note seems a bit too low for me, maybe push it up to 50%? This goes for all diffs. Sure 50%
02:53:943 (4) - maybe add a finish HS here. This should already be here.

[Normal]
00:05:575 (2,1) - I think it would look better if it where symmetrical, http://puu.sh/aZN3d/dfb11f4658.jpg but this is just my opinion. Eh, why not. Changed.

[Hard]
00:48:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm, I don't really like the current shape of the stream. Try to make a rounder one which also aligns to the green circle: http://puu.sh/aZNWX/b8206cbd5a.jpg -> http://puu.sh/aZNYq/c36ae4f1e4.jpg Since people keep pointing this out, I made some changes.
01:25:298 (1) - Add a clap HS here. Slider was also missing a finish on the head lol.
01:53:557 (4,5) - this bow pattern blanket isn't correct yet http://puu.sh/aZOk1/13393bc08b.jpg Leaving it as is, I prefer this. I'm not entirely sure what you wanted me to do, I'm guessing you wanted me to blanket it or something.
02:20:032 (1,2) - have you thought about blanketing these? Maybe like http://puu.sh/aZOrT/332d6d037d.jpg No need to. It would make the flow a little awkward, plus I need the distance covered.
02:50:671 (2,3,4) - I'm sure it would look better if you make it symmetrical here. http://puu.sh/aZOGX/048ff8e1ba.jpg (2,3) symmetrical with each other as well as (4,5) so it should be fine.

Now this is just a nostalgic song. *-* Please get this ranked soon.
Hope this small cleanup helps to enhance your chances of getting bubbled, good luck!

Greetings,
paseli

Sakura wrote:

[Hard]
00:34:132 (7,8) - Why jump here? No reason, it was for emphasis I guess, but it does suit better without the jump. made it DS.
02:20:032 (1) - Would be cool if you blanketed 3 here. (And you can still keep the curve at the end!) Haha, this took me awhile. S sliders hate me, and I don't understand how to make them better. I did what I could to blanket it and keep the S looking nice, or tried at least
01:46:715 - Why go 30% volume here? it makes it very hard to hear these: 01:47:013 (1,2). This was a mistake on my end, I turned the volume up to 50% because I feel like the claps used here or whatever are a bit loud for 70, but 50 is nice.
01:50:285 (1,2) - Try a better cresendo here? 2 lines feels too few for that. Sure, I added a few more timing points in.
I think the gradual volume changes at the end need to happen sooner than they currently are atm. I lowered some of the timing at the end of the last chorus. I still think the 50-60% volume at the final chorus is fine though.

[Normal]
03:16:254 (3) - Make Curve smoother? Done.

[Easy]
Seems fine

Good Luck!

Gero wrote:

Placeholder #Ninja

So many memories... T__T

General

1. Did you missed to add a "soft-slidertick2" and "soft-slidertick3" or this is intentional? would sound a lot better if you will consider to adding them "soft-slidertick2 as clap and soft-slidertick3 as finish" (if you don't wanna add them, guess you need to take a look to every difficulty because there have many useless points) Yeah, I originally had them as a clap / finish but somehow they got deleted wow. Thanks for noticing this.

Easy

1. 00:44:841 - Same suggestion about the finish that I've mentioned in the hard difficulty. Added

Normal

1. 00:26:696 (2,3) - What about to do the same thing about this rhythm like you did in the hard difficulty? because this feels kinda weird and empty imo. Yeah good point.
2. 00:35:322 - I guess you forgot to add a clap with finish here. Added
3. 02:54:538 - ^ Fixed this in all diffs to be consistent. 03:02:272 (5) - ^ Done, also missed this on normal XD
4. 01:11:019 - What do you think about consider adding a circle at this time? since the background of the song asks for something to click here, ofc don't forget to put a finish if you add the circle. Yeah sure. Added this with 30% volume finish.

Hard

1. 00:07:955 (2,3) - This is just a personal suggestion but I think a rhythm like you did above would be ideal as this part is quite similar imo (A quick solution would be shorten this slider by 1/2 and adding a circle in 00:09:145 - instead) Alright. I kind of wanted to keep that cool 1/1 slider but I completely understand this rhythm choice. I went with your idea.
2. 00:38:594 (4,5) - I'm pretty sure that you can do a better blanket like this one, you should try it.
3. 02:37:582 (4,5) - ^ Fixed both of these. also Since 02:36:392 (2,3) - was a copy. I fixed this as well.
4. 00:44:841 - What about using clap and finish instead only clap? to emphasize the change of the music which is quite noticeable in this part. Added to normal/hard. Easy already had it lol.
5. 01:45:526 (5,6) - I'd like that you consider to change this by another pattern because it doesn't look nice and clean imo something like this would be cool somehow (don't forget to do the same thing for this 01:47:608 (2) - as well) The only problem is that it interferes with 01:48:798 (5) - from the (2). Also I've really grown to love this pattern myself so I want to keep it. I moved the 01:45:526 (5) - slightly further away so it doesn't look as horrible. Hope this makes sense enough.
6. 02:01:887 (4,8) - C'mon this looks kinda ugly for me, if you asked me I'd like to change this for another custom slider with smoother curves. erk. I was pretty proud of this slider actually. I changed it up though.
7. 03:18:931 - This feels kinda empty so what about to add a simple circle here? (you can stack this on 03:19:228 - this slider) I definitely don't want to do this. If you check my Easy/Normal. They contain the exact same rhythm, and I wanted to keep this consistency. Hope you can understand this.

Alright, call me back when you're done.