REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya - Crime Wave · forum

Delis

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Delis 2013-07-17T22:35:23+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年8月6日 at 23:56:26

Artist: REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya
Title: Crime Wave
Source: Touhou
Tags: satellite dagger-gazel ALiCE'S EMOTiON 東方緋想天 ibuki suika saigetsu broken moon Scarlet Weather Rhapsody Rhapsody c78 comiket
BPM: 156
Filesize: 6250kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:

Gazel's Hard (4.9 stars, 411 notes)
Normal (3.17 stars, 140 notes)
Lunatic (5 stars, 550 notes)

Download: REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya - Crime Wave
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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BG from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/25008
Gazel's Hard by Satellite

Last edited by Delis 2013-10-04T03:01:17+00:00, edited 49 times in total.

Luerxa

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Luerxa 2013-07-17T23:00:16+00:00

（´；ω；｀）

Last edited by Luerxa 2013-11-14T13:35:35+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Satellite

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Satellite 2013-07-18T15:01:15+00:00

这是一个IRC的MOD

SPOILER

23:05 DELiS: satesateさん
23:05 DELiS: いまひま？？
23:05 Satellite:いいよ！
23:05 DELiS: test playをお願いしたい.-------------.
23:06 *DELiS is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/276462 ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Crime Wave]
23:06 Satellite: <3
23:12 DELiS: ところどころたいみんぐ難しそうだけど
23:12 DELiS: ダイジョウブカナ・・
23:12 Satellite: 全体を通した間奏としては
23:12 Satellite: 感想
23:12 Satellite: 極端に右下によってる箇所が
23:12 Satellite: ２，３かいあったけど
23:12 Satellite: 左下と左上に全く行かないから
23:12 DELiS: wwwwwww
23:12 Satellite: 全体と見ては右に寄ってるイメージがあったかな
23:13 DELiS: まったく気づかなかった
23:13 DELiS: ~~ヤッパpro mapper違うナ・・~~
23:17 Satellite: 完全スタックは
23:17 Satellite: 00:58:047 (6) - ここだけだから
23:17 DELiS: ほとんど
23:17 DELiS: 01:12:855 (1,2,3) -
23:17 DELiS: このへんマズそうだった
23:17 Satellite: パターンかえたほうがいいかも？
23:17 Satellite: それは大丈夫
23:18 DELiS: ソコ変えたほうがいいのか・・
23:18 Satellite: あとは
23:18 Satellite: DT防止にもなるしAR+1募
23:18 DELiS: DTmapにしたかったけど
23:18 DELiS: 想像以上にムズかった
23:18 Satellite: (私DT嫌いだからAR+1)
23:18 DELiS: ;__;
23:18 DELiS: 前向きに検討します
23:20 Satellite: 曲調的には
23:20 Satellite: 悲しい歌？
23:21 DELiS: ど、どうなんだろう・・
23:21 Satellite: あんまりきいてないからわかんないけど
23:21 Satellite: きいてみる
23:21 Satellite: 夜空見上げてって歌詞あるから
23:22 Satellite: 夜空のBGのほうがいいかも？
23:22 Satellite: 夜って単語もはいってるし
23:22 DELiS: BG探すスキル持ってない.-------------------------...........
23:22 DELiS: ガンバル・・
23:22 Satellite: まったく
23:22 Satellite: リサイズしてないけど
23:22 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3FTkI.jpg
23:22 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3FTl1.jpg
23:22 Satellite: こんなイメージ沸いた
23:22 DELiS: wwwwwwwwwwww
23:23 DELiS: はっやｗ
23:23 Satellite: うーん
23:23 Satellite: やっぱかわいい系+月？
23:24 Satellite: つきないけど夜
23:24 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3FToB.jpg
23:24 Satellite: かわいい！
23:24 Satellite: 月　宴　夜　をとると
23:24 DELiS: イイネ
23:25 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3FTqt.jpg
23:25 DELiS: てか、みんなそんな考えてBG探してるのｗｗｗｗｗｗ
23:25 Satellite: こういうのもあり？
23:25 Satellite: 私は歌詞から
23:25 Satellite: 拾って背景とマッチさせるかな
23:26 Satellite: まあ私の主観だからｗ
23:26 Satellite: このままでも
23:26 Satellite: かわいい！
23:26 Satellite: すいかちゃんかわいい！
23:26 Satellite: って感じ
23:26 DELiS: お、おｋ・・・
23:26 DELiS: BGは難しそうだしとりあえずkeepデ・・
23:26 Satellite: ぉぅぃぇ
23:29 DELiS: そういえば、さっき
23:29 DELiS: 00:57:470 (5,6) -
23:29 DELiS: ここ画面からはみ出てる？みたいなこと言われたんだけど
23:29 DELiS: 直したほうがいいかな
23:29 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873719
23:30 Satellite: スタック部分がはみ出てるくらいだから
23:30 Satellite: スタックさせないで
23:30 Satellite: 少しだけもう少し中に曲げれば
23:30 Satellite: いいんじゃないかな！
23:31 Satellite: 02:35:739 (1) -
23:31 Satellite: 音的にはCtrl+G
23:31 Satellite: 02:35:932 - ここでチカラ入るから飛ばしても良い感じに思う
23:32 DELiS: ok~
23:32 Satellite: 01:25:162 (1,2,3) -
23:32 Satellite: 02:39:009 (1,2,3) -
23:32 Satellite: 許容範囲内だけど
23:32 Satellite: Tickがない速度変化はアンランク要素でこれくらいなら
23:32 Satellite: ぜんぜんセーフだけど
23:32 Satellite: 指摘されないように全部Ncいれれても
23:32 Satellite: いいかも
23:32 Satellite: いれてても*
23:33 Satellite: 演出にもなるしいいんじゃないかな
23:33 Satellite: もっとジャンプさせてもいいし
23:33 DELiS: とりあえずncした！
23:33 DELiS: 01:26:316 (2) - 02:40:162 (2) -
23:36 DELiS: えっと
23:36 DELiS: ここもncしたほうがいいかな～
23:36 DELiS: って
23:37 Satellite: ああｗ
23:37 Satellite: そこもいれててもいいかもねｗ
23:37 Satellite: でもいれなくてもいいよｂ
23:37 DELiS: ok~
23:37 DELiS: どっちだあｗ
23:37 DELiS: じゃあ、イレマス
23:37 Satellite: あいー
23:37 Satellite: 02:27:662 (2,3) -
23:37 Satellite: ２と３入れ替えてみて
23:37 Satellite: どうかな？
23:37 Satellite: こういうパターンすきそうだなっておもって
23:37 Satellite: 提案してみた
23:38 Satellite: 02:29:201 (6,7) - 同様かわかんないけどここも入れ替えどうかな
23:39 DELiS: 02:29:201 (6,7) - こっちはかえた！
23:39 DELiS: 前者はとりあえず保留かな・・
23:39 Satellite: ほいほいー
23:39 DELiS: もしかしたら後でかえるかも
23:39 Satellite: それくらいー
23:39 DELiS: ok
23:40 Satellite: かみまっぱーのDELiSさんの譜面は
23:40 Satellite: いうことないれす
23:40 DELiS: うえええ
23:41 Satellite: 00:41:701 (6) - x296　y68くらい
23:41 Satellite: どうかな
23:41 Satellite: Hideしてるからこっちにとばすとか・・・
23:42 Satellite: 00:44:585 (5,6) - 細かいけどこれも逆のほうが流れ綺麗じゃないかなあ
23:43 Satellite: 01:00:643 (1) - こっちも後ろにあわせてストリーム拾ったほうがいいんじゃないかな
23:43 Satellite: 難易度的にもあがるし、いいと思う
23:43 Satellite: スピンだと
23:43 Satellite: 01:01:701 (1) -
23:43 Satellite: ここが叩きづらいイメージ
23:44 DELiS: ok~
23:44 Satellite: 01:04:585 (8) - 細かいけど　x260　ｙ228で綺麗に見えるし流れが綺麗だと思う
23:44 Satellite: 一応６を基準に次の１へと
23:44 Satellite: ブランケットの意味あいで
23:45 DELiS: なおした！
23:46 Satellite: 01:24:778 (7,8) - 後半は
23:46 Satellite: ここ５連打だけど前半は
23:46 Satellite: 01:24:970 (8) - もうこれ１に重ねて３連打にしてみるとかは？
23:46 Satellite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873770
23:46 Satellite: こういう意味で
23:47 Satellite: 01:30:547 (5) - なんかもったいない
23:47 DELiS: なになんかもったいないってｗｗｗｗｗ
23:47 Satellite: 流れがなあ
23:48 DELiS: というと・・
23:48 Satellite: たとえば
23:48 Satellite: 01:29:778 (1,2,3,4) - ここを
23:48 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3FUc4.jpg
23:48 Satellite: こんな感じにしちゃって
23:49 Satellite: 4と2の間隔上に
23:49 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3FUdO.jpg
23:49 Satellite: スライダーもってくるとか？
23:49 Satellite: 最初の形のままだと
23:49 Satellite: ４からの流れが
23:50 Satellite: あまり綺麗に見えないきがするんだよね
23:50 Satellite: http://puu.sh/3FUf9.jpg
23:50 Satellite: おそらく１からを意識して
23:50 Satellite: このスライダーを引いてるのだと思うけど
23:50 Satellite: うーん。って感じかなあ
23:51 Satellite: 01:33:624 (4) - ここは後半のパターンと)統一性を出すために add Nc
23:51 DELiS: わすれてました
23:51 Satellite: 01:39:009 (3) - 2.24のDS間隔で
23:51 Satellite: 飛ばしていいと思う
23:52 Satellite: あとは
23:52 Satellite: さび開始の
23:52 Satellite: 01:14:393 (1) -
23:52 Satellite: この頭にFinishだけじゃなくてClapもいれてみたら？
23:52 Satellite: 後半同様
23:52 DELiS: うるさくない？＿ｗｗ
23:52 Satellite: パンチ効いていいと思うけどどうだろうｗ
23:53 DELiS: 大丈夫ぽい
23:53 DELiS: いれた！

好运

Star <3

Delis

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Delis 2013-07-18T15:44:27+00:00

　　mapper
神　　　　　　　†Satellite†
　　modder

iyasine

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iyasine 2013-07-20T10:34:44+00:00

nice

Delis

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Delis 2013-07-20T11:04:26+00:00

star arigato

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Forseen

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Forseen 2013-07-22T08:02:06+00:00

Okay, let's see.

Normal

02:49:393 (1) - forgot a whistle here?

Lunatic

Try decreasing the HP Drain by 1.
00:48:047 (7) - one grid up.
01:07:855 (1) - remove one reverse and add a circle there instead, like this: http://puu.sh/3IIWG.jpg .
01:16:124 (2) - not properly stacked with the head of 01:14:778 (2) .
01:19:970 (5,6,7) - move this triplet one grid to the left so it would be in the same place on x axis as 01:19:393 (2) .
01:29:778 (1) - I suggest unstacking this since you were using stacks after those short vocal breaks, and those were 1/1 - a 1/4 stack right after feels kind of off. What about something like: http://puu.sh/3IJQe.jpg ?
02:01:893 (6) - one grid down and one to the right.
02:16:316 (1) - remove new combo here and at 02:16:701 (1) , then add a new one at 02:17:085 (3) , and remove at 02:17:470 (1) .
02:21:701 (1) - same as 01:07:855 (1) .

Nothing much to complain about, great job!

Delis

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Delis 2013-07-22T13:42:23+00:00

almost fixed,thanks you for modding ~ ~~cheat modder sanヾ(･ε･｀*)~~

and moved to pending

luxoDeh

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Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2013-07-23T00:55:24+00:00

Hi! mod from my queue

NORMAL

00:39:009 (3) - make a better blancket with 00:39:778 (4) -
00:54:393 (4) - maybe copy/paste the form of this 00:53:624 (3) - slider
01:10:547 (4) - make a better blancket with 01:11:316 (1) -
02:04:393 (2) - delete whistle at the end?
02:35:162 (2,4) - stack them better

Gazel's HARD

nothing to say here... very good diff!

LUNATIC

00:44:778 - add a note here
00:46:316 - ^
00:55:355 (7) - move this to y:223
01:58:624 - add note
also this is a good diff!

that's all, good luck with rank!

Delis

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Topic Starter

Delis 2013-07-23T01:15:08+00:00

done

Erisan

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Erisan 2013-07-24T12:25:34+00:00

個人的な意見を含んでおりますので、修正したくない箇所はしなくても結構です。

Normal

01:39:009 -
ここから
01:51:316 -
ここのブレイクタイムが12秒なので
01:45:162 -
ここから1:51:316まで作成することをお勧めします。

01:53:624 (4,1) -
ここのDSを
01:54:393 (1,2) -
と等しくなるように配置しましょう。

Gazel's Hard

00:43:432 (5,6) -
NCを5につけ
00:43:624 (1) -
ここのNCを解除

00:55:739 (5,6) -
上記同様

Normal同様
01:39:009 -
ここからブレイクタイム終了まで12秒なので
01:45:162 -
ここから1:51:316まで作成することをお勧めします。

02:09:585 (5,6) -
NCの修正

02:24:970 (5,6) -
上記同様

Hardに関してはこれといった修正点がなかった気がします。
ただ少しHardではなくInsane寄りではあると思いました。

Lunatic

Normal・Hard同様ブレイクタイムの修正

Lunaticに関しては今のRanked譜面を見ている限り問題がないように伺えますw

各難易度大きな問題点は無いように思えました。

Ranked目指して頑張れｯ！
応援してますヽ(*´∀｀)ノ

Satellite

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Satellite 2013-07-25T00:20:46+00:00

All nochange.

全てdownbeat(大きな白線のことです)に沿ってNcを打つタイミングを整えているので
変更すると不自然なNcとなり、HPDrainの意味がなくなってしまいます。

BreakTime１２秒はそこまで長い時間ではないと思います
現状のランクルールにも被ってるわけではないのでそのままにします。
私個人の考え方ですがBreakTimeはあったほうがいいと思うのでこのままを推します。

thanks modding

Delis

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Delis 2013-07-25T03:54:33+00:00

えりーちゃんありがとー

Natsu

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Natsu 2013-07-25T07:13:04+00:00

HI~ DELiS and Satellite

General:

alice's emotion <3 and clean

Lunatic:

00:37:470 maybe remove whistle sound a little bad finish is enought to start the song imo
00:38:239 (4,5) - this rhythm dont follow the song really good why you dont try this to follow the song properly:
SPOILER
00:40:066 same as above
00:44:105 add circle here ignore 3/4 rhythm is really weird on the high diff of the mapset
00:44:778 I dont know why you are ignoring the main beat of the song here is really strong this should be mapped
00:46:316 same as above
00:48:432 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is overmap o.o I know you are following vocals but follow the bg musci better anyways keep it how u like it
00:49:009 add finish it empathize this place really nice
00:54:009 (5,3) - add whistles for consistencya with all the others 00:53:624 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:55:162 add NC for make this readable
01:01:316 maybe convert the last circle in the stream in 1/4 slider to empathize the next 1/4 rhythm also this help the player to recover a little the hp if they play bad the previous stream
01:09:778 NC for the sake of readability with the next jumps
01:10:066 I preffer if you move this to x:256 y:192 (center of the grid) and this other 01:10:355 to x:456 y:32 gonna play alot better
01:11:316 this 1/4 jump is a little extreme I know is fun I suggest to you make the previous slider 01:11:124 a little curved to the left to make the jump with natural flow
01:25:162 (1,1,1,1) - this NC spam dont make sense for me better remove atleast 01:25:547 and 01:25:932
02:11:316 this slider shape make me sad since your map got a nice fow but that slider broke it try to make it curved just with 3 points
really nice diff is fun and the flow is natural almost in all the map

Hard:

00:38:239 (3,4) - turn off gridsnap and stack they perfect yeah I know so nazi huehue
00:39:778 (3,4) - same as above huehue 1 grid lol
00:45:162 when i was testing the map i think i fail here when note cuz the slider is almost inaudible add a whistle so the player can notice he click it properly
00:55:162 soft finish fit alot better normal finish sound weird
00:55:932 remove clap finish is enought here
00:59:778 (1,1) - remove new combos what is the sense of they? o.o
01:00:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is nice for an insane diff but not for a hard try this:
SPOILER
01:07:855 (3,4,5,6) - same try to add a 1/4 repeat instead this is just a hard
01:27:085 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - woa add some slider this a little hard for ¨hard diff players ¨
02:14:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 01:00:547 this is not ok for hard
02:21:701 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:29:009 new combo for better readability for the jump o.o
02:46:316 (4,5,6,7,1) - same as he others streams in this diff
02:46:701 (1,1,1) - this feel so empty why you dont map atleast the vocal there to make this part a little fun?
yeah is a nice diff just that part i mentioned in my mod bother me cuz they are not for a hard diff imo

Normal:

This is a normal no a easy go atleast AR 4 hp 3
00:37:470 same as Lunatic
00:38:239 reduce this 1/2 since in your way gonna have alot of new players failing there
00:45:162 fix distance with previous im begin so much nazi? orz dont slap me :c
00:56:701 exactly the same as 00:38:239
01:13:624 I preffer if you convert this one on 1/1 slider since the actually way is inaccurate for newbies
01:34:393 this gonna sound better if you add a repeat on it empathize the next downbeat and vocal with it if you follow this be sure to fix the spacing
01:52:085 same as 00:38:239
01:59:778 ^ same as above since the actually rhythm is so hard to follow for newbies
02:04:393 ^
another nice diff

Nicemap I really like all the diffs specially ¨Lunatic¨shooting a star here and looking foward to see this ranked soon

scanter

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scanter 2013-07-25T09:16:33+00:00

nice map and song \o/

[-mii-chan-]

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[-mii-chan-] 2013-07-25T11:35:33+00:00

Overall

Umm, isn't ~37s a little bit too long for an intro?
Soft-hitnormal suggestion: http://puu.sh/3Lbjd.wav
Love the jumps <3

Normal

01:09:778 (3) - move this to the right for a polygon => more symmetry between 1-2-3
02:12:085 (4) - 1 1/2 beat slider like http://puu.sh/3LcOg.jpg
02:14:778 (3) - all slider is in finish sound

Gazel's Hard

02:20:162 (1) - make this into 1 1/2 beat slider? http://puu.sh/3LktR.jpg
02:22:855 (1,1) - every end should be in finish, sounds better
02:39:009 (1,1,1) - remove clap, only finish

Lunatic

none

you did a great job ♥

Very good map ♥ you have my star for this ♥ good luck on getting it ranked

(I hope it'll be soon ;P can't wait ♥)

Satellite

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Satellite 2013-07-25T18:19:48+00:00

thanks modding

http://puu.sh/3LxBr.osu

Delis

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Delis 2013-07-25T22:09:47+00:00

done~

thank you all

Chronotakular

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Chronotakular 2013-07-27T09:15:22+00:00

Hello there!

General: Consider changing the song file to fade out where the notes stop.

[Normal]

This chart is very good. These are the only things I caught.

01:13:624 (4) - Note comes up very quickly. I understand why it is there, but it just comes up pretty fast compared to the rest of the song. Maybe consider removing it.
02:27:470 (4) - Same as above.

[Gazel's Hard]

01:25:355 (2,2,2) - I would put some hit sounds on these. At the moment, the feel awkward to hit.
01:27:855 (1) - ~~Consider un-stacking this and note 4. I kept hitting early.~~ - Never mind, it's okay.
01:27:855 (1,2) - This quick combo is kinda confusing to read the first time you're playing it, since it's only 2 numbers, you can easily confuse 2 with the next 2 in the combo. I would either combine the combo with the one after it, or extend the combo one more note.
01:29:393 (1,2) - Same as above.
01:29:393 (1) - ~~Same as above, but note 5 instead of note 4.~~ - Never mind. This is good.
02:13:624 (1,1) - I would make these farther apart. At this point in the map, we are used to notes this close together occurring faster.
02:43:239 (1,2) - I had a similar mod above, again, I think the combo should be combined or extended a note to make it easier to read.
02:48:829 (2) -~~Is this combo off the screen?~~ Nah, it's not. This note is good.

[Lunatic]

00:49:201 (2,3) - I would move these closer. As of right now, they are very hard for me to hit. Also, the spacing implies that they occur later.
01:01:509 (1,2,3) - I feel like this chain doesn't really match the sound or the beat of this song.I would maybe put a slider at 9 instead of a circle to fill the gap, if you decide to get rid of this combo.
01:12:855 (1,2,3) - I would decrease the distance snapping on this combo just a little bit. I was hitting all of these notes early.
01:37:470 (1,2,3,4) - This is really confusing to read. Either spread this chain out like the 2 chains after it, or make the 2 chains after it have similar spacing to this one. This spacing of the chains after this, imply that the notes come slower, but they don't, causing a lot of missed notes (for me, at least) even after 5 or 6 playthroughs.
01:38:624 (1,2,3) - I would move these closer. The current spacing implies that notes 2 and 3 occur later than they actually do.
01:32:085 (4) - I would bring this note closer to the notes 3 and 5, a bit hard to hit at its current position, in my opinion.
02:01:509 (2,3) - These notes are too far apart for how fast 3 occurs.
02:02:278 (2,3,4) - I think this combo might be okay, but I think it is really hard to hit. Consider tweaking and moving around these slider so that they are easy to hit.
02:21:701 (1) - This note is probably okay, but keep in mind how low it is on the board.
02:26:701 (1,2,3) - I would spread this combo out just a little bit.

This is a great map so far! I hope I helped in someway, good luck!

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-07-29T12:00:43+00:00

Hi~ DELiS

[Normal]

hp+1 AR +1

[Gazel's Hard]

HP - 1

01:30:355 (4) - No Jump

[Lunatic]

HP -1

I'm sorry ...
Very good map
We cannot think of more than to mod

+ Star!!

zorefire

429 posts

Joined October 2012

zorefire 2013-07-29T23:26:32+00:00

From modding queue

[Normal]
Rhythm is perfect good to go! <( ' , '<)!
[Hard]

01:25:162 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - bring these a little bit closer
02:24:585 (2,3,4) - touching off screen move up
[Lunatic]
I don't know if its just my skills or this 00:42:662 (4) and 00:42:855 (1) are out of my reach.

Good map hope it gets ranked.

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2013-07-30T02:20:24+00:00

thanks you for modding~

On_WanWan

208 posts

Joined July 2010

On_WanWan 2013-07-30T03:20:02+00:00

Hi via http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2446694/
A little mod, I hope it's useful for you :>

Normal

02:17:855 (4) - change it to 02:17:085 (3) ctrl + H ,ctrl + J
02:51:316 (1) - Add finish

Gazel's Hard

00:37:855 - Add a note with clap
00:40:932 (3) - Add clap also ?
01:02:085 (1) - Head finish whistle, reverse clap, end whistle to correspond with 01:05:162 (1) ?
01:10:547 (1) - Add finish
01:22:855 (1) - Parallel with 01:22:855 (3)
01:38:143 (4) - Add clap
01:54:970 (2) - Add whistle
02:40:932 (2) - I think no need to add finish here

Lunatic

01:13:624 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make these a cleaner star :3
02:06:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
02:27:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

Nice map and good luck for rank! :3

Delis

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Topic Starter

Delis 2013-07-30T03:45:25+00:00

thanks~

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

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Frostmourne 2013-07-31T15:42:47+00:00

Taking from #modreqs as I promised. !

General
There are some tag you can add : REDALiCE 東方緋想天　～ Scarlet Weather Rhapsody Rhapsody c78 comiket

Normal
01:15:932 (3,1) - not too sure if this spacing is intentional. is it correct?

Gazel's Hard
01:34:970 (3,1) - Subjective opinion, I think (3) doesn't go to (1) well. The direction from (3) (which is not straight to the next one) and different new combo color between them make it a bit confusing on first try so I suggest you do something here. fix combo color, change direction, or whatever you are comfortable to do.
02:20:547 (1) - This NC isn't necessary. It's still in the same phrase as 02:20:162 (1) -
02:48:816 (2,1) - same as 01:34:970 (3,1) -
a bit too hard from Normal diff but I think it's fine!

Lunatic
Some hitsounds I personally find them a bit strange but that could be your preferences. Nice Lunatic

Nice map. Star more !~ Good luck

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Satellite 2013-07-31T17:20:50+00:00

thanks Frost!

and

some mod All fixed~

http://puu.sh/3Qm5l.osu

Delis

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Topic Starter

Delis 2013-07-31T17:58:53+00:00

thanks for modding and star , frost~

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2013-08-01T07:17:23+00:00

from popner's modding team
sorry I'm late orz

[General]
nope

[Normal]

delete useless green lines (just check by yourself)
00:49:009、00:49:393、00:49:489、01:09:970、01:10:451
02:02:855、02:03:239、02:03:335、02:23:816、02:24:297
02:48:624、02:49:105
00:58:239 (4) better? http://puu.sh/3QTHw.jpg

[Gazel's Hard]

02:43:432 (2) make a trangle with 02:43:624 (1,2)
02:45:162 (1) slider ends on 02:45:451 and 02:45:547 add note (follow the vocal like the front)
02:48:528、02:48:624 add note
02:52:855 NC

[Lunatic]

00:43:047 (2,3,4) try this http://puu.sh/3QTdJ.jpg
00:47:278 (2,3,4) ^ http://puu.sh/3QTeu.jpg

00:53:624 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) focus on the vocal, you can find 00:54:393 (1,2,3,4) the DS of here is bigger than 00:53:624 (3,4,5,6) will be better
just try this

SPOILER

320,172,53816,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,252,54009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,172,54201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,172,54393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,272,54585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,368,54778,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,268,54970,1,2,0:0:0:0:

01:34:682、01:34:778 add note
02:48:528、02:48:624 ^

nice jump
good luck

Delis

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Topic Starter

Delis 2013-08-01T07:36:55+00:00

thanks~

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-08-02T15:01:26+00:00

Hey mod from my Queues :3
well actually I dont have much to say here but here only lil bit nazi for Hard. you can ignore my mod if you dont like it ^^

General

• seem fine

Gazel's Hard

• 02:17:470 (1,2,3) - may make the same spacing here?
• 02:46:316 (4) - NC here because the vocal change here

nice mapset ~
Good luck with rank ~ ^^

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Satellite 2013-08-02T17:13:38+00:00

thanks modding!

some fixed~~

http://puu.sh/3S0Vm.osu

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

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Frostmourne 2013-08-03T10:02:19+00:00

Rechecked.

GL~

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Satellite 2013-08-03T10:04:45+00:00

omg omg omg!!

thanks Frost > <

Edit

waiting BAT o.o

happy30

Featured Artist

2,064 posts

Joined August 2008

happy30 2013-08-06T13:51:20+00:00

ALiCE'S EMOTiON is the circle, but since this consist of multiple people (and possibly guests) it shouldn't be put as artist
A more appropriate artist would be:

REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya
(unicode: REDALiCE ft. 野宮あゆみ)

Delis

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Topic Starter

Delis 2013-08-06T14:57:12+00:00

happy30 wrote:
ALiCE'S EMOTiON is the circle, but since this consist of multiple people (and possibly guests) it shouldn't be put as artist
A more appropriate artist would be:

REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya
(unicode: REDALiCE ft. 野宮あゆみ)

update~

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

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Frostmourne 2013-08-06T19:29:35+00:00

Mapper asked for a rebubble and here

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-08-06T22:45:07+00:00