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REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya - Crime Wave

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luxoDeh
Hi! mod from my queue

NORMAL

00:39:009 (3) - make a better blancket with 00:39:778 (4) -
00:54:393 (4) - maybe copy/paste the form of this 00:53:624 (3) - slider
01:10:547 (4) - make a better blancket with 01:11:316 (1) -
02:04:393 (2) - delete whistle at the end?
02:35:162 (2,4) - stack them better

Gazel's HARD

nothing to say here... very good diff!

LUNATIC

00:44:778 - add a note here
00:46:316 - ^
00:55:355 (7) - move this to y:223
01:58:624 - add note
also this is a good diff!

that's all, good luck with rank! ;)
Topic Starter
Delis
done :D
Erisan
個人的な意見を含んでおりますので、修正したくない箇所はしなくても結構です。

Normal
01:39:009 -
ここから
01:51:316 -
ここのブレイクタイムが12秒なので
01:45:162 -
ここから1:51:316まで作成することをお勧めします。

01:53:624 (4,1) -
ここのDSを
01:54:393 (1,2) -
と等しくなるように配置しましょう。

Gazel's Hard
00:43:432 (5,6) -
NCを5につけ
00:43:624 (1) -
ここのNCを解除

00:55:739 (5,6) -
上記同様

Normal同様
01:39:009 -
ここからブレイクタイム終了まで12秒なので
01:45:162 -
ここから1:51:316まで作成することをお勧めします。

02:09:585 (5,6) -
NCの修正

02:24:970 (5,6) -
上記同様

Hardに関してはこれといった修正点がなかった気がします。
ただ少しHardではなくInsane寄りではあると思いました。

Lunatic
Normal・Hard同様ブレイクタイムの修正

Lunaticに関しては今のRanked譜面を見ている限り問題がないように伺えますw

各難易度大きな問題点は無いように思えました。

Ranked目指して頑張れッ!
応援してますヽ(*´∀`)ノ
Satellite
All nochange.

全てdownbeat(大きな白線のことです)に沿ってNc打つタイミングを整えているので
変更すると不自然なNcとなり、HPDrain意味がなくなってしまいます。

BreakTime12秒はそこまで長い時間ではないと思います
現状のランクルールにも被ってるわけではないのでそのままにします。
私個人の考え方ですがBreakTimeはあったほうがいいと思うのでこのままを推します。

thanks modding :)
Topic Starter
Delis
えりーちゃんありがとー :D
Natsu
HI~ DELiS and Satellite

General:
  • alice's emotion <3 and clean

Lunatic:
  1. 00:37:470 maybe remove whistle sound a little bad finish is enought to start the song imo
  2. 00:38:239 (4,5) - this rhythm dont follow the song really good why you dont try this to follow the song properly:
  3. 00:40:066 same as above
  4. 00:44:105 add circle here ignore 3/4 rhythm is really weird on the high diff of the mapset
  5. 00:44:778 I dont know why you are ignoring the main beat of the song here is really strong this should be mapped
  6. 00:46:316 same as above
  7. 00:48:432 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is overmap o.o I know you are following vocals but follow the bg musci better anyways keep it how u like it
  8. 00:49:009 add finish it empathize this place really nice
  9. 00:54:009 (5,3) - add whistles for consistencya with all the others 00:53:624 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
  10. 00:55:162 add NC for make this readable
  11. 01:01:316 maybe convert the last circle in the stream in 1/4 slider to empathize the next 1/4 rhythm also this help the player to recover a little the hp if they play bad the previous stream
  12. 01:09:778 NC for the sake of readability with the next jumps
  13. 01:10:066 I preffer if you move this to x:256 y:192 (center of the grid) and this other 01:10:355 to x:456 y:32 gonna play alot better
  14. 01:11:316 this 1/4 jump is a little extreme I know is fun I suggest to you make the previous slider 01:11:124 a little curved to the left to make the jump with natural flow
  15. 01:25:162 (1,1,1,1) - this NC spam dont make sense for me better remove atleast 01:25:547 and 01:25:932
  16. 02:11:316 this slider shape make me sad since your map got a nice fow but that slider broke it try to make it curved just with 3 points
  17. really nice diff is fun and the flow is natural almost in all the map

Hard:
  1. 00:38:239 (3,4) - turn off gridsnap and stack they perfect yeah I know so nazi huehue
  2. 00:39:778 (3,4) - same as above huehue 1 grid lol
  3. 00:45:162 when i was testing the map i think i fail here when note cuz the slider is almost inaudible add a whistle so the player can notice he click it properly
  4. 00:55:162 soft finish fit alot better normal finish sound weird
  5. 00:55:932 remove clap finish is enought here
  6. 00:59:778 (1,1) - remove new combos what is the sense of they? o.o
  7. 01:00:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is nice for an insane diff but not for a hard try this:
  8. 01:07:855 (3,4,5,6) - same try to add a 1/4 repeat instead this is just a hard
  9. 01:27:085 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - woa add some slider this a little hard for ¨hard diff players ¨
  10. 02:14:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 01:00:547 this is not ok for hard
  11. 02:21:701 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  12. 02:29:009 new combo for better readability for the jump o.o
  13. 02:46:316 (4,5,6,7,1) - same as he others streams in this diff
  14. 02:46:701 (1,1,1) - this feel so empty why you dont map atleast the vocal there to make this part a little fun?
  15. yeah is a nice diff just that part i mentioned in my mod bother me cuz they are not for a hard diff imo

Normal:
  1. This is a normal no a easy go atleast AR 4 hp 3
  2. 00:37:470 same as Lunatic
  3. 00:38:239 reduce this 1/2 since in your way gonna have alot of new players failing there
  4. 00:45:162 fix distance with previous im begin so much nazi? orz dont slap me :c
  5. 00:56:701 exactly the same as 00:38:239
  6. 01:13:624 I preffer if you convert this one on 1/1 slider since the actually way is inaccurate for newbies
  7. 01:34:393 this gonna sound better if you add a repeat on it empathize the next downbeat and vocal with it if you follow this be sure to fix the spacing
  8. 01:52:085 same as 00:38:239
  9. 01:59:778 ^ same as above since the actually rhythm is so hard to follow for newbies
  10. 02:04:393 ^
  11. another nice diff

Nicemap I really like all the diffs specially ¨Lunatic¨shooting a star here and looking foward to see this ranked soon
scanter
nice map and song \o/
[-mii-chan-]
Overall
Umm, isn't ~37s a little bit too long for an intro?
Soft-hitnormal suggestion: http://puu.sh/3Lbjd.wav
Love the jumps <3

Normal
01:09:778 (3) - move this to the right for a polygon => more symmetry between 1-2-3
02:12:085 (4) - 1 1/2 beat slider like http://puu.sh/3LcOg.jpg
02:14:778 (3) - all slider is in finish sound

Gazel's Hard
02:20:162 (1) - make this into 1 1/2 beat slider? http://puu.sh/3LktR.jpg
02:22:855 (1,1) - every end should be in finish, sounds better
02:39:009 (1,1,1) - remove clap, only finish

Lunatic
none :D you did a great job ♥

Very good map ♥ you have my star for this ♥ good luck on getting it ranked :D (I hope it'll be soon ;P can't wait ♥)
Satellite
Topic Starter
Delis
done~

thank you all ;)
Chronotakular
Hello there!

General: Consider changing the song file to fade out where the notes stop.

[Normal]

This chart is very good. These are the only things I caught.

01:13:624 (4) - Note comes up very quickly. I understand why it is there, but it just comes up pretty fast compared to the rest of the song. Maybe consider removing it.
02:27:470 (4) - Same as above.

[Gazel's Hard]

01:25:355 (2,2,2) - I would put some hit sounds on these. At the moment, the feel awkward to hit.
01:27:855 (1) - Consider un-stacking this and note 4. I kept hitting early. - Never mind, it's okay.
01:27:855 (1,2) - This quick combo is kinda confusing to read the first time you're playing it, since it's only 2 numbers, you can easily confuse 2 with the next 2 in the combo. I would either combine the combo with the one after it, or extend the combo one more note.
01:29:393 (1,2) - Same as above.
01:29:393 (1) - Same as above, but note 5 instead of note 4. - Never mind. This is good.
02:13:624 (1,1) - I would make these farther apart. At this point in the map, we are used to notes this close together occurring faster.
02:43:239 (1,2) - I had a similar mod above, again, I think the combo should be combined or extended a note to make it easier to read.
02:48:829 (2) -Is this combo off the screen? Nah, it's not. This note is good.

[Lunatic]

00:49:201 (2,3) - I would move these closer. As of right now, they are very hard for me to hit. Also, the spacing implies that they occur later.
01:01:509 (1,2,3) - I feel like this chain doesn't really match the sound or the beat of this song.I would maybe put a slider at 9 instead of a circle to fill the gap, if you decide to get rid of this combo.
01:12:855 (1,2,3) - I would decrease the distance snapping on this combo just a little bit. I was hitting all of these notes early.
01:37:470 (1,2,3,4) - This is really confusing to read. Either spread this chain out like the 2 chains after it, or make the 2 chains after it have similar spacing to this one. This spacing of the chains after this, imply that the notes come slower, but they don't, causing a lot of missed notes (for me, at least) even after 5 or 6 playthroughs.
01:38:624 (1,2,3) - I would move these closer. The current spacing implies that notes 2 and 3 occur later than they actually do.
01:32:085 (4) - I would bring this note closer to the notes 3 and 5, a bit hard to hit at its current position, in my opinion.
02:01:509 (2,3) - These notes are too far apart for how fast 3 occurs.
02:02:278 (2,3,4) - I think this combo might be okay, but I think it is really hard to hit. Consider tweaking and moving around these slider so that they are easy to hit.
02:21:701 (1) - This note is probably okay, but keep in mind how low it is on the board.
02:26:701 (1,2,3) - I would spread this combo out just a little bit.

This is a great map so far! I hope I helped in someway, good luck! :D
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ DELiS

[Normal]

hp+1 AR +1

[Gazel's Hard]

HP - 1

01:30:355 (4) - No Jump

[Lunatic]

HP -1

I'm sorry ...
Very good map
We cannot think of more than to mod

+ Star!!
zorefire
From modding queue
[Normal]
Rhythm is perfect good to go! <( ' , '<)!
[Hard]
  1. 01:25:162 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - bring these a little bit closer
  2. 02:24:585 (2,3,4) - touching off screen move up
    [Lunatic]
  3. I don't know if its just my skills or this 00:42:662 (4) and 00:42:855 (1) are out of my reach.
Good map hope it gets ranked.
Topic Starter
Delis
thanks you for modding~
On_WanWan
Hi via http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2446694/
A little mod, I hope it's useful for you :>

Normal

02:17:855 (4) - change it to 02:17:085 (3) ctrl + H ,ctrl + J
02:51:316 (1) - Add finish

Gazel's Hard

00:37:855 - Add a note with clap
00:40:932 (3) - Add clap also ?
01:02:085 (1) - Head finish whistle, reverse clap, end whistle to correspond with 01:05:162 (1) ?
01:10:547 (1) - Add finish
01:22:855 (1) - Parallel with 01:22:855 (3)
01:38:143 (4) - Add clap
01:54:970 (2) - Add whistle
02:40:932 (2) - I think no need to add finish here


Lunatic

01:13:624 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make these a cleaner star :3
02:06:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
02:27:470 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

Nice map and good luck for rank! :3
Topic Starter
Delis
thanks~
Frostmourne
Taking from #modreqs as I promised. !

General
There are some tag you can add : REDALiCE 東方緋想天 ~ Scarlet Weather Rhapsody Rhapsody c78 comiket

Normal
01:15:932 (3,1) - not too sure if this spacing is intentional. is it correct?

Gazel's Hard
01:34:970 (3,1) - Subjective opinion, I think (3) doesn't go to (1) well. The direction from (3) (which is not straight to the next one) and different new combo color between them make it a bit confusing on first try so I suggest you do something here. fix combo color, change direction, or whatever you are comfortable to do.
02:20:547 (1) - This NC isn't necessary. It's still in the same phrase as 02:20:162 (1) -
02:48:816 (2,1) - same as 01:34:970 (3,1) -
a bit too hard from Normal diff but I think it's fine!

Lunatic
Some hitsounds I personally find them a bit strange but that could be your preferences. Nice Lunatic

Nice map. Star more !~ Good luck :)
Satellite
thanks Frost!

and

some mod All fixed~


http://puu.sh/3Qm5l.osu
Topic Starter
Delis
thanks for modding and star , frost~ :oops:
Azure
from popner's modding team
sorry I'm late orz

[General]
nope

[Normal]
  1. delete useless green lines (just check by yourself)
    00:49:009、00:49:393、00:49:489、01:09:970、01:10:451
    02:02:855、02:03:239、02:03:335、02:23:816、02:24:297
    02:48:624、02:49:105
  2. 00:58:239 (4) better? http://puu.sh/3QTHw.jpg
[Gazel's Hard]
  1. 02:43:432 (2) make a trangle with 02:43:624 (1,2)
  2. 02:45:162 (1) slider ends on 02:45:451 and 02:45:547 add note (follow the vocal like the front)
  3. 02:48:528、02:48:624 add note
  4. 02:52:855 NC :D

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:43:047 (2,3,4) try this http://puu.sh/3QTdJ.jpg
  2. 00:47:278 (2,3,4) ^ http://puu.sh/3QTeu.jpg
  3. 00:53:624 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) focus on the vocal, you can find 00:54:393 (1,2,3,4) the DS of here is bigger than 00:53:624 (3,4,5,6) will be better
    just try this
    SPOILER
    320,172,53816,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    392,252,54009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    464,172,54201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    320,172,54393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    216,272,54585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    320,368,54778,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    424,268,54970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:34:682、01:34:778 add note
    02:48:528、02:48:624 ^
nice jump
good luck :)
Topic Starter
Delis
thanks~ :)
Dark_Ai
Hey mod from my Queues :3
well actually I dont have much to say here but here only lil bit nazi for Hard. you can ignore my mod if you dont like it ^^




General
  • seem fine

Gazel's Hard
  • 02:17:470 (1,2,3) - may make the same spacing here?
    02:46:316 (4) - NC here because the vocal change here

nice mapset ~
Good luck with rank ~ ^^
Satellite
thanks modding!

some fixed~~


http://puu.sh/3S0Vm.osu
Frostmourne
Rechecked.

GL~
Satellite
omg omg omg!!

thanks Frost > <


Edit

waiting BAT o.o
happy30
ALiCE'S EMOTiON is the circle, but since this consist of multiple people (and possibly guests) it shouldn't be put as artist
A more appropriate artist would be:

REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya
(unicode: REDALiCE ft. 野宮あゆみ)
Topic Starter
Delis

happy30 wrote:

ALiCE'S EMOTiON is the circle, but since this consist of multiple people (and possibly guests) it shouldn't be put as artist
A more appropriate artist would be:

REDALiCE ft. Ayumi Nomiya
(unicode: REDALiCE ft. 野宮あゆみ)
update~
Frostmourne
Mapper asked for a rebubble and here ;)
kanpakyin
Hard diff is impressive.

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
alacat
congrats :)
Lust
Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Delis
thanks frost and kanpakyin :)
Satellite
1stおめでとう!!!!!!!!!!!


thanks Frost and kanpakyin :)
luxoDeh
congratz!! :)
OnosakiHito
For a moment I thought it's this one: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/25008
Azure
lol nice :D
caren_sk
おめでとー!!!
Oyatsu
Wow. Congratz! So fast for first ranked, Delis :D
Distant years
gz delis-san (・◡・)
Topic Starter
Delis
thanks very much :)


ありがと~!
Natsu
OMG congratz im glad to see this ranked <3
pkhg
congratzz derisu-chan~~! >///<
Ameko
Derishasu-chan (*´▽`*)
It's awesome ヾ(・ε・`*)
(:3[___](:3[___](:3[___]
rui
nice map :)
iyasine
おめでとう~ :D
Momochikun
Gratz ~
Patchouli
オメデトウゴザイマース!
Aqo
beautiful map grats on rank DELiS :D
Topic Starter
Delis
thanks~~~~ :) :) :)
CXu
Ops, /late.
Congrats on rank!
Mirash
grats :D
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