1. Easy (2,25 stars, 110 notes)
2. Insane (4,9 stars, 367 notes)
3. Kyshiro's Hard (4,97 stars, 271 notes)
4. Xin's Normal (4,04 stars, 129 notes)

Chris Brown wrote:

Hello!


NORMAL


1. Please, if it's NORMAL diff. follow the next set-up: http://puu.sh/3ABOo.JPG - If you don't want to change, please set it as Hard diff.


INSANE


1. I recommend you to lower the AR to 8, or to higher a CS, because this is like really hard for people to play

Chris Brown wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Chris Brown wrote:

fck that, my hand is too large

Chris Brown wrote:

Dark_Ai wrote:

Xin's Normal

• • 00:06:282 (2) - change this overlap. may move it a bit right? Imo , this overlap flows well.So , i will not change it
  00:08:156 - add a Note here maybe? it fit really well Okay
  00:30:819 (4) - move 1 grid right to make a better blankte

Done

Ashphyxia code here

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:Runaway (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Groove Coverage
ArtistUnicode:Groove Coverage
Creator:Asphyxia
Version:Xin's Normal
Source:
Tags:Brian Sid Remix Katty Pie Kyshiro XinCrin
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1. Don't be lazy and don't cut songs. Or at least cut them properly, end of the song is totally unexpected and sounds strange!
2. Add members of that band to tags, they deserve it! axel konrad dj novus melanie munch
3. Sliderslide sound should be muted because it is really annoying and doesn't fit with music. What's more claps in non-kiai parts are too loud. And claps are a bit overused.

1. I strongly recommend you to reduce HP Drain by one tick to make this diff playable for beginners! (because of some patterns it is too hard to pass with HP3)
   Note: also, try to use AR3. it fits with your SV and patterns much better, I think
2. 00:11:053 (1,2) - such things confuse beginners a lot! Which direction to go, which slider to click. Try to avoid stacks, this is the easiest diff!
3. 00:15:824 (2,1) - reverse of the slider is too close to the circle. So, players may mistakenly hit the tail. What's more it doesn't looks really good, can't you change this pattern somehow?
   Note: 00:30:137 (4,5) - same things as on two previous suggestions! :<
4. 00:42:406 (1,1) - beginners need some time to recover after the spinner. So, try to leave some empty space after spinner!
5. 01:12:396 (3,1,1) - it is too hard for beginners to read your rhythm here because of stacks. Try to use regular spacing if it is possible!
6. 01:18:189 (6) - 2x reversed sliders are confusing because 2nd reverse-arrow appears too late and beginners can't notice it. What's more such sliders are VERY uncomon for [Easyy] diffs, so they will bug beginners a lot. Consider replacing it with a 1x reversed slider and a circle!
   Note: 01:21:256 (4) - 01:26:368 (3) - same :<

1. 00:45:814 - you should map this part to be consistent with other diffs! This part mapped even in [Easy] diff!
   Note: if you still want to keep it unmapped, add a break or set HP drain to 3 :<
   
   Nothing else to say, awesome diff!

1. Your HP and OD are too low. I'd set OD to7 and HP to 6, so we can get better-balanced and more challenging diff! Try it, it fits wmuch better, I think.
2. 00:21:958 - you could place a spinner here as it done in other diffs.So, you will emphasize that sound and make mapset more consistent.
   
   Since there're two [Insane] diffs [Hard] could be a little bit easier. But what done is done, I like it, anyway.

1. 00:32:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - unreasonable spacing changes/antijumps here bug me a lot. I'm sure that you should fix them. OR AT LEAST emphasize them with new combos.
2. 00:41:043 (5) - have you missed a new combo here?
   
   In general, this diff isn't that bad. Rhythm is ok, but placement is a little bit messy. Try to work on it a little bit more and feel free to poke me again. :<

1. This is [Insane] diff, therefore it should be insane! Set OD to 8, it will help you to make this diff more challenging and enjoyabl for skilled players!
2. 00:04:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nazi - this pattern looks a little bit messy,you can make it look much better by using Polygonal Circle Creation tool! Just press Ctrl+Shift+D in the editor. example / tool
   Note: 00:15:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - it also helps to make neat star patterns
3. 00:09:349 (1) - nazi - jumps looks good but it reflects nothing in music. Try to reduce distance or keep regular spacing here to follow music closer!
4. 00:38:316 (1) - well, I think that you should remove slowdown from this slider because it desn't reflects music well. Anyway, it's up to you.
5. 00:47:347 (4,1) - cute but unreadable antijumps. Please, swap NCs 00:47:347 (4,1) - here and remove NC from 00:47:688 (1) - so, you'll get cute and understandable comboing, see?
6. Spacing in the end of the map looks too big, but this is is [insane] diff, so I think it's not a big deal.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

[General]

1. Don't be lazy and don't cut songs. Or at least cut them properly, end of the song is totally unexpected and sounds strange! I didn't. It's a maikel cut.
2. Add members of that band to tags, they deserve it! axel konrad dj novus melanie munch Ok I added them to tags
3. Sliderslide sound should be muted because it is really annoying and doesn't fit with music. What's more claps in non-kiai parts are too loud. And claps are a bit overused.

[Easy]

1. I strongly recommend you to reduce HP Drain by one tick to make this diff playable for beginners! (because of some patterns it is too hard to pass with HP3) Done
   Note: also, try to use AR3. it fits with your SV and patterns much better, I think ^
2. 00:11:053 (1,2) - such things confuse beginners a lot! Which direction to go, which slider to click. Try to avoid stacks, this is the easiest diff! I honestly think this is okay, so didn't change this.
3. 00:15:824 (2,1) - reverse of the slider is too close to the circle. So, players may mistakenly hit the tail. What's more it doesn't looks really good, can't you change this pattern somehow? Changed.
   Note: 00:30:137 (4,5) - same things as on two previous suggestions! :< No change.
4. 00:42:406 (1,1) - beginners need some time to recover after the spinner. So, try to leave some empty space after spinner! Done.
5. 01:12:396 (3,1,1) - it is too hard for beginners to read your rhythm here because of stacks. Try to use regular spacing if it is possible! Done.
6. 01:18:189 (6) - 2x reversed sliders are confusing because 2nd reverse-arrow appears too late and beginners can't notice it. What's more such sliders are VERY uncomon for [Easyy] diffs, so they will bug beginners a lot. Consider replacing it with a 1x reversed slider and a circle! Changed the first and the third one, second I think it's fine.
   Note: 01:21:256 (4) - 01:26:368 (3) - same :<

[Xin's Normal]

1. 00:45:814 - you should map this part to be consistent with other diffs! This part mapped even in [Easy] diff!
   Note: if you still want to keep it unmapped, add a break or set HP drain to 3 :<
   
   Nothing else to say, awesome diff!

[Kyshiro's Hard]

1. Your HP and OD are too low. I'd set OD to7 and HP to 6, so we can get better-balanced and more challenging diff! Try it, it fits wmuch better, I think.
2. 00:21:958 - you could place a spinner here as it done in other diffs.So, you will emphasize that sound and make mapset more consistent.
   
   Since there're two [Insane] diffs [Hard] could be a little bit easier. But what done is done, I like it, anyway.

[Insane]

1. 00:32:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - unreasonable spacing changes/antijumps here bug me a lot. I'm sure that you should fix them. OR AT LEAST emphasize them with new combos. Done, added NC to every one of them.
2. 00:41:043 (5) - have you missed a new combo here? Added
   
   In general, this diff isn't that bad. Rhythm is ok, but placement is a little bit messy. Try to work on it a little bit more and feel free to poke me again. :<

I think the placement is okay, if some1 else will say something about it, I'll take a look at it.

[Pie's Insane]

1. This is [Insane] diff, therefore it should be insane! Set OD to 8, it will help you to make this diff more challenging and enjoyabl for skilled players!
2. 00:04:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nazi - this pattern looks a little bit messy,you can make it look much better by using Polygonal Circle Creation tool! Just press Ctrl+Shift+D in the editor. example / tool
   Note: 00:15:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - it also helps to make neat star patterns
3. 00:09:349 (1) - nazi - jumps looks good but it reflects nothing in music. Try to reduce distance or keep regular spacing here to follow music closer!
4. 00:38:316 (1) - well, I think that you should remove slowdown from this slider because it desn't reflects music well. Anyway, it's up to you.
5. 00:47:347 (4,1) - cute but unreadable antijumps. Please, swap NCs 00:47:347 (4,1) - here and remove NC from 00:47:688 (1) - so, you'll get cute and understandable comboing, see?
6. Spacing in the end of the map looks too big, but this is is [insane] diff, so I think it's not a big deal.

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Good luck!

Ty for mod!!!

RikiH_ wrote:

m4m O:
Red= Must fix
Blue= Shoould fix
Black= Just a suggestion

Easy

00:11:053 (1,2) - Like this? Just for not overusing symmetry... Done.

00:15:824 (2) - I think you missed a clap here Oh, added.
00:18:550 (4) - ^
00:20:595 (2) - Uhm, spacing x0.48? You should fix it I think I fixed it..
00:56:719 (1) - You should really put it this way for a better oval flow: Done.

01:00:809 (1) - Clap in the end? Added.
01:04:217 (1,2) - If you look closely you can see that they are overlapping... Fix'd.
01:04:557 - Why you stopped putting claps from this moment on? The song doesn't change, so I think claps are necessary... I mean, until 01:11:032 - --
01:11:714 (2) - Soft whistle in the beginning? I think it's k without it. :3
01:15:122 (1,1) - I know what you wanted to do here but the problem is that these objects are only 2/1 of distance so the second can be seen and newbie players will get really confused because of the spacing, so I highly suggest to use x0.8 spacing like you did before Fix'd.
01:18:189 (6) - Clap in the beginning and in the end Added.
01:21:256 (4) - This can be confusing for newbies, there are too many repeats... I suggest to turn it into an unique slider I want to keep it that way, if it becomes a real problem, I'll change it.
01:26:368 (3,1) - Bad overlap... Just move (1) to 296|200 Done.
01:28:413 (3) - I suggest this for a really better flow! You also forgot to put claps in the beginning, on the repeat and in the end Fix'd and added claps!

01:30:458 (2) - Clap here Added :3
01:31:139 (4) - Clap in the beginning, on the repeat and in the end, please Added also.

Xin's Normal

00:09:690 (3,4) - (Nazi) - You can improve this blanket...
00:29:796 (2,3) - (Nazi) - This too
01:19:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this, I'm quite sure that you can make this star better, I mean: something like this:

01:30:458 (1) - Please, add a clap on the slidertick, it feels really empty without it...

Kyshiro's Hard

00:04:919 (3) - (Really nazi) - Move last sliderpoint to 418|255 for a perfect blanket
00:21:277 (3) - What about silencing the end of the slider...?
00:33:801 (5) - In my opinion this note is not necessary, I can't hear any sound at this point
00:34:568 (2) - Clap in the beginning
00:49:903 (3) - Finish at the beginning for emphasizing the noisy part of the song? Note: This can be applied in all diffs of the mapset
00:53:993 (3) - I suggest to fix the spacing here, it plays well but it's ugly to see

Insane

00:09:690 (3) - Whistle here? Added.
00:28:774 (1) - Finish in the beginning please Done.
00:32:864 (1,1,1,1,1) - The first time I played the map I couldn't read this Anyway ask someone to testplay the map and see if they can read it, if they can, then leave it. It they can't, remove it Keeping it, got a few testplays and over 60% can read that. edt: changed into something else.
00:56:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest to remove whistles from this part because there isn't any whistle on the following parts and they are the exact same of this K, removoed the whistles.
01:16:144 (3,4) - Select these notes, then applu a ctrl+g Done!

Pie's Insane

00:47:688 (1,1) - Ehm... Why these NCs...?

Nice hitsounds

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Nothing else. Good map, I also like the song, I'll drop a star for you, bye

Ty for your mod & star!!!

Dark_Ai wrote:

Kyshiro's Hard

• • 00:43:087 (3) - try to make a better stack Alright
  00:47:177 (4) - move this down at x 292 y 176 for a better flow? Intended to be like this

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-Bakari- wrote:

[Kyshiro's Hard]

1. Your HP and OD are too low. I'd set OD to7 and HP to 6, so we can get better-balanced and more challenging diff! Try it, it fits wmuch better, I think. I've put both of them to 6
2. 00:21:958 - you could place a spinner here as it done in other diffs.So, you will emphasize that sound and make mapset more consistent. Alright
   
   Since there're two [Insane] diffs [Hard] could be a little bit easier. But what done is done, I like it, anyway.

RikiH_ wrote:

Kyshiro's Hard

00:04:919 (3) - (Really nazi) - Move last sliderpoint to 418|255 for a perfect blanket did it in another way, to make it even better aheuah
00:21:277 (3) - What about silencing the end of the slider...? Sounds cool
00:33:801 (5) - In my opinion this note is not necessary, I can't hear any sound at this point Did this because it feels great as an intro for the kiai
00:34:568 (2) - Clap in the beginning Fixed
00:49:903 (3) - Finish at the beginning for emphasizing the noisy part of the song? Note: This can be applied in all diffs of the mapset Alright
00:53:993 (3) - I suggest to fix the spacing here, it plays well but it's ugly to see There's a reason I did this, while playing, osu likes to show the stack in a different way, while playing this is perfectly spaced

SPOILER

1. 00:02:703 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you started these sliders 1/2 later, and put a note 1/2 before them as this plays a lot better
2. 00:38:316 (1) - Just a personal opinion here, I think x0.5 is overkill for this slider, and will cause the player to lose his combo on 99% of the first tries, how about using x0.75
3. 00:43:769 (1) - This slider feels a lot more intuitive, however if you fixed the previous slider I suggest you fix this one too
4. 00:48:540 (3,4,5) - This tripple is placed 1/2 too early, there's no sound on the blue tick here, there's enough other places to put a tripple
5. 01:02:342 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing in this pattern
6. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat

1. 00:11:564 (2,3) - Should be a better blanket + the slider looks a bit cramped right now (Fixing the blanket will fix that look too)
2. 00:14:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Patterns like this should be 100% symmetric, do this by using the smallest grid:
   -00:15:483 (7) - 2 grids to the right
   -00:15:313 (6,8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:654 (8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:824 (9) - 1 grid down
   
   
3. 00:17:698 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Copy paste the previous pattern to here and press CTRL+G (Don't forget the hitsounds)
4. 00:19:743 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
5. 00:20:425 (3) - Add whistle on start
6. 00:28:774 (1,2) - A bit more curve would look better imo, additionally you could flip (2) with CTRL+J for better flow (Try to make it a blanket over 00:29:456 (1) - )
7. 00:29:796 (2,3,4,5) - Use x1.0 spacing like you did with the rest of this part
8. 00:34:056 (5) - Add a clap
9. 00:37:635 (4,5) - Same as before, a bit more curve and CTRL+J (5)
10. 00:40:020 (2) - CTRL+H flows better imo (don't forget the spacing)
11. 00:41:724 (5,6,7) - Incorrect spacing
12. 00:48:199 (2,3,4) - I suggest rearranging these like this: http://puu.sh/3R2gl.jpg (Better flow/looks) Try to stack00:48:370 (3) - with 00:49:051 (1) -
13. 00:50:414 (4,5) - Use x1.3 spacing here for consistency
14. 00:50:585 (5,6,7) - Fix this spacing
15. 00:53:141 (7,8,9) - Make this a better looking triangle
16. 00:53:652 (1,2,3) - After you fixed the above listed triangle, copy paste them and press CTRL+H and J to make this a smooth looking pattern (Use ctrl+G to arrange the notes)
17. 01:00:127 (2,3,4) - Give this a bit more curve, place (2) a bit higher, (3) a bit lower, keep the spacing intact between these notes though http://puu.sh/3R2sh.jpg
18. 01:00:809 (1,2,3,4) - NC on these notes
19. 01:09:840 (4,6) - unnecessary overlap
20. The claps from 01:01:490 - till 01:11:884 - are missplaced, put them on every upbeat, aka every 2nd white line in the measure
    
21. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, use a clap every upbeat again
22. 01:16:485 (5,1) - Spacing
23. 01:18:530 (4) - Replace this slider by a copy of 01:17:848 (1) - (Use CTRL+H and J) Mind the spacing and add a repeat to it
24. 01:31:310 (10,11,12,1) - Flows weird, try using a symmetric triangle pattern: http://puu.sh/3R2Nx.jpg (Fix the spacing between 01:31:650 (3,1) - after you've done this)
25. 01:32:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - NC
26. 01:34:206 (5) - stack with the start of 01:33:014 (1) -
27. 01:34:377 (1,2,3,4) - To fix the spacing with the previous object you can place these 4 sliders a bit lower

• 
  I see there's a lot of incorrect blankets etc. in this diff, they don't have to be 100% perfect but at least make them look prettier, listed most of them in the mod, if you feel there's more that need a change, go ahead and do it

1. 00:07:304 (3) - Remove this whistle
2. 00:09:690 (3,4) - (4) should be a better blanket over the end of (3)
3. 00:16:506 (1) - Such sliders should be symmetric or really close to it, the lower part clearly has less curve than the upper part in the current state
4. 00:18:550 (4,1) - Fix this blanket
5. 00:19:573 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:21:277 (4) - Place this slider somewhere around the height of the previous slider, more flow and fits the song as it stops with a high note
7. 00:37:976 (3,4) - Copy 1 slider and paste it to so they're the same, then fix the blanket of these
8. 00:50:926 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
9. 00:51:266 (2) - the curve of the last part of this slider could look a lot better
10. 00:52:289 (3,4) - Same as listed before
11. 00:52:970 (4) - Remove whistle on the start
12. 00:55:697 (5,1) - Blanket
13. 01:01:490 (1,2) - ^
15. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat
16. 01:33:525 (2,3) - Blanket

1. I suggest you use x1.0 speed for the whole diff, it can be pretty confusing for new players to encounter SV changes
2. Also keep in mind to use the same spacing for the whole diff (x0.8) It varied a bit in the intro
3. 00:42:406 (1) - The objects after this spinner are too short after it. Shorten the spinner to 00:43:769 - and add a note here 00:45:132 -
4. 00:54:334 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - It bothered me a bit that this is almost the same just repeated, try removing the repeat on 00:58:764 (3) - and adding a note at 01:00:127 - (Might have to move stuff around to get the spacing/looks right here
5. 01:10:351 (5) - Would look a lot better if this slider was symmetric like the rest of the pattern http://puu.sh/3R3xC.jpg (Mind the spacing after fixing this)
6. 01:12:396 (3,1,1) - Space these out a bit more to prevent confusion
7. 01:18:189 (6,7,1) - Spacing
8. 01:35:570 (1) - Start this spinner 1/1 later and put a note here with a finish

Kyshiro wrote:

Haelo

General
Copy paste from AIbat:

SPOILER

Pie's insane

1. 00:02:703 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you started these sliders 1/2 later, and put a note 1/2 before them as this plays a lot better
2. 00:38:316 (1) - Just a personal opinion here, I think x0.5 is overkill for this slider, and will cause the player to lose his combo on 99% of the first tries, how about using x0.75
3. 00:43:769 (1) - This slider feels a lot more intuitive, however if you fixed the previous slider I suggest you fix this one too
4. 00:48:540 (3,4,5) - This tripple is placed 1/2 too early, there's no sound on the blue tick here, there's enough other places to put a tripple
5. 01:02:342 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing in this pattern
6. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat

Insane

1. 00:11:564 (2,3) - Should be a better blanket + the slider looks a bit cramped right now (Fixing the blanket will fix that look too)
2. 00:14:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Patterns like this should be 100% symmetric, do this by using the smallest grid:
   -00:15:483 (7) - 2 grids to the right
   -00:15:313 (6,8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:654 (8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:824 (9) - 1 grid down
   
   
3. 00:17:698 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Copy paste the previous pattern to here and press CTRL+G (Don't forget the hitsounds)
4. 00:19:743 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
5. 00:20:425 (3) - Add whistle on start
6. 00:28:774 (1,2) - A bit more curve would look better imo, additionally you could flip (2) with CTRL+J for better flow (Try to make it a blanket over 00:29:456 (1) - )
7. 00:29:796 (2,3,4,5) - Use x1.0 spacing like you did with the rest of this part
8. 00:34:056 (5) - Add a clap
9. 00:37:635 (4,5) - Same as before, a bit more curve and CTRL+J (5)
10. 00:40:020 (2) - CTRL+H flows better imo (don't forget the spacing)
11. 00:41:724 (5,6,7) - Incorrect spacing
12. 00:48:199 (2,3,4) - I suggest rearranging these like this: http://puu.sh/3R2gl.jpg (Better flow/looks) Try to stack00:48:370 (3) - with 00:49:051 (1) -
13. 00:50:414 (4,5) - Use x1.3 spacing here for consistency
14. 00:50:585 (5,6,7) - Fix this spacing
15. 00:53:141 (7,8,9) - Make this a better looking triangle
16. 00:53:652 (1,2,3) - After you fixed the above listed triangle, copy paste them and press CTRL+H and J to make this a smooth looking pattern (Use ctrl+G to arrange the notes)
17. 01:00:127 (2,3,4) - Give this a bit more curve, place (2) a bit higher, (3) a bit lower, keep the spacing intact between these notes though http://puu.sh/3R2sh.jpg
18. 01:00:809 (1,2,3,4) - NC on these notes
19. 01:09:840 (4,6) - unnecessary overlap
20. The claps from 01:01:490 - till 01:11:884 - are missplaced, put them on every upbeat, aka every 2nd white line in the measure
    
21. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, use a clap every upbeat again
22. 01:16:485 (5,1) - Spacing
23. 01:18:530 (4) - Replace this slider by a copy of 01:17:848 (1) - (Use CTRL+H and J) Mind the spacing and add a repeat to it
24. 01:31:310 (10,11,12,1) - Flows weird, try using a symmetric triangle pattern: http://puu.sh/3R2Nx.jpg (Fix the spacing between 01:31:650 (3,1) - after you've done this)
25. 01:32:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - NC
26. 01:34:206 (5) - stack with the start of 01:33:014 (1) -
27. 01:34:377 (1,2,3,4) - To fix the spacing with the previous object you can place these 4 sliders a bit lower

Xin's Normal

• 
  I see there's a lot of incorrect blankets etc. in this diff, they don't have to be 100% perfect but at least make them look prettier, listed most of them in the mod, if you feel there's more that need a change, go ahead and do it

1. 00:07:304 (3) - Remove this whistle
2. 00:09:690 (3,4) - (4) should be a better blanket over the end of (3)
3. 00:16:506 (1) - Such sliders should be symmetric or really close to it, the lower part clearly has less curve than the upper part in the current state
4. 00:18:550 (4,1) - Fix this blanket
5. 00:19:573 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:21:277 (4) - Place this slider somewhere around the height of the previous slider, more flow and fits the song as it stops with a high note
7. 00:37:976 (3,4) - Copy 1 slider and paste it to so they're the same, then fix the blanket of these
8. 00:50:926 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
9. 00:51:266 (2) - the curve of the last part of this slider could look a lot better
10. 00:52:289 (3,4) - Same as listed before
11. 00:52:970 (4) - Remove whistle on the start
12. 00:55:697 (5,1) - Blanket
13. 01:01:490 (1,2) - ^
15. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat
16. 01:33:525 (2,3) - Blanket

Easy

1. I suggest you use x1.0 speed for the whole diff, it can be pretty confusing for new players to encounter SV changes
2. Also keep in mind to use the same spacing for the whole diff (x0.8) It varied a bit in the intro
3. 00:42:406 (1) - The objects after this spinner are too short after it. Shorten the spinner to 00:43:769 - and add a note here 00:45:132 -
4. 00:54:334 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - It bothered me a bit that this is almost the same just repeated, try removing the repeat on 00:58:764 (3) - and adding a note at 01:00:127 - (Might have to move stuff around to get the spacing/looks right here
5. 01:10:351 (5) - Would look a lot better if this slider was symmetric like the rest of the pattern http://puu.sh/3R3xC.jpg (Mind the spacing after fixing this)
6. 01:12:396 (3,1,1) - Space these out a bit more to prevent confusion
7. 01:18:189 (6,7,1) - Spacing
8. 01:35:570 (1) - Start this spinner 1/1 later and put a note here with a finish

Fixed everything in Easy & Insane, ty for mod!!!!!