Let's try this!
[General]
In Normal and Hard diff the last kiai times finishes at 04:17:970 - . Resnap correctly that green line on 04:17:944 - .[Easy]
00:20:418 - Add a note in 7 with bassdrum.wav
00:20:830 (20830|3) - Add clap here instead of bassdrum.wav
00:22:480 (22480|6) - Remove, and add clap.wav
00:23:304 (23304|4) - Add clap here instead of bassdrum.wav
01:06:913 (66913|6,66913|0) - Move 2 6 maybe? :3
01:11:552 (71552|0,72377|3) - Delete them ;_; (01:12:377 (72377|3) - change the bassdrum.wav from here to 01:12:377 (72377|1) - )
01:14:232 (74232|2,74438|4) - Move right maybe?
01:31:346 (91346|2) - Move left
01:31:758 (91758|5) - Move right
01:40:624 (100624|1,100830|5) - Delete them, and 01:40:727 (100727|3) - move on 6
01:46:191 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111278702:07:016 (127016|5) - Delete, 02:07:222 (127222|3) - move 6 and 02:07:428 (127428|3) - move 5
02:09:284 (129284|0) - Add clap.wav here?
02:16:913 (136913|1) - Remove
02:29:078 - LNs... Aaaah :< delete LNs and rearrange a bit
02:35:057 (155057|2,155263|2) - Delete and 02:35:160 (155160|4) - move on 3
02:42:480 (162480|4) - Delete
02:48:253 (168253|4,168459|2) - Delete
02:51:964 (171964|3) - Move right
02:53:614 (173614|4) - ^
03:02:892 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111281103:06:810 (186810|4) - Move right
03:12:583 (192583|3) - Extend on 03:13:407 -
03:18:562 (198562|6) - Extend on white tick
03:23:820 (203820|6) - Move 5
03:38:356 (218356|3,220005|4) - Remove :<
03:44:542 (224542|2) - Delete and 03:44:438 (224438|4) - move left
03:46:191 (226191|3) - Move left
03:51:552 - Avoid LNs + notes... or at least LNs + notes 1/1 on other hand
03:58:150 - Same here
04:01:243 (241243|3) - Move left (you can keep this)
04:10:933 (250933|6) - Remove
04:11:346 - Same as before... only LNs or LNs + notes on other hand
04:14:438 (254438|2) - Move left
04:21:243 - Same as before... only LNs or LNs + notes on other hand
04:24:129 (264129|3) - Delete
04:31:036 (271036|4) - Delete and 04:30:933 (270933|2) - move right
[Normal]
00:04:026 (4026|3) - I like moar with this removed (but it's optional xD)
00:05:160 (5160|4) - Move this on blue tick 00:05:057 - and remove the bassdrum.wav sound (imo it's better to follow the lead instrument)
00:05:985 (5985|3,5985|1) - Move right and 00:06:397 (6397|1) - move left?
00:12:170 - I think this would be better
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1111303 (don't delete bassdrum.wav)
00:13:820 (13820|0) - Move right
00:15:469 (15469|4) - Move on 1, and from here 00:13:820 - rearrange with 1/1 (apart 00:16:913 - this xD)
00:19:078 (19078|1) - Remove
00:20:418 - Same as before, rearrange with 1/1 xD
00:39:387 (39387|1) - Move right?
00:51:758 - Add a note with clap.wav
00:52:995 - You can keep the 1/4 little stream since you have an Easy diff, but change position of notes
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111138000:53:407 - Rearrange 1/1 from there to 00:56:706 - here... With LNs 1/2 is et xD
01:01:655 - You can keep the 1/2 here, but try to move notes on the other hand
01:05:882 (65882|1) - Move right and 01:05:985 (65985|3) - move 1
01:07:222 - Add note on 4 for pattern consistency
01:07:840 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111138801:12:583 (72583|4) - Remove maybe?
01:14:851 - 1/1 notes, not 1/2
01:21:449 - Try to not fill 1/2...
01:29:696 - Where are notes here? o.o
01:38:047 (98047|5) - Remove
01:38:356 (98356|3) - Move left and add note on 1
02:13:407 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111284202:29:387 (149387|2) - Remove
02:30:212 (150212|3) - ^
02:29:078 - Try to make: LNs on a hand and notes on the other hand :v (for all LNs)
02:38:356 (158356|4,158459|5) - Remove
02:41:655 (161655|1,161758|5) - Remove
03:12:583 (192583|5) - Extend to 03:13:407 - and delete 03:13:407 (193407|2) -
03:25:160 (205160|4) - Move on 7
03:29:696 (209696|5) - Move left
03:54:851 (234851|0,235676|3) - Remove LNs
03:54:851 (234851|3) - Move left
03:55:469 - Add note
03:56:294 - Add note on 4
03:58:150 - Add note on 1
04:11:758 (251758|4) - Move on 3
04:17:016 (257016|6,257428|4) - Delete
04:16:913 (256913|4) - Move on 7
04:21:243 - Try to make LNs on a hand and notes on the other hand like I said before
04:43:407 (283407|2) - Move left and 04:43:511 (283511|0) - move on 3
04:44:335 (284335|6) - Move on 1
04:44:129 (284129|1) - Move right
[Hard]
00:22:995 (22995|5,23201|1) - Maybe delete?
01:06:913 (66913|3) - Move left for pattern consistency
01:24:129 (84129|1) - Delete
01:27:428 (87428|4) - Remove?
01:34:645 - Mmmmh what about LN+1/1 notes?
01:38:975 (98975|4) - Remove?
01:47:119 (107119|3,107222|5) - Move right and 01:47:325 - add note on 5
02:25:779 (145779|1,145882|2,145985|3,146088|4) - Move right
02:38:356 (158356|2,158459|3) - ^
02:44:954 (164954|4) - Remove
02:55:469 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111289903:14:438 (194438|2) - Move 5, 03:14:542 (194542|0) - move 3 and 03:14:645 (194645|1) - move 1?
03:37:119 (217119|0,217222|1,218047|3,218253|1) - Delete them imo :v
03:38:356 -
Aaaa this is overmap man... too much for an hard :< you should delete some notes03:43:407 (223407|6) - delete and 03:43:614 - add note on 4
03:44:954 - Again :<
03:51:552 - ^ same as before
03:58:150 - ^
04:29:490 -
Here snapping is 1/6 if u follow guitar... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111291804:37:944 (277944|2,278356|2,278768|2,279181|2) - Move on 6 or 7
04:44:232 - Add a note
[Insane]
00:18:768 (18768|4) - Move right (for symmetry pattern)
00:40:212 - Add note on 1
01:10:315 (70315|0) - Move on 7 and 01:10:933 (70933|2,71036|1,71139|0) - move 2 3 4
01:18:562 (78562|0) - Move on 3 or 5
01:23:098 (83098|0) - Move on 3
01:40:933 (100933|2) - Remove
02:20:212 (140212|2) - Move on blue tick 02:20:315 - and add bassdrum.wav
02:29:078 -
Kiai should start here xD02:40:418 -
http://puu.sh/5n9DQ.png03:12:583 (192583|0) - Extend to 03:13:407 -
03:19:593 - You can add 4 notes with 1/6 snapping (following guitar)
03:24:335 (204335|1) - Remove (if u do this, add bassdrum.wav on another note)
03:52:480 (232480|2,232892|5,233098|3) - Remove
04:06:397 (246397|0) - Delete?
04:21:655 -
1/3 snapping until 04:27:840 - (if u follow guitar)
04:29:490 -
Here too (if u follow guitar)
[Crisis]
Add hitsounds like you did on other diffs...03:02:995 - If you want to keep them, add same notes on 03:03:201 -
03:19:593 - You can add 4 notes with 1/6 snapping (following guitar)
03:20:212 - I think those minijacks don't fit at all
03:29:696 (209696|1) - Move right
03:54:438 (234438|6) - Move on 1
04:01:036 (241036|6) - Move on 2
04:21:655 -
1/3 snapping until 04:27:840 - (if u follow guitar)
04:29:490 -
Here too (if u follow guitar)
04:47:222 (287222|3) - Move right
Call me back when you fixed