NewRulerNA wrote:

[Hall of Famer Kitsuneko's Hard]

1. 00:06:660 (2) - 無理にoverlapさせてる感じがあり、BPM的にもちょっと不安なのでちょっと距離を開けてみてはどうでしょうか？
   
   
   ジャンプを入れてもこのポイントは比較的曲調が激しい部分なので浮くことはなく、流れも崩さないのでoverlapの解決も楽にすることができます。 IRCのアレの感じになりました
2. 00:08:396 (1) - 00:08:238 - のonbeatからoffbeatに変わっていく流れをより強調するために、ここのスライダーをサークル2つに分離させるのはどうでしょうか？
   本当は00:08:238 ~ 00:08:554 - までが一つのセットになっているように感じたので、downbeatからスライダーの開始というのが一貫性などの要素を考えた上ではmod的な意味では安定はすると思いましたが、この変化が悪いわけではないのでこちらでも良いと思います。
   それに今はスライダーよりもサークルのほうが好まれる環境云々
   個人的には配置は00:07:607 (5) - の始点にスタックさせる感じが好きです。 Done
3. 00:10:765 (1) - remove?
   00:20:870 - との一貫性という理由もありますが、分けるとボーカルとよりフィットする感じがあるのでこっちで揃えて行きたい所。 Done 抜いた分配置の整合性も取りました
4. 00:15:817 (1) - ^ Done
5. 00:28:923 ~ 00:29:396 - 音量ちょっと下げてこの辺にdrum-hitdrum使うのどう？ただの好み ノーマルのまま音量下げかな
6. 00:32:238 (1,2) - 飛ばしたいのは分かるのですが、さすがにこれは飛び過ぎでは・・・？
   00:32:238 - と00:32:870 - の2箇所を比較するとほぼ同じ音量、強いて言えば後者のほうがほんの少しだけ音が小さい印象がありました。
   なので少なくとも後者のジャンプ距離が前者の部分の倍以上である今の配置は曲とフィットせず、浮いているように感じました。
   前の部分と同じ距離とまでは言いませんが、前者の1.5倍くらいの距離まで下方修正するのがベターです。　Done せやな・・・ 配置見直しました

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

1. Increase AR by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.

1. 00:45:502 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.

1. 00:47:396 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.

1. Increase OD by at least 1 tick, it's way too low for a Hard difficulty right now.

1. 00:28:765 (6) - New combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:29:081 (1) - Remove new combo here afterwards.
3. 00:40:291 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This stream totally doesn't belong to a Hard difficulty, please change it.
4. 01:24:660 (3) - New combo to follow your previous comboing.
5. 01:25:291 (1) - Remove new combo afterwards then.

1. 01:14:238 (2) - It would be awesome if you could try to not overlap this slider with the previous one here.
2. 01:19:765 (4) - This slider is way too high on the screen, move it down please.

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

1. Increase AR by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.

1. 00:45:502 (5) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.

~Normal~

1. 00:47:396 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.

~Kitsuneko's Hard~

1. Increase OD by at least 1 tick, it's way too low for a Hard difficulty right now.

1. 00:28:765 (6) - New combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:29:081 (1) - Remove new combo here afterwards.
3. 00:40:291 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This stream totally doesn't belong to a Hard difficulty, please change it.
4. 01:24:660 (3) - New combo to follow your previous comboing.
5. 01:25:291 (1) - Remove new combo afterwards then.

~Insane~

1. 01:14:238 (2) - It would be awesome if you could try to not overlap this slider with the previous one here.
2. 01:19:765 (4) - This slider is way too high on the screen, move it down please.

Great map :3

Andrea wrote:

The Unicode Title on Kitsuneko's Hard is different from the other difficulties, make sure to make it consistent so I can bubble this. :3

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Romanized phrases should show how it is pronounced, by which i mean Source should be "Genei o Kakeru Taiyou".
- I'm not 100% sure about this, cause "wo" is way more familiar than "o". I don't mind at all even if you'd like to keep it unchanged. 変えました。

[Insane]
Slider tick rate 2 is kinda pointless in this difficulty and it isn't consistant throughout difficulties. fixed.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so? fixed.
00:30:975 (1,2) - Add more notes or use shorter sliders for this section? corresponding to 00:33:344 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - . no~ スローパートだしここらで休憩入れてもいいかなと(良い配置思いつかなかった)
01:13:291 (3,4) - This pattern doesn't flow good imo because of its angle. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062956 fixed.
01:21:581 (3) - Remove this finish and add it to 01:21:502 (2) - instead? A finish on a blue tick doesn't sound good to me. fixed.
01:22:133 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make this stream curved and it'll flow better imo. fixed.
01:24:975 (6) - Feels too close to the previous slider to me, a jump here would be great. fixed.

それと短い譜面だからOD+1してもいいんじゃないかなーと思ったり、好みなのでお任せしますが。 8にしました。

[Hard]
The video isn't played in this difficulty.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so?
00:18:186 (5,6,1) - Suggested rhythm: http://puu.sh/50J0v.jpg by pausing here the guitar sound will be more emphasized imo.
00:29:081 (3,4,5) - Scale the spacing up a little so it makes a small jump? it fits better with the melody and instruments imo. For example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063017
01:02:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is somewhat boring and repetitive to me because all of them are 1/2. How about using more 1/4 or 1/1 in order to diversify it? Same for 01:05:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .
01:22:765 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'd remove all of these finishes if i were you because it's way too loud. And also by doing this the original melody can be more emphasized imo.



[Normal]
00:19:291 - Add a note here for a better transition and flow. Complicating rhythm before new stanza would be nice imo. fixed.
00:42:344 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/1 and add a note to where the slider end originally was in order to follow the vocal which should be emphasized the most in the chorus section. fixed.
00:49:291 (4) - Looks too random imo. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063054 fixed.

[Easy]
00:45:502 (5) - This slider should be more curved to blanket the next slider better. http://puu.sh/50Jzd.jpg fixed.
01:10:133 (1,2) - Each of these sliders should be shortened by 1/1 beat respectively imo because they are conflicting with the vocal. fixed.

Call me back for recheck!

Melophobia wrote:

Hard:
01:24:975 - 僕ならここにclapつけます　音量70%くらいまで下げてもgood

Melophobia wrote:

Rebubbled~

MiLu wrote:

おめです°˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°