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Andrea
The Unicode Title on Kitsuneko's Hard is different from the other difficulties, make sure to make it consistent so I can bubble this. :3
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Naichatta

Andrea wrote:

The Unicode Title on Kitsuneko's Hard is different from the other difficulties, make sure to make it consistent so I can bubble this. :3
fixed~ :D
Andrea
Okay, this is good to go now. :3

Bubbled~
Oyatsu
Oh lol
Go! Go! :)
Melophobia
[General]
Romanized phrases should show how it is pronounced, by which i mean Source should be "Genei o Kakeru Taiyou".
- I'm not 100% sure about this, cause "wo" is way more familiar than "o". I don't mind at all even if you'd like to keep it unchanged.

[Insane]
Slider tick rate 2 is kinda pointless in this difficulty and it isn't consistant throughout difficulties.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so?
00:30:975 (1,2) - Add more notes or use shorter sliders for this section? corresponding to 00:33:344 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - .
01:13:291 (3,4) - This pattern doesn't flow good imo because of its angle. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062956
01:21:581 (3) - Remove this finish and add it to 01:21:502 (2) - instead? A finish on a blue tick doesn't sound good to me.
01:22:133 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make this stream curved and it'll flow better imo.
01:24:975 (6) - Feels too close to the previous slider to me, a jump here would be great.

それと短い譜面だからOD+1してもいいんじゃないかなーと思ったり、好みなのでお任せしますが。

[Hard]
The video isn't played in this difficulty.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so?
00:18:186 (5,6,1) - Suggested rhythm: http://puu.sh/50J0v.jpg by pausing here the guitar sound will be more emphasized imo.
00:29:081 (3,4,5) - Scale the spacing up a little so it makes a small jump? it fits better with the melody and instruments imo. For example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063017
01:02:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is somewhat boring and repetitive to me because all of them are 1/2. How about using more 1/4 or 1/1 in order to diversify it? Same for 01:05:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .
01:22:765 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'd remove all of these finishes if i were you because it's way too loud. And also by doing this the original melody can be more emphasized imo.

[Normal]
00:19:291 - Add a note here for a better transition and flow. Complicating rhythm before new stanza would be nice imo.
00:42:344 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/1 and add a note to where the slider end originally was in order to follow the vocal which should be emphasized the most in the chorus section.
00:49:291 (4) - Looks too random imo. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063054

[Easy]
00:45:502 (5) - This slider should be more curved to blanket the next slider better. http://puu.sh/50Jzd.jpg
01:10:133 (1,2) - Each of these sliders should be shortened by 1/1 beat respectively imo because they are conflicting with the vocal.

Call me back for recheck!
Topic Starter
Naichatta

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Romanized phrases should show how it is pronounced, by which i mean Source should be "Genei o Kakeru Taiyou".
- I'm not 100% sure about this, cause "wo" is way more familiar than "o". I don't mind at all even if you'd like to keep it unchanged. 変えました。

[Insane]
Slider tick rate 2 is kinda pointless in this difficulty and it isn't consistant throughout difficulties. fixed.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so? fixed.
00:30:975 (1,2) - Add more notes or use shorter sliders for this section? corresponding to 00:33:344 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - . no~ スローパートだしここらで休憩入れてもいいかなと(良い配置思いつかなかった)
01:13:291 (3,4) - This pattern doesn't flow good imo because of its angle. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1062956 fixed.
01:21:581 (3) - Remove this finish and add it to 01:21:502 (2) - instead? A finish on a blue tick doesn't sound good to me. fixed.
01:22:133 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make this stream curved and it'll flow better imo. fixed.
01:24:975 (6) - Feels too close to the previous slider to me, a jump here would be great. fixed.

それと短い譜面だからOD+1してもいいんじゃないかなーと思ったり、好みなのでお任せしますが。 8にしました。

[Hard]
The video isn't played in this difficulty.
00:00:660 - This section is way too loud imo since there's a lot of finishes here, how about reducing the volume by 20% or so?
00:18:186 (5,6,1) - Suggested rhythm: http://puu.sh/50J0v.jpg by pausing here the guitar sound will be more emphasized imo.
00:29:081 (3,4,5) - Scale the spacing up a little so it makes a small jump? it fits better with the melody and instruments imo. For example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063017
01:02:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is somewhat boring and repetitive to me because all of them are 1/2. How about using more 1/4 or 1/1 in order to diversify it? Same for 01:05:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .
01:22:765 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'd remove all of these finishes if i were you because it's way too loud. And also by doing this the original melody can be more emphasized imo.



[Normal]
00:19:291 - Add a note here for a better transition and flow. Complicating rhythm before new stanza would be nice imo. fixed.
00:42:344 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/1 and add a note to where the slider end originally was in order to follow the vocal which should be emphasized the most in the chorus section. fixed.
00:49:291 (4) - Looks too random imo. How about rearranging it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063054 fixed.

[Easy]
00:45:502 (5) - This slider should be more curved to blanket the next slider better. http://puu.sh/50Jzd.jpg fixed.
01:10:133 (1,2) - Each of these sliders should be shortened by 1/1 beat respectively imo because they are conflicting with the vocal. fixed.

Call me back for recheck!
thanks modding :)
Melophobia
Hard:
01:24:975 - 僕ならここにclapつけます 音量70%くらいまで下げてもgood
Kitsuneko

Melophobia wrote:

Hard:
01:24:975 - 僕ならここにclapつけます 音量70%くらいまで下げてもgood
おっけー80%にしてclapつけましたさんくす
http://puu.sh/52DFI.osu
Topic Starter
Naichatta
updated :D
Melophobia
Rebubbled~
Topic Starter
Naichatta

Melophobia wrote:

Rebubbled~
ありがとう~ :)
Zero__wind
nice
really love this anime
Kawayi Rika
Nice song and map ~

Here you go <3


MiLu
おめです°˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°
Lanturn
Great mapset, Congrats :)
Freya
o3o congratz
Oyatsu
Congratz!! This song ranked <3 :D
fanzhen0019
o/ rankd!
gratz!
HabiHolic
Congratz
Kyouren
Gratzz!!! kusano and Kitsuneko!!!
Satellite

MiLu wrote:

おめです°˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°
fusya
おめでとーです!
Umi
Gratz kusano :3
YTYuyu
wow i thought you quit for good o.o

congratz on the rank :D
Topic Starter
Naichatta
Thank you very much, Rika and everyone :)
Beige
Congratz~ ^^
alacat
おめでとう :)
S o r d a
おめでとー!
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