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Caramell - Caramelldansen (Speedycake Remix)

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Topic Starter
0_o
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cyanberryio
This one is more fun that the other one I'd say! :D STAR!

01:21:625 - 01:22:356: Suggestion: Fill this space with note in the proper places, just like the old one?
General: Have inherited timing sections for sound added 1/4 before they happen. Maybe have that 0.5x section on the start of the soft part, just suggesting.
Kiai Suggestion: Push the section for Kiai on the stream closer together so it has a continuing effect?

I'm not going to say anything about the hit sounds, since you're probably still adding them.

Heh, once I saw this in the Latest Posts I instantly clicked. :D
Lesjuh
/me will probably come up with some difficulty too.

Insane difficulty that is

Not going to star this because it's in desperate need of hitsounds, unfinished, has no background. In other-words, a work-in-progress.

ohshit offset is way off
There ya go: 16.615
blissfulyoshi
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eee
0_0
o_o
0_o ah, that's it
anyways, eeemod GO!!!

[Normal]
01:24:53 (1) - extend this further a whole beat
01:26:54 (1) - delete this prior to the above mod, if the above is not done, this can stayz
02:13:497 (timing section) - lands directly on the note with a volume change, move back (even 5 milliseconds) in order to hear the volume intended. I'm guessing it has to be done, cause I've been told not once, but many tine tayneeez. P.S. notes can land directly on a timing section when a kiai section, BPM change, within slider, or spinner, practically anything but a volume change

[Hard]

01:25:26 (1) - begin 1/2 later?
02:50:03 (7) - finish?
02:50:39 (9) - ^
02:50:76 (10) - ^

tis all, starred (even though I would wait 4 a BG, maybe I haven't seen one, idk) doesn't matter, starring anyways
Topic Starter
0_o
Thanks eee, made all the changes I think :)
Ekaru
Easy:
Fine, though spinner after a break some ways through felt weird, but worked.

Normal: Same here. I would move the note before that spinner.

Hard: Increase HP Drain by 1.

Insane: Increase HP Drain by 1.

1 can be replaced by "2" if you so wish in both of those scenarios. However, as is, it's too low in both.

Map doesn't suck. Star! Fun fun fun.
minyeob
Eh... I think sound effect volume is bit low

[Easy,Normal]
Sound effects=WIP?

[Hard]
Sound effect is so low that I can't hear any finish sound effects......
00:53:84 (6) - I can't hear the sound effect.
00:59:69 (5) - Same
01:43:53 (7) - Same
01:46:46 (7) - Same
02:36:14 (7) - Add finish on here. But it's hard to listen.
02:39:07 (4) - Finish

[Insane]
Nice

Anyways, your map is fine!
Kudosu star for you ;)
sesito71
0_o, this is better than the other version :D

[Easy]

02:27:01 (3) - New combo here?

[Normal]

00:41:06 (4) - Move this 1 square down (align with the other notes before :D), then align 5
02:03:63 (4) - Move a bit down, and a bit to the left.
02:04:72 (1) - I think clap doesn't sounds well here

[Hard]

looks fine :D

[Insane]

00:43:43 (4) - Move a bit up



Star*
rust45
[Insane and Hard]
Kiai after Kiai broke my eyes, but otherwise it's all good.

Solid maps. I like it better then the first. Star for you.

Edit: Forgot to say this, but I feel the hitsound volume is a bit quiet.
Lybydose
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Topic Starter
0_o

Lybydose wrote:

Insane:

02:08:93 (3) - Slow BPM seems kind of random. Why not make this entire section (between the break and 02:14:95) slow BPM instead of just half of it? hmm, I'll wait for a second opinion here.

Hard:

00:30:83 (7) - Awkward. I missed this when I played it. Maybe put circles at 00:30:46 and 00:30:64. did something else here
aRiskOfRain
Wow, it's been such a long time since I enjoyed playing osu that much!

Easy

What's with the break at 2.09?

Normal

Er... you win? Really, really perfect. And I found myself smiling playing it.

Hard

1.38.422 - No new combo, put it on the 2?

Insane

1.20.884 - Can't help feeling you need a repeat slider here.
1.32.576 - ^^

In my opinion, the half bpm is, in fact, fine. And I rather like the kai... koi... flashy thingies.

Star for you.
mrtn
set a preview point

[easy]
01:13:76 (?) - note here?

[normal]
fine with me

[hard]
no probs

[insane]
01:29:28 (10,1) - i don't like this jump
02:02:17 (1) - remove new combo
02:50:03 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
0_o

mrtn wrote:

set a preview point done

[easy]
01:13:76 (?) - note here? nah, I don't want notes 1/2 apart in this diff

[normal]
fine with me

[hard]
no probs

[insane]
01:29:28 (10,1) - i don't like this jump moved it closer
02:02:17 (1) - remove new combo I like it like this
02:50:03 (1) - ^ ^
Thanks!
Jarby
Find a background, it's necessary to have one for a map to be ranked~ I don't really like your usage of spinners, but that's more to do with the song structure. 02:28:11 - Move kiai to here. 01:36:23 - Remove break.

Easy:

00:38:50 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:03 (1) - Spacing.

Hard:

00:39:42 - Add circle with clap stacked on previous circle.
00:48:92 - Add circles to the off beat from here to 00:50:01.
01:33:49 - Add circles to the off beat from here to 01:34:22.
01:35:68 - Add circles to off beats, remove break.

Insane:

Hard's modding.
Topic Starter
0_o
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Easy:
Only thing I can suggest is make the hit circle bigger. Up to you.

Normal:
00:41:06 (4) - Spacing,Move a bit to the left and down, going to have to move 00:41:42 (5) - too the left some
A bit too much whistle at the end, starting around 02:28:47 (2) - ahh my earsss

Hard:
00:50:55 - This could use a note here, it's a hard difficulty. It's doable and sounds better.
01:23:62 - ^
01:37:32 (1,2,3,1) - Make this into a little mini-jump? Starting on the left x-axis, then bottom y-axis, then right x-axis, and ending 1 on the top y-axis where it is now. Space the other ones relative to where 01:38:42 (1) - is. SS under the box


Insane:
01:38:42 (1) - Mirror this to 01:37:69 (2) - and place 01:38:78 (2) - in the middle, fix necessary spacing on 01:38:97 (3) -
The claps are fine at the end, but the whistle again.. a bit too much I think. my earssssss
ztrot
All checked and it checks out fine
Bubble
Yuukari-Banteki
;-; i was mapping this until the map vanished from the world...

[Easy]
02:07:83 - why is this break here?


[Normal]
02:07:83 - why the break?
02:28:11 (1) - whistle to go with the rest of the phrase


[Hard]
01:20:88 (1,2) - put something in the dead space
break T_T


[Insane]
ok...
Topic Starter
0_o
Tis done (except the whistle) Thanks :)

btw I asked Mogs to have a look at the hitsounds, so please don't rank until he does

w/e, I changed a few hitsounds, feel free to bubble/rank/mod etc.
ztrot
Bubble

EDIT re bubble for the BAKA <3
don't edit posts it pops bubbles
Topic Starter
0_o
Made a few hitsound changes, requesting bubble repair.. again
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
k...

[Normal]
02:04:36 (4) - spacing

[Hard]
k

[Insane]
k...

fix that call me back and ill bubble
Yuukari-Banteki
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ztrot
Ranked
peppy
Just wow. Go take a break from modding you two o.o. As per usual, this map needs to be checked by two BAT members who haven't had anything to do with it thusfar before being ranked again.
Topic Starter
0_o
OK, Normal is updated.

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machol30
Just something quick... I believe BPM should be 164.180 and not 164.220.
Please do not reward this post with kudosu.
XepherX3
Starred :P
whymeman
Hmm....

[Easy]

01:38:42 (1,2,3) - Please checking into the spacing here. (1) and (2) are too close together and this would confuse the new players easily.

Also... the background is kinda pixelated, please look into finding a neater one.

[Normal]

The only thing I see that looks a bit odd on this difficulty is the small jumps inbetween the combos at different points of the map. Its kinda on and off like its randomly done. Just make sure to check into that please.

[Hard]

00:50:37 (1,2) - Too close together.


The BG images are also in different formats as well. 3 in .png and 1 in .jpeg. Make sure to check into their quallity and when you check into these issues, let me know to do a recheck.

Edit: Seems to be good enough so far. Bubble for you then.
Gabi
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Starrodkirby86
...Almost...>A<

I'm very sorry I have to pop this bubble here, but the song definitely feels to be a bit early. This might either be because of an early offset, a fast BPM, or both. >:

I'm not very good at timing, but burai might be on the right trail when suggesting to slow down the BPM. I'm not quite sure though. It's best for you to experiment, though I did seem to play better with the BPM change (Albeit some sliders became shorter from recalculations).

Sorry !
Topic Starter
0_o
Don't apologize for finding a timing problem :P Thanks! :)

EDIT: Aww I was hoping my 1000th post would be more epic ;_;
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source if you can.)
Tags: No. (Same here.)
File Size: 3,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is fine. Well done.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain.

02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:087 (2) - New combo.


[Normal]

01:34:059 (2,3) - Spacing.
02:16:043 (1) - Add a repeat on this slider and adjust spacing.

[Hard]

01:05:000 (4) - New combo.
01:10:084 (5) - ^
02:18:008 (5) - ^
02:23:092 (5) - ^


[Insane]

00:36:013 (8) - New combo.
02:50:005 (1) - Remove new combo. Seems out of place.
yaya
yo~
some suggestion.

for colors

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,128
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 51,138,255
Combo4 : 255,0,0
Combo5 : 255,255,62


all diff:
from 02:02:187 - 02:07:669 .hitsound whistle is better i think
insane:
02:02:370 (2) - without hitsound
02:03:832 (5) - ^
02:06:755 (4) - ^
02:10:095 (2) - add whistle.

nice map .
Topic Starter
0_o

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source if you can.)
Tags: No. (Same here.) Sure
File Size: 3,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is fine. Well done.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain. Not really necessary

02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:087 (2) - New combo.[/color]

[Normal]

01:34:059 (2,3) - Spacing. I think it's fine
02:16:043 (1) - Add a repeat on this slider and adjust spacing. Oops, that was supposed to be longer but it got shortened after a timing change :P

[Hard]

01:05:000 (4) - New combo. Hmm, not a bad idea
01:10:084 (5) - ^
02:18:008 (5) - ^
02:23:092 (5) - ^


[Insane]

00:36:013 (8) - New combo. I see what you mean but I'll keep it like it is.
02:50:005 (1) - Remove new combo. Seems out of place. ok
yaya thanks for the suggestions, but I think I'll keep it like it is now.
minyeob
What's Insane 2 difficulty? It confuses me. http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41627

Timing is aiorhaoasrgaoig lol
btw Offset: I suggest +5.

[Easy]
00:47:082 (2) - Uh it can be kinda nazi but how about making this 1/2 beat later to make simple rhythm?
Sure
Where is Normal diff and Insane2 ?
I DLed it 2 times, but there is no Normal and Insane2.
Please submit again. I'll mod it when all diffs exist.
Topic Starter
0_o
Oops, sorry the Insane2 was for testing, I thought I deleted that >_> Should be good now.

minyeob I changed the offset but I'll keep Easy like it is, I think the circle sounds better on the lyric.
Sure
I suggest just hitsound.


[Easy]
Fine


[Normal]
00:43:099 (3) - clap
01:19:007 (3) - ^
01:30:040 (3) - clap at end of slider
01:46:048 (5) - ^
02:36:017 (5) - whistle at start of slider
02:38:018 (3) - ^


[Hard]
00:35:004 (3,4,5) - clap
01:21:081 (2,3,4) - ^


[Insane]
00:34:067 (3) - clap at end of slider
00:35:040 (5,6) - clap
01:21:081 (2,3,4) - ^
01:39:072 (5) - whistle at start of slider


star~* :)
orioncomet
<,<
Tanmak
Hello~

[Easy]
01:36:248(1) Remake Spinner which of length is 01:35:700 - 01:37:710

[Normal]
01:36:066 (1) Same [Easy]

[Hard]
01:35:700 Make Spinner here until 01:36:979?
02:14:982 (1,2,3,4) All Finish.

[Insane]
01:35:700 Make Spinner here until 01:36:979, too? (Same [Hard])
02:14:982 (1,2) Finish.

Starred~ :)
Topic Starter
0_o
Thanks for the suggestions guys ^_^
Kerensa
hello 0_o!!

easy, normal, hard:
fine >_<

insane:
00:40:706 [5]i think it looks better up one tiny square D:
01:41:912 [3]one tiny square to the left >_<


wahhh ~~

star star for you you ^^
Jointhemasters
this is a great song, and its well mapped. thumbs up from me!
luke0719
are you considering making a more challenging difficulty?
or perhaps invite some guest mapper for this
I think this epic song deserve a more challenging diff (but S able)
that give some reasons for those topnotch players to practice the map again and again

I'm not good at mapping a challenging diff
but lots of people does
ex: V2b. osu_CN_yaya. ignorethis. kirby or even Alace ....etc

just a personal suggestion ;)

also, somewhere around
2:27:233 - 2:28:123
the beating rythm of the song is very appealing, maybe put some notes for that will be great!

by the way, this is a very good map
Caramelldansen is always my all time favourite in osu! :)

SATR!
Topic Starter
0_o
Thanks for the input luke. I won't be making a more challenging difficulty since I am not very good at making particularily challenging maps for songs that aren't crazy themselves, but if anyone does feel like making a "true" Insane difficulty, they can let me know (hopefully before it gets ranked :P)
Gens
This map is getting old. :|
Topic Starter
0_o
Alright lesjuh is making a real Insane diff so back to WIP/Help :P
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