XinCrin wrote:

Hello , From my queue ~

Easy

1. 00:11:014 (1) Put a Finish in the start of this slider , makes more sense since is the start of the map too
2. 00:17:571 (2) This 1/2 slider feels a bit weird with the rest of this part . Also , this slider isn't following any kind of sounds from the music . In my opinion , you should change
   this slider for a circle only . It will be much better
3. 00:33:962 (1) This slider doesn't make sense , the slider should finish here 00:34:618 , since the music stand out here . In my opinion , finish the slider in 00:34:618 and add a circle on 00:35:274 . Will work better
4. 00:41:830 (2) For a better flow, CTRL+G in this slider
5. 00:51:010 (1,2) The flow between these two sliders does not flow very well, especially for beginners . Could you try to make something like this ?
   http://puu.sh/5pnI3.jpg
6. 01:02:812 (2,3) Stacked objects could be very hard to read for beginners , Try to unstack these objects
7. 01:13:302 (2,3) Same as above
8. 01:16:581 (1) What about to put a Finish in the start of this slider ?

Normal

1. 00:17:571 (2,3) Honestly , the flow between these two sliders , is very bad . Try moving (3) away, so that the cursor movement is more continuous and fun . Something like this , but it's only an idea
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:59:533 (1) In the middle of this slider , sounds a normal hitsound (custom sample) . Try to mute the sound, it sounds awkward and ugly
3. 01:30:678 Following your patterns , You should add a circle here :3

Awesome diff <33

Insane

1. 00:05:769 (1,2) Try to blanket this much better

Good Luck with this map

Fixed all mods!

Thanks for the mods!

Nymph wrote:

offset+15 差不多 539

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, modding as requested.

[General]
Would it be possible to find a higher resolution background image? (1366x768) Can't find any other good BGs, searched for days.
Are you sure the BPM 91.51? o.o BPM tester says 91.51, tell me if there's problem with the timing.
AI's Insane is missing video. Fixed.

[Easy]
00:28:076 - For slidertick hitsounds like this, I suggest lowering the volume slightly since it's not a clickable beat. Try 40% or 50%? (20 or 10 below current volume) This applies to all slidertick hitsounds.
00:27:421 (4) - Remove NC
00:29:388 (1) - Add NC
00:35:944 (2) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm of the song. Try something with more 1/1. It doesn't make much sense to have a slider end where there's no significant sound and instead put all the hitsounds on sliderticks ==
00:48:402 (3,1) - Same here >< These don't really fit in.

[Normal]
Same thing about the sliderticks.
00:49:713 (3) - You missed the hitsounds on this slider. (clap, normal, clap)
00:54:958 (3) - Unsnapped slider end.
01:34:954 (4) - Add NC
01:36:266 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
You have a lot of inheriting sections that don't do anything >< Remove them?
00:10:373 (2,3,4,5,1) - Seems weird to use 1/4 when the music is 1/6s...
01:11:350 (4) - I get that you're using rotational symmetry, but this just doesn't flow well from (3) to (5) Sorry I don't have any suggestions how to improve this
01:48:232 (1) - I think it would be nice, just for the sake of consistency if you'd follow the other diffs and use SC:2 whistle + finish here. If not, then remove the whistle? O.o It doesn't make sense to have a 5% hitwhistle.
Nothing else to say here. The diff is pretty good.

[Insane]
Same thing about the sliderticks
SV is all over the place D:
and some overmapping ><
00:10:537 (2,3,4) - This is rhythmically incorrect. If you listen to the music, you'll hear that these are 1/6.
00:11:685 (3,4) - This doesn't flow well. I suggest to do something like this: http://puu.sh/5rg9o.jpg
00:16:438 (2) - This doesn't follow anything in the music. You should probably delete it.
00:17:914 (7,8,9) - Do it this way for better flow? http://puu.sh/5rgiW.jpg
00:24:634 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm.. maybe don't use so many circles close together. It's a bit awkward to play. and the same in a lot of other spots.
00:39:551 (8,1) - Put more distance between these. It's confusing, and players will tend to hit (1) early.
00:40:370 (1,2) - Stack this normally.
00:41:682 (1,2) - ^ it doesn't make sense to do it this way.
00:44:140 (4) - Ctrl+G?
00:45:124 (1) - I wouldn't change the SV here. It's way too low and doesn't suit the song.
01:00:860 (1) - Now this SV is to high >< I don't think the song calls for such high SV. It feels especially weird because you keep low DS, so the sliders are really fast, but moving between notes is really slow.
01:02:499 (6,8,2) - I wouldn't recommend this kind of stacking. It makes it hard to read, especially since the notes are so close together.
01:04:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+J? I think it'd flow much better.
01:07:089 (3) - Try a different rhythm here. The 1/2 slider doesn't seem appropriate here, as suggested by your hitsounding. Try either (1/4 slider + circle) or (circle + 1/4 slider). Changed the pattern of previous notes tho, will try this
01:27:086 (1) - Same thing with SV here. I don't think it should be this high.

Ok, well good luck with this.

Nymph wrote:

No need to kudosu this post

[General]
the AI's Insane has a different video offset with other diffs.

any chance to get a better background?


[Insane]
00:46:107 (3,4,5) - the spacing feel a little inconsistent here (nazi

01:42:495 (1) - I kinda don't understand why the faster sliders stops using from here, imo it should keeping using the 1.5 speeds sliders till the song ends.(btw same opinions with the kiai... if I was mapping this I may keep the tiai till 01:48:232 here).


[AI's Insane]
00:10:483 (2,3,4,5,6) - I personally like neat stream better, the spacing of this stream kinda feel a little ugly at my sight

00:43:157 (2) - well this slidershape is only used once here, and it didn't feel very beautiful, maybe consider use a normal one like 00:42:501 (8) ?

00:50:369 (1) - same shape suggestion

01:42:167 (1) - same as Insane

Mei wrote:

你好ヾ(´･ω･｀)ﾉ
之前你给了我kd但是我也没什么给什么帮助，今天来摸摸你的图就不用kd了

[general]
为什么有2个ai's insane Σ( ° △ °|||)︴，新的bg是1280x720是不是要勾上widescreen support 放错了 orz
咱一般不太喜欢用screeenshot做bg，我推荐http://puu.sh/5t2Rk.jpg ， 或者 http://puu.sh/5t2TT.jpg 我试试http://puu.sh/5t2TT.jpg

[insane]

* 00:38:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里的顺序是不是有点不对，还有最后一个note可以换成slider 没换，打了觉得顺序还可以>w< - 不然建议我怎么排吧

* 00:53:975 (2) - 移到x 264 y136做个blanket Fixed~

good luck

Thanks!

Rakuen wrote:

Mei wrote:

[insane]

* 00:38:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里的顺序是不是有点不对，还有最后一个note可以换成slider 没换，打了觉得顺序还可以>w< - 不然建议我怎么排吧

268,184,38567,1,2,1:2:0:0:
355,99,38731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,228,38895,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,96,39059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,39223,1,2,1:2:0:0:
397,131,39387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,39551,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Mei wrote:

268,184,38567,1,2,1:2:0:0:
355,99,38731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,228,38895,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,96,39059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,39223,1,2,1:2:0:0:
397,131,39387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,39551,1,2,0:0:0:0:

我建议是这样，两个3角形，你的那个排列在ar8下我感觉很乱啊看不出规律来@_@所以才提一下

_AI wrote:

Fixed all the mod above >.o/ (almost all)

Rakuen : http://puu.sh/5tIeV.osu