AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size) · forum

Rakuen

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-06-01T22:57:14+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, November 29, 2013 at 8:39:24 PM

Artist: AZU feat. SEAMO
Title: Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
Source: Itazura na Kiss
Tags: Ending 2 _AI romantic anime Gero
BPM: 91.5
Filesize: 7033kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:

AI's Insane (4.95 stars, 297 notes)
Easy (0.78 stars, 62 notes)
Gero's Hard (4.58 stars, 218 notes)
Insane (4.9 stars, 290 notes)
Normal (2.83 stars, 115 notes)

Download: AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
Download: AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Itazura na Kiss（イタズラなキス） ED2
AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare
AZU - 時間よ止まれ feat. SEAMO

- Rakuen

- Gero

- Rakuen

- _AI

Nymph

jonathanlfj

Breeze

Thanks to the testers!

YGOkid8
Accel World

Thanks to the modders!

HeatKai
mintong89
orioncomet
- Miomio Chii -
-Umi-
Xinely
sheela901
Alarido
AnreFM
[Navy]
N E K O
-Srui-
10crystalmask01
[ Sana ]
LKs
RandomEffect
kajiyatta
Accel World
CET 6
CrystilonZ
captin1
moonlightleaf
Sonico Makaron
LexiaLovesU
Gero
Mei
Sephibro
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XinCrin
CloudSplash16

Last edited by Rakuen 2014-09-30T20:09:40+00:00, edited 169 times in total.

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-06T06:29:15+00:00

I'm not really good with timing but go ahead and try this.

Bpm: 91.52
offset: 593

resnap everything and recalculate sliders length. :3
good luck! this song is awesome ;___;

Use this as your background

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-06-06T12:52:16+00:00

SPOILER

20:29 DEAncientNaga: hi >w<
20:29 DEAncientNaga: free to chat with mwe?

)
20:30 mintong89: hi o.o
20:30 mintong89: yeah
20:30 DEAncientNaga: can u help me check my map?

D
20:30 DEAncientNaga: and see where to improve ><'
20:30 mintong89: hmm ok
20:30 *DEAncientNaga is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258494 AZU - Jikan yo Tomare feat. SEAMO]
20:30 DEAncientNaga: cuz I think the Easy is too easy... tho Heatkai said to me dont just use 1/1
20:31 DEAncientNaga: and need help on checkin bpm + offset too >d<'
20:31 mintong89: hmm are you know chinese?
20:33 mintong89: offset should be 598
20:35 DEAncientNaga: sorry just now dc

20:36 mintong89: offset should be 598
20:37 mintong89: are you know chinese?
20:37 DEAncientNaga: ya i know chinese
20:37 mintong89: 用华文可以么 = =
20:37 DEAncientNaga: ok >.o
20:37 DEAncientNaga: 我打中文很慢
20:38 mintong89: 没关系你打英文我打华文
20:38 mintong89: 这样好谈
20:38 DEAncientNaga: 怎样找offset阿, 看guide了也完全不会
20:39 DEAncientNaga: >..<
20:39 DEAncientNaga: bpm 也是
20:39 mintong89: 要人工听的
20:39 mintong89: 00:15:024 - 这种没放了感觉不好
20:39 mintong89: 要么放完要么不放全部
20:40 DEAncientNaga: ok

20:40 mintong89: 那个break也是
20:40 mintong89: Tags 不用放 Itazura na Kiss了
20:40 mintong89: 因为source已经放了
20:41 mintong89: Design 那边 Letterbox during breaks去掉
20:42 mintong89: http://puu.sh/39zCd.png
20:43 DEAncientNaga: 什么是letterbox during breaks?
20:44 mintong89: 就是break的时候会出现widescreen(就是上下有个黑边条)
20:44 DEAncientNaga: oo
20:45 mintong89: Audio 的 Lead-in 换回0
20:45 DEAncientNaga: 01:22:565 - 这边要放东西？
20:45 mintong89: (话说这个戏好看么...感觉可以看
20:45 mintong89: 要 TV Size建议不要break
20:45 mintong89: 哦对了
20:46 mintong89: Artist: AZU feat. SEAMO
20:46 DEAncientNaga: 嗯
20:46 mintong89: Title: 時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
20:46 mintong89: Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
20:46 DEAncientNaga: 这个动漫还好吧
20:46 DEAncientNaga: 不会说很好看
20:46 mintong89: 嗯
20:47 mintong89: 总结还可以吧...所以就这样了
20:48 DEAncientNaga: oo
20:48 DEAncientNaga: thats all need to correct? >,<
20:48 mintong89: 嗯
20:48 mintong89: 很重要的
20:50 DEAncientNaga: ok thanks

)
20:50 DEAncientNaga: u pro edit x.x
20:50 DEAncientNaga: i newbie
20:50 mintong89: me newbie too

Good Luck~

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2013-06-06T14:30:46+00:00

mintong liar! newbie D: liar!

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2013-06-16T14:28:43+00:00

imo, the ending was still kind of off.
this's what i found BPM: 91.513 | Offset: 604

Good luck!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-06-16T14:42:32+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
I'm not really good with timing but go ahead and try this.

Bpm: 91.52
offset: 593

resnap everything and recalculate sliders length. :3
good luck! this song is awesome ;___;

Use this as your background

Thanks, and very much for the BG

I'll use orioncomet's BPM and Offset, hope you don't mind >q<

orioncomet wrote:
imo, the ending was still kind of off.
this's what i found BPM: 91.513 | Offset: 604

Good luck!

Thanks for the BPM, it's useful >.o /

-mint stalker D:

_Azusa_

144 posts

Joined September 2010

_Azusa_ 2013-06-16T16:24:31+00:00

this song makes me remember things i don't want to ;-------;

but this song is so awesome that I can't stop listening

GL in the map!

- Miomio Chii -

440 posts

Joined October 2012

- Miomio Chii - 2013-06-18T11:03:57+00:00

Hi, MmC's mod. From #modreqs .
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-

➭ Try to use New Combo. (Don't let it over 5 combos)

01:02:562 (4) - remove this note
01:46:162 (1) - spinner end here 01:51:735 -

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-

01:47:801 - add a note
01:20:264 (4,5) - change to slider maybe will be better

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-

✔ Okay.
Good rhythm.

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------

good map and good song,
but maybe you can try to map more modeling for slider and set.

Good luck to you!

Rakuen

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Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-06-18T12:22:51+00:00

- Miomio Chii - wrote:
Hi, MmC's mod. From #modreqs .
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
✔ Okay.
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-

➭ Try to use New Combo. (Don't let it over 5 combos) Will take a look
[/color]

01:02:562 (4) - remove this note Removed
01:46:162 (1) - spinner end here 01:51:735 - Done

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-

01:47:801 - add a note Added
01:20:264 (4,5) - change to slider maybe will be better Changed

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-

✔ Okay.
Good rhythm. Thanks >.o /

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
good map and good song,
but maybe you can try to map more modeling for slider and set. I'll take a try

Good luck to you!

Thanks for the mods ^_^

Working on Harder diff atm, see if I can put some different sliders

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-07-06T21:41:55+00:00

hi hi here from #modreqs :3

let'su go !

general

- Are u using grid size : tiny ? if no, use it :3 push "G" more precise
- be more varied with your slider's shape :3
- reduce the volume of your htisounds to 80% or 70% fit better
- what about add a silence slider ? if yes > http://puu.sh/3wAiH/ef134f9ee0.rar copy / paste in your folder and then you have to use S:C1 not S click on custom 1 instead of default and this for all your timing point :3

SPOILER

Easy

- AR +1
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head
- 00:12:405 (2) - wrong distance spacing, you can check here your DS

SPOILER

- 00:13:716 (3) - not perfectly parallel with 00:12:405 (2) -
- 00:15:028 (4) - same with 00:13:716 (3) - if you change what i say ^^
- 00:17:322 (2) - delete, doesn't fit here '-'
- 00:18:634 (4,5) - delete and do this instead fit better imo

SPOILER

- 00:33:058 (4) - wrong distance spacing
- 00:36:664 (2) - middle point x:172,y:188; end point x:136,y:216 better blanket
- 00:40:598 (1,2) - move to x:280,y:152 for symmetry with 00:39:287 (5) -
- 00:43:220 (1) - try to map this part instead of spinner
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head
- 01:10:102 (4) - move to x:320,y:172 better blanket
- 01:11:085 - add note here it fit
- 01:20:592 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:559 (2) - NC here
- 01:23:543 (3) - delete
- 01:25:182 (5,1) - blanket ?
- 01:25:837 (1) - add finish on tail
- 01:38:950 (3) - end point x:232y:120 better blanket.
- 01:40:589 (4) - wrong distance spacing

Normal

- OD +1
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head
- 00:43:220 (1) - same as easy diff, try to map this part instead of spinner
- 00:52:072 (7) - delete and change 00:51:744 (6) - into a slider end at 00:52:399 - and then add note 00:52:727 -
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head
- 01:02:562 (4) - better flow imo

SPOILER

- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head
- 01:28:460 (3) - make a curve with this slider better flow
- 01:38:622 (2) - wrong distance spacing

Hard

- 00:08:471 (4) - NC
- 00:10:110 (1) - remove NC and NC here 00:11:094 (2) -
- 00:11:094 (2) - finish on head
- 00:29:124 (6,7) - blanket ?
- 00:35:025 (5) - NC
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head
- 01:16:986 (3,4) - make curve better flow :3
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head

insane

Use some slider reverse instead of single note x)
- 00:11:094 (4) - finish on head
- 00:41:090 (3,4) - not perfectly stack with 00:40:762 (2) -
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head
- 01:05:184 (1) - not perfectly stack
- 01:10:430 (2) - ctrl+g
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head
- 01:32:885 (2) - ctrl+g too, little jump could be fun

that'all, I modded only yours diff but i'll back later maybe after you've got some others mods >.< for more detail :3
If there are something you don't understand ask me in game :3
Pretty good mapset for your first map, but need some works sure

Good luck !

Rakuen

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Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-07-07T05:49:14+00:00

-Umi- wrote:
hi hi here from #modreqs :3

let'su go !

general
- Are u using grid size : tiny ? if no, use it :3 push "G" more precise Small probably : )
- be more varied with your slider's shape :3 Will do my best
- reduce the volume of your htisounds to 80% or 70% fit better Reduced all by 20%.
- what about add a silence slider ? if yes > http://puu.sh/3wAiH/ef134f9ee0.rar copy / paste in your folder and then you have to use S:C1 not S click on custom 1 instead of default and this for all your timing point :3 Thanks.
SPOILER

Easy
- AR +1 Added.
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head Added.
- 00:12:405 (2) - wrong distance spacing, you can check here your DS Fixed.
SPOILER
- 00:13:716 (3) - not perfectly parallel with 00:12:405 (2) - Fixed.
- 00:15:028 (4) - same with 00:13:716 (3) - if you change what i say ^^ Fixed.
- 00:17:322 (2) - delete, doesn't fit here '-' Removed.
- 00:18:634 (4,5) - delete and do this instead fit better imo Removed and fixed.
SPOILER
- 00:33:058 (4) - wrong distance spacing Fixed.
- 00:36:664 (2) - middle point x:172,y:188; end point x:136,y:216 better blanket Sorry, I'll keep.
- 00:40:598 (1,2) - move to x:280,y:152 for symmetry with 00:39:287 (5) - Fixed.
- 00:43:220 (1) - try to map this part instead of spinner Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head Fixed.
- 01:10:102 (4) - move to x:320,y:172 better blanket Fixed.
- 01:11:085 - add note here it fit Fixed.
- 01:20:592 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:559 (2) - NC here Fixed.
- 01:23:543 (3) - delete Removed.
- 01:25:182 (5,1) - blanket ? Fixed.
- 01:25:837 (1) - add finish on tail Added.
- 01:38:950 (3) - end point x:232y:120 better blanket. Fixed.
- 01:40:589 (4) - wrong distance spacing Fixed.

Normal
- OD +1 Added.
- 00:11:094 (1) - add finish on head Added.
- 00:43:220 (1) - same as easy diff, try to map this part instead of spinner Fixed.
- 00:52:072 (7) - delete and change 00:51:744 (6) - into a slider end at 00:52:399 - and then add note 00:52:727 - Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - add finish on head Added.
- 01:02:562 (4) - better flow imo Fixed.
SPOILER
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head Added.
- 01:28:460 (3) - make a curve with this slider better flow Fixed.
- 01:38:622 (2) - wrong distance spacing Fixed.

Hard
- 00:08:471 (4) - NC Fixed.
- 00:10:110 (1) - remove NC and NC here 00:11:094 (2) - Fixed.
- 00:11:094 (2) - finish on head Fixed.
- 00:29:124 (6,7) - blanket ? Fixed.
- 00:35:025 (5) - NC Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head Fixed.
- 01:16:986 (3,4) - make curve better flow :3 Fixed.
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head
Fixed.

insane
Use some slider reverse instead of single note x) Keep, it's insane and possible to tap with 1 finger
- 00:11:094 (4) - finish on head Fixed.
- 00:41:090 (3,4) - not perfectly stack with 00:40:762 (2) - Fixed.
- 01:00:923 (1) - finish on head Fixed.
- 01:05:184 (1) - not perfectly stack Fixed.
- 01:10:430 (2) - ctrl+g Fixed.
- 01:27:149 (1) - finish on head Fixed.
- 01:32:885 (2) - ctrl+g too, little jump could be fun
Fixed, hope I don't get blamed cuz of this lol.

that'all, I modded only yours diff but i'll back later maybe after you've got some others mods >.< for more detail :3
If there are something you don't understand ask me in game :3
Pretty good mapset for your first map, but need some works sure Good luck !

Thanks, make new reply if u feel anything to mod

Last edited by Rakuen 2013-07-09T13:08:34+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2013-07-08T01:00:50+00:00

hi

[AI's Insane]

00:22:240 (4) - Distance Snap
00:39:287 (5,6,7) - don't use this type of pattern, it's look weird
00:52:399 (4) - +clap

[Insane]

00:00:604 (1,2) - 这个不是很美建议换过
00:28:796 (7) - +clap

[Hard]

01:00:923 (1) - 不要NC

没了
GL~

Rakuen

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Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-07-09T12:45:14+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
hi

[AI's Insane]

00:22:240 (4) - Distance Snap Fixed.
00:39:287 (5,6,7) - don't use this type of pattern, it's look weird Fixed.
00:52:399 (4) - +clap Fixed.

[Insane]

00:00:604 (1,2) - 这个不是很美建议换过 Fixed.
00:28:796 (7) - +clap Fixed.

[Hard]

01:00:923 (1) - 不要NC Fixed.

没了
GL~

感谢

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-07-28T12:34:23+00:00

General
since in your folder have soft-sliderslide, http://puu.sh/3MIz8.png, change S become S:C1
also since this is TV Size, add video just i said in game

Easy
00:17:322 (2) - inconsistency spacing here
00:24:207 (1) - since after spin, make like http://puu.sh/3MIHO.jpg and move in 120,192 to make near with center
00:33:058 (4) - inconsistency spacing (1,07x)
00:43:220 (3) - head and tail should be not touched together ;_;
00:45:843 (1) - also inconsistency spacing
00:51:744 (1) - sampleset drum in head for consistency?
01:04:857 (5) - itentional whistle? for consitency u can give clap
01:06:168 - for this time, imo finish is compare, try this finish http://puu.sh/3NGFQ.wav (apply to all diff if you use this)
01:11:085 (5) - inconsitency spacing (1,06x)
01:11:413 - use my soft finish if you agree with my suggestion before
01:14:036 (4) - remove finish in tail
01:16:658 (2) - finish here
01:28:788 (3,1) - placement like this http://puu.sh/3NGOQ.jpg, more better. also have inconsistency spacing (0,93x)
01:37:639 (1) - finish
01:40:589 (4) - inconsitency spacing (0,93x)

Normal
00:17:322 (2) - imo, use this thythm more follow music http://puu.sh/3NH0W.jpg, (PS: the 2nd start in 00:17:650 - )
00:30:108 (5) - NC here to follow vocal?
00:33:058 (2) - inconsitency spacing
00:34:697 (4) - ^
00:36:336 (2) - nazi. 412,192 for diagonal?
00:40:598 (6) - NC (new combo)
00:53:055 (1) - whistle?
01:03:218 (5) - inconsistency spacing
01:05:840 (8) - ^
01:08:791 (6,7) - replace to slider? imo to many circle is hard for newbie
01:26:493 (6) - inconsitency spacing
01:35:672 (7) - 80,200? to stacked with previous (fix spacing after this if you follow)

Hard
00:03:226 (3) - reduce one repeat and add note in 00:04:210 - better imo
00:09:127 (2) - ctrl+G?
00:13:552 (1) - inconsistency spacing
nice rhythm but you can add more jump to make it awesome :3

since i can't mod insane i will stop here
Good Luck :3

alvinheriadi

95 posts

Joined December 2012

alvinheriadi 2013-07-28T14:09:27+00:00

From queue, sorry i can't mod

[[Insane]]
00:16:339 (10,1) - Swap NC?

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-07-30T14:53:34+00:00

Xinely wrote:

General
since in your folder have soft-sliderslide, http://puu.sh/3MIz8.png, change S become S:C1
also since this is TV Size, add video just i said in game
Fixed. Will add video AS soon as I get one

Easy
00:17:322 (2) - inconsistency spacing here
00:24:207 (1) - since after spin, make like http://puu.sh/3MIHO.jpg and move in 120,192 to make near with center
00:33:058 (4) - inconsistency spacing (1,07x)
00:43:220 (3) - head and tail should be not touched together ;_;
00:45:843 (1) - also inconsistency spacing
00:51:744 (1) - sampleset drum in head for consistency?
01:04:857 (5) - itentional whistle? for consitency u can give clap
01:06:168 - for this time, imo finish is compare, try this finish http://puu.sh/3NGFQ.wav (apply to all diff if you use this)
01:11:085 (5) - inconsitency spacing (1,06x)
01:11:413 - use my soft finish if you agree with my suggestion before
01:14:036 (4) - remove finish in tail
01:16:658 (2) - finish here
01:28:788 (3,1) - placement like this http://puu.sh/3NGOQ.jpg, more better. also have inconsistency spacing (0,93x)
01:37:639 (1) - finish
01:40:589 (4) - inconsitency spacing (0,93x)
Fixed all.

Normal
00:17:322 (2) - imo, use this thythm more follow music http://puu.sh/3NH0W.jpg, (PS: the 2nd start in 00:17:650 - )
00:30:108 (5) - NC here to follow vocal?
00:33:058 (2) - inconsitency spacing
00:34:697 (4) - ^
00:36:336 (2) - nazi. 412,192 for diagonal?
00:40:598 (6) - NC (new combo)
00:53:055 (1) - whistle?
01:03:218 (5) - inconsistency spacing
01:05:840 (8) - ^
01:08:791 (6,7) - replace to slider? imo to many circle is hard for newbie
01:26:493 (6) - inconsitency spacing
01:35:672 (7) - 80,200? to stacked with previous (fix spacing after this if you follow)
Fixed all.

Hard
00:03:226 (3) - reduce one repeat and add note in 00:04:210 - better imo
00:09:127 (2) - ctrl+G?
00:13:552 (1) - inconsistency spacing
nice rhythm but you can add more jump to make it awesome :3
Fixed all.

since i can't mod insane i will stop here
Good Luck :3

Fixed all, thanks for the mods!

。” ﾟ☆,｡･:*:･ﾟ★o(´▽｀*)/♪Thanks♪＼(*´▽｀)oﾟ★,｡･:*:･☆ﾟ”

alvinheriadi wrote:
From queue, sorry i can't mod

[[Insane]]
00:16:339 (10,1) - Swap NC?

Fixed, thanks.

ヽ(=^ﾟωﾟ)^/　ﾊﾆｬ～～

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-08-03T13:01:28+00:00

[General]
Add more tags like: anime romance

[Easy]
00:43:220 (3) - Put the SV at 1.00x? So the beginners could follow the map and they will not be confused

[Hard]
00:59:612 (7) - NC

[Insane]
00:11:094 (4) - NC

Sorry if that's just four things. Good Luck and star!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-08-03T20:12:02+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
[General]
Add more tags like: anime romance

[Easy]
00:43:220 (3) - Put the SV at 1.00x? So the beginners could follow the map and they will not be confused

[Hard]
00:59:612 (7) - NC

[Insane]
00:11:094 (4) - NC

Sorry if that's just four things. Good Luck and star!

Fixed all, thanks.

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-08-05T00:30:08+00:00

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on General Things

♥ Easy and Normal are both nice ^^

[Hard]
00:24:207 (1) - Ctrl+G? for better flow (:
01:38:131 (2) - Could make this >> http://puu.sh/3TUKw.jpg << for a bit diversity on flow

[Insane]
♥ Nice too (:

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-08-05T21:00:36+00:00

Alarido wrote:
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

♥ Easy and Normal are both nice ^^

[Hard]
00:24:207 (1) - Ctrl+G? for better flow (:
01:38:131 (2) - Could make this >> http://puu.sh/3TUKw.jpg << for a bit diversity on flow

[Insane]
♥ Nice too (:

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.

Fixed all, thank you very much! ♥

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-08-05T23:08:55+00:00

Modding the AI's Insane under request (:

DEAncientNaga wrote:
Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

[AI's Insane]
00:02:570 (5) - Make it like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGw1.jpg << Feels more pleasant to eyes (:
00:03:062 (6,1,2) - Move them to x:244 y:112 and make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGAq.jpg <<
00:03:882 (4,5) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UGE6.jpg
00:22:978 (2,3) - Move them by 1 grid for better stream.

That's it.

Hope the map get ranked soon (:

Att.

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2013-08-09T14:01:02+00:00

[AI's Insane]
00:02:570 (5) - Make it like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGw1.jpg << Feels more pleasant to eyes (:
00:03:062 (6,1,2) - Move them to x:244 y:112 and make them like this >> http://puu.sh/3UGAq.jpg <<
00:03:882 (4,5) - Make them like >> http://puu.sh/3UGE6.jpg
00:22:978 (2,3) - Move them by 1 grid for better stream.

All Fixed

~ thx for the mod

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

AnreFM 2013-08-10T13:36:05+00:00

rakuennnnn
m4m from your queue~

[Easy]
00:26:829 (4,1) - because at (2,3) you didn't use any pattern, it would be best if you make them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919326 since it is the less troublesome pattern to move the next circles in a 1.0 DS

00:33:058 (4) - make it more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919348
00:35:353 (1) - It is better to make the shape sync more with 00:33:058 (4) - either make it encircle the tail or make the turn smoother here
00:43:220 (3) - It would be safer to NC here for SV change and different rhythm
00:53:711 (2) - Make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919362
00:55:022 (1) - I think spin starts too early. Move to 00:55:678 (1) - ? additionally, you can add reverse in 00:53:711 (2) - it's fit with the music
01:01:906 (1,2) - lol this doesn't play really good. Replace them with a slider and make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919367
01:14:036 (4) - move to x216 y88 for better encirclement and it really looks better orz
01:34:033 (2,3,4) - this.. isn't looked and played really well, consider changing this pattern. I have a few suggestion here
01:42:884 (2) - NC here instead of 01:41:573 (1) -
01:45:834 (1) - hmm i think it is better to start spin at 01:46:162 - If you started it that early, it doesn't follow a good rhythm imo

[Normal]
00:12:405 (3) - lol it will be better if you mirrored 00:11:094 (1) - and continue the patterns using that
00:13:716 (5) - NC
00:20:273 (2,3,4) - better if these changes to a reverse slider
00:21:256 (1) - start spin at 00:21:584 (1) -
00:33:058 (2,3) - may stands for every type of this pattern orz. make them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919401
00:36:664 (3) - make it curvy~
00:50:432 (5) - NC
01:05:184 (7) - try to avoid this overlap
01:03:545 (6) - NC
01:31:410 (4) - lol make this curvy too, fit with vocal

[Hard]
01:19:609 (8) - NC here
01:40:917 (3) - might be a bit confusing orz
yeah generally, everything is already good here, but i think you can make a small jumps here and there to make the map more interesting

[Insane]
00:45:515 - hmm seems okay but i think you can start the SV reduction here, seems fitter with the music

[Ai's]
everything seems fine, but i think the SV difference on the chorus is a bit too much. try arranging them a bit

okay hope that helps, really good map already. work more on your easier diffs~

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-08-11T09:44:07+00:00

Rakuen :3/ don't forget to add me to the tags GL! I mod this later!

GL!

Gero's Hard

osu file format v12

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Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-08-11T18:19:09+00:00

AnreFM wrote:
rakuennnnn
m4m from your queue~

[Easy]
00:26:829 (4,1) - because at (2,3) you didn't use any pattern, it would be best if you make them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919326 since it is the less troublesome pattern to move the next circles in a 1.0 DS - Fixed.
00:33:058 (4) - make it more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919348 - Hmm...don't like the slider shape
00:35:353 (1) - It is better to make the shape sync more with 00:33:058 (4) - either make it encircle the tail or make the turn smoother here - Fixed.
00:43:220 (3) - It would be safer to NC here for SV change and different rhythm - Fixed, reduced SV to original.
00:53:711 (2) - Make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919362 - Fixed.
00:55:022 (1) - I think spin starts too early. Move to 00:55:678 (1) - ? additionally, you can add reverse in 00:53:711 (2) - it's fit with the music - Fixed.
01:01:906 (1,2) - lol this doesn't play really good. Replace them with a slider and make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919367 - Fixed.
01:14:036 (4) - move to x216 y88 for better encirclement and it really looks better orz - Fixed.
01:34:033 (2,3,4) - this.. isn't looked and played really well, consider changing this pattern. I have a few suggestion here - Umm where's the suggestion? I'll PM you.
01:42:884 (2) - NC here instead of 01:41:573 (1) - Fixed.
01:45:834 (1) - hmm i think it is better to start spin at 01:46:162 - If you started it that early, it doesn't follow a good rhythm imo
- Fixed.

[Normal]
00:12:405 (3) - lol it will be better if you mirrored 00:11:094 (1) - and continue the patterns using that Sorry ;w;
00:13:716 (5) - NC - Fixed.
00:20:273 (2,3,4) - better if these changes to a reverse slider No, there's a reverse slider previously which bounced 3 times
00:21:256 (1) - start spin at 00:21:584 (1) - Fixed.
00:33:058 (2,3) - may stands for every type of this pattern orz. make them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/919401 - Fixed.
00:36:664 (3) - make it curvy~ - Fixed.
00:50:432 (5) - NC - Fixed.
01:05:184 (7) - try to avoid this overlap Keep at the moment.
01:03:545 (6) - NC - Fixed.
01:31:410 (4) - lol make this curvy too, fit with vocal
- Fixed.

[Hard]
01:19:609 (8) - NC here - Fixed.
01:40:917 (3) - might be a bit confusing orz - It's hard diff
yeah generally, everything is already good here, but i think you can make a small jumps here and there to make the map more interesting

[Insane]
00:45:515 - hmm seems okay but i think you can start the SV reduction here, seems fitter with the music - I feel slow down there makes player easier to notice the change

[Ai's]
everything seems fine, but i think the SV difference on the chorus is a bit too much. try arranging them a bit

okay hope that helps, really good map already. work more on your easier diffs~

Thanks for your mods!

I'll do the M4M now.

NavyYa

141 posts

Joined February 2013

NavyYa 2013-08-14T17:08:14+00:00

Hello~M4M

Easy

00:28:141 (1) - delete nc and
00:26:829 (4) - nc
00:28:141 (1) - delete nc

01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve and more round~

Normal

00:17:322 (2) -little strange

Hard

00:13:552 (1) - delete nc
00:13:716 (2) - nc

Insane
GOOD ><

I suggest..
01:21:903 ~01:25:673 how about
adding break time?

_Ai's Insane
00:12:405 (5) - nc

my suggest
delete 00:15:847 (6) 00:16:093 (8) -

I like this song!

GL~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-08-16T19:10:51+00:00

[Navy] wrote:
Hello~M4M

Easy

00:28:141 (1) - delete nc and Fixed.
00:26:829 (4) - nc Fixed.
~~00:28:141 (1) - delete nc~~

01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve and more round~ Fixed.

Normal

00:17:322 (2) -little strange Fixed.

Hard

00:13:552 (1) - delete nc Fixed.
00:13:716 (2) - nc Fixed.

Insane
GOOD ><

I suggest..
01:21:903 ~01:25:673 how about No break time on TV size song
adding break time?

_Ai's Insane
00:12:405 (5) - nc Not good for looking

my suggest
delete 00:15:847 (6) 00:16:093 (8) - Keep atm

I like this song!
GL~

Thanks for the mod, I'll mod for your M4M

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

N E K O 2013-08-18T05:59:00+00:00

[General]

Hi~ M4M here.
A nice song indeed
All the mods are suggestions.

[_AI's Insane]

It's a little bit overmapped imo.

00:48:138 (7) - I think it may confuse some players here.
may be better here.
SPOILER

00:54:039 (1,2) - also a strange pattern here..

00:56:825 (7,8,9,10) - I think something missed here.. maybe try this?
SPOILER

01:05:184 (1) - a sudden slow down with short slider in kiai time is not a good idea in my opinion.Also the next two slow-downs.

01:21:494 (6,7,8) - no beats here in the song,i prefer to delete (6) and (8)

[Insane]

00:40:434 (1) - I suggest a stack here.cuz the beat pauses here right?
SPOILER

00:59:612 (1,2,3,4) - I'd prefer to have a larger DS here, cuz the music

has a fade-in effect.
SPOILER

01:22:231 (2) - I think it's a little bit near from (1)

01:06:168 (1,2,3) - umm,these three sliders makes a strange feeling

here.I prefer to use curve here.

01:10:102 (1,2,3) - try some patterns maybe?

[Hard]

Fine.But maybe the objects are too far away from each other in the first several seconds.

[Gero's Hard]

Nice one.

[Normal]

Fine.

[Easy]

Fine.
00:43:220 (3) - A nice heart.

Looking forward to its rank

Good luck star

DeletedUser_2010275

DeletedUser_2010275 2013-08-18T07:27:27+00:00

Hello~ M4M

Easy

01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve

Normal

Fine.

Gero's Hard

00:27:157 (8) - NC
00:57:645 (6) - Remove the whistle on body.

Hard

Nice :3

Insane

01:26:165 (2) - I suggest
SPOILER

Like this.

_AI's Insane

00:12:077 (3) - NC
01:00:759 (3) - NC
01:11:249 (3) - NC
01:21:494 (6,7,8) - I think.. little strange. I suggest delete (6) and (8)

That's it.
Nice song >w<

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-08-31T22:13:02+00:00

-Srui- wrote:
Hello~ M4M

Gero's Hard

00:27:157 (8) - NC Nou o3o
00:57:645 (6) - Remove the whistle on body. Fixed

That's it.
Nice song >w<

G's Hard

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59612
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
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Thanks for the mod

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-09-01T00:42:26+00:00

N E K O wrote:
[General]

Hi~ M4M here.
A nice song indeed
All the mods are suggestions.
[Insane]

00:40:434 (1) - I suggest a stack here.cuz the beat pauses here right?
SPOILER

00:59:612 (1,2,3,4) - I'd prefer to have a larger DS here, cuz the music Fixed.

has a fade-in effect.
SPOILER

01:22:231 (2) - I think it's a little bit near from (1) Fixed.

01:06:168 (1,2,3) - umm,these three sliders makes a strange feeling

here.I prefer to use curve here. Fixed.

01:10:102 (1,2,3) - try some patterns maybe? Fixed.
[Hard]

Fine.But maybe the objects are too far away from each other in the first several seconds. Fixed, I think. Using 1.0x DS
[Gero's Hard]

Nice one.
[Normal]

Fine.
[Easy]

Fine.
00:43:220 (3) - A nice heart.
Looking forward to its rank
Good luck star

Thanks for the mods!

-Srui- wrote:
Hello~ M4M

Easy

01:18:625 (5) - opposite slider curve Keep.

Normal

Fine.

Hard

Nice :3

Insane

01:26:165 (2) - I suggest Keep.
SPOILER

Like this.

_AI's Insane

00:12:077 (3) - NC Fixed.
01:00:759 (3) - NC Fixed.
01:11:249 (3) - NC Fixed.
01:21:494 (6,7,8) - I think.. little strange. I suggest delete (6) and (8) Fixed.

That's it.
Nice song >w<

Thanks for the mods!

Gero wrote:

G's Hard

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: AZU - Jikan yo Tomare feat. SEAMO (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59612
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
Artist:AZU feat. SEAMO
ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
Tags:Ending 2 _AI romantic anime
BeatmapID:287855
BeatmapSetID:96436

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"itazura na kiss bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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186,47,43548,2,0,L|242:62,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44040,12,4,45187,0:0:0:0:
111,96,45843,5,8,0:0:0:0:
67,175,46171,2,0,L|41:219,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,175,46826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,175,46990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,175,47154,2,0,B|206:233|206:233|171:286|202:334,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,285,48138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,265,48466,6,0,P|396:234|401:190,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,170,48957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,150,49121,2,0,B|322:150|322:150|302:156|302:156|272:156,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,156,49777,2,0,P|101:156|51:235,2,180,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,205,51416,6,0,L|256:256,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,159,52072,2,0,B|320:118|320:118|336:71,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,29,52727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,73,53055,2,0,B|192:118|192:118|178:159,1,90
146,243,53711,1,10,0:0:0:0:
209,306,54039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,315,54202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,324,54366,6,0,P|341:326|379:247,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,295,56005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
103,237,56333,2,0,P|88:192|101:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,128,56825,2,0,L|186:101,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,63,57317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,107,57645,2,0,P|392:169|380:261,2,180,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59284,12,4,60923,0:0:0:0:
99,330,61251,6,0,L|170:300,1,45
185,312,61578,2,0,L|256:282,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,294,61906,2,0,L|342:264,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,312,62562,1,2,0:0:0:0:
99,330,62890,2,0,P|59:304|47:260,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,188,63545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,118,63873,2,0,L|113:93,2,45,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,99,64529,2,0,L|275:124,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,118,65184,5,2,0:0:0:0:
94,188,65512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
107,277,65840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,323,66168,2,0,B|256:377|256:377|328:323,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67315,2,0,L|444:244,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,184,67807,5,2,0:0:0:0:
439,120,68135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,56,68463,2,0,B|343:89|343:89|299:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,74,69118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
139,131,69446,2,0,P|128:197|168:258,1,135,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,70102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,320,70430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,268,70757,2,0,P|346:310|339:353,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,211,71413,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,158,71741,2,0,P|166:116|173:73,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,38,72397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,47,72560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,57,72724,2,0,L|392:90,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,174,73380,6,0,L|449:207,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,282,74036,2,0,P|445:363|368:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,302,75019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,289,75183,2,0,L|219:289,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,225,75675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,147,76003,6,0,P|92:109|98:65,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,91,76658,2,0,P|256:45|328:91,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77970,6,0,P|420:109|397:147,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,210,78625,2,0,L|154:233,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,195,79609,2,0,P|59:235|74:279,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,131,80264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
154,111,80428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,91,80592,6,0,P|206:63|251:63,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,135,81248,2,0,P|337:163|382:163,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,125,81903,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82067,12,8,85182,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85509,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85673,2,0,L|128:288,1,45,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,313,86165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,335,86493,2,0,P|366:347|425:276,1,180,14|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,197,87476,5,0,0:0:0:0:
420,114,87804,1,10,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88296,2,0,L|288:69,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,69,88787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
118,92,89115,2,0,P|130:130|170:156,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,89770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,256,90098,2,0,L|340:286,2,45,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,256,90755,2,0,L|173:286,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,91410,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,99,91738,2,0,P|256:81|216:99,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,157,92393,2,0,B|15:288,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93540,2,0,L|104:328,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,277,94032,5,2,0:0:0:0:
259,262,94360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,276,94688,2,0,P|387:290|431:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,192,95343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,125,95671,2,0,L|269:107,1,135,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,104,96327,5,0,0:0:0:0:
155,124,96655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,188,96982,2,0,P|74:230|81:273,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,323,97638,1,4,0:0:0:0:
243,343,97967,2,0,L|330:324,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,300,98623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,289,98786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,276,98950,2,0,P|494:244|495:199,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,120,99606,6,0,L|367:88,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,55,100262,2,0,B|224:118|224:118|130:129,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
78,202,101409,2,0,L|61:258,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,330,101901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,364,102229,6,0,P|155:374|201:357,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,102884,2,0,B|306:265|348:297|390:328|436:291,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,210,103868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,184,104032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,160,104196,6,0,L|364:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,189,104851,2,0,L|120:132,1,180,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,95,105835,2,0,P|28:135|43:179,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,223,106490,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,243,106654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,263,106818,6,0,L|248:277,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,352,107474,2,0,L|353:360,2,45,10|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,277,108129,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108293,12,2,111735,0:0:0:0:

Thanks for the mod

Updated.

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-09-01T01:05:08+00:00

Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
01:14:036 (4) - NC
01:34:033 (4) - ^

[Gero's Hard]
01:02:890 (5) - NC
01:06:168 (4) - ^(Usually when a note has a finish, it'd becomes a NC)
01:11:741 (5) - ^
01:28:787 (5) - ^
01:37:638 (4) - ^
01:37:967 (5) - ^

[Hard]
01:34:197 (6) - NC
This diff looks ok, but the rhythm is a bit questionable.

[Insane]

I suggest try raising the DS, I dislike how objects are touching each other, especially in this diff :<

00:03:226 (6) - NC
01:02:562 (5) - ^
01:07:807 (4) - ^
01:34:033 (5) - ^

[_AI's Insane]
00:58:956 (5) - Would be best to just have a simply hit circle here with a clap, since I hear pretty much only one last beat before the chorus.

Wow, this diff looks way better then the previous one ^^

lol noobiest (is that even a word?) mod I've ever given ;_;
But, wow! This looks like one of the best mapset you've made yet!

Hope this helps~!

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-09-01T03:48:14+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Gero's Hard]
01:02:890 (5) - NC
01:06:168 (4) - ^(Usually when a note has a finish, it'd becomes a NC)
01:11:741 (5) - ^
01:28:787 (5) - ^
01:37:638 (4) - ^
01:37:967 (5) - ^ Sorry no changes. I have a pattern that follows the voice. :3

lol noobiest (is that even a word?) mod I've ever given ;_;
But, wow! This looks like one of the best mapset you've made yet!
Hope this helps~!

Thanks for the mod

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-09-08T19:12:57+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
01:14:036 (4) - NC Fixed.
01:34:033 (4) - ^ Fixed.

[Hard]
01:34:197 (6) - NC Fixed.
This diff looks ok, but the rhythm is a bit questionable. Added some hitsounds and arranged a little.

[Insane]
I suggest try raising the DS, I dislike how objects are touching each other, especially in this diff :< Added.

00:03:226 (6) - NC Fixed.
01:02:562 (5) - ^ Fixed.
01:07:807 (4) - ^ Fixed.
01:34:033 (5) - ^ Fixed.

[_AI's Insane]
00:58:956 (5) - Would be best to just have a simply hit circle here with a clap, since I hear pretty much only one last beat before the chorus. Keep at the moment, but thanks .

Wow, this diff looks way better then the previous one ^^ Thanks!

lol noobiest (is that even a word?) mod I've ever given ;_; No problem.
But, wow! This looks like one of the best mapset you've made yet!
Hope this helps~!

Thanks for the mods.

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-09-15T02:37:36+00:00

Hi~ m4m from your queue

my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358

[Gero's Hard]
AR +1
00:40:270 (7,1,2) - too much single circles for 4.5stars try to change into slider reverse
01:06:168 (4) - try this shape

[Hard]
00:20:928 (6,7) - use this rythm

01:11:413 (1) -

01:28:296 (4) - remove note
01:42:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should use this rythm as the song sounds

[box=]

[/box]
01:47:474 (4) - make a reverse

[Insane]
00:13:552 (2,3) - too far spacing
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - make them as same line
00:28:796 (6) - NC
00:34:697 (9,1) - overlap perfectly
00:34:697 (9,1) - NC
00:55:678 (8) - ^
00:56:661 (1) - remove NC
00:57:645 (3) - NC
01:23:870 (6) - ^
01:29:935 (5) - ^
01:41:409 (7,8) - seperat them
01:43:376 (3,4,5,6) - confusing rythm and not matching with song..

use this rythm

[url]http://puu.sh/4rz4t.jpg

[/url]

01:47:474 (1,2,3) - distance check

[AI's Insane]
00:03:718 (3) - remove
00:05:193 (3,4) - overlap perfectly
00:10:110 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - reduce sound
00:22:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is not fit here
01:00:267 (2,1) - omg too far!
01:05:184 (1) - remove timing points
01:10:102 (1) - ^
01:23:215 (1) - reomove NC
01:48:129 (1) - make silence at the end

Done.

Good luck!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-09-15T11:06:39+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi~ m4m from your queue

my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358

[Hard]
00:20:928 (6,7) - use this rythm Fixed.
01:11:413 (1) -
01:28:296 (4) - remove note Fixed.
01:42:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should use this rythm as the song sounds Fixed.
[box=]
[/box]
01:47:474 (4) - make a reverse Fixed.

[Insane]
00:13:552 (2,3) - too far spacing Fixed.
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - make them as same line Fixed.
00:28:796 (6) - NC Fixed.
00:34:697 (9,1) - overlap perfectly Fixed.
00:34:697 (9,1) - NC Fixed.
00:55:678 (8) - ^ Fixed.
00:56:661 (1) - remove NC Fixed.
00:57:645 (3) - NC Fixed.
01:23:870 (6) - ^ Fixed.
01:29:935 (5) - ^ Fixed.
01:41:409 (7,8) - seperat them Fixed.
01:43:376 (3,4,5,6) - confusing rythm and not matching with song.. Fixed.
use this rythm
[url]http://puu.sh/4rz4t.jpg [/url]
01:47:474 (1,2,3) - distance check Fixed.

[AI's Insane]
00:03:718 (3) - remove
00:05:193 (3,4) - overlap perfectly Fixed.
00:10:110 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - reduce sound Fixed.
00:22:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is not fit here
01:00:267 (2,1) - omg too far!
01:05:184 (1) - remove timing points
01:10:102 (1) - ^
01:23:215 (1) - reomove NC Fixed.
01:48:129 (1) - make silence at the end

Done.

Good luck!

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2013-09-17T08:42:53+00:00

hi

[general]

no video for a tv size song?

[_AI's Insane]

This diff isn't done very well. both of placements, rhythm and hitsounds should be fixed/adjusted. I can't list my suggestions one by one since it's the whole logic and the structure that should be fixed instead of concrete details.

Rhythm:

00:01:751 (2,4,6) - notes like these are not needed. Because no sound in the music, plus your rhythm here doesn't enriching the map. On the contrary, the metronous 1/2 breaks the tranquil sense during the intro. In my opinion, during this intro you'd use sliders or rhythm that sounds crystal clear. (your current rhythm is just like so many fragments thrown on the ground)

Placement:

Firstly, in macro view, http://puu.sh/4ttpH.jpg looking at this pic and you find that all of notes are placed on the center, the rest places of the screen is actually not used/abandoned.

Secondly, let's dig deep. A diff should have consistent style throughout the song, then diffs differ from each other. But checking your diff I find different styles everywhere, in other words, there is not a style in your map. It can be concluded "chaotic" or "messy"

00:04:537 (1,2,3) - l00:05:849 (5,6,7,8) -

Yep, you used two kinds of sliders in one color. and the angle of them is also different. the former was placed vertically&horizontally while the latter was acclivitous soft curves. This is disorder. I found no design from it.

Thirdly, spacing. There are many unreasonable spacing changes. fixed them

00:05:029 (2) -

00:04:210 (5) - 00:08:307 (3) - rhythm is 1/2 but spacing is half way closer

00:08:963 (5) - bewildering spacing

00:09:783 (2) - unreasonable spacing change

Hitsounds:

00:18:962 (8) - slider end could be soft and the custom actually doesn't sound very well

NCs:

00:11:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd nc 3&8

check through the map yourself or ask for more mods, this still needs a lot of works

[Insane]

00:10:110 (1,2) - clap the sliderend and circle2
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make them straight lines
00:20:765 (2,4) - soft sounds for sliderhead and circle 4
00:26:501 (4) - spacing
01:20:920 (3,4,5,6,1) - fix the curve

other diffs are fine

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2013-09-17T09:07:20+00:00

LKs wrote:
[_AI's Insane]

This diff isn't done very well. both of placements, rhythm and hitsounds should be fixed/adjusted. I can't list my suggestions one by one since it's the whole logic and the structure that should be fixed instead of concrete details.

Rhythm:

00:01:751 (2,4,6) - notes like these are not needed. Because no sound in the music, plus your rhythm here doesn't enriching the map. On the contrary, the metronous 1/2 breaks the tranquil sense during the intro. In my opinion, during this intro you'd use sliders or rhythm that sounds crystal clear. (your current rhythm is just like so many fragments thrown on the ground)

Placement:

Firstly, in macro view, http://puu.sh/4ttpH.jpg looking at this pic and you find that all of notes are placed on the center, the rest places of the screen is actually not used/abandoned.

Secondly, let's dig deep. A diff should have consistent style throughout the song, then diffs differ from each other. But checking your diff I find different styles everywhere, in other words, there is not a style in your map. It can be concluded "chaotic" or "messy"

00:04:537 (1,2,3) - l00:05:849 (5,6,7,8) -

Yep, you used two kinds of sliders in one color. and the angle of them is also different. the former was placed vertically&horizontally while the latter was acclivitous soft curves. This is disorder. I found no design from it.

Thirdly, spacing. There are many unreasonable spacing changes. fixed them

00:05:029 (2) -

00:04:210 (5) - 00:08:307 (3) - rhythm is 1/2 but spacing is half way closer

00:08:963 (5) - bewildering spacing

00:09:783 (2) - unreasonable spacing change

Hitsounds:

00:18:962 (8) - slider end could be soft and the custom actually doesn't sound very well

NCs:

00:11:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd nc 3&8

check through the map yourself or ask for more mods, this still needs a lot of works

Yes, I have noticed a lot of my mistake you noted earlier in the quote, I could really admit the adjective "messy" or "chaotic" for the diff actually,
I am very sorry for the bad mapping because I was actually still learning to map several month ago :p so please forgive me,
I have looked back in the diff and found out how careless I am back then,
so... would you have been trying to suggest a Remap for the diff?

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-09-17T11:42:29+00:00

LKs wrote:
hi

[general]

no video for a tv size song? I'll get a vid now

[Insane]

00:10:110 (1,2) - clap the sliderend and circle2
00:17:978 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make them straight lines
00:20:765 (2,4) - soft sounds for sliderhead and circle 4
00:26:501 (4) - spacing
01:20:920 (3,4,5,6,1) - fix the curve

Fixed all.

other diffs are fine

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-09-18T12:03:12+00:00

From my queue~
Thank you for m4M request!

[Easy]

00:24:207~01:00:923- reduce hit-sound's volume

[Normal]

00:24:207~01:00:923- same as easy
01:47:474 (4,5) - it is better to change for 1 slider

[Gero's Hard]

00:59:284 (1) - start at 00:59:612

[Hard]

00:21:912 (1) - start at 00:21:748
01:12:069 (2,3) - I like this

[Insane]

00:09:946 (8) - delete?
00:10:930 (3) - ^
00:25:190 (5,1) - it is better not to stack
00:28:304 (5,1) - the following is better
01:05:184 (1) - move to x:98 y:312 (stack correctly)
01:29:607 (4) - I prefer to delete and add a note at 01:29:607 -

[_AI's Insane]

00:35:844- add a note

low BPM map is hard to beat out a rhythm for me

~Good Luck~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-09-19T15:12:00+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
Thank you for m4M request!

[Easy]
00:24:207~01:00:923- reduce hit-sound's volume Fixed.
[Normal]
00:24:207~01:00:923- same as easy Fixed.
01:47:474 (4,5) - it is better to change for 1 slider Fixed.
[Hard]
00:21:912 (1) - start at 00:21:748 Fixed.
01:12:069 (2,3) - I like this Fixed.
[Insane]
00:09:946 (8) - delete? Keep first.
00:10:930 (3) - ^ Keep first.
00:25:190 (5,1) - it is better not to stack Fixed.
00:28:304 (5,1) - the following is better Fixed.
01:05:184 (1) - move to x:98 y:312 (stack correctly) Fixed.
01:29:607 (4) - I prefer to delete and add a note at 01:29:607 - Fixed.
[_AI's Insane]
00:35:844- add a note Fixed.
low BPM map is hard to beat out a rhythm for me
~Good Luck~

Thanks for the mods!

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-09-28T11:24:06+00:00

M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support"
[Easy]
Placement
00:16:339(1) it is hard to expect for newbie since this flow may be confused.
01:18:625(5) spacing isn't consistence, try to use distant snap.
01:22:559(1)^
01:32:394(1,2,3) make a good flow like this?

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:46:162(1) I don't follow spinner start here, it looks so fast. try to start at 01:48:129 same as Normal diff.
[Hard]
Placement
00:49:121(3,4,5) this flow looks not good, so maybe like this?

SPOILER

01:34:361(1,2,3) same suggestion on above

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:30:271 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
01:21:903(4) add finish at head
[Gero's Hard]
Rhythm
00:42:401 add a note to follow the vocal?
00:54:366(1) I suppose you mainly follow the vocal, so maybe this rhythm would be fine.

SPOILER

[Insane]
Placement
00:35:189(2,3) stack at end of slider looks not bfine since it might stop the flow, so I suppose you can stack these notes at (4)'s head.

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:06:496 unnecessary green line.
01:11:741 ^ and more... check your all diff again.
00:10:110(1) sounds weird for me, I suppose it would be better.

SPOILER

00:21:912(1) start at 00:21:748 better.
01:01:906~ I don't like this blank since it is a Insane diff, so you should put some notes here. e.g)

SPOILER

01:09:446^
Hit Sonud
00:05:193(1) add whistle at head?
01:21:903(1) add finish
[_AI's Insane]
well, I pick up some issues.
Placement
too random spacing I found, try to place notes with consistence.
Rhythm
Since this song sounds calmly, I don't like to use a stream even if Insane.
Too much velocity changes found, it is so confused when I played. e.g.) 01:05:184(1,2,3)
01:21:740(1) it's weird to start a spinner here.I suppose you can delete it and place some notes better

good luck.

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-09-28T15:59:00+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support" What's this???
[Easy]
Placement
00:16:339(1) it is hard to expect for newbie since this flow may be confused.
01:18:625(5) spacing isn't consistence, try to use distant snap.
01:22:559(1)^
01:32:394(1,2,3) make a good flow like this?
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:46:162(1) I don't follow spinner start here, it looks so fast. try to start at 01:48:129 same as Normal diff.
[Hard]
Placement
00:49:121(3,4,5) this flow looks not good, so maybe like this?
SPOILER
01:34:361(1,2,3) same suggestion on above
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:30:271 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
01:21:903(4) add finish at head
[Insane]
Placement
00:35:189(2,3) stack at end of slider looks not bfine since it might stop the flow, so I suppose you can stack these notes at (4)'s head.
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:06:496 unnecessary green line.
01:11:741 ^ and more... check your all diff again.
00:10:110(1) sounds weird for me, I suppose it would be better.
SPOILER
00:21:912(1) start at 00:21:748 better.
01:01:906~ I don't like this blank since it is a Insane diff, so you should put some notes here. e.g)
SPOILER
01:09:446^
Hit Sonud
00:05:193(1) add whistle at head?
01:21:903(1) add finish

good luck.

They are useful mods! Fixed all!

Thanks very much!

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-09-29T05:29:29+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
kajiyatta wrote:
[General]
Inconsistence "Widescreen Support" What's this???

I found only Gero's Hard is checked. so uncheck please.

SPOILER

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-09-30T09:14:07+00:00

Ok.

Thanks for the reply >.o /

-S c a r l e t-

-S c a r l e t- 2013-09-30T12:48:13+00:00

Some random modding~
All of these is just a suggestion, feel free to ignore them if it's not useful~
[General]

No problem

[_AI's Insane]

In my opinion, I think a 1/8 streams is not really recommended for this kind of song. This song is very slow and it's only 91.51 bpm, maybe change the stream into 1/8 repeater slider instead? Or if you want to keep this a constant difficulty, maybe add a few 1/8 triple at certain part, it feel kinda weird only have stream for few parts and suddenly is all 1/4 notes. And also, I think you change too much SV in your diff, I don't see the reason why change in SV is needed in this map. Try to keep a consistent SV in this if possible~

00:05:193 (3,4,1,2) - I don't recommend this part to stack a note at the end of the slider, the slider is short and is kinda hard to read.
00:10:520 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - About the 1/8 stream, perhaps change them into 1/8 slider instead?
00:18:962 (3) - I don't really like it that the end of the slider is at blue tick, try to avoid this if possible. Try this:-

00:22:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Again about the 1/8 streams, avoid it. Maybe make something like this:-

SPOILER

00:24:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - At this part, you avoid the voice too much, and same thing about the slider at blue tick.I recommend to make like this:-

00:29:452 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same thing, consider changing them.
00:34:697 (3) - @@, your map too many slider ends at blue tick, imo it doesn't fit the song.
00:41:745 (1) - I recommend this note not to stack on the start of (2) slider, at this part all of you slider and single note is not stacked together, it feels weird when suddenly the note is stack at this part.
00:46:826 (4) - Move this slider to 00:46:990 instead, it fits the song better that way.
00:51:908 (2) - I don't think this note fits the song, either remove it or place it at 00:52:072 instead?
00:59:612 (1,2,1,2) - LOL, I highly recommend not to make a big jump in this map, is a slow song and big jump doesn't seems right for me @@
01:11:249 (1) - Avoid small jump at this part, because the SV is slow at this part and is kinda weird to have a jump here.
01:01:415 (4) - I don't recommend a x1.5 SV in this song, the most you should be using is around 1.2-1.3 SV. Anyway just a personal opinion~
01:21:740 (1) - I think spinner is not necessary here, perhaps change it to long slider instead?
01:48:129 (1) - Start the spinner at 01:47:965 and ends it at 01:52:719 .

[Insane]

This map is pretty well done for a low bpm map! I don't have much to say, just try to make the pattern a little more interesting~ Overlay of notes make people find it kind of boring imo.

00:01:915 (5) - The end of this slider is out of the playfield, curve them more into the playfield. It'll be a bit of a problem when people play with HR.
00:17:978 (6) - NC this part and 00:18:306 (3) too, it feels weird for the change in combos here.
00:18:634 (4,5,6,7) - In my opinion, try not to overlay the notes much, try to place them at better place because the pattern is not really interesting. Try make it more creative!
00:20:765 (2) - Change this slider into a note instead, and add a note at 00:20:928 . The beat is strong here, the slider doesn't really feel nice.
00:24:698 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I feel that this part the notes is kinda closely pack together, since this is an Insane diff, why not try to space them out a little more? Personal opinion~
00:35:517 (4,5,6) - ^ This part too.
00:37:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change the (1,2,3,4) into 1/4 sliders instead, it kinda make your difficulty more consistent. And also, like I said earlier about overlaying of note, spread them out and make it more interesting

00:41:745 (5,6,7,8) - Personally, I think this will be nicer:-

Same goes to 00:40:434 (1,2,3,4) and 00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) these part~
00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I think it fits the music better

01:35:180 (4) - Maybe add a note here? The vocal is strong at this part.
01:42:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - At this part, I think make it like this:-

For me it fits the song better~ (Personal opinion)

That's it for now I guess, I'm really not good in modding Hard, Normal and Easy difficulty >.< Sorry~ Remember to try to make your pattern more interesting and reduce the number of overlays~ Oh, and please tell me which mod is applied and which mod is not, especially _AI -.- Good luck! Here's a star for you~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2013-10-01T12:23:26+00:00

-S c a r l e t- wrote:
Some random modding~
All of these is just a suggestion, feel free to ignore them if it's not useful~
[General]

No problem yay

[Insane]

This map is pretty well done for a low bpm map! I don't have much to say, just try to make the pattern a little more interesting~ Overlay of notes make people find it kind of boring imo.

00:01:915 (5) - The end of this slider is out of the playfield, curve them more into the playfield. It'll be a bit of a problem when people play with HR.
00:17:978 (6) - NC this part and 00:18:306 (3) too, it feels weird for the change in combos here.
00:18:634 (4,5,6,7) - In my opinion, try not to overlay the notes much, try to place them at better place because the pattern is not really interesting. Try make it more creative!
00:20:765 (2) - Change this slider into a note instead, and add a note at 00:20:928 . The beat is strong here, the slider doesn't really feel nice.
00:24:698 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - I feel that this part the notes is kinda closely pack together, since this is an Insane diff, why not try to space them out a little more? Personal opinion~
00:35:517 (4,5,6) - ^ This part too.
00:37:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change the (1,2,3,4) into 1/4 sliders instead, it kinda make your difficulty more consistent. And also, like I said earlier about overlaying of note, spread them out and make it more interesting
00:41:745 (5,6,7,8) - Personally, I think this will be nicer:-

Same goes to 00:40:434 (1,2,3,4) and 00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) these part~
00:43:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I think it fits the music better
01:35:180 (4) - Maybe add a note here? The vocal is strong at this part.
01:42:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - At this part, I think make it like this:-

For me it fits the song better~ (Personal opinion)

That's it for now I guess, I'm really not good in modding Hard, Normal and Easy difficulty >.< Sorry~ Remember to try to make your pattern more interesting and reduce the number of overlays~ Oh, and please tell me which mod is applied and which mod is not, especially _AI -.- Good luck! Here's a star for you~

Fixed all!

Thanks for the mod!

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-10-02T23:10:20+00:00

Sana

Hi~ m4m from your queue

[Gero's Hard]
AR +1 Fixed
00:40:270 (7,1,2) - too much single circles for 4.5stars try to change into slider reverse not is very difficult

no changes
01:06:168 (4) - try this shape [

D: what shape?

Done.

Good luck!

RandomEffect

From my queue~
Thank you for m4M request!

[Gero's Hard]

00:59:284 (1) - start at 00:59:612 Sorry but no :c

~Good Luck~

kajiyatta

M4M

[Gero's Hard]
Rhythm
00:42:401 add a note to follow the vocal? Fixed
00:54:366(1) I suppose you mainly follow the vocal, so maybe this rhythm would be fine. I don't think so

This is fine

SPOILER

good luck.

Sorry for delay, Here my diff:

Go Go Rakuen, Do not give up.

G's Hard

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: AZU - Jikan yo Tomare feat. SEAMO (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59612
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:時間よ止まれ (TV Size)
Artist:AZU feat. SEAMO
ArtistUnicode:AZU feat. SEAMO
Creator:Rakuen
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:Itazura na Kiss
Tags:Ending 2 _AI romantic anime
BeatmapID:287855
BeatmapSetID:96436

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"itazura na kiss bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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103,254,42237,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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365,265,48466,6,0,P|396:234|401:190,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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234,315,54202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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257,63,57317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,107,57645,2,0,P|392:169|380:261,2,180,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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185,312,62562,1,2,0:0:0:0:
99,330,62890,2,0,P|59:304|47:260,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,188,63545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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238,99,64529,2,0,L|275:124,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,118,65184,5,2,0:0:0:0:
94,188,65512,1,8,0:0:0:0:
107,277,65840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,323,66168,2,0,B|256:377|256:377|328:323,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,277,67315,2,0,L|444:244,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,184,67807,5,2,0:0:0:0:
439,120,68135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,56,68463,2,0,B|343:89|343:89|299:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,74,69118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
139,131,69446,2,0,P|128:197|168:258,1,135,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,70102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,320,70430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,268,70757,2,0,P|346:310|339:353,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,211,71413,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,158,71741,2,0,P|166:116|173:73,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,38,72397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,47,72560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,57,72724,2,0,L|392:90,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,174,73380,6,0,L|449:207,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,282,74036,2,0,P|445:363|368:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,302,75019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,289,75183,2,0,L|219:289,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,225,75675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,147,76003,6,0,P|92:109|98:65,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,91,76658,2,0,P|256:45|328:91,1,180,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,65,77970,6,0,P|420:109|397:147,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,210,78625,2,0,L|154:233,1,180,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,195,79609,2,0,P|59:235|74:279,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,131,80264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
154,111,80428,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,91,80592,6,0,P|206:63|251:63,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,135,81248,2,0,P|337:163|382:163,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,125,81903,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82067,12,8,85182,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85509,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,256,85673,2,0,L|128:288,1,45,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,313,86165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,335,86493,2,0,P|366:347|425:276,1,180,14|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,197,87476,5,0,0:0:0:0:
420,114,87804,1,10,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,69,88296,2,0,L|288:69,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,69,88787,1,2,0:0:0:0:
118,92,89115,2,0,P|130:130|170:156,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,89770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,256,90098,2,0,L|340:286,2,45,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,256,90755,2,0,L|173:286,2,45,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,180,91410,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,99,91738,2,0,P|256:81|216:99,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,157,92393,2,0,B|15:288,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,361,93540,2,0,L|104:328,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,277,94032,5,2,0:0:0:0:
259,262,94360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,276,94688,2,0,P|387:290|431:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,192,95343,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,125,95671,2,0,L|269:107,1,135,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,104,96327,5,0,0:0:0:0:
155,124,96655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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155,323,97638,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Accel World

Accel World 2013-10-03T06:16:52+00:00

From AMQ

[General]

Add Gero in your tag :3?

[Easy]

00:33:058 (4) moved to 00:33:386, and still end at 00:34:697

slider

X:216 Y:244

00:50:432 (3) x:172 y:100
00:51:088 (4) x:256 y:156
00:51:744 (1) x:356 y:148
00:53:711 (2) x:136 y:292
00:55:022 (3) x:228 y:156

[Normal]

01:47:810 (5) moved it to x:336 y:344
00:48:793 (1) ^ x:204 y:244 and rotate by -28°

00:49:449

00:49:449 (2) to 00:50:432 (1)

00:50:432

00:50:432 (1) to 00:52:727 (3)

:3 记得后面的一小部分的ds也要微调，如果改动的话

[Gero's Hard]

01:02:526 (4) nc

Amazing

[Hard]

Excellent

[Insane]

_(:з」∠)_由于种种原因有点懒得写mod，我这里帮你修正了一些地方，不介意的话你可以看看
Test

[_AI's Insane]

00:46:171 (3) x:212 y:304
00:48:466 (1) move to x:248 y:356 will be more better?
01:03:381 (2) ds
01:05:840 (2) ctrl-g
01:21:740 This spinner should be start from 01:21:903

01:30:009

01:30:009 (2) to 01:30:919 (4)

01:33:869 (5) x:372 y:44

01:36:164

01:36:164 (7) (8)

Nice song and map ;D Good luck!

Rakuen

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Rakuen 2013-10-03T15:44:08+00:00

Accel World wrote:
From AMQ

[General]

Add Gero in your tag :3?

[Easy]

00:33:058 (4) moved to 00:33:386, and still end at 00:34:697
slider
X:216 Y:244
00:50:432 (3) x:172 y:100
00:51:088 (4) x:256 y:156
00:51:744 (1) x:356 y:148
00:53:711 (2) x:136 y:292
00:55:022 (3) x:228 y:156

[Normal]

01:47:810 (5) moved it to x:336 y:344
00:48:793 (1) ^ x:204 y:244 and rotate by -28°
00:49:449
00:49:449 (2) to 00:50:432 (1)
00:50:432
00:50:432 (1) to 00:52:727 (3)
:3 记得后面的一小部分的ds也要微调，如果改动的话

[Hard]

Excellent

[Insane]

_(:з」∠)_由于种种原因有点懒得写mod，我这里帮你修正了一些地方，不介意的话你可以看看嗯，这个我觉得很好，收下了^_^
Test

Nice song and map ;D Good luck!

Fixed all!

Thanks for your mod

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