13:37 -Bakari-: boo!~ :3/
13:37 384059043: hiiiiii :D
13:38 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258147 Linkin Park - I'll Be Gone [384]]
13:38 -Bakari-: You really should try AR8 for this diff
13:39 -Bakari-: It'll make all these jumps more readable
13:39 384059043: the last part 0.0?
13:39 -Bakari-: AR8 makes final kiai even more epic <3
13:39 384059043: seems cool :D
13:40 -Bakari-: And add to tags "alternative" since genre of this song is alternative rock/metal
13:41 384059043: ok
13:41 -Bakari-: and what about using Slider Tick rate 2?
13:42 384059043: eh.. I prefer ST1
13:42 -Bakari-: Oh, it's up to you
13:42 384059043: 'cuz the song can be considered as a 70-BPM song
13:43 -Bakari-: Ok, we're done with checking [General] part
13:43 -Bakari-: let's check [Hard] diff :3
13:43 384059043: :3
13:43 -Bakari-: 00:16:393 - why do you ignore this beat here? it sounds really empty without it :V
13:44 384059043: umm... the beat is not as strong as the two beside
13:44 -Bakari-: But it's still strong one
13:45 -Bakari-: just try [http://puu.sh/3dbCo.jpg this] if you don't like sound - reject it
13:45 384059043: ok
13:48 -Bakari-: 00:55:822 - I'd place a kiai fountain here.
13:49 -Bakari-: Vocals and music goes much LOUDER than previous part, that'd fit with music perfectly
13:49 384059043: then just a fountain or a period of kiai? 0.0 I prefer a fountain
13:49 -Bakari-: fountain would be fine.
13:50 384059043: seems good :D
13:51 -Bakari-: 01:29:893 (6) - that jump is too big and it sounds off vocals/music. How about keeping [http://puu.sh/3dbKs.jpg something calm] here?
13:51 384059043: ahh good
13:53 -Bakari-: 01:39:536 (4,5) - almost the same, but you'll be able to make a cute blaket slider [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/806646 example]
13:54 384059043: eh.. this is okay imo
13:55 -Bakari-: 01:53:250 (6) - I'm not sure, but Ctrl+G would fit here. Try to reverse this slider so it will go up
13:56 -Bakari-: it will go up, while vocals sing "riseee~"
13:56 384059043: :D
13:56 384059043: cool idea
13:56 -Bakari-: Jump is quite hard, but it's understandable and readable. :3
13:58 -Bakari-: 02:21:322 (7,1) - (7) - add new combo / (1) remove new combo
13:58 -Bakari-: So, it will fit with your combo pattern and lyrics a bit better
13:59 384059043: ok
13:59 -Bakari-: 02:38:250 (5) - NC here for DS changes D: spacing changes are really confusing here
13:59 384059043: fixed
14:00 -Bakari-: 03:11:036 (4) - after jumpy pattern space between 03:10:822 (3,4) - may be considered as 1/4 jump
14:00 -Bakari-: to avoid misunderstanding, you can place NC o (4)
14:00 -Bakari-: on*
14:01 384059043: ok
14:04 -Bakari-: By the way, default combo colours on that BG look kinda boring ._.
14:05 -Bakari-: How about something like [http://puu.sh/3dc1a.jpg this BG]?
14:05 384059043: ._.I don't like this bg. I'd rather change the combo colors
14:06 -Bakari-: Maybe something like [http://puu.sh/3dc4d.png this]?
14:06 384059043: good :D
14:07 -Bakari-: 01:04:393 - and maybe circle here (Hard)
14:08 384059043: fixed
14:08 -Bakari-: nice, now [Normal]
14:09 -Bakari-: AR5 and OD/HP 4 to keep diff spread balanced. Also AR5 will fit with slider velocity much better
14:09 384059043: fixed
14:11 -Bakari-: Maybe it's just me, but CS4 looks ultra cool here. Try it, maybe?
14:11 384059043: let me try
14:12 -Bakari-: 00:41:893 (5) - jumps in [Normal] diff? Looks awkward, imo.
14:13 384059043: ah.. it was a mistake...fixed
14:14 -Bakari-: nice, what about circle size, btw?
14:14 384059043: i choose cs4
14:15 -Bakari-: ok :)
14:16 -Bakari-: 01:24:107 - drag break here? It'd fit with music. Loud clap and hp-bar disappears.
14:16 384059043: ok, and i'll do the same in easy
14:16 -Bakari-: ^ yes :3
14:17 -Bakari-: 02:06:536 (4) - I'd use 1/2 slider with reverse here. Sounds like it fits better :V
14:18 384059043: fixed
14:20 -Bakari-: 02:42:107 - I'd finish slider here. + map a bit more. [http://puu.sh/3dcle.jpg example]
14:21 -Bakari-: 03:10:393 (1) - spacing mistakes? looks like 1/4 pattern D:
14:21 384059043: ._. it's also a mistake
14:25 -Bakari-: That's it for [Normal]
14:25 -Bakari-: Well-mapped, but there's a bit too many 1/2 notes, tho
14:25 384059043: i place 1/2 in order to fit the song :D
14:26 -Bakari-: But I guess it's just rhythm, and it's not bad, anyway
14:26 384059043: 1/2s are okay imo
14:27 -Bakari-: By the way, you don't really need first green line
14:28 384059043: I don't care :3
14:30 -Bakari-: 00:47:250 (1) - tail of this slider is too close to previous circle, so beginners might mistaknly hit this tail ._.
14:31 384059043: fixed
14:32 -Bakari-: 01:19:822 (2,3) - same as above
14:35 -Bakari-: if you haven't added it yet, place a kiai fountain at 01:50:679 -
14:35 384059043: i have added
14:35 -Bakari-: Nice. nothing else, pretty nice.
14:35 384059043: thanks :3
14:36 -Bakari-: But that green colour on grey BG is really weird \:D/
14:36 -Bakari-: I'll post log now. Good luck with that map :3
14:36 384059043: i've change the color :3