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Haru - Shanghai Tea House (Instrumental)

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Starrodkirby86
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 04, 2009 at 11:44:03 AM

Artist: Haru
Title: Shanghai Tea House (Instrumental)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Techno Instrumental Viotex hong meiling touhou 6 embodiment scarlet devil
BPM: 122
Filesize: 5952kb
Play Time: 02:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.6 stars, 246 notes)
  2. Lunatic (5 stars, 437 notes)
  3. Normal (2.48 stars, 131 notes)
Download: Haru - Shanghai Tea House (Instrumental)
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For Sexy Nexy's Project of Doom.

HONG MEILING FOR THE WIN FOLKS!

This is the Stage 3 theme in Touhou 06: Embodiment of Scarlet Devil.

I don't know if I'm going to make anymore difficulties, or have any added. We'll see.

Please enjoy! All criticism and feedback are 100% appreciated.

1: Timing changes, hitsounds changes, combo color changes, some spacing changes, and a new difficulty. Also changed metadata. Thank you Cyclone, Shinxyn, Nexy, 0_o and strager. :) Thanks Derek for starring. ;D
2: Mafiamaster changes. Thank you~ Shinny, I'm not lowering HP Drain yet until it turns to be a huge inconvenience. Playing it one tick down makes the song too easy...
3: Custom hitsounds added. They're not THAT custom, but it's cool. Also made a few Lunatic changes.
4: Nexy and chang'eee's. Thanks you two. :)
5: Minor NachoPiggy changes.
6: al2e10 changes. <3 you K2J.
7: Very tiny changes on [Hard]. Thank you JInxyjem.
8: Symmetry, love you blissfulyoshi~
9: Some Shinde changes...Thanks~
10: Preview point changed.
11: Offset + Lunatic changes from Cyclone. Thank you ^_^
Last edited by Starrodkirby86 , edited 11 times in total.
Derekku
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Derekku
I really don't see anything wrong...

...

*star* <3
Cyclone
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Cyclone
All i have to say is...

00:32:46 (1,2,3) - Interesting choice going 3 notes into the melody there before the break.

Oh and can you have the colors so there is something in between the 2 greens? (aka, just change the order.)
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
:P
+6 on offset?

Normal-
00:58:54 (1) - a tick right
01:03:95 (3) - I don't like this whistle+clap mix, just remove clap
01:04:44 (1) - clap to start?
01:08:86 (1) - align ends?
01:12:55 (1) - no clap please~
01:16:73 (1) - align ends also?
01:38:37 (2) - remove clap!
01:39:35 (3) - add a hitsound?
01:52:14 (1,2,3,4) - hmm maybe DO add the whistle slide for these?
02:01:24 (3) - remove that clap
02:14:27 (5) - that clap's lonely, shoo it away or add more around em~
Theres a lot of beats in the song that sound like the clap hitsound, I get them confused sometimes x_x
Redo first break

Hard-
01:00:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make the distance here nice and "unnaziable" please~
01:06:64 (6) - ^
01:24:10 (4) - don't like this triple hitsound, rid whistle?
01:31:97 (4) - ^
02:07:38 (1) - curve it prettier?~
I love the uniqueness in the hitsounds here~

The whistles seem kinda loud...
I don't like so many normal-finish hitsounds, but what can I do about it, it's your map...
Soft hitsounds would have worked fine, too, but you already made it as it is, so no worries?

Knowing you, you can so make a Lunatic :D
For now, just one star
mosluv
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mosluv
Normal:
00:19:68 (3) - Clap on repeat.
00:54:59 (2) - Finish instead of whistle sounds better.
00:56:56 (2) - ^

Hard:
00:20:41 (x) - Add a note here with either Finish or Whistle.
01:11:32 (7) - Clap on start.
01:43:77 (1,2,3) - I think these should be jumps.

You have "Touhou" twice in tags and please make an Insane/Lunatic difficulty D:<! :)
0_o
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anonymous_old
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Normal
Puuurrrrfect......

Hard
Wonderful.

Hit strait 300's until I started getting excited. Finally ruined my combo here...
02:11:07 (1,2,3) - Hard to see. Move up a bit so it's not under 02:10:09 (3).

Otherwise, prefect. <3
Starrodkirby86
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I don't like so many normal-finish hitsounds, but what can I do about it, it's your map...
I usually do like playing with the normal hitsounds more, unless the song demands something Soft. It's just me, whether you like it or not. It's not like I raped the hitsounds though.

Lunatic is up! :) I hope it's not too overmapped or something. ._. I had some fun making it, so please enjoy.

Thank you all so far.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Hard~
  1. Redo last break. (It'll lengthen)
  2. 02:17:70 (1) - Move 1 tick to the left.
Lunatic~
  1. 00:20:41 (1) and 00:20:90 (5) - I would move this up a tick for spacing consistency.
  2. 00:22:38 (1) and 00:22:87 (5) - ^
  3. 00:50:41 (1) - Are you comfortable with this being all the way over there? Think of the players ;_;
  4. 00:52:38 (1) - ^ These are just suggestions though.
  5. 01:06:15 (5) - Move closer to 4.
  6. 01:13:77 (3,4,5) - Move to the right a tick. Then afterwards highlight the combo and move it so 5 will be on the white line on the grid.
  7. 01:14:75 (3,4,5) - Move to the left a tick. Same concept as ^
  8. 01:24:59 (1) - Move a tick up.
  9. 01:25:08 (5) - Move a tick down.
    Same with 01:25:57 (1) and 01:26:06 (5).
  10. 01:31:23 (7,8,9) - Move up a tick.
  11. I see the design so I won't tell you to do this. Just a suggestion: 01:36:39 (1,2) - Move 1 tick to the right.
    01:37:50 (10,11) - Move 1 tick to the left.
    Same idea with the next stream combo and the other 2 stream combos after the next 2 stream combos. Lol.
  12. 02:09:10 (5) - 1 tick to the right.
  13. 02:16:72 (3,4,5) - Same idea with 01:13:77
    02:17:70 (3,4,5) - ^
  14. 02:19:42 (1,3) - Suggestion: Move 1 tick down.
It pains me to see little spacing errors in streams but you know how it is.
Nice job!
Starrodkirby86
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I made the changes. There's now, erm, 'custom' hitsounds (More like a combination from soft and normal). Hopefully this sounds better in the end.

Check it out~ Tell me if it sounds bad.
eee
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eee
mmhmm, took a while to get to tha mod, but
I really didn't find anything wrong
Except: 00:50:41 (1) - in [Lunatic], the fact that it's the ONLY TWO 1/4 jumps in the map, even if there is more, I just don't like the 1/4 jumps. . . . . . . even in an [Insane]
anyways, star
mosluv
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mosluv
Normal:
00:23:61 (3,4,5,6) - Better hitsounds?
00:27:54 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:06:88 (5) - Remove clap from start and end and replace with whistle.
01:14:75 (5) - ^

Hard:
01:53:85 (4) - Move left a bit. Yay for nazi!

Lunatic:
Redo the breaks.

00:23:85 (3) - Get this 3 aligned on the fading 5.
00:33:44 (3) - New combo.
01:01:60 (6) - Spacing.
01:02:21 (5) - ^
01:06:15 (5) - ^
02:09:10 (5) - ^

Please change the Source to Touhou. RaWr as promised, KD star ^-^!
Starrodkirby86
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Nachy
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Awesome map, awesome theme remix, awesome character Hong Meiling for the win indeed. :)
I love the combo burst, it's pretty cute, and the background looks pretty nice and relaxing.
No problems found and it's pretty much perfect and fun.

Normal:
01:59:020 (6) - Moving it to the same position as 01:59:511 (1)
Kind of looked a bit more neat.
Pretty graceful mapping you did in this difficulty.

Hard:
I really love on what you did to this difficulty, it's just wonderfully perfect, has great pacing, notes are well placed and overall great map . :)

Lunatic:
Great adrenaline rush on this one, it's frantic, fast paced and the note placements really forms out an artistic outcome, it's just awesome.

Starred.
K2J
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
al2e10
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Starrodkirby86
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I had a whole different mind-set when doing Lunatic. I see your opinion in that, but I didn't change as much in terms of claps.

It's good though~

I'll do the mp3 change sometime later...I need to check the space of this file anyway... :|
Jinxy
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[Hard]
01:10:08 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is this supposed to be a special pattern? If not, 2,5 and 7 are wierdly placed.


Good Lord. The beat placement is awesome. (I like stuff symmetrical[?])
blissfulyoshi
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Normal:
01:26:56 (1) - kind of breaks the flow you had with making 90 degree turns
01:30:49 (1) - " "

Hard:
00:57:79 (4) - new combo to make it easier to read?
01:02:21 (6,7) - make a 180 degrees spin of 2,3 (surprisingly, 5 and 8 are in their correct positions)
01:03:93 (3) - make a 180 degrees spin of 1
01:24:59 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - smooth out the curve?

Lunatic:
01:13:28 (2) - make this a horizontal reflection of the next note
01:30:49 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no symmetrical pattern?
01:37:50 (10,11) - make these horizontal reflection of 1 and 2
01:39:47 (10,11) - " "
01:46:97 (4,5) - make them end at the same location
01:49:30 (10,11) - make these horizontal reflection of 1 and 2
01:51:27 (10,11) - " "

Nice beatmap. Star.
Starrodkirby86
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Most of these changes were basically reverting back to the old version. But whatever, symmetry ;x
Shinde
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Normal
01:24:59 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Realign
01:58:28 (2,3) - Space just a little farther

Lunatic
It made my mind go numb. I'm not sure about one of the designs you used for the streams though. Gonna take a better look at it later.

So in short, I've got nothing atm. Don't bother kudosu'ing. I'ma try to look at this when I'm not dead tired so I can try to say something helpful rather than 'align.'

Looks good though, Star'd.

Edit: icu gettin bubble'd. Well okay, I guess if Mark approves then this doesn't need my looking at it further.
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mtmcl
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No rankability issues. Take a bubble. Contact me if you change anything.
Cyclone
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Try adding 5 more ms to the offset

insane

00:50:29 (4,1) - These are mean, but i guess there's nothing really wrong with em.
00:52:25 (4,1) - ^
01:27:54 (1) - Can't see that this is a slider during gameplay.
Cyclone
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alright you can have that back now.
Takuma
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Lesjuh
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The streams on lunatic are perfect! They go so smoothly and chill~
I wish all streams were like that xD
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