HI~ Losertic
General:
- Inconsistency in uninherited problem is on hard diff got 2 redlines
- maybe try to get a better mp3? since this one sound a little bad
- offset sound a little off try: 159
- your combo colours dont fit with BG maybe try this:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 33,1,126
Combo3 : 183,0,4
Combo4 : 0,0,215
Insane
- AR 8 don fit this map use 9 plz
- 00:00:065 kinda weird you map this 3/4 sounds but you ignore 00:00:000 this one
- 00:04:613 (3,4) - what are you follow with this? souund bad cuz it dont fit the music try:
- 00:06:607 this circle is overmapped nothing in the music here remove it
- 00:05:889 (8,9) - this two circles stackeds kill the flow of this song maybe try to add some jumpy pattern instead of stacks?
- 00:07:166 (5) - try to stack this with previous (10) 00:06:208 slider just for mapping desing
- 00:08:602 this 1/4 repeat sound really bad here too is not following nothing correct rhythm here is maybe like:
- 00:09:559 finish head
- 00:09:879 same as above
- 00:12:113 add a circle here actually this place sound so empty
- 00:14:187 finish
- 00:19:772 this stream also is overmapped and dont fit this part try this sound better:
- 00:30:384 should be a circle here too
- 00:34:612 I dont like how this antijump kill the flow but is just my opinion if you wanna keep this add New combo here 00:34:612 to make the antijump and the change of distance readable for the player
- 00:37:006 try another slider shape since this one overlap himself and is hard to read try another one plz
- 00:38:762 ctrl g better flow for the jump
- 00:39:559 (1,2,3,4) - this stream is overmapped too try to just make a slider starting here 00:39:559 like:
- 00:45:783 I dont like so much the stack on the tail of the slider special this one the vocal here 00:45:783 is strong enought to make a small jump imo
- 00:56:474 also this long slider dont fit very well the music try maybe :
- 00:58:230 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part look really overmapped try to make it clean actually is so painfull for play it x_x
- 01:07:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmaped and sound bad x_X try atleast to delete 01:07:884 (2,4) - to follow the song better
- 01:08:442 (7,1) - this overlap look really bad fix plz
- 01:11:873 remove this one nothing in the music here
- 01:12:751 add somethink here since sound empty
- 01:12:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - exactly the same as 01:07:804
- 01:14:106 (2,3,4,5) - overmap x_x :C
- 01:15:304 add a circle here then start the spinner on 01:15:384 to follow better the music plz
Hard:
- 00:01:262 (4,1) - stack they perfect
- 00:05:571 (1,2) - avoid hidden circles on the slider tails player dont like this kind of pattern orz
- 00:07:166 (6,7) - same as above
- 00:08:762 this 1/4 repeat dont fit the song try to map just a 1/2 slider since the sound is just on downbeat (white tick) and upbeat (redtick)
- 00:19:293 (1,4) - this two repeat dont fit the song try to hear this part to 25% and you will see and fix it with the correct rhythm
- 00:23:442 New combo for jump and for the new vocals starting here fit alot
- 00:37:804 (1,3) - this two slider touching look really bad try to avoid it
- 00:58:708 (4,5,6) - fix the distance and make a better pattern here maybe?
- 01:14:984 same here this repeat dont fit the music x_x also take the suggestion in the final spinner on insane here too
Normal:
- AR 4 dont fit this map go AR 5
- 00:02:698 fix the distance with previous
- 00:03:815 this slider dont follow the song orz try to move it to 00:03:655 will follow better the song
- 00:07:805 fix the distance with next slider
- 00:13:869 (3,1,2) - bad flow imo try another pattern?
- 00:56:474 fix distance with next circle
- 01:00:623 (6,1,2) - this overlap look really bad and so confuse for play try to make it clean
Easy:
- AR 2 dont fit this map use AR 3
- 00:05:251 fix the distance with next slider
- 00:09:879 add a circle here is so strong music for just ignore it imo
- 00:19:932 (5,6,1,2) - all this circles are kinda hard to for a newbie try to make some 1/1 slider better?
- 00:37:804 (1,2) - dont stack circles on easy diff because newplayers cant read this
You can improve alot this mappu specially with rhythm also some patterns I suggest you to listen to the song at 25% GL with this :3