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MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009년 10월 5일 월요일 at 오후 5:12:31

Artist: BJJ
Title: First Kiss
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJMAX BJJ
BPM: 107
Filesize: 7611kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. bmin11's Insane (4.89 stars, 225 notes)
  2. Easy (1.14 stars, 73 notes)
  3. Hard (4.7 stars, 195 notes)
  4. Normal (3.22 stars, 117 notes)
Download: BJJ - First Kiss
Download: BJJ - First Kiss (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First Kiss in DJMAX Clazziquai Edition & DJMAX TECHNIKA :D

7/20 All difficulties are changed. Please re-download please :)

8/15 Comboburst is uploaded. Please re-download please :)

10/2 Background is changed better quailty. Please re-download please :)
dudgns88
HAHAHAHAHA!!! here is my crazy beatmap.

and bmin11 modding plz!!

and I'll love(???) you

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [Dudgns88's insane].osu
wlsdbsdb
bmin11
[Normal], [Hard]
We discussed about this by chatting

[wlsdbsdb's normal]
Discussed earlier.

[dudgns88's insane]
Ok, change your BPM in to 107 then remap the entire thing. Your map is basiclly a copy of [Hard] which there is no point of having a different creator if is the same map and plz use 1/4 beat snap divisor.
DeathxShinigami
Yeah I know...I copied most of my mod from your other map but eh...both maps are very similar issue wise.

Nice map. Brings back memories.

Step 1: To many notes are clumped together. I suggest spacing them out more to make the entire map less of a "click fest" espeicially in wlsdbsdb's normal. Ignore this step for your easy.

Step 2: add more sliders into the song!!

Step 3: If you want you could fix up wlsdbsdb's normal yourself so it can meet your standards for maps. Your choice on that.

Final Step: Normal is your first priority to fix up. Everything is to close to make the map any fun at all.

Thanks for the fun song. =3

Edit: Maybe I'll make a diff for this song if I have time :)
Takuma
Revived!
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Yeah I know...I copied most of my mod from your other map but eh...both maps are very similar issue wise.

Nice map. Brings back memories.

Step 1: To many notes are clumped together. I suggest spacing them out more to make the entire map less of a "click fest" espeicially in wlsdbsdb's normal. Ignore this step for your easy.

Step 2: add more sliders into the song!!

Step 3: If you want you could fix up wlsdbsdb's normal yourself so it can meet your standards for maps. Your choice on that.

Final Step: Normal is your first priority to fix up. Everything is to close to make the map any fun at all.

Thanks for the fun song. =3

Edit: Maybe I'll make a diff for this song if I have time :)

I still fixing it now.
But it delaying because I have a term exam so I have to study T.T
Sorry about that. :(
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

dudgns88 wrote:

HAHAHAHAHA!!! here is my crazy beatmap.

and bmin11 modding plz!!

and I'll love(???) you

Sorry, Your beatmap is declined :|
cyanberryio
lol When I was going to mod this i was mad at how small the hit circles were. And how the drain rate was too high, since I failed when I missed a note on Hard. then I realized Hard Rock+Sudden Death was on. D:

[General]
Countdown is too loud, and doesn't fit very well with this map.

[Easy]
General: No hit sound changes?
00:10:09 (1,2,3,4) - WAY too spaced out rhythm(even for an Easy difficulty), I don't think it would to put something in there.
01:16:26 (3) - New combo? It is Easy anyways, and pretty spaced out, but just an opinion.
01:34:20 (1,2,3,4) - Always has been my opinion, but any stacks aren't too easy. Some of my friends that suck at osu! agree too, they can't follow them. Again- opinion.

[Normal]
00:08:97 (1) - Not stacked right under, unless you meant to do this one.

[wlsdbsdb'Normal]
Did someone mean to put wlsdbsdb's Normal? :\
Isn't that break a bit long?
Kinda short too.
Two red in the colors panel? Follow the same color scheme as the other three please.
00:49:64 (1,2,3,4) - Sound more flowing pushed 1/2 back, cause it sounds like your following the vocals.
00:51:89 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe push 1/4 forward, reason is above.

[Hard]
00:19:90 (4) - Confused me the first time, but then again I was on Hard Rock. :P Still, I just don't like this overlap, but that's just my opinion, you get used to it the second or third time.
00:44:01 (6) - Not commenting against it, but just saying, very well made. Not really hard to get, maybe some people will mess up the first time, but rarely.
01:09:53 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Something again, slightly confusing too. But I saw it the editor first, so I got it right away. ;)

Star4U :)
blissfulyoshi
Easy:
01:01:68 (2) - make similar to 1?
01:37:57 (2) - make more curved like 1?

Normal:
00:05:60 (2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing here is too hard for a normal
00:15:70 (1,2,3) - make a straight line?
01:16:26 (1,2,3) - " "
01:33:57 (4,5) - I do not recommend you put this in a normal

wlsdbsdb:
two red hit combos in a row. y?
also y does this diff have a different offset?
00:53:78 (1,2,3,4,5) - the snapping here is different than the other diffs, and this problem does recur throughout the level
00:56:09 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing here is really off

Hard:
00:56:91 (4) - align with 2
01:01:68 (3,4) - make parallel with 1,2
01:10:65 (7,8,9,10) - this is a little confusing
01:15:98 (7,8,1) - make parallel to 5,6
01:32:52 (2) - align with 1?
01:34:76 (2,3,4,5) - make a straight line?

Nice beatmap. Star.
Soaprman
All Difficulties
BPM 107.01
Offset 4501
After this change, resnap. Then double-check to make sure nothing got misplaced (the few notes on 1/8 divisor will need to be manually adjusted if you don't use 1/8 when resnapping).

Easy
00:43:73 (3) - Space farther from 2

Normal
00:18:36 (1) - feels a little awkward. Give it another look. You can keep it how it is if you like it though.
00:21:16 (5) - Start this slider 1/4 beat sooner to line it up with the vocals (keep its end at the same point in time though). Adjust spacing appropriately.
01:19:62 (5) - Maybe line up with 6 as 1-2 and 3-4 in this combo are. I think it looks slightly nicer like this. Give it a try, I guess!

wlsdbsdb'Normal
Maybe change the name to wlsdbsdb's Normal. :P

Why two red combo colors? Maybe just use the same colors as the other difficulties.

Hard
Why that timing section change at 8ms? Get rid of that, it's useless. :P

00:19:92 (4) - The reverse arrow is completely obscured by the 300 mark after clearing 3. Fine but a little irritating, I'll leave the decision up to you on this one.
00:21:18 (6) - Start 1/4 beat sooner to sync with vocals.

Not bad, not bad! Have a star.
bagnz0r
[Hard]
01:28:787 - 01:29:299 * Sounds weird for me.
01:33:644 * That note is too close to previous one.
01:35:887 * That note is too close to previous one.
01:36:448* That note is too close to previous one.


That's all.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Alex0686 wrote:

lol When I was going to mod this i was mad at how small the hit circles were. And how the drain rate was too high, since I failed when I missed a note on Hard. then I realized Hard Rock+Sudden Death was on. D:

[General]
Countdown is too loud, and doesn't fit very well with this map.

[Easy]
General: No hit sound changes?
00:10:09 (1,2,3,4) - WAY too spaced out rhythm(even for an Easy difficulty), I don't think it would to put something in there.
01:16:26 (3) - New combo? It is Easy anyways, and pretty spaced out, but just an opinion.
01:34:20 (1,2,3,4) - Always has been my opinion, but any stacks aren't too easy. Some of my friends that suck at osu! agree too, they can't follow them. Again- opinion.

- Fixed :)


[Normal]
00:08:97 (1) - Not stacked right under, unless you meant to do this one.

- Fixed :)


[wlsdbsdb'Normal]
Did someone mean to put wlsdbsdb's Normal? :\

- Fixed :)


Isn't that break a bit long?
Kinda short too.
Two red in the colors panel? Follow the same color scheme as the other three please.
00:49:64 (1,2,3,4) - Sound more flowing pushed 1/2 back, cause it sounds like your following the vocals.
00:51:89 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe push 1/4 forward, reason is above.

This difficulty is not mine. So I think I shouldn's fix it without wlsdbsdb's permission :)


[Hard]
00:19:90 (4) - Confused me the first time, but then again I was on Hard Rock. :P Still, I just don't like this overlap, but that's just my opinion, you get used to it the second or third time.
00:44:01 (6) - Not commenting against it, but just saying, very well made. Not really hard to get, maybe some people will mess up the first time, but rarely.
01:09:53 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Something again, slightly confusing too. But I saw it the editor first, so I got it right away. ;)

- Fixed :)


Star4U :)
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Soaprman wrote:

All Difficulties
BPM 107.01
Offset 4501
After this change, resnap. Then double-check to make sure nothing got misplaced (the few notes on 1/8 divisor will need to be manually adjusted if you don't use 1/8 when resnapping).

Easy
00:43:73 (3) - Space farther from 2

Normal
00:18:36 (1) - feels a little awkward. Give it another look. You can keep it how it is if you like it though.
00:21:16 (5) - Start this slider 1/4 beat sooner to line it up with the vocals (keep its end at the same point in time though). Adjust spacing appropriately.
01:19:62 (5) - Maybe line up with 6 as 1-2 and 3-4 in this combo are. I think it looks slightly nicer like this. Give it a try, I guess!

wlsdbsdb'Normal
Maybe change the name to wlsdbsdb's Normal. :P

Why two red combo colors? Maybe just use the same colors as the other difficulties.

Hard
Why that timing section change at 8ms? Get rid of that, it's useless. :P

00:19:92 (4) - The reverse arrow is completely obscured by the 300 mark after clearing 3. Fine but a little irritating, I'll leave the decision up to you on this one.

- Fixed :)


00:21:18 (6) - Start 1/4 beat sooner to sync with vocals.

- I synchronized it with piano melody, not vocals.

Not bad, not bad! Have a star.

- Fixed :) Thanks.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

BagnoGamer wrote:

[Hard]
01:28:787 - 01:29:299 * Sounds weird for me.

- So what should I do?
I's so sorry. I didn't know it is too rude sentence :oops: I mean, how would you like this sound when I fix it.



01:33:644 * That note is too close to previous one.
01:35:887 * That note is too close to previous one.
01:36:448* That note is too close to previous one.

-The spacing is not wrong.

That's all.
wlsdbsdb
dudgns88
I don't know why this map's Star rating is -35.33 XD

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [Dudgns88's insane].osu
dudgns88
I fixed it a lot!!!!! XD [...]

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [D88's insane].osu
James2250
normal:
00:44:01 (4) - move closer to 3

wlsdbsdb's normal:
00:26:657- this break is LONG like really long I would recommend mapping parts of it...

hard:
00:21:18 (6) -move 1/4 forward (dont forget to distance snap after)
01:22:93 (1), 01:23:00 (2) -separate these 2..seems like mistake
01:28:96 (6) 01:29:03 (7) - ^
looking at rest of map you have a few more of them...I don't like them but oh well

have a star :P
bmin11
Here's my diff. I hope this map is successfull enough to join you guys :)

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [bmin11's Insane].osu
wlsdbsdb
dudgns88
hah.... hello moon

i'm so tired :o to make this xxxxxxx map...

so please register this map... DX

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [D88's insane].osu
bmin11

Soaprman wrote:

All Difficulties
Offset 4501
Uh... I don't agree with your offset :o
I'll go for 8,986
dudgns88
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [D88's insane].osu
dudgns88
I love this song so i starred
dudgns88
I fixed spacing and I write reply one more time

so plz register this map

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [D88's insane].osu
rust45
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

rust45 wrote:

I see no problems with this on the surface, but I have a question, why does wlsdbsdb's have a countdown but not the others?
Fixed :)
DeathxShinigami
I approve of Dudgns insane diff btw. :P
bmin11
[D88's insane]
Why the combo colours are different?
The HP drain rate is deadly
00:11:18 (1,1,1,1) - Why new combos?
00:15:11 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh... clap spam?
00:20:15 (1,1,1,1) - Again, why new combos?
00:22:82 (1) - Make this slider to start on the white tick
01:13:91 (1) - Unrankable spinner. Auto has to get 2000 bonus point to be rankable

Better then before. Bravo Dungs
dudgns88
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DeathxShinigami

bmin11 wrote:

[D88's insane]
01:13:91 (1) - Unrankable spinner. Auto has to get 2000 bonus point to be rankable
Actually, its just a guideline..If I recall. All newer ranked maps don't use this rule all the time.

Edit:

[Easy]

Lower Drain please...to much for a Easy :o

[Hard]

Raise Drain. No idea why it is so low on this diff compared to other ones.

[D88's Insane]

Lower the drain...Unless you are going for the real insane feeling for the song. :|
bmin11
I fighered the overroll bt 1

I figured it out that mine and Dungs's diff difference is only 0.01 star rate 0_o

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [bmin11's Insane].osu
DeathxShinigami
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Another pink star.. Good luck getting this checked by BAT's... 6 diff's @_@
Thanks about your support :D
minyeob
[Normal]
00:08:41 (9) - Spacing rule is important. Especially low difficulty
00:18:36 (1) - Make 1/4 beat earlier.
All breaks: Please remake a break.

[wlsdbsdb]
00:51:33 (4) - Align with (3)

[bmin11]
00:53:00 ( ) - Add a note on here.

How about moving this beatmap to pending?
Star ;)
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

minyeob wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:41 (9) - Spacing rule is important. Especially low difficulty
00:18:36 (1) - Make 1/4 beat earlier.
All breaks: Please remake a break.

[wlsdbsdb]
00:51:33 (4) - Align with (3)

[bmin11]
00:53:00 ( ) - Add a note on here.

How about moving this beatmap to pending?
Star ;)
Fixed :) Thank U :D
bmin11
Thanks, minyeob. I was having a problem with that part.
Fixed


Oh, and ya, I suggess to change [wlsdbsdb's normal] into [wlsdbsdb's hard] or [wlsdbsdb's semi hard].
wlsdbsdb's diff is way too hard for normal.

Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [bmin11's Insane].osu
DeathxShinigami
Actually I like wlsdbsdb's Relaxing alot better. :3
bmin11

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Actually I like wlsdbsdb's Relaxing alot better. :3
Good point, but it is not really 'Relaxing' :|
minyeob
[Easy]
01:12:07 (2) - Extend 1/4 beat, please

[bmin11]
00:53:00 - Please add a note on here! Oh.... Creater didn't download a fixed version:;
bmin11
vincerio
very fun to play
nice map =w= b

+star~
alan_629_6
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

alan_629_6 wrote:

Hi :) i would like to share some of my opinion.

EASY
00:04:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds doesnt make sense. what is the music background u refer for?
M.F. : piano sound. and some sounds don't have to be right on sound.
00:26:22 (2,3) - better dont put on blue stick.
M.F. : i don't think so D:
00:26:930 - reinsert break
M.F. : fixed :)
00:44:594 - ^
M.F. : fixed :)
01:02:258 - ^
M.F. : fixed :)
01:29:03 (4,5) - better dont put on blue stick
M.F. : i don't think so D:

NORMAL
o no...you should choice either one instrumentation or vocal as your baseline for putting the note.
M.F. : i couldn't understand D:

OTHER DIFF
^
M.F. : ^

i really dont know how to correct it for other diff because i cannot accept the way you make it (changing the baseline)
so sorry...
alan_629_6

MoonFragrance wrote:

alan_629_6 wrote:

Hi :) i would like to share some of my opinion.

EASY
00:04:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds doesnt make sense. what is the music background u refer for?
M.F. : piano sound. and some sounds don't have to be right on sound.
00:26:22 (2,3) - better dont put on blue stick.
M.F. : i don't think so D:
00:26:930 - reinsert break
M.F. : fixed :)
00:44:594 - ^
M.F. : fixed :)
01:02:258 - ^
M.F. : fixed :)
01:29:03 (4,5) - better dont put on blue stick
M.F. : i don't think so D:

NORMAL
o no...you should choice either one instrumentation or vocal as your baseline for putting the note.
M.F. : i couldn't understand D:
means that you either choose vocal(means singing) to put on the note according to it, or choose one of the musical instrument and put the note according to it. because yours just keeping on changing-sudden follow piano, sudden follow base, sudden follow vocal. people will confuse when playing. it means not consistent.

OTHER DIFF
^
M.F. : ^

i really dont know how to correct it for other diff because i cannot accept the way you make it (changing the baseline)
so sorry...
WyndII
Easy
Good~

Normal
Better~ XD <3 this diff than all the other diff D:

wlsdbsdb's Hard
00:39:83 (10) - new combo
00:40:67 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:937 - 00:42:078 = no hitsounds add some
01:12:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Hard
00:17:95 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dont get this o.o please change if possible
00:22:44 (1,2,3,4,5) - see, this part goes well with this pattern unlike that^
00:27:351- why do you need to replace this part with a break if its the rising part of the song T,T
00:45:295 - ^ this is a short song anyway, its ok if you only have one break/short break
00:39:26 (5,6) - make it look like this 00:38:42 (2,3) -
i dunno if i can 300d the 1/8 beat but.. nvm xD

bmin11's Insane
nice diff!

D88's insane
fine.

Star
Mafiamaster
Overall~
I'd have to say lower the overall volume by 1 tick or 2. At least on the Normal Sample Set hitsounds.

Normal~
00:08:41 (9) - Add a finish at the end? It would sound really good~

wlsldsdsfddsf's hard~
00:13:19 (1) - Stack on the fading green 1.
00:13:47 (2) - Stack on fading green 2.
Yes, the soft sounds could use a little bit more hit sounds.

Hard~
Redo all breaks in Hard. They'll lengthen
01:35:83 (4) - Doesn't sound good so close to 5. Snap to a 1/4 tick.
01:36:39 (1) - Doesn't sound good so close to 2. ^

bmen's is fine~

D87~
Wow lol. Offset is wrong. Try an offset of 4,501 (from the Hard difficulty) and resnap all notes.
Lower the overall volume at least 3 ticks, maybe even 4.
Redo first break.
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