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rebubbled
Unfortunately, but you guys seem to be happy (examples: lol, <3)DeathxShinigami wrote:
Its ironic how in the end Dudgns diff never made it. <3sonnyc wrote:
lol
Dudgns's insane was gone
easy:
0:26:219 (2) - add 1/4th further
1:28:603 (1,2,3) - put them in one line (optional)
normal:
No problems
hard:
No problems
insane:
0:13:462 - remove new combo and new combo the circle after this one
0:14:584 - ^
Overall:
Try to make your combo's more symmetrical (insane is very well done the way it is). Try to adjust them more in line or make 'rounder' shapes. You may want to turn on distance snap and turn off grid snap to do this.
Also, doesn't DJMAX provide 2 playable versions of the song or something? (I've only seen DJMAX, so idk about the names of the different modes). I am certain that there are multiple backgrounds some songs. If this one does have that, you may want to set one for the easier difficulties and the other for the harder?
I did NOT check the playability of the map/gave it a testrun.
Oh, and the song/video/BG are just lovely
starred!
0:26:219 (2) - add 1/4th further
1:28:603 (1,2,3) - put them in one line (optional)
normal:
No problems
hard:
No problems
insane:
0:13:462 - remove new combo and new combo the circle after this one
0:14:584 - ^
Overall:
Try to make your combo's more symmetrical (insane is very well done the way it is). Try to adjust them more in line or make 'rounder' shapes. You may want to turn on distance snap and turn off grid snap to do this.
Also, doesn't DJMAX provide 2 playable versions of the song or something? (I've only seen DJMAX, so idk about the names of the different modes). I am certain that there are multiple backgrounds some songs. If this one does have that, you may want to set one for the easier difficulties and the other for the harder?
I did NOT check the playability of the map/gave it a testrun.
Oh, and the song/video/BG are just lovely
starred!
Topic Starter
Anyway, thank you :)fzeromaster wrote:
easy:
0:26:219 (2) - add 1/4th further
1:28:603 (1,2,3) - put them in one line (optional)
- I think no problem in there...
insane:
0:13:462 - remove new combo and new combo the circle after this one
0:14:584 - ^
- I think it's okay
Overall:
Try to make your combo's more symmetrical (insane is very well done the way it is). Try to adjust them more in line or make 'rounder' shapes. You may want to turn on distance snap and turn off grid snap to do this.
- i don't think layout must be round. Layout can be line or other shape.
Also, doesn't DJMAX provide 2 playable versions of the song or something? (I've only seen DJMAX, so idk about the names of the different modes). I am certain that there are multiple backgrounds some songs. If this one does have that, you may want to set one for the easier difficulties and the other for the harder?
- I don't have enough images.
Billy_the_Kid
^^ ~ ☆
Sorry to make you pop your bubble 
[Easy]
All good, only a couple of aesthetics you might want to consider before getting this ranked for this difficulty:
01:29:72 (1) - distance between (1) and (2) differs very little from the rest of the combo numbers.
01:33:08 (3) - the same here between (3) and (4)
[Normal]
00:17:38 (1) - Please do not place the new timing sections right on top of the beats.
If the player clicks too early, he will get the previous timing section sound / properties.
00:35:89 (1) - ^
00:38:13 (1) - ^
00:40:37 (1) - ^
01:18:50 (1) - ^
Note: Kiai timing sections can be started right on top of the beat. If you plan on doing this at: 01:18:50, then add a timing section that changes the sound from soft to normal a few ticks before the beat, and then add another timing section with the same properties but which now adds only kiai timing, and then place it right on top of the beat.
Aesthetics: 01:28:04 (3) - distance snap between (2) and (3) varies just a bit. Snap is ok, but you can arrange it for a better look. The same goes for (4) and (5)
[Hard]
The same problem here with the timing sections being placed right on top of the beats.
Please make sure to fix them here as well:
00:08:97 (1) - ^
00:35:89 (1) - ^
00:38:13 (1) - ^
00:40:37 (1) - ^
00:21:17 (6) - This slider feels misplaced, shouldn't it be on top of the red tick?
If so, make it longer so it finishes at the white tick.
[Insane]
00:16:40 (5,6,1) - Check spacing here, it changes. Was this on purpose?
I would personally recommend to stick with the same spacing value for an specific combo pattern.
01:29:30 (5,6,7) - Spacing varies a bit here. You might want to have the same distance between beats for this stream.
01:35:19 (6) - ^
01:36:45 (11) - ^
[Easy]
All good, only a couple of aesthetics you might want to consider before getting this ranked for this difficulty:
01:29:72 (1) - distance between (1) and (2) differs very little from the rest of the combo numbers.
01:33:08 (3) - the same here between (3) and (4)
[Normal]
00:17:38 (1) - Please do not place the new timing sections right on top of the beats.
If the player clicks too early, he will get the previous timing section sound / properties.
00:35:89 (1) - ^
00:38:13 (1) - ^
00:40:37 (1) - ^
01:18:50 (1) - ^
Note: Kiai timing sections can be started right on top of the beat. If you plan on doing this at: 01:18:50, then add a timing section that changes the sound from soft to normal a few ticks before the beat, and then add another timing section with the same properties but which now adds only kiai timing, and then place it right on top of the beat.
Aesthetics: 01:28:04 (3) - distance snap between (2) and (3) varies just a bit. Snap is ok, but you can arrange it for a better look. The same goes for (4) and (5)
[Hard]
The same problem here with the timing sections being placed right on top of the beats.
Please make sure to fix them here as well:
00:08:97 (1) - ^
00:35:89 (1) - ^
00:38:13 (1) - ^
00:40:37 (1) - ^
00:21:17 (6) - This slider feels misplaced, shouldn't it be on top of the red tick?
If so, make it longer so it finishes at the white tick.
[Insane]
00:16:40 (5,6,1) - Check spacing here, it changes. Was this on purpose?
I would personally recommend to stick with the same spacing value for an specific combo pattern.
01:29:30 (5,6,7) - Spacing varies a bit here. You might want to have the same distance between beats for this stream.
01:35:19 (6) - ^
01:36:45 (11) - ^
I think I can fix it now. Will be back soon
I tried to fix everything that I don't have to turn off my grid snap.Sir Minelli wrote:
[Insane]
00:16:40 (5,6,1) - Check spacing here, it changes. Was this on purpose? Tried to squeeze it in
I would personally recommend to stick with the same spacing value for an specific combo pattern.
01:29:30 (5,6,7) - Spacing varies a bit here. You might want to have the same distance between beats for this stream. Couldn't squeeze it in. I have to turn off the grid snap, but I don't want to
01:35:19 (6) - ^ ^
01:36:45 (11) - ^ Tried to squeeze it in
I disagree. It is not a major problem, so sorryfzeromaster wrote:
insane:
0:13:462 - remove new combo and new combo the circle after this one
0:14:584 - ^
p.s 00:10:38 (5) - I'm surprized that nobody has pick on this spacing error. Fixed
Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [bmin11's Insane].osu
bmin11 wrote:
p.s 00:10:38 (5) - I'm surprized that nobody has pick on this spacing error. Fixed
To be honest i did, but the beat was aligning perfectly with the slider that was upcoming and the spacing was no big mistake.
It actually gave a particular design to that pattern.
See, your beats do not need to be placed pixel perfect, so yeah, i didn't argue about it.
Besides, always remember that at insane difficulties, the modding strictness goes down. It is insane after all.
The beats i suggested to fix have also minor spacing problems, even minor than 00:10:38, but those are for aesthetic.
Keep it up. Your mapping style is good.
Topic Starter
Fixed :)
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Topic Starter
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Timing:
Offset: 8408 plays awesomely well.
Skin:
The comboburst is a little bit too wide and looks sort of ugly and low quality. Can you get a better, smaller one?
Insane:
Good!
Hard:
00:26:360 - Put a circle here? That would make the pattern more fun and more logical.
Normal:
00:26:360 - Put a circle here? That would make the pattern more fun and more logical.
Easy:
00:26:21 (2,3) - move 1/4 back and make (3) 1/4 longer? just on this difficulty :[
Offset: 8408 plays awesomely well.
Skin:
The comboburst is a little bit too wide and looks sort of ugly and low quality. Can you get a better, smaller one?
Insane:
Good!
Hard:
00:26:360 - Put a circle here? That would make the pattern more fun and more logical.
Normal:
00:26:360 - Put a circle here? That would make the pattern more fun and more logical.
Easy:
00:26:21 (2,3) - move 1/4 back and make (3) 1/4 longer? just on this difficulty :[
I see nothing wrong when I resnap my notes for the new offset, so I think you can fix it for me.
Thanks
Thanks
Topic Starter
Larto wrote:
Timing:
Offset: 8408 plays awesomely well.
- i agree with you. but in Easy, Normal and Hard, some circles out of 8408 offset. so i fixed to 4482.
Skin:
The comboburst is a little bit too wide and looks sort of ugly and low quality. Can you get a better, smaller one?
- i don't have better quailty image. must i change comboburst?
Insane:
Good!
- i think so :D
Hard:
00:26:360 - Put a circle here? That would make the pattern more fun and more logical.
- Fixed :)
Normal:
00:26:360 - Put a circle here? That would make the pattern more fun and more logical.
- Triple circles are in the 0.3 seconds? it isn't good for normal DX
Easy:
00:26:21 (2,3) - move 1/4 back and make (3) 1/4 longer? just on this difficulty :[
-Umm...... fixed.I played easy, but it feels little bit out of beat. and this part feels non-connected to Normal, Hard diff
good map!
but i'm not good at modding.
pass~
This song unranked;;
hope retry rank
but i'm not good at modding.
pass~
This song unranked;;
hope retry rank
I very love this beatmap.
Waiting it come back to rank.
+star
Waiting it come back to rank.
+star
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Cool :p i like this map
Topic Starter
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General
I found Kiai timing points is not perfect. Did you adjust offset?
Anyway I thinks it is not major problem.
[Normal]
01:32:51 (2,3) - 3 is not aligned(?)
[Hard]
00:45:13 - reinsert break time
01:02:51 - ^
01:28:87 (6) - what is this? Intentional?
let's go to the ranked map page.
I found Kiai timing points is not perfect. Did you adjust offset?
Anyway I thinks it is not major problem.
[Normal]
01:32:51 (2,3) - 3 is not aligned(?)
[Hard]
00:45:13 - reinsert break time
01:02:51 - ^
01:28:87 (6) - what is this? Intentional?
let's go to the ranked map page.
Topic Starter
ykcarrot wrote:
General
I found Kiai timing points is not perfect. Did you adjust offset?
Anyway I thinks it is not major problem.
- Fixed :)
[Normal]
01:32:51 (2,3) - 3 is not aligned(?)
- 3 is aligned with 4
[Hard]
00:45:13 - reinsert break time
01:02:51 - ^
- Fixed :)
01:28:87 (6) - what is this? Intentional?
- yes.
Good song :3
And I don't think there's any issues :3
Star this :3
And I don't think there's any issues :3
Star this :3
Can you do me a favor because I can't upload?
[My Insane]
00:17:23 (4) - delete the first clap or maybe not
That's all I guess. Thanks
[My Insane]
00:17:23 (4) - delete the first clap or maybe not
That's all I guess. Thanks
Topic Starter
REAL TIME Fixing :D
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Topic Starter
Fixed :) thank you >w<
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Topic Starter
I think it not a big problem >w<;; i saw many user who love your diff.bmin11 wrote:
Can you change it for me plz?the placement is a little sloppy.I'll try my best...............but won't be fixed for sure... I need help D:
I do my best ;w;bmin11 wrote:
whistles don't really fitI do agree and I did try to eliminate them, but I'm too lazy D: (and have no idea)
Wanna give it a shot, Moon?
The whistles in bmin's difficulty are pretty annoying imo, but I won't force you to fix. Here's your bubble anyway - it'll pop if you decide to change, though.
Topic Starter
Thank you Takuma!!!! >A<////
i wished SOOOOOOO much this map be bubbled - and going to be ranked >w<~
i wished SOOOOOOO much this map be bubbled - and going to be ranked >w<~
What? you didn't fix skyripper's mod yet? 
And we got a Bubble?
Uh.... nvm (since it is really hard to get a Bubble)....
And we got a Bubble?
Uh.... nvm (since it is really hard to get a Bubble)....
Topic Starter
i fixed it. it's not my diff, so i can't understand you how to arrange hitsound, notes, and sliders. i am only not sure to fixed it perfect. but i did my best.bmin11 wrote:
What? you didn't fix skyripper's mod yet?
And we got a Bubble?
Uh.... nvm (since it is really hard to get a Bubble)....
Had MF makes the changes. Bubble
No rank, bubble pop, very basic spacing issues need working even on Easy.
If you have problems understanding this post, please approach either minyeob or sonnyc. I trust they can translate this for you efficiently.
Easy
00:19:06 (2,3,4) - Basic spacing issues. 2-3 is further than 3-4 being one of them, even if the beats were spaced by 1 beat it's still too far and obvious.
00:42:61 (1,2,3,4) - Also very obvious spacing issue. 1-2 is spaced twice the distance from 2-3. Move 3 upwards by double the distance (at least) and make sure 4 follows 3.
01:19:90 (4,1,2) - Jump from 4-1, NOT ADVISED for Easy maps.
01:29:71 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing issue. Consistency between 1-2, 2-3, 3-4 required.
Normal
00:24:38 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Uhh... sorry. I just cannot read this pattern, spacing issues (and pretty severe ones at that). Your 4 is spaced 3/4 from your 5 and 6, and it sounds nice, problem is, i can't tell and I thought it was on the 1/2 beat. To make matters worse 1 is 1/4 from 6... and 2,3 are on the 3/4 and 1/4. I can't read at all.
Hard
01:28:87 (6) - 1/8 is not right. 1/4 is better.
01:32:51 (2,3,4) - Spacing between 2-3 is further than between 3-4. Bad spacing. Repattern this and adjust all patterns after this note.
bmin's Insane
You are insane (as in, the mapper's insane).
The HP drain is too much, lower it a bit. I suggest you also drop either difficulty or circle size down one level, not both. In simpler english, you only deduct one level from circle size if you don't touch difficulty, or one level from difficulty if you don't touch circle size. Either way, one of the two must be done.
General comments: This map suffers from bad spacing, so MF please learn from other maps about distance consistency.
If you have problems understanding this post, please approach either minyeob or sonnyc. I trust they can translate this for you efficiently.
Easy
00:19:06 (2,3,4) - Basic spacing issues. 2-3 is further than 3-4 being one of them, even if the beats were spaced by 1 beat it's still too far and obvious.
00:42:61 (1,2,3,4) - Also very obvious spacing issue. 1-2 is spaced twice the distance from 2-3. Move 3 upwards by double the distance (at least) and make sure 4 follows 3.
01:19:90 (4,1,2) - Jump from 4-1, NOT ADVISED for Easy maps.
01:29:71 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing issue. Consistency between 1-2, 2-3, 3-4 required.
Normal
00:24:38 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Uhh... sorry. I just cannot read this pattern, spacing issues (and pretty severe ones at that). Your 4 is spaced 3/4 from your 5 and 6, and it sounds nice, problem is, i can't tell and I thought it was on the 1/2 beat. To make matters worse 1 is 1/4 from 6... and 2,3 are on the 3/4 and 1/4. I can't read at all.
Hard
01:28:87 (6) - 1/8 is not right. 1/4 is better.
01:32:51 (2,3,4) - Spacing between 2-3 is further than between 3-4. Bad spacing. Repattern this and adjust all patterns after this note.
bmin's Insane
You are insane (as in, the mapper's insane).
The HP drain is too much, lower it a bit. I suggest you also drop either difficulty or circle size down one level, not both. In simpler english, you only deduct one level from circle size if you don't touch difficulty, or one level from difficulty if you don't touch circle size. Either way, one of the two must be done.
General comments: This map suffers from bad spacing, so MF please learn from other maps about distance consistency.
Topic Starter
Fixed :)
The HP drain is too much, lower it a bit. I suggest you also drop either difficulty or circle size down one level, not both. In simpler english, you only deduct one level from circle size if you don't touch difficulty, or one level from difficulty if you don't touch circle size. Either way, one of the two must be done.Never had a difficulty when I played this (and never had a difficulty FCing this). I'll decrease it though... and decrease the circle size (personally hates low overroll for Insane. Looks messy)
00:25:79 (1) - Oh, and can you fix the timing section to be right on top of the end of the spinner? Thanks in advance
00:39:10 (4) - add a clap too
And how many live BATs are left to mod this map now? (7 BATs have modded already)
P.S Actually, lower the life drain by 3 (all the way to half), circle size by 1, and overroll by 1. This should be fine, right?
P.S 2:
General comments: This map suffers from bad spacing, so MF please learn from other maps about distance consistency.Does this includes me as well? because
01:27:47 (5,6,7) - I'm struggling with this part. It feels kinda random now, but if I fix it, it would look weird.... Need HELP
God, I wish I could be a good mapper
[Easy]
01:18:50 (1,2,3) - Um.. Very messy
01:31:95 (1,2) - ^
bmin11's Insane
Um.. Offset should be changed to 4482 (to match the other difficulties)
Also. For all 4 difficulties, set a preview point.
I'd put it at 00:44:85
PM me after you're done, and I'll bubble this. Really good job
01:18:50 (1,2,3) - Um.. Very messy
01:31:95 (1,2) - ^
bmin11's Insane
Um.. Offset should be changed to 4482 (to match the other difficulties)
Also. For all 4 difficulties, set a preview point.
I'd put it at 00:44:85
PM me after you're done, and I'll bubble this. Really good job
Topic Starter
Fixed :D Thank you!! >A<//
Looks nice
Topic Starter
Thank you ~ >A<///
Yup.
YES!!
Ah.... I really luv This song!! so much!!! >w<
so, I make myself a beatmap....
Accept it!!!!!!
Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [Nanda].osu
so, I make myself a beatmap....
Accept it!!!!!!
Download: BJJ - First Kiss (MoonFragrance) [Nanda].osu
this map is actually old enough to be remapped. Give it a shot >_>nanda2009 wrote:
Ah.... I really luv This song!! so much!!! >w<
so, I make myself a beatmap....
Accept it!!!!!!