1. Armin's Normal~ (2,88 stars, 199 notes)
2. Hard (4,36 stars, 351 notes)

Armin wrote:

A me piace la Hard: bravissimo! *_*
Anche se è nel graveyard (nel caso decidessi di riprendere a mapparla) ti metto una stella

Yumiko wrote:

Hard

00:36:24 (3) - (nazi) spostalo un quadretto in basso (e uno a sinistra) Fixed by turning off Grid Snap
00:45:62 (2) - (nazi) lo sposterei due quadretti a destra... Fixed
00:46:55 (4) -... e questo due a sinistra, in modo che ci sia la stessa distanza tra 1, 2, 3 e 4. Nel caso li hai messi apposta così ignora questi due "consigli" xD Fixed
01:07:18 (4) - lo allontanerei un pò di più dal (3) Fixed
01:26:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (nazi) un quadretto a sinistra Fixed
01:38:82 (4) - (nazi) avvicinalo leggermente al (3) usando il ds e sposta i cerchi successivi di conseguenza Fixed
01:50:07 (1) - lo allontanerei un pò dal due Not fixed
01:53:82 (7) - se non fosse per il fatto che il suo suono è piuttosto basso, credo che suonerebbe un pò male. Prova a togliere la ripetizione e magari ad allungare semplicemente lo slider Fixed
02:26:40 (1) - toglierei il new combo qui Not fixed
02:26:87 (1) - lo toglierei anche qui, ma è solo un consiglio Fixed
02:30:38 (1) - idem qui (sono solo suggerimenti D:) Not fixed
02:39:29 (1) - andrebbe allontanato un pò dal 4, però poi non sarebbe più al centro dei 4 circles, vedi un pò tu come modificarlo (e se farlo) Fixed
02:44:21 (1) - andrebbe allontanato anche questo dall'(1), puoi provare a distanziare maggiormente entrambi l'uno dall'altro Fixed
03:17:96 (1) - idem qui Not Fixed

tieff wrote:

Try 8 348 ms offset.

[Armin's Normal]
00:14:44 (6) - Htsounds? Fixed!
00:35:30 (1,2,3) - Spacing? Fixed!
01:07:17 (2,3) - ^ I don't see spacing problems o.o
01:23:11 (2,3) - Nazi. Spacing. Fixed!
02:18:19 (1) - Finish instead whistle. Fixed!
02:22:87 (4) - Whistle. Fixed!

tieff wrote:

Try 8 348 ms offset. Done, sounds good!

[Hard]
02:10:81 (1) - This note should be here 02:10:87. (1/8, yellow tick) Done
02:15:50 (4) - New combo. Done
02:26:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice whistles. :D
02:47:61 (7) - Delete note. Done

Nice map, starred. Thanks :3

James2250 wrote:

hard:
00:10:69 (4) - take a repeat off?
00:14:44 (8) - ^ These two are following the music, not the voice, it sounds a bit weird without repeats D:
00:21:94 (8) -line endpoint up with 4 Fixed
00:51:00 (4) -align end of slider with start? Done
01:12:33 (5) -align with 1? Done
02:16:43 (3) - extend 1/4? Done
03:04:12 (3) - take a repeat off? Done
3:23:348 this break is slightly too long for me but ok I know, but I really didn't know how to map that part :'(
03:48:19 (4) - remove from under previous notes? Already fixed :3
why is there a break at the end of the song? no need for it :P Again, it's for the video :3

very nicely made map :) pretty much everything I said is just my own suggestions of things u could do
have a star :P Thanks! :D

mrtn wrote:

try offset 7164 8348 sounds good enough imo D:

[hard]
00:39:29 - insert break here or map until the next combo I don't think a break is needed here
01:00:61 - reinsert break Done
01:08:58 - ^ Done
01:12:57 - ^ Done
02:03:66 - ^ Done
02:26:62 (1,2,3,4,5) - the snapping here is really weird. snap it to lvl3 grid. Not really a problem but ok..
02:39:99 - reinsert break Done
02:51:94 - insert break here or map until the next combo No need to
03:13:74 - reinsert break Done
03:23:23 - reinsert break, also this break is kinda long... perhaps try mapping a part of it? I'll see what I can do when I have time
03:58:26 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove new combos No
04:02:25 - remove this break No, already explained why in previous posts D:

starred

Lizbeth wrote:

[hard]
01:18:42 (4) - remove this note and see if u like, sounds better imo I don't really hear the difference to be honest D:
01:37:17 (1) - if this is a jump, is confusing, isnt predictable No, my mistake. Fixed
02:11:74 (1,2,3,4) - ? D:
02:55:92 (1) - end this slider at 02:56:39
02:56:62 - add a note But I like that slider D:
03:01:31 (3) - i think sounds better if u remove this note But I like this note
03:22:99 - Why dont end the beatmap here? just suggesting But I like the final part

also the same with normal, the breaks, to many short breaks


cya good luck n_n
star

HarryOrunitia wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

02:11:74 (1,2,3,4) - ? D:

Lizbeth wrote:

HarryOrunitia wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

02:11:74 (1,2,3,4) - ? D:

lol my mistake forget it, is nothing n_nU

animask wrote:

[Hard]
Maybe increase circle size by 1? I'm afraid some parts would be too confusing if I do.
00:10:69 (4) - Take out 1 repeat No D:
00:14:44 (8) - ^ ^
01:18:19 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't seem to match the lyrics...only 4 5 and 6 match the drums...fix this Doesn't have to match the lyrics D:
02:15:61 (1,2,3,4) - I think these could go on the 1/4th beat divisor Fixed
04:00:61 (1) - Whats with the break after this? delete it Already explained why the break is there in my previous posts. Is it THAT bothering?

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:33:42 (1) - Move the pink slider here and end on the white to the left Ok, fixed.
03:13:03 (5) - Take out the whistle at the end? Fixed.

Breeze wrote:

hi HarryOrunitia Hi! :D
OFFSET:1551 Done

[Hard]
large circle for more interesting please :) Ok, ok, this is like the 40869709730947th person asking for bigger circles, so I guess I have no choice XD
00:39:168 - add break Nah D:
01:33:660 - 01:47:488 - add some clap among them for more rigoroso Done
02:27:098 (5) - a little confused, but it doesn't a big problem
03:01:316 (3) - seem to be match nothing, delete it? and short (2) from 2 repeat to 1 repeat It's following the background music.


great map~
star!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Hard~
03:21:12 (1) - Shorten this spinner to the white tick. Done

Don't add a break at the end. A long time ago I've tried placing a break at the end and if I remember correctly, my osu crashed once it was finished during regular gameplay.
What you could do is go to Design > Sprite Library > Add the bscap0000 picture > Fade it all the way and Scale it to it's smallest form. Make sure you have Diff. Specific checked so it doesn't follow in Normal.
I'd add the picture at 04:06:70 so you can see the person's face at the end~
Your idea is quite nice, but it's too much work. I'll just remove the break completely, too many people are complaining about it. I guess if someone wants to see the video they'll just get it on youtube.

Great maps~

fartownik wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:316 (3) - Add 1 repeat with Whistle hitsound. Oh, finally someone who actually follows the repeat pattern instead of asking them to remove it \ç^ç/ I love you.
01:32:723 - Add a note. It fits but it's too complicated to space that part again
01:32:840 - ^ ^
03:04:129 (3) - Add a repeat. Done

~Starry

Symbolic wrote:

[Hard]

Put Circle Size 1 bigger. Yeah, yeah, done already... ._.
Use smaller spacing in the chorus where the speed-ups are. Uhm no, that's how it's supposed to be.
01:06:23 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Put these 1 level 3 grid up. Done
01:34:36 (6) - New combo. No
01:35:30 (10) - ^ ^
01:35:53 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:39:28 (5) - New combo. ^
03:23:23 (BREAK) - A 21 second long break is too much.. Map something in it to make it shorter. I don't think it's that long. The song is full of very short breaks so it shouldn't be that bothering.
03:58:26 (1) - Remove new combo. No.
03:58:73 (1) - ^ ^
03:59:20 (1) - ^ ^
03:59:67 (1) - ^ ^
04:02:25 (BREAK) - Remove this break.. ...


Nice map,
Starred *

HarryOrunitia wrote:

P.S: Armin's Normal~ STAYS Armin's Normal~, if the character ~ doesn't cause problems to the game.