Pussycat Dolls feat. A.R. Rahman - Jay Ho! · forum

lthefuryl

Joined September 2008

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lthefuryl 2009-05-11T13:37:06+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 23 maggio 2009 at 14.24.42

Artist: Pussycat Dolls feat. A.R. Rahman
Title: Jay Ho!
BPM: 136,22
Filesize: 7005kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4,88 stars, 610 notes)
Normal (4,24 stars, 373 notes)

Download: Pussycat Dolls feat. A.R. Rahman - Jay Ho!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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lol my second beatmap in two weeks...i hope that u enjoy

(and sorry for my very bad english)

Last edited by lthefuryl 2009-05-23T12:24:51+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

fuffolo

139 posts

Joined January 2009

fuffolo 2009-05-12T21:03:28+00:00

Hey Fury!

Check this out!

http://freeringtones365.net/wp-content/ ... lliott.jpg

Unless it's ok could you use this: http://www.wallpaperbase.com/wallpapers ... olls_5.jpg

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

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lthefuryl 2009-05-12T21:08:28+00:00

fuffolo wrote:
Hey Fury!

Check this out!

http://freeringtones365.net/wp-content/ ... lliott.jpg

Unless it's ok could you use this: http://www.wallpaperbase.com/wallpapers ... olls_5.jpg

ty for help

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2009-05-13T21:10:04+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Mafiamaster

osu! Alumni

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Mafiamaster 2009-05-13T21:22:35+00:00

Normal~

01:37:43 (7,8,9,10) - Move this a tick to the left, then a tick up so it'll be lined up with 6.
02:25:22 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Move all this a tick to the right. So the combo 1,2, and 3 will form a perfect triangle.
03:01:12 (1) - Move 1 tick closer to 2.

Hard~

00:24:54 (1) - Move 1 tick to the left.
00:26:08 (8,9) - 1 tick too close to each other.

BG pl0x
Great job!

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-13T21:36:22+00:00

i've putting BG :O bug??

timotmcc

24 posts

Joined September 2008

timotmcc 2009-05-14T00:43:27+00:00

Watch the jumps on hard. Some are a little unreal.

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-05-14T01:31:11+00:00

Offset = 299 please, I'm pretty sure of this, Where its at now, is wrong

Normal
00:16:15 (2,3,4,5,6) - move up just a bit
00:21:00 (6) - this too

00:33:77 (5) - new combo?
00:44:78 (6) - wanna make this rebound once
00:48:08 (5) - new combo?
00:59:76 (6) - snap this for normal's sake
01:03:725 - wanna add a note here
01:09:01 (6) - new combo

01:20:90 (8) - to the right a bit
01:23:76 (7) - maybe a new combo, not really sure
01:37:20 (6) - new combo

01:54:37 (6) - New combo for sure, 12 is too long for normal
01:58:34 (6) - new combo

02:37:54 (8) - new combo
02:48:11 (6) - ^
02:57:58 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move up a bit

Hard - Change it too insane
01:19:38 (7) - ^
00:21:89 (4) - new combo

Woah, nice for second map, go pro dude

Sleep Powder

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Joined October 2008

Sleep Powder 2009-05-14T02:59:34+00:00

[Hard]
00:56:25 (1) - Hitsound here?
01:36:11 (3) - Move to the left by 1 with level 3 grid
03:36:80 (1) - Add a note here? Unless you don't want to

I like the song
Couldn't find much really...good job

Shinxyn

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2008

Shinxyn 2009-05-14T03:25:58+00:00

Normal-
00:06:48 (3) - add clap to end?
00:21:01 (6) - a tick up?
00:54:71 (6) - new combo?
01:24:44 (9) - ^
01:37:21 (6) - down a tick? or 7,8,9,10 up a tick
01:39:64 (3) - new combo? and remove clap from start
01:43:16 (3) - ^
01:53:51 (3) - ^
01:57:03 (2) - ^
02:13:55 (5) - add clap to end?
02:16:42 (6,7) - right a tick?
02:38:88 (10) - new combo?
02:43:28 (3) - ^
02:49:01 (9) - ^
03:03:99 (9) - up + left a tick

Hard- Shouldn't this be like.. insane?
00:19:03 (8) - new combo?
00:22:78 (8) - ^
00:32:69 (8) - ^ or at (12)
01:51:09 (9) - ^
02:33:48 (7) - ^
02:46:59 (4) - down a tick?
02:50:11 (1,2,3) - place in very center? (same with all of them after this)
I can't say I like so many triplets, and the jumps are kinda extreme, so its kinda overmapped, but its fine I guess.
And just a tad too much hitsounds in my opinion.

Pretty solid map, so I can give you a star

lthefuryl

183 posts

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Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-14T12:00:01+00:00

ok i've fixed all things of osuplayer111, Mafiamaster, EEeee, animask and shinxyn...ty so much

Lesjuh

Elite Mapper

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Joined October 2008

Lesjuh 2009-05-14T14:15:01+00:00

Both difficulties look good to me.

I would consider making an easy diff because the spinners, some jumps and strange patterns still could be hard for less good players. As I said, it's not needed.

Ask a BAT, I'm sure you will get this ranked soon

lele94

lele94 2009-05-14T14:24:50+00:00

allora fury, sempre la grid level a 3 e fai queste correzioni.

Normal:
22:322 (1)= 3 a destra
2:41:982 (1) = 1 a destra e regola bene la distance snap del (2) successivo.
3:07:055 (1) = 1 a destra.

Insane:
1:52:617 (1)= 2 a destra
1:53:057 (1) = 2 a sinistra.
Apparte questo x me va bene, aggiungi qualche altro suono ed è ok

Alace

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Alace 2009-05-14T15:02:43+00:00

Someone told me the song name is Jai Ho
i am not sure anyway

<Normal>
spacing is fine

(hitsounds)
plz use the hitsound patten before 00:27(sounds good)
Delete those clap+whistle XD
(hint)
follow the music
If the music is heavy-------> using heavy hitsounds
usually White tick(full divisor) is heavy part of a song
anyway a stable hitsound patten is better than random hitsounds

<insane>
First make a stable hitsounds patten

00:17:69 (1.2.3.4) a bit hard to read IMO
00:20~00:21 i think bad jump there (see pic1)
some other jumps have the same problerm
those jumps are hard to read
I have 2 ways to make the jump better (pic2 pic3)
Pic2 stack the full divisor only 1/2 divisor jump
pic3 increase the full divisor`s distance
(btw i add a new combo at 00:21:88 (4).it looks better)

The overall is good
shoot my star for you

mican

mican 2009-05-14T15:06:05+00:00

Alace is a P teacher XD

lthefuryl

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lthefuryl 2009-05-14T15:27:38+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

tobebuta

123 posts

Joined June 2008

tobebuta 2009-05-15T00:04:30+00:00

both good map

Normal - though 99% distance is constant
00:23:643 (4,6) not same distance
00:27:167 (3,5) not same distance

Insane - I guess that jumping is good
00:55:136 ~ 00:56:017 make a triangle,and
00:56:237 put a circle centrally
This is better for a look and feels like being easy to judge it personally

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　　しーし─Ｊ

lthefuryl

183 posts

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Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-15T01:15:34+00:00

ty tobebuta i've fixed all things

ty

Gabi

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Joined December 2008

Gabi 2009-05-15T13:43:59+00:00

just gonna nazi i tiny bit

[Normal]
im not gonna nazi this cause i don't know which ones are intentional and which arent, other then that it's good

if you feel like it isn't fine, msg me on irc and ill help you over the chat.

[Insane]
00:23:42 (3,4,5,6,7) - move 1 grid down (level 3)
00:33:99 (6,7,8,9,10) - move 1 grid down and fix rest of combo
01:38:30 (7) - improperly stacked, fix it (you might have to remove grid snap)
02:19:70 (4) - a small part of this slider is sticking out of the actual screen. you should probably move the whole combo up 1 grid

great fun map and nice song

starz*

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-15T18:55:53+00:00

Gabi wrote:
just gonna nazi i tiny bit

[Normal]
im not gonna nazi this cause i don't know which ones are intentional and which arent, other then that it's good

if you feel like it isn't fine, msg me on irc and ill help you over the chat.

[Insane]
00:23:42 (3,4,5,6,7) - move 1 grid down (level 3)
00:33:99 (6,7,8,9,10) - move 1 grid down and fix rest of combo
01:38:30 (7) - improperly stacked, fix it (you might have to remove grid snap)
02:19:70 (4) - a small part of this slider is sticking out of the actual screen. you should probably move the whole combo up 1 grid

great fun map and nice song

starz*

ty so much gabi

i've fixed all

Starrodkirby86

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Starrodkirby86 2009-05-15T22:49:54+00:00

Jay ho.

[Normal]:
00:41:26 (6,7) - Whistle?
00:47:86 (4) - Hm...Clap?
00:51:17 (3) - Beginning slider gets clap?
00:58:66 (5) - Fix bugged slider.
01:03:72 (7) - Stack under endpoint slider (6) and maybe a Finish?
01:08:35 (5) - Whistle~ on the whole slider!
02:09:35 (5) - Holy crap, you REALLY gotta fix THIS bugged slider.

[Insane]:
00:10:87 (1,2) - Hm, move 1 down on Grid Level 3?
00:17:69 (7) - New combo.
00:19:01 (6) - Remove new combo.
00:24:52 (1,1,1) - Either remove the second and third (1)'s combo, or get the other "Jay ho!" before it with consecutive new combos.
00:25:29 (2) - If you removed the new combos above, then add this one.
01:21:78 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:24:23 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This last bit may prove confusing.

Mmh, Insane is a tad bit over 10million. That may be of some concern. I'm sure it's fine as long as some BAT checks it out coolly.

Sorry for the delay. Your map is great and all, it's more fun than your first.

Starrz

eee

692 posts

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eee 2009-05-16T17:41:33+00:00

hi, sorry I'm late~
here's a nazi mod, so you don't have to fix some of the following if you want

[Normal]
00:16:15 (2,3,4,5,6) - move this up one level 3 grid
01:03:72 (7) - stack this under the end of (6), I recommend turning off both distance and grid snap to move it under (6)
02:27:63 (10,11,12) - move up one level 3 grid

[Insane]
00:21:22 (2,3) - new combo both of these hitcircles, you did it later in the map, why not here

. . . . . that is all
I kinda see some stacking issues on the end of some sliders, but it's fine with meee, except the one in normal (01:03:72 (7) - this one should be stacked)

this map is cool
star4you

lthefuryl

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Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-16T17:52:29+00:00

ty so much eee

fixed

Doomsday

Featured Artist

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