1. Gone (4.9 stars, 1298 notes)

Ultimate wrote:

Checked timing : )
gl met de map gozah!
ziet er al vet uit ^^

http://puu.sh/2FOkO.osu

Kyshiro wrote:

Stan SB pls

Blue Dragon wrote:

kyshiro cuts splorg

[Luanny] wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

kyshiro cuts splorg

kyshiro splorgs cuts
this must hurt

inverness wrote:

just splorg it

[Luanny] wrote:

ok since it will be hard as fuck to find mods I will mod kshro's parts lol
(he modded mine as well)

Use this: http://puu.sh/2UOhF.rar

00:54:628 (6) - why didn't you make this like 00:52:743 (1) -
01:49:490 (12,1) - more spacing
02:11:742 (1) - finish pls
02:13:628 (3) -diesn't fit vocals, fix pl0x fdsafsadf this fits the music though
02:14:485 (1,2,3) - not symmetric and fix the angles /nazi
02:55:457 (1,2,3,4) - rotate -8° ?
02:55:628 (3) - FINISH
03:15:171 (3,4) - this sounds weird.. invert it, make 03:15:171 (3) 3/4 and (4) 1/2 just like 03:16:542 (3,4) -
04:23:398 (1) - finish damn
04:45:340 (1) - afsdgasdfasdfashd
05:07:280 (6) - y u forgot finish

btw FIX YOUR BLANKETS
<3

PPL MOD THIS MAP PLS

cheesiest wrote:

17:03 cheesiest: speedapp
17:03 Kyshiro: speedapp same shit ok
17:03 cheesiest: HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
17:03 cheesiest: k
17:03 Kyshiro: woo
17:03 Kyshiro: already have 6/12 kd
17:03 Kyshiro: 7 now cuz im starring again
17:03 cheesiest: make some noise
17:03 cheesiest: while ur at it
17:03 cheesiest: idek
17:03 Kyshiro: did that
17:03 Kyshiro: like a baus
17:03 Kyshiro: moaned as loud as i could as i pressed the motherfucking button
17:04 cheesiest: irc mod
17:04 cheesiest: k?!?!?!?
17:04 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/244230 Stan SB - Let This Go (KSHRO CUT) [Gone]]
17:04 Kyshiro: okaey
17:04 Kyshiro: goddangit lu is off
17:05 cheesiest: 00:39:543 (3) - wghhy
17:05 cheesiest: why
17:05 Kyshiro: the overlap
17:05 Kyshiro: ?
17:05 cheesiest: yes
17:05 Kyshiro: cuz kshro™
17:05 cheesiest: 00:46:400 (7) - why offbeat
17:05 cheesiest: nigger
17:05 cheesiest: 00:46:057 (6) -
17:05 cheesiest: THIS IS THE 1/1 SLIDER
17:05 cheesiest: NOT 7
17:05 Kyshiro: LOL
17:06 Kyshiro: PLS
17:06 Kyshiro: okay fixing
17:06 cheesiest: or even
17:06 cheesiest: 00:46:400 (7) -
17:06 cheesiest: longer
17:06 cheesiest: up to where
17:06 cheesiest: 00:47:428 (2) - is
17:06 cheesiest: where it starts or w/e
17:06 Kyshiro: ill make the slider @ 6
17:06 Kyshiro: followed by a note
17:06 Kyshiro: 2 notes.
17:06 cheesiest: 00:47:428 (2) - this is actually 3/4 nigger
17:06 cheesiest: what aer you doing
17:07 Kyshiro: wat no it isnt
17:07 cheesiest: umm yes
17:07 cheesiest: 3/4 twice
17:08 cheesiest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759666
17:08 cheesiest: 00:47:428 (2) -
17:08 Kyshiro: wellshit
17:08 Kyshiro: okaey
17:08 Kyshiro: didnt add a repeat tho
17:09 cheesiest: make it 3/4
17:09 Kyshiro: i did
17:09 cheesiest: then 3/4 aways, 1/1 slider
17:09 Kyshiro: http://puu.sh/2UQv2.jpg
17:09 cheesiest: yes
17:09 cheesiest: and idek pattern lol http://puu.sh/2UQw1.png
17:10 cheesiest: 00:49:657 (1) - this is so awkward
17:10 Kyshiro: nuh im leaving the (3) where it was lolol
17:10 Kyshiro: it actually is. fahk
17:11 Kyshiro: fixd
17:11 cheesiest: UMM
17:11 cheesiest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759669
17:12 cheesiest: starting at
17:12 cheesiest: 00:49:143 (6) -
17:12 cheesiest: do that
17:12 cheesiest: up to
17:12 cheesiest: 00:52:228
17:12 cheesiest: 00:49:657 circle
17:12 cheesiest: 00:49:657 - circle
17:12 cheesiest: 00:49:828 - 1/1 slider
17:12 Kyshiro: wat
17:12 cheesiest: 00:50:514 - 1/1 slider
17:12 cheesiest: 00:51:200 - 1/1 slider
17:13 cheesiest: 00:51:885 (11) - circle
17:13 cheesiest: :-)
17:14 Kyshiro: 00:49:657 (1,2,3) - circles
17:14 Kyshiro: no 1/1sliders pls
17:14 cheesiest: oh well
17:14 Kyshiro: and that pattern after that is actually okay
17:14 Kyshiro: both ways work
17:15 cheesiest: 00:57:028 (5,6,7,8) -
17:15 cheesiest: wtf
17:15 cheesiest: r
17:15 cheesiest: u
17:15 cheesiest: doing
17:15 cheesiest: bitch this is so fucking basic
17:15 cheesiest: i always knew
17:15 Kyshiro: following the music
17:15 Kyshiro: not the vocals
17:15 Kyshiro: dickfuck
17:15 cheesiest: the music is building up
17:15 cheesiest: nig
17:15 cheesiest: do something
17:15 cheesiest: ~exciting~
17:16 Kyshiro: this is
17:16 Kyshiro: ~splorgciting~
17:16 cheesiest: something
17:17 cheesiest: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759676 ~exciting~]
17:17 Kyshiro: i actually
17:17 Kyshiro: really like those sliders
17:17 Kyshiro: lol
17:17 Kyshiro: it kind of works with the music building up
17:17 Kyshiro: 01:00:457 (1) - shit got more intense over here
17:18 cheesiest: 01:01:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - delete
17:18 Kyshiro: wat
17:18 cheesiest: srsly
17:18 cheesiest: ez pattern
17:18 cheesiest: not fun
17:18 cheesiest: i mean like
17:18 Kyshiro: yes it is
17:18 cheesiest: if i can do it in big black
17:18 cheesiest: i can do it here ez pz
17:18 Kyshiro: LOL
17:18 Kyshiro: OK SO ANY PATTERN YOU CAN PLAY I SHOULDNT USE
17:18 Kyshiro: ok
17:18 cheesiest: 01:00:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - copy again
17:18 Kyshiro: k.
17:18 cheesiest: to finish measure
17:19 Kyshiro: i'll mix up a bit so it gets harder
17:19 cheesiest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759682 plz
17:19 Kyshiro: but
17:19 Kyshiro: http://puu.sh/2UQTF.jpg
17:19 Kyshiro: )-:
17:19 cheesiest: no what r u doing
17:19 Kyshiro: LOL PLS
17:20 Kyshiro: auysdgfkljasjdfasfd
17:20 Kyshiro: sec
17:20 Kyshiro: lemme fix this
17:22 cheesiest: where i have 01:01:828 (9,10,11,12)
17:22 cheesiest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759690
17:22 cheesiest: something
17:22 cheesiest: exciting
17:22 cheesiest: idk
17:22 Kyshiro: waittt
17:23 Kyshiro: im keeping the square thing pattern though
17:23 Kyshiro: thats just kshro
17:23 cheesiest: gayshiro
17:23 Kyshiro: no u
17:23 Kyshiro: extended the notes by 2
17:23 Kyshiro: removed 1 slider
17:23 Kyshiro: moved stuff around a bit
17:23 cheesiest: k
17:23 Kyshiro: its better now
17:23 cheesiest: 01:04:914 (5,6,7,8) - kick slider
17:23 cheesiest: sounds the same as
17:23 cheesiest: 01:03:543 (5,5) -
17:23 cheesiest: so why change it
17:24 cheesiest: 01:15:205 (4) - nc lel
17:24 Kyshiro: possible, but it feels better to have a slightly longer streams like this
17:26 cheesiest: 01:15:205 (4,1,2,3,4) - [http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=P33dAEtv3io#t=110s what are you doing]
17:26 Kyshiro: what is luanny doing ***
17:26 Kyshiro: thats luanny's part
17:27 Kyshiro: discuss that later with lu )-:
17:27 Kyshiro: you have the SB right?
17:27 cheesiest: no
17:27 Kyshiro: the names right bottom
17:27 Kyshiro: redl lol
17:27 Kyshiro: or well
17:27 Kyshiro: basically
17:27 Kyshiro: the breakcore parts are lu's
17:27 cheesiest: what is breakcore
17:27 cheesiest: what is dnb
17:27 cheesiest: i cannot
17:27 Kyshiro: LOL
17:27 cheesiest: DIFFERENIATE
17:27 Kyshiro: 01:49:800 > kshro part again
17:28 cheesiest: wow srsly
17:28 cheesiest: fix
17:28 cheesiest: link
17:28 Kyshiro: till 03:39:514
17:28 Kyshiro: LOL
17:28 cheesiest: umm
17:28 Kyshiro: 01:49:800 -
17:28 cheesiest: kyshiro
17:28 Kyshiro: k
17:28 Kyshiro: yes cheese
17:29 cheesiest: 01:56:657 (1,2,3,4) - [http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=P33dAEtv3io#t=110s what are you doing]
17:29 Kyshiro: LOLLL
17:29 Kyshiro: the dinosaur.
17:29 cheesiest: 01:56:657 (1,2,3,4) - [http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=P33dAEtv3io#t=111s what are you doing]
17:29 cheesiest: o-l d-m a-n
17:29 Kyshiro: thats just kshro
17:29 Kyshiro: idk
17:29 Kyshiro: i fucking love those patterns ok
17:29 cheesiest: gayshiro
17:30 Kyshiro: no
17:30 Kyshiro: gshro or kshro
17:30 Kyshiro: not gayshiro
17:30 cheesiest: twishiro
17:30 cheesiest: twyshiro
17:30 Kyshiro: cheesydick
17:30 Kyshiro: pls
17:30 cheesiest: have you even eaten dick cheese
17:30 Kyshiro: fahk no
17:30 cheesiest: 02:57:000 (1,2,3,4) -
17:30 cheesiest: again
17:30 cheesiest: lol
17:31 Kyshiro: yup lol
17:31 Kyshiro: well shit niqa i just love those patterns
17:31 Kyshiro: and it doesnt originate from the big black if thats what you think lol
17:31 cheesiest: umm
17:32 cheesiest: obviously not
17:32 cheesiest: but it's like srsly easiest pattern ever
17:32 Kyshiro: doesnt matter
17:33 cheesiest: 04:33:683 (4) - WOW MAKES THIS CIRCLES
17:34 Kyshiro: y
17:34 Kyshiro: i like sliders
17:34 cheesiest: its so much better
17:34 Kyshiro: )-:
17:34 cheesiest: because
17:34 cheesiest: it fits the feeling of the song
17:34 Kyshiro: well, so do the sliders
17:34 Kyshiro: imo
17:34 Kyshiro: lol
17:34 cheesiest: umm stop
17:35 Kyshiro: wot
17:36 cheesiest: 06:00:422 (4) - nc
17:36 cheesiest: 06:01:280 (7) - nc
17:36 Kyshiro: lu part
17:36 Kyshiro: breakcore
17:36 cheesiest: its just nc
17:37 Kyshiro: okay lol
17:37 cheesiest: like srs lel
17:37 Kyshiro: 06:02:137 (1) - remove here i suppose?
17:37 Kyshiro: or
17:37 Kyshiro: not
17:37 cheesiest: no u r dumb
17:37 cheesiest: <3
17:37 Kyshiro: yes i am
17:39 cheesiest: 06:57:080 (1) - map
17:39 cheesiest: not spinner
17:39 Kyshiro: o just a quick FYI
17:39 cheesiest: end mod thank you
17:39 Kyshiro: 05:07:351 - thats where my part ended, all after that is lu
17:39 Kyshiro: well, thats up to lu whether she'll map it or not

1. BG's dimension are kinda weird, try to resize it.

1. 00:39:028 (2,3) - I don't like this overlap much, I'd try to avoid it if I were you, though it's your choice.
2. 01:10:405 (9,10,11) - I understand the idea of the pattern but these overlaps are really ugly to my eyes.
3. 01:15:205 (4,5,6) - This pattern is pretty hard to read at first sight, try making a slider instead.
4. 01:40:748 (8,10) - Stacking here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
5. 02:53:400 (1,1,1,1) - This new combo spam here is really needed? I'd remove it.
6. 02:58:027 (4) - Unsnapped slider end, please resnap it properly.
7. 03:36:427 (4) - Unsnapped slider end, please resnap it properly.
8. 03:48:767 (4) - New combo due to slider velocity change.
9. 04:02:653 (4) - This slider is completely hidden by the previous one, please move it somewhere else.
10. 04:55:625 (3) - Unsnapped slider end, please resnap it properly.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. BG's dimension are kinda weird, try to resize it.

It was a bit off, just realized that, resized to 1366x768 (16:9, acceptable according to the ranking criteria)

~Gone~

1. 00:39:028 (2,3) - I don't like this overlap much, I'd try to avoid it if I were you, though it's your choice. This is kind of a part of my style, I like it
2. 02:53:400 (1,1,1,1) - This new combo spam here is really needed? I'd remove it. It feels so good though lol, however if there are more people that suggest this I will remove it
3. 02:58:027 (4) - Unsnapped slider end, please resnap it properly. Fixed
4. 03:36:427 (4) - Unsnapped slider end, please resnap it properly. Fixed
5. 04:55:625 (3) - Unsnapped slider end, please resnap it properly. Fixed

Cool map you've got there, good job you two.

1. 01:10:405 (9,10,11) - I understand the idea of the pattern but these overlaps are really ugly to my eyes.
2. 01:15:205 (4,5,6) - This pattern is pretty hard to read at first sight, try making a slider instead.
3. 01:40:748 (8,10) - Stacking here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
4. 03:48:767 (4) - New combo due to slider velocity change.
5. 04:02:653 (4) - This slider is completely hidden by the previous one, please move it somewhere else.

RikiH_ wrote:

hi

Gone

00:23:085 (2) - A NC would fit maybe Yeah why not
00:47:943 (3) - Why so straight? No idea lol, curved now
01:05:600 (5) - Clap+finish instead of clap only? Nice
02:06:257 (1,2) - Ugly, this way is better imo Not really ugly, but okay, fixed

02:13:628 (3) - Too straight... It also overlaps with the following slider (3) Fixed overlap Straight because it fits here
02:21:171 (1,2,3) - It overlaps with the previous slider during playmode, goddamn stack leniency. Move it a bit lolol okay
02:40:542 (1,2) - Uhm Fine..

02:49:285 (2,3) - Ctrl+g on (2) and arrange (3) this way for a better flow I actually like how it is

03:26:314 (2) - 368|288 and the pattern will look better nazi pls ok fixed lol
03:39:171 (5) - Clap+finish instead of clap only? yeah
04:44:998 (6) - Clap instead of whistle Drum whistle sounds so much better here honestly
05:02:312 (2,3,4) - This happens because stack leniency loves you. Move it a bit right fahk stack lenincnucdtcyghjfasdf

05:04:540 (1,2) - I think these are stacked a bit badly Theyre fine


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Nothing else. Epic song, epic map. Take my star. We need more songs like this on this game and less shit.

RikiH_ wrote:

We need more songs like this on this game and less shit.

RikiH_ wrote:

01:11:090 (11) - Clap at the beginning?
01:15:205 (1) - Uhm, maybe a NC would make the slowdown more readable
01:21:890 (11) - Clap at the end
01:27:548 (11) - Clap at the beginning
01:33:033 (10) - Clap? (I'm not sure about this)
01:37:833 (6,7) - This is the only pattern that I couldn't read during testplay...
01:38:519 (8) - Clap at the beginning
01:44:005 (12) - Clap at te beginning
01:49:490 (12) - ^ Please, I think you understood where to put claps :V
03:44:652 (10) - Clap at the beginning, blah, blah, blah, I won't get nazi with it
06:12:765 (12) - ...
06:47:051 (4) - Uhm, I can hear a 1/4 triplet, why you used a slider?
06:48:508 - I don't know how, but I'd add a note here
06:49:794 (4) - Ctrl+g?
06:56:651 (8) - Clap at the beginning
06:56:994 (9) - NC?

RikiH_ wrote:

hi

Gone

01:15:205 (1) - Uhm, maybe a NC would make the slowdown more readable ok
01:21:890 (11) - Clap at the end doesn't fit lel
01:27:548 (11) - Clap at the beginning ^
01:33:033 (10) - Clap? (I'm not sure about this) ^
01:37:833 (6,7) - This is the only pattern that I couldn't read during testplay... hm dunno no one complained about it hm i will see
01:38:519 (8) - Clap at the beginning doesn't fit
01:44:005 (12) - Clap at te beginning ^
01:49:490 (12) - ^ Please, I think you understood where to put claps :V ^
03:44:652 (10) - Clap at the beginning, blah, blah, blah, I won't get nazi with it ;___; stahp
06:12:765 (12) - ... ...
06:47:051 (4) - Uhm, I can hear a 1/4 triplet, why you used a slider? I like to undermap at the end. Just like the song fades out, the difficulty should as well
06:48:508 - I don't know how, but I'd add a note here nope
06:49:794 (4) - Ctrl+g? nah
06:56:651 (8) - Clap at the beginning nop
06:56:994 (9) - NC? ok

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Nothing else. Epic song, epic map. Take my star. We need more songs like this on this game and less shit.

• Kyshiro

1. 00:54:114 (5,6) - why you no
2. 00:57:028 (5,6,7,8) - it would be kinda cool if you made something like this instead (yes, (5) is a slider)
   
   Luanny
   
3. 01:15:205 (4) - please add a newcombo here to indicate slowdown. I've sliderbroken many times here. Also, you did it as well on 03:48:767 (1).
4. 01:21:548 (10) - Maybe remove the normal-hitnormal from the end of this slider? sounds really bad atm, imo
   
   Kyshiro
   
5. 01:49:800 (1) - this cut is bad and you should feel bad
6. 02:16:885 (5) - symmetry pls
7. 03:37:457 (1) - no reason for this new combo, imo
   
   Luanny
   
8. 06:31:622 (9) - I think you'll probably keep this for the lulz, but anyways I REALLY hope you add a new combo in here to indicate the jump (yes, it does help because we can actually identify the 1/2 square jump)
9. 06:47:908 (7) - Is this soft finish actually intentional? It sounds pretty weird here and I haven't seen it somewhere else, correct me if I'm wrong.

Blue Dragon wrote:

[Gone]

• Kyshiro

1. 00:54:114 (5,6) - why you no becuz i didn't want to symmetry the shit out of it )-: + i'd have to redo the following combo's so I kind of want to keep it like this
2. 00:57:028 (5,6,7,8) - it would be kinda cool if you made something like this instead (yes, (5) is a slider) liked what i did there, but this is just better yeah lol fixed
3. 01:49:800 (1) - this cut is bad and you should feel bad no u )-:
4. 02:16:885 (5) - symmetry pls ok done
5. 03:37:457 (1) - no reason for this new combo, imo idk lol removed

Perfect map and all of that blahblahblah. Probably nothing of interest in this post.

Blue Dragon wrote:

FC FIRST TRY NEVER FORGET R.I.P 22.05.2013

mod incoming soon

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[Gone]

Luanny

1. 01:15:205 (4) - please add a newcombo here to indicate slowdown. I've sliderbroken many times here. Also, you did it as well on 03:48:767 (1). ok love
2. 01:21:548 (10) - Maybe remove the normal-hitnormal from the end of this slider? sounds really bad atm, imo nope, love
   
   
   Luanny
   
3. 06:31:622 (9) - I think you'll probably keep this for the lulz, but anyways I REALLY hope you add a new combo in here to indicate the jump (yes, it does help because we can actually identify the 1/2 square jump) ok, squaremaster and love
4. 06:47:908 (7) - Is this soft finish actually intentional? It sounds pretty weird here and I haven't seen it somewhere else, correct me if I'm wrong. search better, it is everywhere, love

Perfect map and all of that blahblahblah. Probably nothing of interest in this post. thanks, love

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey.
I'll leave some suggestions here. Can be ignored aswell, you know

If we're taking 'bout how the start of the song goes, I'd better use 0.5 SV from here 00:22:057, imo song is too calm for 0.75.
You can start 0.75 section here 00:44:514, that will be more logical than using 0.75->0.85 startup I guess.
This is also fair for 05:18:251-05:51:165 section That could have been done, but the way it is now works just fine and I'm not planning on remapping it

00:52:743 (1,2) - you can make it like this, looks much better imo Looks perfectly fine imo, making this a ''perfect blanket'' would mean i'd have to ruin the spacing and flow here

SPOILER

01:53:914 (1,2) - same as for 01:16:919 (1,2) I've put these like this on purpose because imo it plays/looks good
02:06:257 (1,2) - ^
02:11:742 (1,2) - what do you think 'bout that?

SPOILER

02:37:800 (1,2) - maybe this way?

SPOILER

02:57:000 (1) - 1 grid to the right, and it will be right under (6)'s end This all happens because of the stacking leniency, it's actually fine the way it is
03:11:400 (4) - 1 grid downd for proper stacking
05:04:883 (2) - 1 grid right and 1 down for better stacking

This song is great. But, I guess, my mod is not But I hope it'll be helpfull

Good luck!

Thunderstorm wrote:

01:10:405 (9,10,11) - looks like a mess of spinners and a circle, maybe consider to respace this one in order to make it look better and do more readable?
01:16:919 (1,2) - these two can be overlapped more accurate and symmetrically imo
01:24:119 (9) - consider to move it away from the slider's body?
04:05:224 (4) - overlapping 04:05:567 (6) badly. Maybe consider to move it a bit away in order to make this pattern easier to read?
05:34:365 (8,9) - I'd better replace it w/ 1/2 slider starts where (8) is, 'cause no preconditions from music itself for two 1/4 sliders
05:52:365 (4) - badly overlapping 05:52:880 (6)
06:10:365 (1) - maybe this way?

SPOILER

06:56:994 (1) - I'd better start spinner from this tick instead of puttin' a note here

lkwr wrote:

take a star for your horrible and crappy map

Ayu wrote:

mod

00:28:228 (4,1) - Move (1) closer to (4)'s ending to keep the distance consistent k

02:41:914 (1) - stack is way too confusing here I don't think it's too confusing but I'll keep this in mind

03:26:314 (2) - (is this lu's part? FIX BLANKET DESU) Fix the blanket, the slider start should be somewhere around x:376 y:288 What do you mean Lu's part? read bottom right lolol, fixed

Got nothing more to say, Great map with awesome flows. Good luck with ranking

Ayu wrote:

01:09:033 (2) - 0,6x ds?

Teara wrote:

Very nice.

I personally am not to fond about the ton of 2 short sliders which makes a lot of appearances in the beatmap, but after a few plays, its pretty nice.

Good job here. The following are mostly just suggestions on my part and can be safely ignored.

[Gone]
00:39:543 (3) - Add a whistle in the middle to emphasize the drawn out lyrics. Sounds good
00:56:171 (4) - ^Same

03:11:914 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This area, I like what you did here, but after the second vocal repeat you switched back to instruments, I'd rather you stick to the vocals and make a 3rd long slider, IMO, it would fit a lot better.

Maybe try deleting 03:13:114 (1,2) - replacing it with a slider, then adding a hit-circle on 03:13:714 (x) - delete the next circles 03:14:314 (9,10) - then extend 03:13:800 (8) - to the next red tick 03:14:314 -

I like this a little more, even delete the circle at 03:13:714 (7) - still makes it fit a bit better, but this is just my opinion. So feel free to ignore I deleted the 2 notes as you suggested, right now it's 3 long sliders in a row, I partly applied it the way you suggested it

Between 03:17:914 - and 03:28:714 - the hitsound volume is a tad bit to loud, consider maybe making it a bit softer. Alright

04:31:626 (1,2,3) - <3 Finally someone who appreciates overlaps :3

04:37:112 (1,2,3,4) - This part would be also epic if you did the same as the above one, three sliders =p To be honest I really like what I did there, I think it's fine the way it is >:

Blue Dragon wrote:

finally!

[Luanny] wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

finally!

1. 03:41:910 (8) - why don't you map based on the song like this 03:40:538 (3,4) - because most of your part that have this beat, you mapped it like that :3
2. 05:20:994 (1) - remove whistle at the starting to keep it consistent and you should add a circle at 05:22:194 () - if you really want everything to be consistent here

03:34 HeatKai: lezgo
03:34 HeatKai: delete this osb "Stan SB - Let This Go (KSHRO CUT) (Kyshiro)"
03:35 Kyshiro: omg yes. i love you.
03:35 Kyshiro: deleted osb
03:36 Kyshiro: http://puu.sh/39ND7.png LOL
03:36 HeatKai: replied to her back
03:36 Kyshiro: okay :3
03:38 HeatKai: why the diff is gone
03:38 HeatKai: i mean
03:38 HeatKai: the difficulty's name
03:38 Kyshiro: just to be creative, past tense of go
03:39 Kyshiro: or well
03:39 Kyshiro: kind of
03:39 Kyshiro: it fits the song imo lol, was lu's idea originally
03:39 HeatKai: past tense of go
03:39 HeatKai: I never heard of it hahahaha XD
03:43 HeatKai: 00:39:028 (2) - I don't really like this overlap tho
03:43 HeatKai: make it curve downward and evade from overlapping
03:43 HeatKai: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797682
03:44 Kyshiro: okay, did that
03:47 HeatKai: 01:05:600 (5) - eargasm
03:47 HeatKai: I mean i like it
03:48 Kyshiro: lolol yeah :3
03:53 HeatKai: 01:49:490 (12) - add clap at the starting
03:54 Kyshiro: uh thats luanny's part i think she'll hate me if i touch her hitsounds
03:54 HeatKai: tell her
03:54 HeatKai: and see whether she likes it or not
03:55 HeatKai: 01:58:542 (2) - the ends hits the hp bar
03:56 Kyshiro: fixed
04:01 HeatKai: 03:20:314 (6) - move this at the middle
04:01 HeatKai: of the slider
04:01 HeatKai: blanket
04:01 HeatKai: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797700
04:02 Kyshiro: done
04:02 Kyshiro: adjusted the sliders a bit to get a better blanket
04:02 HeatKai: alright nice
04:10 HeatKai: 04:52:883 (5) - this you know why
04:11 Kyshiro: fixed
04:15 HeatKai: okay that's all

HeatKai wrote:

[Luanny's part]

1. 03:41:910 (8) - why don't you map based on the song like this 03:40:538 (3,4) - because most of your part that have this beat, you mapped it like that :3 Well I did this many time just because using 5 1/4 notes all the time is too repetitive so changing a bit won't kill anyome :3 just like here 01:12:462 (4,5,6) -
2. 05:20:994 (1) - remove whistle at the starting to keep it consistent and you should add a circle at 05:22:194 () - if you really want everything to be consistent here done and done~

HeatKai wrote:

alright checked everything again looks better :3
Here's your bubble #2 /o/

Teara wrote:

Ended up in WIP again, so moved it back to pending for you.

Nyquill wrote:

I can't say how happy I am that Kyshiro was willing to wait on Luanny for the fixes, shows that he really does care about the quality of his mapset and isn't just here for show.

Seriously, good work.

[Luanny] wrote:

Kshro nicest guy ever \o

THANK YOU NYQUILL
AND CONGRATS KSHRO FOR THE FIRST APPROVED MAP <3
(and mine as well)

inverness wrote:

ksh0r best mappur 201xx

EDIT: WHERE IS THE (KSH0R CUT) :C

Nyquill wrote:

shows that he really does care about the quality of his mapset and isn't just here for show.