Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey.
I'll leave some suggestions here. Can be ignored aswell, you know

If we're taking 'bout how the start of the song goes, I'd better use 0.5 SV from here 00:22:057, imo song is too calm for 0.75.
You can start 0.75 section here 00:44:514, that will be more logical than using 0.75->0.85 startup I guess.
This is also fair for 05:18:251-05:51:165 section That could have been done, but the way it is now works just fine and I'm not planning on remapping it

00:52:743 (1,2) - you can make it like this, looks much better imo Looks perfectly fine imo, making this a ''perfect blanket'' would mean i'd have to ruin the spacing and flow here

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01:53:914 (1,2) - same as for 01:16:919 (1,2) I've put these like this on purpose because imo it plays/looks good
02:06:257 (1,2) - ^
02:11:742 (1,2) - what do you think 'bout that?

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02:37:800 (1,2) - maybe this way?

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02:57:000 (1) - 1 grid to the right, and it will be right under (6)'s end This all happens because of the stacking leniency, it's actually fine the way it is
03:11:400 (4) - 1 grid downd for proper stacking
05:04:883 (2) - 1 grid right and 1 down for better stacking

This song is great. But, I guess, my mod is not But I hope it'll be helpfull

Good luck!

Thunderstorm wrote:

01:10:405 (9,10,11) - looks like a mess of spinners and a circle, maybe consider to respace this one in order to make it look better and do more readable?
01:16:919 (1,2) - these two can be overlapped more accurate and symmetrically imo
01:24:119 (9) - consider to move it away from the slider's body?
04:05:224 (4) - overlapping 04:05:567 (6) badly. Maybe consider to move it a bit away in order to make this pattern easier to read?
05:34:365 (8,9) - I'd better replace it w/ 1/2 slider starts where (8) is, 'cause no preconditions from music itself for two 1/4 sliders
05:52:365 (4) - badly overlapping 05:52:880 (6)
06:10:365 (1) - maybe this way?

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06:56:994 (1) - I'd better start spinner from this tick instead of puttin' a note here

lkwr wrote:

take a star for your horrible and crappy map

Ayu wrote:

mod

00:28:228 (4,1) - Move (1) closer to (4)'s ending to keep the distance consistent k

02:41:914 (1) - stack is way too confusing here I don't think it's too confusing but I'll keep this in mind

03:26:314 (2) - (is this lu's part? FIX BLANKET DESU) Fix the blanket, the slider start should be somewhere around x:376 y:288 What do you mean Lu's part? read bottom right lolol, fixed

Got nothing more to say, Great map with awesome flows. Good luck with ranking

Ayu wrote:

01:09:033 (2) - 0,6x ds?

Teara wrote:

Very nice.

I personally am not to fond about the ton of 2 short sliders which makes a lot of appearances in the beatmap, but after a few plays, its pretty nice.

Good job here. The following are mostly just suggestions on my part and can be safely ignored.

[Gone]
00:39:543 (3) - Add a whistle in the middle to emphasize the drawn out lyrics. Sounds good
00:56:171 (4) - ^Same

03:11:914 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This area, I like what you did here, but after the second vocal repeat you switched back to instruments, I'd rather you stick to the vocals and make a 3rd long slider, IMO, it would fit a lot better.

Maybe try deleting 03:13:114 (1,2) - replacing it with a slider, then adding a hit-circle on 03:13:714 (x) - delete the next circles 03:14:314 (9,10) - then extend 03:13:800 (8) - to the next red tick 03:14:314 -

I like this a little more, even delete the circle at 03:13:714 (7) - still makes it fit a bit better, but this is just my opinion. So feel free to ignore I deleted the 2 notes as you suggested, right now it's 3 long sliders in a row, I partly applied it the way you suggested it

Between 03:17:914 - and 03:28:714 - the hitsound volume is a tad bit to loud, consider maybe making it a bit softer. Alright

04:31:626 (1,2,3) - <3 Finally someone who appreciates overlaps :3

04:37:112 (1,2,3,4) - This part would be also epic if you did the same as the above one, three sliders =p To be honest I really like what I did there, I think it's fine the way it is >:

Blue Dragon wrote:

finally!

[Luanny] wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

finally!

1. 03:41:910 (8) - why don't you map based on the song like this 03:40:538 (3,4) - because most of your part that have this beat, you mapped it like that :3
2. 05:20:994 (1) - remove whistle at the starting to keep it consistent and you should add a circle at 05:22:194 () - if you really want everything to be consistent here

03:34 HeatKai: lezgo
03:34 HeatKai: delete this osb "Stan SB - Let This Go (KSHRO CUT) (Kyshiro)"
03:35 Kyshiro: omg yes. i love you.
03:35 Kyshiro: deleted osb
03:36 Kyshiro: http://puu.sh/39ND7.png LOL
03:36 HeatKai: replied to her back
03:36 Kyshiro: okay :3
03:38 HeatKai: why the diff is gone
03:38 HeatKai: i mean
03:38 HeatKai: the difficulty's name
03:38 Kyshiro: just to be creative, past tense of go
03:39 Kyshiro: or well
03:39 Kyshiro: kind of
03:39 Kyshiro: it fits the song imo lol, was lu's idea originally
03:39 HeatKai: past tense of go
03:39 HeatKai: I never heard of it hahahaha XD
03:43 HeatKai: 00:39:028 (2) - I don't really like this overlap tho
03:43 HeatKai: make it curve downward and evade from overlapping
03:43 HeatKai: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797682
03:44 Kyshiro: okay, did that
03:47 HeatKai: 01:05:600 (5) - eargasm
03:47 HeatKai: I mean i like it
03:48 Kyshiro: lolol yeah :3
03:53 HeatKai: 01:49:490 (12) - add clap at the starting
03:54 Kyshiro: uh thats luanny's part i think she'll hate me if i touch her hitsounds
03:54 HeatKai: tell her
03:54 HeatKai: and see whether she likes it or not
03:55 HeatKai: 01:58:542 (2) - the ends hits the hp bar
03:56 Kyshiro: fixed
04:01 HeatKai: 03:20:314 (6) - move this at the middle
04:01 HeatKai: of the slider
04:01 HeatKai: blanket
04:01 HeatKai: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797700
04:02 Kyshiro: done
04:02 Kyshiro: adjusted the sliders a bit to get a better blanket
04:02 HeatKai: alright nice
04:10 HeatKai: 04:52:883 (5) - this you know why
04:11 Kyshiro: fixed
04:15 HeatKai: okay that's all

HeatKai wrote:

[Luanny's part]

1. 03:41:910 (8) - why don't you map based on the song like this 03:40:538 (3,4) - because most of your part that have this beat, you mapped it like that :3 Well I did this many time just because using 5 1/4 notes all the time is too repetitive so changing a bit won't kill anyome :3 just like here 01:12:462 (4,5,6) -
2. 05:20:994 (1) - remove whistle at the starting to keep it consistent and you should add a circle at 05:22:194 () - if you really want everything to be consistent here done and done~

HeatKai wrote:

alright checked everything again looks better :3
Here's your bubble #2 /o/

Teara wrote:

Ended up in WIP again, so moved it back to pending for you.

Nyquill wrote:

I can't say how happy I am that Kyshiro was willing to wait on Luanny for the fixes, shows that he really does care about the quality of his mapset and isn't just here for show.

Seriously, good work.

[Luanny] wrote:

Kshro nicest guy ever \o

THANK YOU NYQUILL
AND CONGRATS KSHRO FOR THE FIRST APPROVED MAP <3
(and mine as well)

inverness wrote:

ksh0r best mappur 201xx

EDIT: WHERE IS THE (KSH0R CUT) :C

Nyquill wrote:

shows that he really does care about the quality of his mapset and isn't just here for show.