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T-ara - Bye Bye

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Tony
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 septembrie 2013 at 10:26:49

Artist: T-ara
Title: Bye Bye
Tags: IceBeam Absolute First Album Breaking Heart
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6246kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beamsy (2,15 stars, 197 notes)
  2. Crazy (4,96 stars, 493 notes)
  3. Hard (4,71 stars, 391 notes)
  4. Normal (3,42 stars, 236 notes)
Download: T-ara - Bye Bye
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I love you. Now...bye bye bye bye bye bye Bye Bye BYE BYEEEE!!!
First lyrics SB made by myself! Hope you like it :3
[Mapset]
100% --Crazy by me
100% -- Hard by me
100% -- Normal by me
100% -- Beamsy by IceBeam
IceBeam
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWSM

I LOVE U
Topic Starter
Tony
lol xDDD
Pink Agate
really nice map :) hope it can rank
Topic Starter
Tony
I'm still working on it! and thank you :3
acielaw
seems like the colors of the hit circle are kind of hard to see with a black/white/grey background, I just ignore beatmap skin but mb should change
Topic Starter
Tony
I'm gonna consider changing it. thanks for the feedback :)
_VLaD__old
T-ara <3
Good maps! Good Luck! :3
Aurele
Go Tony! >/<
Topic Starter
Tony
awww thank you very much \:D/ I'll try and finish normal soon :P
edit: Done! :3
IceBeam
why still not ranked???
Topic Starter
Tony
I need to rank the other one first ;w; too few modders. too few time. ;w;
Breeze
Hi random quick check

[Crazy]

  1. 00:09:810 (2,3,4) - I feel this one is much harder to hit compare to other triples, maybe you can reduce spacing?
[Hard]

  1. 03:24:118 (2,3) - I know you used 0.75xBPM here, but this spacing still looked awkward here, I'd suggest use a slider instead or stack these 2 notes, that would help
Topic Starter
Tony

Breeze wrote:

Hi random quick check

[Crazy]

  1. 00:09:810 (2,3,4) - I feel this one is much harder to hit compare to other triples, maybe you can reduce spacing?
Agreed. Fixed

[Hard]

  1. 03:24:118 (2,3) - I know you used 0.75xBPM here, but this spacing still looked awkward here, I'd suggest use a slider instead or stack these 2 notes, that would helpMade a slider out of them!
thanks :D
happy30
Testplay
Replays: Crazy

No video?? ahww oh well a man cant have everything

[Crazy]
Finally a map where 3/4 sliders actually work.
The combo colours blend a bit with the bg which made them harder to see.

the pacing / tempo in the map felt a bit monotous or repetive I guess. The song doesn't allow much playing with the pacing either. The slow sliders at the end were good.You could try to improve this part then: 02:51:810 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Maybe try to make this slower. so that the chorus will feel more powerful (and can have kiai if you want). You already decreased the spacing with these notes 02:51:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe it's a good idea to decrease the slider speed of 02:54:349 (2) - to 0.5 or 0.75 or so as well, so 02:55:733 (1) - will feel more powerful.
Topic Starter
Tony
Can't help myself. This post deserves kudosu imo. Hope you don't mind xD

Everything changed. Oh and about the video... T-ara didn't release a music video for this song :(
Breeze

Tony wrote:

Can't help myself. This post deserves kudosu imo. Hope you don't mind xD

Everything changed. Oh and about the video... T-ara didn't release a music video for this song :(
You can make an awesome SB fot it :P
Topic Starter
Tony
I'll try... :p
Topic Starter
Tony
ok. SB DONE <3 redownload :3
Roxas
from AIBat

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

SB Elements Not .png
sb\bg_light.jpg

Unused Image Files
sb\icebeam.png
sb\tony.png

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [Beamsy] : 1
- [Crazy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Normal] : 1

[General]
Turn on epilepsy warning and look AIBat box :D

[Beamsy]
01:22:041 (2) - Do like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/907635
03:25:272 (3,4) - Uhm, surely this is an error, fix this please xD

[Normal]
00:48:810 (1,2) - Maybe too hard those antijumps for a normal? :(
01:20:887 (3) - Make a better blanket on (2)
01:59:195 (2) - Same, sorry for nazi :<
03:26:195 (3) - Error D:
03:28:041 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:02:887 (4) - Move more left-up
00:06:580 (4) - ^
00:24:810 (3) - This should be in 00:24:695 -
01:35:195 (2) - A better blanket?
02:24:349 (3) - Stack the end of this slider in the position of 02:22:964 (1) -

[Crazy]
02:18:580 (1,3) - Change sliders there?

That's all! Good luck
-kevincela-
Hey!

[Beamsy]

  1. 00:28:733 (3) - This is a really little thing, just fix if you want: What do you think about making this slider start 1/2 later, obviously making it 1/2 shorter as well? It's not a big change, though it follows perfectly the synth being played right there, other than playing overall quite good as of the rhythm change. Try it out! :D
  2. 00:56:195 (2,3,4) - Not really a big deal, though this triangular pattern didn't flow as expected for me, as of 00:56:195 (2,4) - 's curves not continuing their oval flow in a so great way, so what about tweaking a bit the sliders by rotating and position them so that the whole pattern flows a bit smoother? Here's what I have done here, as example: feel free to use it!
    SPOILER

    172,40,55733,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,76,56195,2,0,P|322:85|385:60,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    460,32,57580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    484,112,58041,2,0,P|486:182|430:243,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    380,288,59426,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    296,272,59887,2,0,B|264:260|252:244|252:244|212:256|156:240,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    92,280,61272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:20:195 (4) - While I think all the other 2/1 sliders work great here, imho this one could be divided as a note + 1/1 slider, as you have been totally skipping the vocal chords, which imho feels quite strange considering how you've been following it up to now with patterns like 01:28:964 (1,2,3,4) - and so going. I've tried to remake the pattern using this "logic" as well: see if you like it! :D
    SPOILER

    420,44,79272,2,0,L|324:36,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    276,80,80195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    204,40,80657,2,0,P|164:28|120:28,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    72,80,81580,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    100,160,82041,2,0,P|96:220|120:276,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    104,304,82964,2,0,L|196:292,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,260,83887,2,0,P|312:268|364:288,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    I really can't find anything more. Great Easy diff, awesome 1/2 usage and great flow as well. Great job, I really like it! :D
[Normal]

  1. 00:10:503 (4) - Not a really big deal, though this slider right now doesen't really continue well 00:09:580 (3) - 's oval flow, making this pattern a bit uncomfortable to play. It is ok as it is, but it can surely made better - what about rotating a bit 00:09:580 (3) - and placing 00:10:503 (4) - above it so that it definitely continues better its oval flow? It's a little change that could make the flow there smoother :p Here's what I have done here, see if you like it!
    SPOILER

    416,164,9580,2,0,P|461:152|509:161,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    360,212,10503,2,2,P|344:264|380:332,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    232,372,11426,6,0,P|256:313|240:261,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:13:272 (3) - Seeing how 00:13:272 (3) - is going I would totally see better this reversed using CTRL+G, imho it flows quite smoother, other than continuing well the pattern! :D If you do this, I'd recommend you to put 00:15:118 (1) - at x:180 y:140 to finish the pattern properly with this new reversed slider!
  3. 00:33:118 (x)- A really little thing here: what about adding a note here? It feels quite strange not following the claps here when you have clearly done that with 00:31:272 (3) - . It isn't just for consistency, but also for the fact that it will complete the whole rhythm in your pattern, instead of finishing your pattern on that vocal chord!
  4. 01:10:272 (1,2) - This is really a subjective thing, so skip it if you really don't feel like doing it: what about making these two sliders encircle, continuing the pattern in this ways? I honestly think it works really well, considering that the dropoff between them imho works great. The actual pattern is really good anyways, so feel free to ignore! Here's what I have done: see if you like it!
    SPOILER

    312,196,70272,6,0,B|336:144|336:144|372:80|440:104,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    408,172,71195,2,0,B|384:224|384:224|348:288|280:264,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    210,291,72118,2,0,P|239:199|311:195,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,264,73041,2,0,L|160:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    16,104,74195,6,0,P|0:184|24:212,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:19:733 (1) - Using just some whistles at the start and at the end of the slider sounds really strange, actually... o.O Wouldn't it be better if you instead added a whistle as well at the repeat? It would follow really good the synth that is playing right this moment in the bg! :D
  6. 02:20:657 (4) - Same as above. Also, it seems you have forgot a NC at this point, as you have clearly used it at 01:19:733 (1) -, and as it follows pretty good the song itself why not using it here as well? :p
  7. 03:06:810 (1) - Guess what? Same as above!
  8. 03:09:118 (1) - While a 1/1 repeated slider here doesen't sound bad at all, imho a 3/2 repeated slider with a note 1/2 later fits the vocal being played there even better! I like how that pattern plays in this way, so imho you should consider doing that (even though it's optional, feel free to fix just if you want). Here's what I have done: see if you like it!
    SPOILER

    68,220,189118,6,0,L|56:328,2,90,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    52,148,190041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    32,80,190272,2,0,P|112:56|184:116,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]

  1. 00:08:657 (3,4,1,2) - Well, your actual blanket there broke a bit 00:08:657 (3) - 's oval flow, and imho could be rearranged better to make the whole pattern flow smoother... Instead of directly blanketing here, what do you think about making it still continue under 00:08:657 (3) - 's track to make 00:09:580 (1) - encircle 00:09:349 (4) - ? Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
    SPOILER

    236,120,8657,2,2,P|312:76|392:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    420,200,9349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    492,252,9580,6,0,P|452:284|372:272,1,135
    373,272,10041,2,0,P|392:304|392:364,1,90
    308,332,10503,2,2,B|257:344|219:332|219:332|181:319|131:332,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:24:695 (x) - I guess you want to follow the vocals here, though the missing note here seems really strange, considering your use of doublets and considering that there is an actual synth chord there... I would really suggest you to add a note here, it would really go well with the synth there!
  3. 00:46:503 (4) - What about having a New Combo here, seeing how you've used the New Combos so far? It is the only place where you haven't use it, so I guess you must have forgot it here!
  4. 00:51:580 (1) - On the other side imho there is no real changement in the rhythm there, so I fing your New Combo here to be pretty useless... I would personally remove this New Combo exactly for this reason. Your choice, though!
  5. 01:20:426 (5) - Well, seeing how you've arranged your whistle patterns, I find this whistle at the beginning not to fit very well into the bg. Considering that I don't find any valuable places to add whistles to complete this patterns, I'd suggest instead to remove the whistle from the beginning and add it instead to the repeat and the end to follow the vocals there! If you do that remember that the same applies for 02:21:349 (4,5) - and 03:07:503 (3,4) - !
  6. 01:58:272 (1) - and 01:59:657 (2) - Dunno why, but I personally would see these sliders better reversed. It could be because of the jump with 01:57:810 (2) - which imho fits really good, still I think it fits really good, even if this is is a totally subjective thing, so ignore if you don't want to do that!
    03:22:272 (2) - Instead of using that blanket, I find again this slider to be played quite better reversed. Not a big deal though... Try it out!
[Crazy]

  1. 00:42:810 (1) - Again, this slider would totally benefit it reversed using CTRL+G. Other than following really well 00:42:118 (5) - 's oval flow it continues really well your pattern 00:43:272 (2,3,4) - . You should really try it out, as it plays really great with that little jump! :D
  2. 00:52:849 (4,5,6) - This triangular pattern imho doesen't really go that well if you use it with 00:53:887 (1) - ... Its structure kinda breaks the flow brought from 00:52:849 (4) - to 00:53:887 (1) - and imho you should fix this. What about instead using an arch-pattern? It works really well there, as it follows both the oval flows better and continues really good the flow there. Here's what I've done, see if you like it! Remember that the same applies for 02:39:926 (4,5,6,1) - as well!
    SPOILER

    56,288,52849,2,0,P|5:230|41:138,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    112,24,53426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    264,52,53657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    300,200,53887,6,0,P|296:280|180:332,1,220,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:11:887 (1) - Considering 01:11:195 (3) - 's oval flow, wouldn't it be better if you directly stacked this on the top of 01:12:118 (2) - ? It would totally follow that oval flow with a symmetrical pattern, and as you have done that, doing it here would work pretty good as well! :D
  4. 01:19:733 (1) - As the normal diff, a whistle at the end of the slider would totally work good with the synth in the bg, other than completing your hitsounds pattern by using a 3/4 pattern, which imho works pretty good there. Try it out! If you apply, remember that you have to do the same for 02:21:003 (7) - and 03:07:157 (4) - !
  5. 01:25:041 (x) - Considering the vocals that are being played here, why don't you add a note here as well? Other than following really well that vocal chord, it would work pretty good with the jump 01:24:118 (4,5) - , making the flow even smoother! If you want to place it, then I'd suggest you to place it at x:312 y:252. Your choice, though!
And that's all! Really nice map you've got there! I hope I have been helpful, and call me back when you have gathered some mods!
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