1. vs. Byakuran (4.57 stars, 163 notes)
2. vs. Genkishi (3.67 stars, 129 notes)

Gens wrote:

[Overall]
- Why the (first) Kiai Time section ends so suddenly? If ye ask me, it should end until 01:17:53 or something. {JInxy edited. I felt the kiai was a tad too long.}

[Soft Flame]
I don't like it, it's too similar to Hard. You could try upping Circle size, flipping horizontally the whole map, and lowering down the Slider velocity. I think. {first 2 done, velocity is ok to me}

[Hard Flame]
01:21:02 (1) - Finish? That's the only thing I can find. {I did, but it was in Normal instead of soft.}

Cool map, though some sliders look ugly. {OMG NO WAI. Changed some sliders.} Starred anyway.

tieff wrote:

Firts: Love Reborn.
Second: Nice BG
Also... Maybe decrease volume?
And too many hitsound in both diff.

[Soft Flame]
01:02:732 (4) - I think this slider should end here 01:02:938 {Edited it differently.}
01:17:527 (1) - I think slider must return here 01:17:938 here 01:18:349 and end here 01:18:760 Nope.

[Hard Flame]
This diff need moar lesbian cosplayers.Wat.
Also you may add here evil jumps and streams. Nope.
00:12:595 (3) - Up 2 grid. (Lvl 3 grid) Why?
00:12:801 (4) - ^ Why?
00:15:266 (1) - I think slider must return here 00:15:472 here 00:15:677 here 00:15:883 here 00:16:088 here and end here 00:16:499. Also you can add note here 00:16:602 Nope.
00:48:143 (7) - Not sure about this, but maybe new combo? Not changed for personal and anime reasons.

Starred.

mrtn wrote:

timing seems fine to me.

[soft flame]
reinsert all breaks
00:08:89 (2,1) - this can be confusing for avarage players

[hard flame]
reinsert all breaks
replace some of the repeating sliders with notes to make it harder {Not done yet}
01:03:86 (?) - add note here
01:03:97 (?) - add note here
01:04:17 (?) - add note here
01:04:38 (?) - add note with finish here {I dont really know why to do this.}
nice map starred.

WyndII wrote:

hehe xD

I can't mod so well coz of mouse getting pwned.

Soft Flame
00:09:71 (1,2) - move 1 grid to the left lol
00:46:70 (2,4) - whistles?
00:48:14 (7) - and this XD
00:51:63 (3) - finish?
00:54:92 (3) - ^
01:07:66 (1,2,3) - move it 2 tiny grid down. make sure 01:07:86 (2) - is aligned with 01:08:48 (4) -
01:09:10 (6) - align with 01:08:69 (5) - check spacing

Hard Flame
00:25:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - maybe move it liek this
00:25:12 (1,4,8) - add whistle sounds? XD
01:17:52 (1,3,5,7) - whistles?

Nice Beatmap!!! GJ GJ XD

animask wrote:

[Soft Flame]
00:43:21 (6) - hitsound
00:55:33 (4) - align with 3?
The skip lag buuurns So true.

[Hard Flame]
00:08:69 (1) - a note before the offset? idk That IS the note before the offset.
00:20:19 (6) - this slider for normal and hard? at least make it two sliders or something...idk...something harder
Dunno if its harder, turned it into 3 sliders.
Now that I think about it...you copied stuff from normal...

tom800510 wrote:

i feel some notes really weird.

Solf flame:
00:15:266(1.2) sounds bad
00:25:129(1) move it start at 00:25:335
00:30:061(1.2) try delete (2) and move (1) start at 00:31:910 {????}
00:48:143(7) little weird
01:14:451(1) start at 00:14:657 is better to me
01:17:534(1) hit the sounds at 01:17:534, 01:17:945, 01:18:356, 01:18:767.


Both D.

Hard flame:
00:15:266(1) i guess its better to hit on 00:15:472, 00:15:883, 00:16:294, 00:16:705
00:30:061(1.2) try delete (2) and move (1) start at 00:31:910
01:02:732(4) try move it to 01:03:143 and add 2 circles.(01:02:732, 01:02:938)

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i am sure it will sound good after those change.
but just suggestions, up to you

Takuma wrote:

Offset: Well, I got 8,923 ms, but I'm still unsure. >A<

- Hard Flame:
00:48:16 (7) - New combo.
01:14:67 (8) - New combo.

strager wrote:

General
Star'd. Pretty short and fun, though Hard Flame feels a bit too easy and Soft Flame feels a bit too hard. That's probably just me, though.

Soft Flame
00:34:99 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Kinda difficult. Move them closer, distance snapped.
00:44:44 (x) - Notes please. {-FacePalm- I removed it from another mod. Not gonna change but can future modders comment on this?}
00:48:14 (7) - New combo.
01:21:02 (1) - Could be longer.

Hard Flame
00:16:91 (2) - New combo?
00:20:19 (6) - New combo?
00:48:14 (7) - New combo.
00:52:66 (6) - Maybe repeat? Two repeats fills up the blank time.
01:14:44 (7) - New combo.
01:21:02 (1) - Deserves to be longer.

Shinxyn wrote:

vs. Genkishi-
00:08:69 (1,2) - weak start, add whistles like you did for Hard
00:56:36 (7) - right a tick

vs. Byakuran
00:17:32 (3) - down a tick
01:02:73 (4,5) - bring closer (compare to 1,2,3)

I could barely hear any hitsound flow, it seems like the hitsounds are there for the sake of adding hitsounds
But its technically all right...

But for future reference, try listening to your beatmap on auto with music turned off...

EEeee wrote:

vs. Genkishi
00:20:19 (6) - add a whistle to the whole slider, and maybe a finish at the end point

vs. Byakuran
00:20:19 (1,2,3) - add whistles except at the ending of 3
00:31:909 () - add a finish here
00:55:95 (6) - new combo?

well that's all
the map looks almost to perfect/short for me to find anything,