Hai~ trying for M4M
[Lauriextra]
00:17:368 (3) - This one was pretty hard to read on the first play. I think it's too much overlapped with slider1, and might make players think it as a circle
00:21:653 (1,2,3,4) - spacing was hard to read. something like this ↓ maybe?
Also, the streams are in 1/6 i think.
00:26:368 (1,2,3) - hmm. How about using a rhythm like here? 00:22:939 (1,2,3,4) // right now it doesn't fit the music imo. especially no music on 2's head might bother playing. If you're not gonna fix it like that, you should at least move 3 to somewhere further away, because the rhythm is confusing right now. I think putting 3 on x: 268 y: 192 would be nice.
00:29:368 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i highly recommend changing this into 1/6 stream. It still fits nicely, and full 280bpm stream is too much (not even in adult's toy ;-;)
00:45:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about this rhythm pattern? ↓ because the vocal's repeating the similar pattern? (nettan-pettaan? if i heard it right lol)
01:05:261 (6) - this was really hard to read and follow, at least for me. Moving it to x:352 y:312 ~ish or stacking with 7's head looks good and plays fine too.
01:17:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/6 stream? as i said above, the drum is in 1/6
[Insane]
00:13:511 (4,5) - place them more closely? spacing between 3 and 4, and 4 and 5 shouldn't be the same .. right? overlapping 4,5 looks nice too.
01:03:225 (5,6) - ^
01:46:725 (12) - replace it with a circle, and put spinner starting here maybe? 01:46:832 // right now it feels kinda off-beat.
[sakik's hard]
00:22:189 (4) - this drum fill is in 1/6. recommend changing cuz it's off with the music. this ↙ should take care of it. (but i'm not sure if you can do that in hard diff...)
00:31:939 (7,8) - a bit close. move them further away to prevent possible confusion?
01:15:225 (4,1) - (nazi) better blanket?
[Normal]
01:26:368 (1) - remove NC? because that part you're using NC for 2 stanza interval.
[Easy]
01:19:296 (2) - move a tiny bit up to clarify the rhythm?
That's about it~ I like Lauriextra!! really nice flow
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