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1. 梶浦由記 into artist name tag if you intend to use original Japanese artist name to Artist tag.

1. Volume control isn't entirely satisfactory like 00:12:406 - volume up is better.
   make up more accent and inflection. I think sound is important factor of solid playing.
   Other turning points are 00:23:739 - , 00:24:406 - , 01:05:739 - , 01:07:073 - .
   I'm fortunately if I become your reference.

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1. same as it was written in the General.

1. 00:11:573 (6,1) - Heavy overlap. move 00:11:573 (6) to topleft then rotate it towards (7).
2. 00:32:406 (3) - D: copy from 00:32:323 (3) and rotate, Ctrl+G to use.
3. 00:37:406 (3,4) - a little illegible since close to each other. I suggest to use 1.5x~.

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1. 01:17:739 (1) - Add finish
2. 01:23:073 (2) - ^
3. 01:28:406 (1) - ^
4. 01:33:739 (1) - ^
5. 01:39:073 - ^
6. 01:44:406 - ^
7. 01:49:739 - ^
   at least needs above finishes.

1. okay~

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1. finishes are same as Darkened.
2. 01:55:073 - try change volume to 30%. It will fits sounds. also same as other diffs.

1. Good mapping :3

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  Red: Unrankable issues or Highly recommended
  Black: Opinions

　General

1. The position of background image is sightly(1 pixel) off, suspecting there's a bug which caused such a nazi problem on every mapset. w/e please change the code manually in all .osu files!
   
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   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"PCMBG.jpg",0,0
2. Kiai sections should be consistence through all difficulties, and there's a deviation at the end point of kiais. I'd suggest to end it 01:53:406 - here for all difficulties \:D/
3. "A Duel with a Witch" and/or "Majou to no tatakai" to tags?

　Stained

1. ?! This difficulty is using the same rate of OAD with Darkened o3o; But whatever, AR4 already served properly for this difficulty. So... the suggestion for difficulty settings: HPD, AR, OAD reduce by 1
2. Theoretically, any stacking related to sliders can't be used in easy difficulties. Therefore, please unstack them and keep them readable for newbies, and meh...=3= blame my laziness, I'll leave the changelog and the fixed diff here: http://puu.sh/2u58x
   00:17:406 (6,7) - Unstacked due to ^
   00:21:739 (4,5,6) - Made them not overlapping to each other, plus, fixed the spacing between 00:20:739 (3,4) -
   00:43:073 (5) - The repeat arrow was partially covered by the head of previous slider, which against the ranking rules for "All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible." and yeah I've tired to fix it
   00:44:406 (6) - AAAAnd curved this slider to match the flow
   00:59:073 (3) - This overlapping might cause a misleading in gameplay, my suggestion is following the flow with previous slider
   01:09:739 (4,5) - Unstacked
   01:40:406 (2) - I-I've no idea how to fix this ;3;
   
   And that's it! Fixed up notes which may cause a spacing error, except 01:40:406 this one

　Darkened

• 00:17:406 (6,7,1) - A 5-reverses slider (which I thought it's 3) and two circle stacks > get 100s :3rz ... it may bring out a confusion on gameplay. At least, move (7) away from the stacking like this?
  
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  00:33:073 (7) - Not sure if the missing whistle was on purpose or not, please add one to slider's head?
  00:33:573 (8) - Felt a bit uncoordinated on this note, how about starting this slider at 00:33:573 - (1/4 ealier)?
  
  
  01:01:739 (1) - Similar to 00:33:073, a whistle on slider's end?

　Blackened

1. <3 Cool
   01:30:406 (10,1,2) - Unless there's an obvious slowdown from music, I'd like using an even spacing between these notes
   01:31:739 (4,5) - As the last combo is quite jumpy 01:30:073 (8,9,10) - , I was expecting a larger spacing here. Besides that, the spacing changes of 01:31:573 (3,4) - and 01:31:739 (4,5) - is over 1.00, players may get a break readily. Hence, you can try this placement:
   
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   01:32:739 (8) - According to previous line, I've sightly moved the slider's end 1 grid down for matching up the flow to next slider
   01:35:739 - Awww...the consistence of hitsounding was broken here, I would like to put something at this spot. What about... 01:35:573 (2) - split this slider into 1/4 slider + 1/4 circle?
   
   
   01:37:739 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This combo was kinda loooooong, cut it off- I meant a new combo on (7)?
   01:39:073 - to 01:42:406 - Is it intentional for using finishs instead of whistles on this section? I couldn't complain for not suitable or what else..., but still, comparing to the whole kiai part, it's quite specific here.
   01:53:406 - Hmm~ As the outro part, I would like to see impactive jumps! Tried to rearrange the placement here, it doesn't matter if you accept it or not
   
   • - 01:53:406 (1,2,3) - Moved these three in a group
     - 01:54:573 (2,3) - Larger spacing
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   140,192,113406,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   160,117,113573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   235,96,113739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   365,192,113906,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   365,192,113989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   365,192,114073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   269,219,114239,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   358,280,114406,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   269,328,114573,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   112,178,114739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   168,88,114906,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   269,110,115073,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:12:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I hope you can add some hitsounds at them to emphasize them.
2. 00:39:073 (10) - I consider you can remove it since it sounds superfluous with your rhythm.
3. 00:53:073 (8) - How about change this to 3/4? I found that you have did 00:47:739 (8,9) - these before, I think you should keep consistent with the rhythm.
4. 01:00:406 (6) - add a repear or change this to 1/2 slider then add note at 01:00:906 -? The way you did is a bit rigid.
5. 01:06:406 (1,2) - *always failed at 1* The down beat is at 2 and 3, so I prefer you make a jump at 2 but not 1.
6. 01:09:406 (7,8,9,10,1) - I wanna know why the spacing sudden changed at 1, Is it on purpose?

1. 00:31:739 (6) - This slider could be more curved if you move the second point to middle.
2. 01:52:406 (6,1) - how about change them to these? I think it would be make sense if you changed <3
   
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1. Pokie told me she has a long mod at this diff, so she hope i can skip it