This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月2日 at 1:12:58

Artist: Perfume
Title: 575
Tags: JPN
BPM: 115
Filesize: 6600kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.66 stars, 519 notes)
2. Normal (2.1 stars, 250 notes)

Download: Perfume - 575
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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status: working on Insane by guest, but mod is welcome-
I maybe accept M4M.
BUT, PLEASE TELL ME YOUR MAP FIRST!
then, I choose accepting M4M or not.

Perfume - 575 from JPN
Normal - by me
Hard - by me

こんにちは
From My queue

[General]
BG(SB)はまだ未完成でしょうか？背景が黒はよくないと思います
Softのスライダーの音が「ザザー」となるのはこの曲にはあってないと思います。無音のスライダーwavを追加してみてはどうでしょうか？


[Hard]
HP-1 AR-1 OD-1
00:54:898 (4) - いきなりｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞが近くなってます
01:00:898 (6) - ^
01:14:594 (8) - 連打からはみ出ているように見えてあまり綺麗では無いように思いました。このようにしてみては如何でしょうか？
02:54:768 (8) - こちらと同様にです
01:16:290 (5) - 01:16:681 - ここで終了していますが 01:16:811 - ここまでのほうが音があってるように思います
01:18:376 (5) - １つ前のnoteに近すぎるためプレイの時に支障が出ると思います
01:24:376 (5) - ^
02:44:985 (1) - スペーシングがおかしいためたたきづらいと思います。これまでどおりのパターンで配置するべきです
02:56:464 (5) - これまでと同様です

[Normal]
Easyを作らないのであればDistanceSnapはすべて同じ間隔で統一するべきだと思います
01:14:203 (5) - 01:11:072 (2) - ここを反転させたものを使えばいいと思います
02:54:377 (5) - 上と同じです。

good luck~

Thank you, Satellite! done-

Satellite wrote:

こんにちは
From My queue

[General]
BG(SB)はまだ未完成でしょうか？背景が黒はよくないと思いますhold　この曲のイメージがモノクロのためＢＧを黒にしてあります。Ranking Criteriaでは黒のＢＧは禁止されていないと思いますので、一応このままにさせていただきます。今後明確に禁止されている理由が示され（or見つけ）たら変えようと思います。
EDIT: fixed　BATの方から黒のBGは基本的に認められないという回答をいただいたので変更しました。http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/127772
Softのスライダーの音が「ザザー」となるのはこの曲にはあってないと思います。無音のスライダーwavを追加してみてはどうでしょうか？fixed


[Hard]
HP-1 AR-1 OD-1fixed
00:54:898 (4) - いきなりｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞが近くなってますfixed
01:00:898 (6) - ^fixed
01:14:594 (8) - 連打からはみ出ているように見えてあまり綺麗では無いように思いました。このようにしてみては如何でしょうか？fixed
02:54:768 (8) - こちらと同様にです

01:16:290 (5) - 01:16:681 - ここで終了していますが 01:16:811 - ここまでのほうが音があってるように思いますfixed
01:18:376 (5) - １つ前のnoteに近すぎるためプレイの時に支障が出ると思いますfixed
01:24:376 (5) - ^fixed　これに関連して03:04:550 (5) - fixed
02:44:985 (1) - スペーシングがおかしいためたたきづらいと思います。これまでどおりのパターンで配置するべきですsorry?　どこのスペーシングの事でしょうか…？出来たらもう少し詳しく説明していただけないでしょうか…？すいません…
02:56:464 (5) - これまでと同様ですfixed

[Normal]
Easyを作らないのであればDistanceSnapはすべて同じ間隔で統一するべきだと思います　　hold　DSが1.00でないところはいわゆる難易度を上げる目的でのジャンプではなく、Normalでは少し難しいだろうと思うところ（幾何的な配置、白線-赤線-白線の３連単発など）を簡単にする目的でDSを変えています。今後さらに指摘されるようであれば、変えたいと思います。
01:14:203 (5) - 01:11:072 (2) - ここを反転させたものを使えばいいと思いますhold　上記の理由でDSを変えているためこのままにさせていただきます
02:54:377 (5) - 上と同じです。hold　同上です

good luck~ 　thanks-

こんにちは。mod初心者です、ごめんなさい。
Hardをmodさせてもらいました。
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個人的意見なので参考程度にしてもらえたらうれしいです:3
1:12:637(7)　と　2:52:811(7)　
この二つなどで、スライダーの速度が速く長さも短いのでリバースアローが見づらくなってしまい、直感的なプレイが阻害される可能性があると思います。
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僕としてはこの譜面の音のとり方は好きです<3
Rankedがんばってください！

Thank you, sakanaA! done-

sakanaA wrote:

こんにちは。mod初心者です、ごめんなさい。
Hardをmodさせてもらいました。
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個人的意見なので参考程度にしてもらえたらうれしいです:3
1:12:637(7)　と　2:52:811(7)　
この二つなどで、スライダーの速度が速く長さも短いのでリバースアローが見づらくなってしまい、直感的なプレイが阻害される可能性があると思います。fixed
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僕としてはこの譜面の音のとり方は好きです<3
Rankedがんばってください！ thanks!

Hey, lucky winner of ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

This song rocks! Glad to mod it

[General]

Why is there no Background? I think you can easily find one, if you need further help, I'll help you.
If you found a BG, try to use fitting combo colors
Try to lower the hitsounds to 40%, especially in the first part.

[Hard]

General:

Hitsounds:

Can you hear those silent claps in the background? You could use them in your beatmap as well. I mention some of them here, but I'll stop, so you can try on your own.

00:06:898 (3) - clap
00:05:854 (2) - clap
00:06:898 (3) - clap
00:07:942 (2) - Slider start, clap
00:08:985 (5) - clap
00:11:855 - clap (if you added the circle, metnioned down below)
00:12:116 (3) - clap

Also: Don't forget to double clap, just for a cooler rhythm. But don't overuse!

Try this clap pattern on your own for the further beatmap, ok? =) Ask me for help if you can't find them, but i think it should be possibru.

Placing:

00:08:463 (3) - Replace this by 4 circles, forming a square. It fits as well, and imo it's better than a slow, double reverse.
Well, it's not a real square but here is my suggestion:
This big slider is a bit boring. Replace them by some circles! (don't forget to add claps then: 00:10:029 - and 00:10:550 - (yes, it's a double clap, but it will also make a cooler rhytm)
00:11:855 - add a circle, for another clap
Copy paste isn't a good idea to make here, try to figure out some other stuff, it lets oyour beatmap get funnier
00:26:203 (9) - Same as above, this one is a bit boring.
00:40:811 (4,5,1) - I suggest something like this here, the current placing is a bit odd.
00:45:246 - Add a circle, for the same reasons as above, with a clap of course.
01:03:768 (5) - Remember: Double reverse only if it's really necessary!

i'll go on with the mod later XD

Thank you, Irreversible! done-

Irreversible wrote:

Hey, lucky winner of ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

This song rocks! Glad to mod it If you feel like that, I'm glad too!

[General]

Why is there no Background? I think you can easily find one, if you need further help, I'll help you.fixed
Because this song image is monochrome, so I used the black background.BAT says it is not recommended to using it.so, I changed it.http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/127772
If you found a BG, try to use fitting combo colors fixed
Try to lower the hitsounds to 40%, especially in the first part.fixed

[Hard]

General:

Hitsounds:

Can you hear those silent claps in the background? You could use them in your beatmap as well. I mention some of them here, but I'll stop, so you can try on your own.

00:06:898 (3) - clap
00:05:854 (2) - clap
00:06:898 (3) - clap
00:07:942 (2) - Slider start, clap
00:08:985 (5) - clap
00:11:855 - clap (if you added the circle, metnioned down below)
00:12:116 (3) - clap

Also: Don't forget to double clap, just for a cooler rhythm. But don't overuse!

Try this clap pattern on your own for the further beatmap, ok? =) Ask me for help if you can't find them, but i think it should be possibru.fixed (including Normal) but double clap is not finished.

Placing:

00:08:463 (3) - Replace this by 4 circles, forming a square. It fits as well, and imo it's better than a slow, double reverse.fixed　　as well 00:16:811 (3,4,5,6) -fixed
Well, it's not a real square but here is my suggestion:

Suggestion

This big slider is a bit boring. Replace them by some circles! (don't forget to add claps then: 00:10:029 - and 00:10:550 - (yes, it's a double clap, but it will also make a cooler rhytm)hold　　because the previous point is a bit difficult jump(00:08:463 (3,4,5,6) - I accepted your suggestion.), so if this slider is replaced by some circles, I think that it is too difficult for Hard difficulty.and I want to use this slider for pattern, because end of word on vocal is extended.---(1)
00:11:855 - add a circle, for another clapfixed
Copy paste isn't a good idea to make here, try to figure out some other stuff, it lets oyour beatmap get funnier fixed
00:26:203 (9) - Same as above, this one is a bit boring.hold　　the reason is same as (1)
00:40:811 (4,5,1) - I suggest something like this here, the current placing is a bit odd.fixed　　but placing is my original, sorry...　as well00:40:811 (4,5) - fixed

Suggestion

00:45:246 - Add a circle, for the same reasons as above, with a clap of course.fixed
01:03:768 (5) - Remember: Double reverse only if it's really necessary!fixed　as well02:43:942 (5) - fixed

i'll go on with the mod later XD　　OK, I'm waiting-

Hi, random mod, no need to give me kudos

[Hard]

1. 00:32:724 (5) - A Two-reverse slider feel awkward, I would say one reverse and another note under that slider better
2. 00:37:681 (1) - Slider start, no finish here?
3. 00:54:376 (3) - ^, finish
4. 01:23:724 (4,5,6) - Why 5 so far from 4 but 6 to 5 is usual spacing?
5. 01:30:116 (5) - End at bule tick (01:30:768) sounds better, or you can just add a note at 01:30:768
6. 03:10:290 (5) - ^
7. 03:23:854 (11) - Add clap here, there is a clap sound in background music

Hmm, rhythm are fine, but I feel this map played boring, I think you can try more different arrange and make you sliders more pretty, how?
Look at this topic

Thank you, Breeze!done-

Breeze wrote:

Hi, random mod, no need to give me kudos

[Hard]

1. 00:32:724 (5) - A Two-reverse slider feel awkward, I would say one reverse and another note under that slider betterfixed　　as well02:12:898 (5) - fixed
2. 00:37:681 (1) - Slider start, no finish here?fixed　　as well02:17:855 (1) - fixed
3. 00:54:376 (3) - ^, finishfixed　　as well02:34:550 (3) - fixed
4. 01:23:724 (4,5,6) - Why 5 so far from 4 but 6 to 5 is usual spacing?fixed　　as well03:04:550 (5) - fixed
5. 01:30:116 (5) - End at bule tick (01:30:768) sounds better, or you can just add a note at 01:30:768fixed
6. 03:10:290 (5) - ^fixed
7. 03:23:854 (11) - Add clap here, there is a clap sound in background musicfixed

Hmm, rhythm are fine, but I feel this map played boring, I think you can try more different arrange and make you sliders more pretty, how?
Look at this topic　　sorry...but I did do my best...

EDIT: Thank you for star!

まあ、引き続きがんばってくださいね！
星をあげる～

OMG I did not have updated normal diff!!!!!!! FFFFFFUUUUU- Please ignore normal ;w;

Raging Bull wrote:

OMG I did not have updated normal diff!!!!!!! FFFFFFUUUUU- Please ignore normal ;w;

sorry?

asaink wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

OMG I did not have updated normal diff!!!!!!! FFFFFFUUUUU- Please ignore normal ;w;

sorry?

I was modding normal diff, but it was old version. I had BAT delete post, sorry.


Mods are suggestions, if you disagree with any, please explain why and not just "no"

General:
Yay perfume and nice simple SB.

Normal:
-1 AR? I think easiest diff, but AR seems kinda fast.
If you follow NC mod, please follow it all.
00:09:507 (3,4,5) - I suggest timeline like in screenshot. http://puu.sh/2M0In.jpg I think 3 is better for hold note. 5 seems out of place imo and ends when NC should happen if you keep consistent NC pattern. Then you can also add note at 00:12:637 (1) and add NC.
00:17:855 (2,3) - Same suggestion as above! http://puu.sh/2M0KL.jpg I think it would be better if you just move 2 to where note is hold. and then can add 00:20:985 (3) - Note here instead with NC
00:37:681 (1) - Slider start add finish? seems good since music builds up until here.
00:43:942 (1) - Remove NC? You have good NC consistency tilll here.
00:54:376 (1) - Finish? Music has it imo.
00:56:463 (1) - Remove NC?Same reason as earlier, good NC consistency till over here.
01:04:811 (1) - ^?
01:10:811 (1,2) - I think stack here is confusing. You have 1/1 combo from 1-8 and then 1/2 AND a stack AND one is slider. I think it may be too much for beginner. Perhaps unstack these to give better view? Imo, you should also switch NC here. (Remove NC 1 add NC 2)
01:11:072 (2) - Moving kiai here seems better. I think kiai in middle of two notes is really bad. Kiai happens and you do nothing. If you move kiai here,kiai starts as you press something, which I think is really better!
01:14:985 (1,2) - Swap NC?
01:21:507 (1) - Remove NC?
01:23:594 (5) - NC here instead?
01:27:768 (1,1,2) - Perhaps space correctly? Too close imo and you only space 01:33:507 (2) - correctly.
01:27:768 (1,2) - also, maybe do Ctrl+G pattern instead? It feels better to me imo since starting slider on second white tick usually makes slider unstressed. Weird for clicking :3
01:29:333 (1) - Remove NC?
01:31:420 (1) - ^?
01:31:942 (2) - NC here instead?
01:40:029 (1) - End kiai here instead? "oyasumi" and then kiai ends? :3
01:40:811 (1) - I think extend spinner to white tick would be better. Spinner end and new verse.Add finish also?
02:05:333 (6) - I would NC here. NC consistency and combo is long for me anyways.
02:17:855 (1) - Slider start finish again?
02:24:116 (1) - Remove NC?
02:31:942 (2) - Space correctly? I really do not know why you do .75x if you have 2 1/1 repeat sliders orz
02:34:029 (1) - ^
02:34:029 (1,3) - Swap NC?
02:34:550 (3) - Add finish?
02:36:637 (1) - Remove NC?
02:44:985 (1) - Remove NC?
02:50:985 (1,2) - Same suggestion as earlier. Unstack and NC swap? Also move kiai to 02:51:246?
02:55:159 (1,2) - NC swap?
03:01:681 (1) - NC remove?
03:03:768 (5) - NC here?
03:07:942 (1,2) - I would probably do Ctrl+G timeline here.
03:09:507 (1) - Remove NC?
03:11:594 (1,2) - Swap NC?
03:21:246 (1) - I would make spinner end at big white tick and add finish?
03:25:159 (1) - Then remove this note.
03:28:811 (5) - Add NC
03:37:159 (7) - ^
03:45:507 (6) - ^
03:53:855 (1) - Add finish?

Hard:
00:08:463 (3) - Idk, beginning has too many NC for me, but add NC here for consistent NC beginning pattern.
00:08:985 (5,6,1) - Like screenshot? So 5 isn't on slider path? Still same concept of triangle pattern orzhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736033
00:16:811 (3) - ^
00:17:333 (5,6) - Maybe move it like this instead so 5 isn't on slider path? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736005
00:20:724 (1,3) - Swap NC?
00:20:985 (3) - Idk why, but you completely change your NC pattern over here when music is same ;w;. Idk how you want NC here anymore. Please try to keep it consistent.
00:23:072 (x) - Add note? Downbeat is important imo and it feels weird when you don't have that one map.
01:06:898 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps change into curvy sliders? I feel this can be better if you didn't make only a square with 4 linear sliders. Maybe just move slider around and add curve.
01:11:072 (1) - Move kiai to here and add finish?
01:15:768 (4) - Usually people do not really expect second repeat unless its a longer slider to see it. Maybe remove it one repeat and add note instead?
01:21:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps change these notes into 1/4 sliders? This area seems really slow compared to the rest of your chorus.
01:23:594 (3,4) - Delete 3 and move slider to here and and note at 01:24:116 (x)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736052
01:39:507 (1) - Perhaps this instead?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736059 Your slider is really odd. It starts on nothing but ends on something. Maybe it would be better like this. Also. I added 5% volume sound to slider end so "oyasumi" and then really quiet slider end. Just remember to add 60% again at 01:41:072 (1) -
01:44:463 (x) - Idk add note + finish? Seems weird to have finish in music but then break happens. Build up is ruined here imo.
02:03:246 (x) - Add note?
02:39:246 (3) - Move to x360 y84? Idk, I think note is too soon to that area since you mapped it with 02:38:203 (4) earlier. Maybe move it so less crowded?
02:43:159 (2) - Maybe something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736072? Just like 01:02:724 (1,2,3,4) ? Again 2 seems to be a bad spot since 10 was just map and cause little overlap.
02:47:072 (1,2,3,4) - Make it curvy?
02:51:246 (1) - Add finish and move kiai here?
02:55:942 (4) - Remove 1 repeat and add note?
03:01:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 sliders?
03:03:768 (3,4) - Remove 3, move slider to where 3 is and add note at 03:04:290?
03:19:681 (1,1) - Maybe like timeline pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736078 It follows oyasumi and ohayou a lot better. Remember to silence slider end on oyasumi and ohayou.
03:24:637 (1) - Add finish?
03:40:550 (3) - Add note with clap? I think feels more fitting since there was build up in slider imo
03:41:333 (1) - Add finish here?

I just think maybe don't copy paste a lot orz. You copy paste chorus on both diffs I think. Maybe just copy paste pattern little less? orz

Thank you, Raging Bull! done-

Raging Bull wrote:

I was modding normal diff, but it was old version. I had BAT delete post, sorry.OK, I understand.


Mods are suggestions, if you disagree with any, please explain why and not just "no"

General:
Yay perfume and nice simple SB.Thanks!

Normal:
-1 AR? I think easiest diff, but AR seems kinda fast.fixed
If you follow NC mod, please follow it all.
00:09:507 (3,4,5) - I suggest timeline like in screenshot. http://puu.sh/2M0In.jpg I think 3 is better for hold note. 5 seems out of place imo and ends when NC should happen if you keep consistent NC pattern. Then you can also add note at 00:12:637 (1) and add NC. hold　　The rhythm of suggestion is certainly fit at song, but that slider is too long and makes boring, I think.---(1)
00:17:855 (2,3) - Same suggestion as above! http://puu.sh/2M0KL.jpg I think it would be better if you just move 2 to where note is hold. and then can add 00:20:985 (3) - Note here instead with NChold　　The reason is same as (1).
00:37:681 (1) - Slider start add finish? seems good since music builds up until here.fixed
00:43:942 (1) - Remove NC? You have good NC consistency tilll here.fixed
00:54:376 (1) - Finish? Music has it imo.fixed
00:56:463 (1) - Remove NC?Same reason as earlier, good NC consistency till over here.fixed
01:04:811 (1) - ^?fixed
01:10:811 (1,2) - I think stack here is confusing. You have 1/1 combo from 1-8 and then 1/2 AND a stack AND one is slider. I think it may be too much for beginner. Perhaps unstack these to give better view? Imo, you should also switch NC here. (Remove NC 1 add NC 2)fixed
01:11:072 (2) - Moving kiai here seems better. I think kiai in middle of two notes is really bad. Kiai happens and you do nothing. If you move kiai here,kiai starts as you press something, which I think is really better!fixed
01:14:985 (1,2) - Swap NC?hold　　I want to match lyrics "1・2・3" and circle number.---(2)
01:21:507 (1) - Remove NC?hold　　Here NC pattern is same as Hard.---(3)
01:23:594 (5) - NC here instead?hold　　The reason is same as (3).
01:27:768 (1,1,2) - Perhaps space correctly? Too close imo and you only space 01:33:507 (2) - correctly.fixed　　changed here on the whole.
01:27:768 (1,2) - also, maybe do Ctrl+G pattern instead? It feels better to me imo since starting slider on second white tick usually makes slider unstressed. Weird for clicking :3fixed　　same as above
01:29:333 (1) - Remove NC?fixed
01:31:420 (1) - ^?fixed
01:31:942 (2) - NC here instead?fixed　　but here, 01:33:507 (1) -
01:40:029 (1) - End kiai here instead? "oyasumi" and then kiai ends? :3fixed
01:40:811 (1) - I think extend spinner to white tick would be better. Spinner end and new verse.Add finish also?fixed
02:05:333 (6) - I would NC here. NC consistency and combo is long for me anyways.fixed
02:17:855 (1) - Slider start finish again?fixed
02:24:116 (1) - Remove NC?fixed
02:31:942 (2) - Space correctly? I really do not know why you do .75x if you have 2 1/1 repeat sliders orzfixed
02:34:029 (1) - ^fixed
02:34:029 (1,3) - Swap NC?fixed
02:34:550 (3) - Add finish?fixed
02:36:637 (1) - Remove NC?fixed
02:44:985 (1) - Remove NC?fixed
02:50:985 (1,2) - Same suggestion as earlier. Unstack and NC swap? Also move kiai to 02:51:246?fixed
02:55:159 (1,2) - NC swap?hold　　The reason is same as (2).
03:01:681 (1) - NC remove?hold　　The reason is same as (3).
03:03:768 (5) - NC here?hold　　The reason is same as (3).
03:07:942 (1,2) - I would probably do Ctrl+G timeline here. hold　　Hmm...I didn't find the problem.Every DS is 1.00x.
03:09:507 (1) - Remove NC?fixed
03:11:594 (1,2) - Swap NC?fixed　　but here, 03:13:681 (1) -
03:21:246 (1) - I would make spinner end at big white tick and add finish?hold　　That rhythm sounds good, but I think this circle(03:25:159 (1)) is needed.
03:25:159 (1) - Then remove this note.hold　　same as above
03:28:811 (5) - Add NCfixed
03:37:159 (7) - ^fixed
03:45:507 (6) - ^fixed
03:53:855 (1) - Add finish?fixed

Hard:
00:08:463 (3) - Idk, beginning has too many NC for me, but add NC here for consistent NC beginning pattern.fixed　　changed NC pattern
00:08:985 (5,6,1) - Like screenshot? So 5 isn't on slider path? Still same concept of triangle pattern orzhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736033fixed
00:16:811 (3) - ^fixed　　changed NC pattern
00:17:333 (5,6) - Maybe move it like this instead so 5 isn't on slider path? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736005fixed
00:20:724 (1,3) - Swap NC?fixed
00:20:985 (3) - Idk why, but you completely change your NC pattern over here when music is same ;w;. Idk how you want NC here anymore. Please try to keep it consistent.fixed　　Changed NC pattern at the beginning.
00:23:072 (x) - Add note? Downbeat is important imo and it feels weird when you don't have that one map.fixed
01:06:898 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps change into curvy sliders? I feel this can be better if you didn't make only a square with 4 linear sliders. Maybe just move slider around and add curve.hold　　I want to continue square spacing twice here.---(1)
01:11:072 (1) - Move kiai to here and add finish?fixed　　But because of sound volume, I didn't move kiai.---(2)
01:15:768 (4) - Usually people do not really expect second repeat unless its a longer slider to see it. Maybe remove it one repeat and add note instead?fixed
01:21:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps change these notes into 1/4 sliders? This area seems really slow compared to the rest of your chorus.hold　　I want to match lyrics and circles.Here lyrics is "push buttons one by one", so I placed circles like that.---(3)
01:23:594 (3,4) - Delete 3 and move slider to here and and note at 01:24:116 (x)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736052fixed
01:39:507 (1) - Perhaps this instead?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736059 Your slider is really odd. It starts on nothing but ends on something. Maybe it would be better like this. Also. I added 5% volume sound to slider end so "oyasumi" and then really quiet slider end. Just remember to add 60% again at 01:41:072 (1) - hold　　I'm sorry, but I don't like this suggestion...I don't think my slider is too odd.But silence slider is accepted.---(4)
01:44:463 (x) - Idk add note + finish? Seems weird to have finish in music but then break happens. Build up is ruined here imo.fixed
02:03:246 (x) - Add note?fixed
02:39:246 (3) - Move to x360 y84? Idk, I think note is too soon to that area since you mapped it with 02:38:203 (4) earlier. Maybe move it so less crowded?fixed
02:43:159 (2) - Maybe something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736072? Just like 01:02:724 (1,2,3,4) ? Again 2 seems to be a bad spot since 10 was just map and cause little overlap.fixed
02:47:072 (1,2,3,4) - Make it curvy?hold　　The reason is same as (1).
02:51:246 (1) - Add finish and move kiai here?fixed　　as well as (2)
02:55:942 (4) - Remove 1 repeat and add note?fixed
03:01:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 sliders?hold　　The reason is same as (3).
03:03:768 (3,4) - Remove 3, move slider to where 3 is and add note at 03:04:290?fixed
03:19:681 (1,1) - Maybe like timeline pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/736078 It follows oyasumi and ohayou a lot better. Remember to silence slider end on oyasumi and ohayou.hold　　The reason is same as (4).
03:24:637 (1) - Add finish?fixed
03:40:550 (3) - Add note with clap? I think feels more fitting since there was build up in slider imofixed
03:41:333 (1) - Add finish here?fixed

I just think maybe don't copy paste a lot orz. You copy paste chorus on both diffs I think. Maybe just copy paste pattern little less? orz

Why is this graved? orz

People who belong to pretty closed community only can get their map ranked, as long as now ranking rule, you know.
and this is why I give up getting my map ranked.

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