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Bran Van 3000 - Go shoppin'

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[DBF]
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 мая 2009 г. at 2:17:11

Artist: Bran Van 3000
Title: Go shoppin'
BPM: 117,26
Filesize: 4810kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,79 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (4,47 stars, 285 notes)
Download: Bran Van 3000 - Go shoppin'
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Str1perella
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Str1perella
Отлично сделано!))))) Так держать)
[DBF]
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Str1perella wrote:

Отлично сделано!))))) Так держать)
Cпасибо.
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[DBF]
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Dark Reiz wrote:

Хорошая мапа, надеюсь будет ранкед.
Cпасиб ;)
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anonymous_old
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General
Your notes are off, which kills your timeline. For your easier difficulty, most of your notes should lie on the white tick (1 beat).
Use an offset of 15491 ms and a BPM of 117.260 to get you started. Be sure to resnap your notes.

Easy/Normal
00:29:81 (2) - New combo.
00:30:xx (1) - (Spinner) Replace with notes at 00:30:84 (1) and 00:31:35 (2).
00:31:86 (x) - Hit Insert Break Time.
00:48:23 (2,3,4,5) - New combos for each.
01:00:51 (2) - Insert break time.
01:15:61 (3) - Unstack.
01:17:66 (4,5) - New combos for each.
01:19:70 (1) - Too long. Make shorter.

Hard
Retimed version is attached. Will mod this later.

Download: Bran Van 3000 - Go shoppin' ([DBF]) [Go shoppin!].osu
anonymous_old
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General
Colours are nice, but the blue is too dark and blends into the background too much. Make the blue brighter.
The music is loud. Tone it down.
You need to incorperate some hit sounds. For example, on 00:28:53 (7,8,9) in Hard you can have Clap-Clap-Finish.

Easy
Rename to Easy.
Decrease HP drain rate.
You didn't retime this. Should I?
Try a slider tick rate of 2 instead of 4.

01:11:34 (1) - End at 01:12:81.
01:17:72 (1) - Move 1/2 forward to 01:17:92 (1).
01:18:75 (2) - Move 1/2 forward to 01:18:94 (3).
01:23:02 (1) - Move closer to 01:22:00 (2).
01:25:64 (2,3,4,5) - New combos for each.

Hard
Rename to Hard.

00:30:58 (13) - Weird slider. Retime it and add a new combo.
00:37:36 (3) - Unstack.
00:54:89 (1) - This is crooked.
01:05:12 (1,1,1) - Unstack these.
01:10:24 (1) - This is crooked.
01:20:85 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Delete these. Only one is good. Replace with a break.
01:40:68 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Ew. Make a nice pattern with this.
01:53:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Beautiful, and creative. <3
02:08:57 (8) - New combo.
02:12:66 (5) - New combo.
02:13:94 (6) - New combo.
02:19:06 (2) - New combo.
02:26:48 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same comment as before.
Dartmir
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Dartmir
отличный битмап =)
MennyRuS
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MennyRuS
Хороший Битмап :)
[DBF]
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Doomsday
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Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[SHOOPIN-_-] (don't you mean shoppin-_-)

00:22:091 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 1, 2) - move these forward, onto the white ticks
00:20:687 (10, 1) - these 2 are too close together. i'd move (1) away from (10) with distance snap.
00:25:153 (6, 7) - this mini jump seems a bit random. its fine with me, but it might not be with others. maybe replace (6) with a slider.
00:29:875 (2) - move this onto the white tick
00:30:832 (1) - seems a little short for a normal

[GO SHOPPIN!]

00:22:654 (4) - end this on the white tick.
00:37:365 (3) - this would sound better if it was only 1/8 long, and repeated until the red tick
02:32:596 (1) - long sliders are boring. maybe replace this with a spinner

also, you'll need to add hitsounds to both difficulties.
not a bad map.
star'd
Kannon_old
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Kannon_old
удачи тебе с новом мапой! ;)
[DBF]
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Update.
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ProF
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ProF
Звезда.
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Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Go shoppin']
00:26:49 (1) - Align with 2
00:30:58 (1) - End 1 1/4 tick earlier
00:38:77 (7) - Align with 5
01:11:77 (3) - The spacing seems a little off here. Resnap it on the grid and align it properly
01:40:450 - Inherit the timing sections here
02:32:62 (1) - End 1 1/4 tick later (to the right --->)

Remind me to mod the other difficulty later
[DBF]
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Thanks for star's and fixes! :) Update!
Behon
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I kind of feel that this would be better if you turned the countdown off. It's rarely a good idea to leave it in when people are talking or singing at the same time.
funnylover
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Starrodkirby86
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Catchy song. :3

Before I tell you anything, you got to change the Timing ASAP.

BPM: 117.55
Offset: 15521

Resnap all notes. This will take care of all problems with the notes being at 1/8. Songs generally don't land on 1/8 unless they're pretty unique or strange...This song doesn't meet that exception. If you're using 1/8 to make the song sound better, consider that you have a bad offset. :(

[shooppin-_-]:
00:20:68 (10) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
00:51:37 (4) - Move this fella to the white tick before and respace accordingly.
00:53:86 (4) - This slider should end at a white tick, not some odd 1/8. Try reshaping it to make it end there?

[Go shoppin!]:
01:29:68 (1,2,3,4) - It would be cool if these were like...horizontally even with each other, you know?
01:33:77 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, I guess. xD
02:32:62 (1) - Holy crap, what an eyesore. <3?

Inherit those time sections. I don't know the giant problem of it, but inherit the 2nd timing section and up. That's what those things are usually used for. The red bars are good for changing BPM and all. If you want to keep the same BPM, just make it inherited (Green bars~)

That's pretty much it...I think. Hope you can settle with the timing of this quickly. The map itself isn't bad, just messy around some areas.

Good job! Star.
[DBF]
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update!
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Detective Tuesday
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Sorry, I don't have much to say (but that's actually kind of a good thing, no?).

In the harder difficulty, the 2nd combo starts way too close to where the first combo ends. I suggest just taking the whole first combo and sliding it over to the left a few notches, problem solved.

Anyway, nice map, have a star!
Zekira
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Zekira
W-wait a minute. Why do you have different BPMs on the different difficulties?

I am NOT modding this further until I see why, because as I continue to mod, it gets weirder and weirder!
[DBF]
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Zekira
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Zekira
I really don't understand why the shooppin'-__- difficulty has 117.55 BPM while Go shoppin' has 117.26...

...I prefer 117.26, but whatever, I'm having a hard time looking at it...
Yuukari-Banteki
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[shoppin-_-]
ugh...none of the notes are snapped and the timing is off...i think your bpm is too slow but i cant time it better than what you have >< i apologize, i cant mod it like this
gyt
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Star! (хотя мне нравилось, когда на 01:19:835 было много спинеров, а сейчас там как-то совсем уж пусто)
antony11
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antony11
Here is suggestion for you

Go shoppin!
00:51:82 (1) - the slider end earlier it should end on52:843
01:40:68 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - you must Inherit previous timing section(If you don't know how to use plz ask me)

shooppin?-_-
00:22:15 (1) to the end: are you forget renap the notes?@@ they're not on the time line
_snr__old
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_snr__old
клевая мапа ваще обалденно
[DBF]
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[DBF]

antony11 wrote:

Here is suggestion for you

shooppin?-_-
00:22:15 (1) to the end: are you forget renap the notes?@@ they're not on the time line
oh,thx.. :) I have not noticed it.
Mafiamaster
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[DBF]
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Update!
tieff
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tieff
Немного тревожит тайминг/оффсет. Вроде все верно, но...
Хлопками выделяй сильную лолю долю.

[shooppin-_-]
00:51:358 (4) - Вправо 1 грид. (Сетка 4 лвл)
00:53:917 (4) - Не просек фишку. =( Слайдер должен возвращатся в это время - 00:54:428 (белая отметка)
00:55:963 (х) - Если пофиксишь то, что выше, то добавь кружок сюда.
01:05:174 (2) - Хлопок или свисток, имхо.
01:06:197 (4) - ^
01:09:267 (2) - ^
01:10:291 (4) - ^

[Go shoppin!]
00:18:611 (1) - Слайдер должен оканчиватся сдесь 00:19:122
00:22:704 (4) - Хлопок.
00:24:239 (3) - Хлопок.
00:38:822 (7) - Что-то не так тут...
00:59:289 (3) - Слайдер должен кончатся сдесь 00:59:545
01:17:710 (5,6,7) - Вверх на 1 грид.
01:53:528 (1-15) - Я ЛЮБЛЮ ЭТО!

Это должно быть ранкнуто.
Держи мою звезду.
Mashley
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Mashley
All seems fine, but the timing seems off a but.
RemmyX25
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I'm not a big fan of the difficulty names. They seem too similar, and I don't believe a emote is going to make a big difference.

If anything, a simple [Normal] and [Hard] will be fine, just be sure to Full Submit if you change the difficulty names.
Also, "shooppin" ?

shooppin'-_-
My first recommendation would be to make the hitcircles just a tad bigger.
00:30:72 (1) - Don't make the volume so low at the end
Don't make a lot of combos with just 1 hitcircle in them, like 00:36:00 (1,1,1,1,1,1) and 00:44:19 (1,1,1,1,1). This happens throughout the map, and doesn't look nice.
01:11:31 (1) - The end of this isn't snapped to the white tick

Go Shoppin'!
Again, don't make so many new combos
00:36:26 (2) - Don't end this on a 1/8 note. In fact, i think its better ended on 00:37:031
00:37:41 (3) - This makes no sense at all, and doesn't work with the music
01:20:01 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Spinner spam, and none of them can reach the 2000 bonus mark on |Auto|
01:53:52 (1 - 15) - This is kinda cool, but im not sure how well other BATs will approve of it.
02:10:15 (1,2,3,4) - These all end on 1/8 notes, instead of 1/4
02:25:50 (1) - Doesn't reach 2000 bonus
02:32:67 (1) - .... not sure what to say about this. I just felt like i needed to point it out.
Jinxy
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Jinxy
? = Suggestion.

[Easy]
00:41:12 (3) - Move this up a little.
00:43:68 (8) - Move this down a little.
00:53:91 (4,5) - Grid 3 and move down a little.

[Hard]
00:19:37 (1) - Tweak this slider a little so it looks nicer?
00:24:49 (4,1) - ^
01:10:29 (1) - Straighten this slider.


Starred.
anonymous_old
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General
The blue combos are hard to see on the blue or black background. Either change the colour or add a skin to change the approach circle to white (not sure if that's possible).
For some reason, when the Beatmap by [DBF] appears, the background goes blank in-game. That doesn't happen in the editor. Hmm..
Need more hitsounds, I guess.

Easy
00:56:47 (1,2,3) - Looks weird because it's not aligned like every other note.
01:11:31 (1) - End at 01:12:84.
01:15:40 (1) - Move to 01:15:66 (1/2 forward).

Hard
Increase HP Drain Rate because there's so many single-hit combos.
00:24:49 (4) - New combo.
00:28:58 (7,10) - New combos.
00:30:63 (1) - Make shorter. Kill the next-to-last node on the slider and clean up.
00:36:26 (2) - End at either 00:36:77 or 00:37:03.
00:37:54 (3) - Make a slider like 00:35:75 (1).
00:38:82 (7) - Make shorter and start at 00:39:07. Then, add a note at 00:38:82.
00:50:84 (2,3,4,5,1) - Align to grid.
01:00:05 (1,1,1) - Move under the end of 00:59:20 (3).
01:17:70 (5) - New combo.
01:18:73 (8) - New combo.
01:20:01 (1,1,1,1) - Replace with a shorter spinner, like in Easy, followed by a break.
01:37:92 (x) - Create same pattern here as in 01:29:73 (1,2,3,4) and 01:33:82 (1,2,3,4).
02:01:45 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:01:97 (2) - New combo.
02:12:71 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Move so 02:12:71 (1) is under end of 02:11:69 (2).
02:19:11 (2) - New combo.
00:28:58 (7) - New combo.
RemmyX25
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Star ran away.

Try not to edit original post from the forums, please. If you have to and you have a star/bubble, use the BSS
Lokamp
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dymo
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dymo
неплохо очень даже, но как и писал в аське - повторюсь:
1. в середине слишком много спинеров))) в принципе пох :)
2. не делай круги без звука удара - это сакс :)
mattyu007
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Go shaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawpin

(Optional) Kiai Time:
01:45:59 - 02:26:53

Otherwise, looks pretty good. (and it's catchy lol)
m980
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m980
The easier difficulty is fine.. but..

Hard
00:59:20 (3) - Um..
02:11:69 (2) - Um..
Get rid of ALL the silent sections. Kthxbai
Larto
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Larto
Overall:
The background doesn't really relate to the song at all, right?... Oh well. Keep it if you must.

Hard:
00:18:61 (1) - 1/8 shorter
00:30:89 (1) - This sounds weird. The repeat doesn't sync anything??
00:59:28 (3) - Umm.. 1/6 shorter. it's supposed to end on the white tick.
01:53:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Nice. The pattern though isn't regular. the two lines aren't really lines, they're not perfectly straight. Fix it if you want. Don't need to.

Easy:
The abrupt ending sucks. At least put a note 01:29:223 Here. That'd make it a bit better.
[DBF]
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All thanks!Update!
Larto
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Larto
All good now? :O
Lokamp
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Lokamp
Lokamp's here for the 2nd sight!
It's well known: the modder mods always two times...

Hard
[01:04:569] for this 4 beats, set whistle-clap-whistle-clap (clap also on the end of the next slider)
[01:13:562] end these 5 sliders like this: whistle-clap-whistle-clap-whistle (plus, a finish sound on the next 5th white beat!)
[01:17:633] end these 2 combo series with a finish
[01:29:588] set soft sounds from here to 01:39:491 (with finish sounds at 01:39:491 EVERY beat n.2 and n.4 of the variuous combo series)
[02:02:500] claps here...
[02:03:550] ...and here...
[02:04:581] ...and here... (and whistle all the next slider!) (or perhaps, change form of it...)
[02:09:661] ...and here!
[02:19:729] Other claps on the next two 4th beats
[02:21:190] whistles on 3th, 6th and 9th beats!
[02:23:138] finish on the next two 3th beats
[02:27:089] and now, a final series of whistles! set one of them here, ...
[02:28:079] another here, ...
[02:31:179] and here ...
[02:32:171] and here...
[02:35:285] and here... (pretty repetitive, isn't it?)
[02:36:315] and here!
[02:39:345] almost forget: a finish here!
vytalibus
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vytalibus
[Easy]
01:29:73 (6) - New combo.

[Hard]
01:20:01 (1,1,1,1,1) - Five consecutive spinners? I don't know. You can do better than this.
mattyu007
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[Easy]
00:30:72 (1) - Resnap to the previous red tick, extend to the white tick at the inherited timing section start
00:31:91() - Re-set break

[Hard]
00:30:63 (1) - Shorten 1/1
00:32:93() - Re-set break

[Kiai Time]
01:04:66 - 01:21:03 <- This should not be on Hard (Only on Easy)
01:45:59 - 02:26:53 <- This should not be on Easy (Only on Hard)
[DBF]
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Update!
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