This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年4月20日 at 13:19:12

Artist: Shang Hai Shi Shao Nian Gong He Chang Dui
Title: Hu Lu Wa
Source: 葫芦兄弟
Tags: Shanghaishi Shaoniangong Hechangdui Shanghaishishaoniangonghechangdui
BPM: 142.43
Filesize: 1661kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Futsuu (4.27 stars, 193 notes)
2. Kantan (1.91 stars, 101 notes)
3. Muzukashii (4.82 stars, 295 notes)
4. Oni (4.83 stars, 491 notes)

Download: Shang Hai Shi Shao Nian Gong He Chang Dui - Hu Lu Wa
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Who can mod it ~
thanks!!!
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oni 100%!!!!
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The mp3 was chang.please rd before 11/12

在 Modding Queue 看到大大的回覆

首先我想說明一下，大大完全沒有看到我的規則，甚至我最後的回覆@@

我在 Rule 裡面很清楚交代我不懂得看太鼓

還有就是 Modding Queue 的配額和回覆的要求，大大都沒有遵守

我知道大大是新人，可能暫時不太熟識環境，所以我在這裡提醒一下

別人在 Modding Queue 寫的 Rule 一定要看一下，無視它們並且隨意回覆會對別人造成麻煩

希望大大下次注意一下

ertyukjh010 wrote:

在 Modding Queue 看到大大的回覆

首先我想說明一下，大大完全沒有看到我的規則，甚至我最後的回覆@@

我在 Rule 裡面很清楚交代我不懂得看太鼓

還有就是 Modding Queue 的配額和回覆的要求，大大都沒有遵守

我知道大大是新人，可能暫時不太熟識環境，所以我在這裡提醒一下

別人在 Modding Queue 寫的 Rule 一定要看一下，無視它們並且隨意回覆會對別人造成麻煩

希望大大下次注意一下

我勒个去= =没看到第3条..我错了T.T..以后一定小心---谢谢!

看见歌名戳了进来
因为是taiko所以不会看

那么唯一的误导建议是 这不是原版 艺术家所以应该找到翻唱的artist并标明而不是Er Tong Ge Qu

ZZHBOY wrote:

看见歌名戳了进来
因为是taiko所以不会看

那么唯一的误导建议是 这不是原版 艺术家所以应该找到翻唱的artist并标明而不是Er Tong Ge Qu

额..酷狗下载的直接就是儿童歌曲四个字= =!没说明作者!!

Oni

00:08:602 (45,46,47,48,49) - kkddk
00:11:972 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - 四串考慮用不同色?
00:16:606 (102) - k
00:17:027 (105) - (delete
00:22:082 (142,143,144,145,146,147) - ?????? ( ?=重新設串
00:24:610 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165) - kkddkkd
00:38:301 (249,250) - k
00:39:038 - d or k
00:44:725 - k
00:46:515 (298,299,300,301,302,303) - ??????
00:49:043 - k
00:51:570 (331,332,333,334) - ddkdk
00:55:782 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - ?
剩下些重複的部分可以考慮改顏色
蠻多重複的 可以考慮換色(?

Muzukashii

00:06:074 (16,17) - k d k
00:07:233 -
00:07:549 - k
00:08:813 - k
00:24:715 (106) - > 00:24:820 - (移動到
00:28:822 - K
00:37:754 -

OK 這譜估計不能過關 但是我覺得真的可以過關 <_>
有許多串子，不能有雜色，只能同色串。 這難度的規定是這樣。。。。。
但是有時候有例外 例如kkd ddk這種>_>


futsuu , kantan

none

不錯~

zx_baka_0502442 wrote:

Oni

00:08:602 (45,46,47,48,49) - kkddk
00:11:972 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - 四串考慮用不同色?
00:16:606 (102) - k
00:17:027 (105) - (delete
00:22:082 (142,143,144,145,146,147) - ?????? ( ?=重新設串
00:24:610 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165) - kkddkkd
00:38:301 (249,250) - k
00:39:038 - d or k
00:44:725 - k
00:46:515 (298,299,300,301,302,303) - ??????
00:49:043 - k
00:51:570 (331,332,333,334) - ddkdk
00:55:782 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - ?
剩下些重複的部分可以考慮改顏色
蠻多重複的 可以考慮換色(?

Muzukashii

00:06:074 (16,17) - k d k
00:07:233 -
00:07:549 - k
00:08:813 - k
00:24:715 (106) - > 00:24:820 - (移動到
00:28:822 - K
00:37:754 -

OK 這譜估計不能過關 但是我覺得真的可以過關 <_>
有許多串子，不能有雜色，只能同色串。 這難度的規定是這樣。。。。。
但是有時候有例外 例如kkd ddk這種>_>


futsuu , kantan

none

不錯~

OK.Mod it ~有些大圈改了下~=W=...

Hi
taiko mod req from my queue

[sign]
^ same as above
f Finish note
d don
k kat

[General]
01:14:950 - 　kiai should make this portion the last. If this is not set up at the end, it is urank.

uncheck Letterbox during breaks.
^all diffs.

Please change a diff name as follows.
futsuu > Futsuu
kantan> Kantan

[Oni]
00:29:244 (190) - k
00:30:297 (196) - remove finish. and 00:30:402 - add k , 00:30:718 (198) - remove f.
00:36:616 (235) - k this sound the accent
00:42:303 (271) - ^
00:42:724 (273) - remove f
00:43:145 (275) - ^
00:43:251 - add d
00:43:567 (278) - remove f
00:58:311 - ^ and 00:58:416 - add k
00:58:732 - ^ and 00:58:837 - add d
00:58:942 - k this sound the accent
01:14:845 - delete. 　It is dislike that a player has big notes in the last of stream.

[Muzukashii]
00:08:813 (28) - k This is difficult in Muzukashii. newbie player cannot be well struck by alternation.
00:20:608 (85,86,87,88,89) - ^
00:18:712 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - This is difficult in Muzukashii. 　Please rearrange.
00:23:767 (100,101,102,103,104) - This is difficult in Muzukashii. newbie player cannot be well struck by alternation.

there are many places which should be rearranged.
Please rearrange the above to reference.

good luck.

Lundlerol wrote:

Hi
taiko mod req from my queue

[sign]
^ same as above
f Finish note
d don
k kat

[General]
01:14:950 - 　kiai should make this portion the last. If this is not set up at the end, it is urank.

uncheck Letterbox during breaks.
^all diffs.

Please change a diff name as follows.
futsuu > Futsuu
kantan> Kantan

[Oni]
00:29:244 (190) - k
00:30:297 (196) - remove finish. and 00:30:402 - add k , 00:30:718 (198) - remove f.
00:36:616 (235) - k this sound the accent
00:42:303 (271) - ^
00:42:724 (273) - remove f
00:43:145 (275) - ^
00:43:251 - add d
00:43:567 (278) - remove f
00:58:311 - ^ and 00:58:416 - add k
00:58:732 - ^ and 00:58:837 - add d
00:58:942 - k this sound the accent
01:14:845 - delete. 　It is dislike that a player has big notes in the last of stream.

[Muzukashii]
00:08:813 (28) - k This is difficult in Muzukashii. newbie player cannot be well struck by alternation.
00:20:608 (85,86,87,88,89) - ^
00:18:712 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - This is difficult in Muzukashii. 　Please rearrange.
00:23:767 (100,101,102,103,104) - This is difficult in Muzukashii. newbie player cannot be well struck by alternation.

there are many places which should be rearranged.
Please rearrange the above to reference.

good luck.

OK.MOD it ~thanks!!

hey cream let me help you this >,<//
hope this help you >,<

Oni
00:06:496 (32) - k
00:07:128 (36) - k
00:07:759 (40) - d
00:08:181 (43) - k
00:09:866 (54) - k
00:16:606 (102,103) - dk
00:18:502 (114) - k
00:21:240 (137) - k
00:25:031 (160) - d
00:25:242 (162) - k
00:32:614 (212) - k
00:33:035 (214) - d
00:38:301 (247,248,249,250,251) - d k d d d
00:45:041 (288) - d
00:45:252 (289) - K
00:45:462 (290) - delete. to give a little break
00:46:305 (295) - k
00:48:622 (311) - k
00:49:043 (314,315,316,317) - d d k d
00:50:096 (320) - d
00:50:307 (321) - k
00:51:360 (328) - k
00:53:677 (343,344) - k d
01:00:417 (393,394,395) - dkk
01:01:681 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - ddkkdkk
01:03:682 (418) - k
01:06:946 (440,441) - d k
01:15:056 (499) - k

Tags: zx_baka_0502442 lundlerol

You will mistake, if the person who moded is added to tags.
tags is a portion which puts the name of the person who made guest diff into your mapset.
please remove.

and plz no kds

mingmichael wrote:

hey cream let me help you this >,<//
hope this help you >,<

Oni
00:06:496 (32) - k
00:07:128 (36) - k
00:07:759 (40) - d
00:08:181 (43) - k
00:09:866 (54) - k
00:16:606 (102,103) - dk
00:18:502 (114) - k
00:21:240 (137) - k
00:25:031 (160) - d
00:25:242 (162) - k
00:32:614 (212) - k
00:33:035 (214) - d
00:38:301 (247,248,249,250,251) - d k d d d
00:45:041 (288) - d
00:45:252 (289) - K
00:45:462 (290) - delete. to give a little break
00:46:305 (295) - k
00:48:622 (311) - k
00:49:043 (314,315,316,317) - d d k d
00:50:096 (320) - d
00:50:307 (321) - k
00:51:360 (328) - k
00:53:677 (343,344) - k d
01:00:417 (393,394,395) - dkk
01:01:681 (400,401,402,403,404,405,406) - ddkkdkk
01:03:682 (418) - k
01:06:946 (440,441) - d k
01:15:056 (499) - k

OK.mod it ..But some advises I don't accept thanks!

Lundlerol wrote:

Tags: zx_baka_0502442 lundlerol

You will mistake, if the person who moded is added to tags.
tags is a portion which puts the name of the person who made guest diff into your mapset.
please remove.

and plz no kds

Thanks! I know!thanks!!

嗨 Cream, 來mod了 \:D/
d=紅 k=藍 D=大紅 K=大藍

[Kantan]

00:15:342 (19) k, 與 00:18:712 一致
00:16:185 (21,22) 這裡用d k 比較好, 貼合背景音
00:22:082 k
00:40:618 k
01:15:161 D

[Futsuu]

00:15:763 - 00:16:606 k k d d k
00:16:817 移除
00:17:027 放一個d
00:17:659 移除
00:19:133 - 00:19:976 k k d d k
00:20:187 移除
00:20:397 放一個d
00:21:661 - 00:23:346 k d k d k
00:36:826 k d d
00:40:196 k
00:40:618 k k d k d
00:41:881 - 00:43:145 k d k d
00:45:252 k d
01:05:472 - 01:07:157 k d k d k

[Muzukashii]

00:19:976 k
00:34:931 kkk (Muzu不宜使用複雜連)
00:42:092 ddddd k
00:49:043 kkkkk
00:50:096 d k
00:57:468 d
01:02:313 k
01:02:944 k
01:05:683 k

[Oni]

00:35:352 k

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

嗨 Cream, 來mod了 \:D/
d=紅 k=藍 D=大紅 K=大藍

[Kantan]

00:15:342 (19) k, 與 00:18:712 一致
00:16:185 (21,22) 這裡用d k 比較好, 貼合背景音
00:22:082 k
00:40:618 k
01:15:161 D

[Futsuu]

00:15:763 - 00:16:606 k k d d k
00:16:817 移除
00:17:027 放一個d
00:17:659 移除
00:19:133 - 00:19:976 k k d d k
00:20:187 移除
00:20:397 放一個d
00:21:661 - 00:23:346 k d k d k
00:36:826 k d d
00:40:196 k
00:40:618 k k d k d
00:41:881 - 00:43:145 k d k d
00:45:252 k d
01:05:472 - 01:07:157 k d k d k

[Muzukashii]

00:19:976 k
00:34:931 kkk (Muzu不宜使用複雜連)
00:42:092 ddddd k
00:49:043 kkkkk
00:50:096 d k
00:57:468 d
01:02:313 k
01:02:944 k
01:05:683 k

[Oni]

00:35:352 k

hoho~弄好了~~
谢了￣
Nardo￣＝Ｗ＝

Sorry for the late modding http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/133160
_____________________________

General

Untick the letterbox during breaks (song setup -> design -> untick letterbox)

Timing

set a preview point of this song

Kantan

OD -1
00:12:815 (16) - delete this note
00:16:185 (21) - ^, follow the vocal here
00:30:086 (41) - ^, make it follow 00:25:452 (32,33,34,35,36,37) -
00:38:933 (9,10) - make it D K
00:40:618 (11,12,13) - make it k d d
01:06:736 (50) - delete this note

Futsuu

OD -1
00:15:974 (32) - delete this note
00:19:344 (42) - delete this note
00:23:767 (55,56,57,58,59,60) - make them like 00:21:661 (50,51,52,53,54) -
00:50:939 (52) - delete this note
00:58:521 (71) - ^
01:00:628 (78) - move to 01:00:838 - and change to d
01:03:998 (88) - ^
01:07:578 (97,98,99,100,101) - make it like 01:05:472 (92,93,94,95,96) -
01:14:950 (118,119) - delete and put K in 01:15:056 -

Muzukashii

OD -1
00:18:502 (73) - delete this note
00:20:397 (84) - ^
00:20:608 (85,86,87,88,89) - make them triplets like k k k
00:23:767 (100,101,102,103,104) - ^
00:26:927 (116) - delete this note
00:28:612 (125) - ^
00:33:456 (5) - the music is up in here so k
00:33:878 (6) - ^
00:37:564 (22,23,24,25) - move them 1 step forward
00:41:671 (39) - delete this note
00:42:092 (41,42,43,44,45) - make them triplets
00:44:514 (52) - delete this note and move 00:44:830 (54) - to 00:44:725 -
00:45:041 (55) - delete this note
00:49:043 (70,71,72,73,74) - dont apply these in muzu because its too hard for muzu player
00:53:887 (94) - delete this note
00:55:572 (103) - ^
00:59:785 (122) - ^
01:01:259 (129) - ^
01:03:155 (139) - ^
01:03:576 (141,143) - ^
01:10:316 (168,170) - ^
01:12:002 (177,179) - ^
01:14:634 (187) - ^
01:14:950 - add note here and move 01:15:161 (189) - to 01:15:056 -

Oni

There are no stopping in this diff
I suggest remove some notes that should not be there in some part of the song example 00:03:126 (10,11,12) - remove the 11 and 12

Uchiha_sorayuki wrote:

Sorry for the late modding http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/133160
_____________________________

General

Untick the letterbox during breaks (song setup -> design -> untick letterbox)

Timing

set a preview point of this song

Kantan

OD -1
00:12:815 (16) - delete this note
00:16:185 (21) - ^, follow the vocal here
00:30:086 (41) - ^, make it follow 00:25:452 (32,33,34,35,36,37) -
00:38:933 (9,10) - make it D K
00:40:618 (11,12,13) - make it k d d
01:06:736 (50) - delete this note

Futsuu

OD -1
00:15:974 (32) - delete this note
00:19:344 (42) - delete this note
00:23:767 (55,56,57,58,59,60) - make them like 00:21:661 (50,51,52,53,54) -
00:50:939 (52) - delete this note
00:58:521 (71) - ^
01:00:628 (78) - move to 01:00:838 - and change to d
01:03:998 (88) - ^
01:07:578 (97,98,99,100,101) - make it like 01:05:472 (92,93,94,95,96) -
01:14:950 (118,119) - delete and put K in 01:15:056 -

Muzukashii

OD -1
00:18:502 (73) - delete this note
00:20:397 (84) - ^
00:20:608 (85,86,87,88,89) - make them triplets like k k k
00:23:767 (100,101,102,103,104) - ^
00:26:927 (116) - delete this note
00:28:612 (125) - ^
00:33:456 (5) - the music is up in here so k
00:33:878 (6) - ^
00:37:564 (22,23,24,25) - move them 1 step forward
00:41:671 (39) - delete this note
00:42:092 (41,42,43,44,45) - make them triplets
00:44:514 (52) - delete this note and move 00:44:830 (54) - to 00:44:725 -
00:45:041 (55) - delete this note
00:49:043 (70,71,72,73,74) - dont apply these in muzu because its too hard for muzu player
00:53:887 (94) - delete this note
00:55:572 (103) - ^
00:59:785 (122) - ^
01:01:259 (129) - ^
01:03:155 (139) - ^
01:03:576 (141,143) - ^
01:10:316 (168,170) - ^
01:12:002 (177,179) - ^
01:14:634 (187) - ^
01:14:950 - add note here and move 01:15:161 (189) - to 01:15:056 -

Oni

There are no stopping in this diff
I suggest remove some notes that should not be there in some part of the song example 00:03:126 (10,11,12) - remove the 11 and 12

Thanks for modding it ~
I remap some ..
But your some suggestion I don't agree~Sorry~

As requested by , I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[General]

• mp3 quality is quite bad. Volume is too low and the beats are too insignificant.

• ( For all 4 diffs ) imo soft 70% is too soft. Maybe you should use normal / louder soft. ( Kiai : Normal 70%. It stands out too much from the music, and I'd suggest reducing a bit )

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[ Oni]

• It seems that I can't really understand the reasoning of how you place patterns. The hitsounds seem to be very random for me. Some streams don't really fit the song and imo it doesn't deserve to be that hard. I'd suggest you having a recheck on this map and trying to improve the hitsound consistency. Below are the suggestions that can help reduce the difficulty.

imo this diff needs more fixing before it is ready for rank, esp for usage of patterns ( aka note arrangements )
Find me if you have problems on fixing

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[ Muzukashii]

• imo the use of finishes throughout the diff is too random. Below are some suggestions that can help you a bit. Remember to refer to oni diff, which has better uses of finishes.

• 00:43:988 ( 46~58 ) - This section doesn't seem to fit the music. Better remap this and try to notice how the music goes.

• 01:02:313 ( 131 ) - Maybe delete this note to break down the lengthy section at 103~137 ?

Well, this one has better note arrangements than oni.
But still you need to improve in terms of hitsounds arrangement, rhythm design and use of finishes

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[ Futsuu]


• 00:43:567 ( 35 ) - It's better to add a note on 00:43:567 and start the slider at 00:43:988 ( ends at 00:44:830 ) ( You're currently ignoring one significant beat in the music, which doesn't fit well )

Patterns and hitsounds are better than muzu and oni, but still have big room of improvement
Use of finishes is still too random x_x

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[ Kantan]


• 00:01:862 ( 1 ) - I'll prefer red note instead. ( D can make a pitch difference with 2. Also I don't think there's any instrument / vocal pitch that supports K )

• 00:27:137 ( 35~41, 1 ) - I'd prefer sth like this. Add finish for 38~40. ( This can fit the music a lot better )

Once again, the main issue of this diff is the use of finishes. They're just too random

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I think I can assume this is your very first attempt at taiko mapping

I guess you should look at more ranked taiko diffs, and see how they place patterns, hitsounds and finishes.

That's it. Find me if you really have problems on fixing.

Hi~ Cream Vie <33
Thank you for request my mod ヽ(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ

※ I'm an unskilled modder. and my English skill is very poor..
if you don't like my mod, and if you can't understand my English. please ignore it! orz

　◆General

　◆Kantan

　◆Futsuu

　◆Muzukashii

　◆Oni

yey! that's all~!
I'm waiting for rank~! Good luck ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ"

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by , I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[General]

• mp3 quality is quite bad. Volume is too low and the beats are too insignificant.

• ( For all 4 diffs ) imo soft 70% is too soft. Maybe you should use normal / louder soft. ( Kiai : Normal 70%. It stands out too much from the music, and I'd suggest reducing a bit )

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[ Oni]

• It seems that I can't really understand the reasoning of how you place patterns. The hitsounds seem to be very random for me. Some streams don't really fit the song and imo it doesn't deserve to be that hard. I'd suggest you having a recheck on this map and trying to improve the hitsound consistency. Below are the suggestions that can help reduce the difficulty.

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00:04:916 ( 23, 24 ) - Delete this ? ( It's good to reduce the length of the section which has no 1/2 or above rest. imo the song isn't that intense and more rests should be added )
00:08:391 ( 44 ) - ^ ( Same reason )
00:11:761 ( 67 ) - ^
00:15:131 ( 89 ) - ^
00:34:931 ( 224~228 ) - ^
00:38:722 ( 249 ) - ^
00:52:202 ( 333 ) - ^
00:55:572 ( 356 ) - ^

00:15:342 ( 90~104 ) - This stream doesn't fit the music. Both vocal and instrument don't have such intense beats and so I'd strongly dividing it into smaller parts.
00:18:712 ( 115~129 ) - ^
00:59:153 ( 381~395 ) - ^
01:02:523 ( 407~421 ) - ^

imo this diff needs more fixing before it is ready for rank, esp for usage of patterns ( aka note arrangements )
Find me if you have problems on fixing

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[ Muzukashii]

• imo the use of finishes throughout the diff is too random. Below are some suggestions that can help you a bit. Remember to refer to oni diff, which has better uses of finishes.

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00:04:811 ( 12 ) - Remove finish ? ( It sounds too random and the background doesn't have such strong beat to justify a finish )
00:12:815 ( 43 ) - ^ ( Finishes from 42~44 : This could be over-emphasizing this part of the song )
00:43:145 ( 44~45 ) - ^ ( I can't really understand why finishes are added for these 2 notes )
00:51:570 ( 79~80 ) - ^ ( o o O should already be enough. O O O is overemphasizing imo )

• 00:43:988 ( 46~58 ) - This section doesn't seem to fit the music. Better remap this and try to notice how the music goes.

• 01:02:313 ( 131 ) - Maybe delete this note to break down the lengthy section at 103~137 ?

Well, this one has better note arrangements than oni.
But still you need to improve in terms of hitsounds arrangement, rhythm design and use of finishes

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[ Futsuu]

Issues about finishes

• 00:17:870 ( 38 ) - Remove finish ? ( Again, I think this finish is too random and doesn't really justify with the music )


• 00:51:570 ( 55, 56 ) - Maybe add finish at 56 instead of 55 / Remove finish at 55 ? ( 55 doesn't fit a finish. The beat is just not strong enough imo )

00:53:677 ( 61, 66 ) - Either add finish at 66 or remove finish at 61. ( For consistency of using finishes )

01:01:049 ( 79 ) - Remove this ? ( Again it's just too random. There's no any patterned usage / special strong beats to support this finish )
01:04:419 ( 89 ) - ^

• 00:43:567 ( 35 ) - It's better to add a note on 00:43:567 and start the slider at 00:43:988 ( ends at 00:44:830 ) ( You're currently ignoring one significant beat in the music, which doesn't fit well )

Patterns and hitsounds are better than muzu and oni, but still have big room of improvement
Use of finishes is still too random x_x

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[ Kantan]

Again, issues about finishes

00:33:035 ( 1 ) - Remove finish ? ( Again a random finish that I can't think of a reason to justify it )

00:39:775 ( 10 ) - ^ ( 9 already has the function of emphasizing and imo this one is unnecessary )

00:42:303 ( 14, 15 ) - ^ ( I'll say 16~18 are the heavy beats rather than 14~15 )

01:12:633 ( 59 ) - Add finish ? ( To fit the finish at 60. Both notes are equally heavy imo )

• 00:01:862 ( 1 ) - I'll prefer red note instead. ( D can make a pitch difference with 2. Also I don't think there's any instrument / vocal pitch that supports K )

• 00:27:137 ( 35~41, 1 ) - I'd prefer sth like this. Add finish for 38~40. ( This can fit the music a lot better )

Once again, the main issue of this diff is the use of finishes. They're just too random

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I think I can assume this is your very first attempt at taiko mapping

I guess you should look at more ranked taiko diffs, and see how they place patterns, hitsounds and finishes.

That's it. Find me if you really have problems on fixing.

Thanks you mod ~~~ Fix it ~But have a little didn't fix ~

hs714 wrote:

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Thank you for request my mod ヽ(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ

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　◆General

▽ all diff: uhhh, maybe.. Taiko map's Hit sound is Normal only..?
　　　　　　　 00:01:862 - and 00:32:614 - please change to Hit Sound Soft => Normal.

▽ all diff: 00:25:452 - unsnapped green line? but it's not a big deal!

▽ all diff: 01:15:161 - add end Kiai time point is better? but not a big deal too :3

▽ all diff: please open the Song Setup => Design => Remove the Letterbox dring breaks check

SPOILER

　◆Kantan

Volume suggestion only. map is so nice
▽ Audio volume(Hit sound) is too small, at the Kantan diff.
00:01:862 - 80%?
00:25:442 - 90%?
00:32:614 - 80%?
01:09:263 - 90%?

　◆Futsuu

▽ same as Kantan diff! (Volume suggestion) :3
00:07:549 (14) - delete? I can't hear the backmusic/vocal for this part.
00:40:618 (26,27,28,29,30) - try to use ddkdk or dkkkd or dkkdk :3
00:51:360 (54) - delete? same as up!
01:01:049 (78) - I think this is not finish sound. remove finish? small k is more better~ >_<
01:02:944 (83) - Finish?
01:04:419 (88) - same as up. remove finish?
01:08:210 (99) - delete this notes? and 01:08:421 (100) - change to d? try it~ :]
01:14:950 (118) - this note is wrong? move to 01:15:056 - ?

　◆Muzukashii

00:12:393 (42) - I think ddd D is little hard at the Muzukashii diff.
　　　　　　　　　　　　change to d d D or ddd d?:3
00:13:657 - this part suggestion~!

SPOILER

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try it~

00:18:291 (72) - k?
00:28:612 (121) - delete? I can't hear the backmusic >_<
01:15:161 (179) - same as Futsuu diff. move to 01:15:056 - ? :3

　◆Oni

00:05:443 (26,27) - switch? I think d k d k is better :]
00:10:919 (61) - k?
00:11:235 (63) - ^
00:34:931 (225) - note is overlap! please delete one notes!
00:54:730 (350) - k?
00:55:572 (356) - ^
00:56:204 (360,361,362) - ddk or kkd is more better? try it~ xD
00:57:047 (366,367,368) - ^
01:05:051 (429) - k?

yey! that's all~!
I'm waiting for rank~! Good luck ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ"

OK~thanks you Good luck to you too~

Mod as request >.0


First of all, i wonder why is it graveyarded. If you're going to continue to rank this beatmap you should be reviving it first.

well, let's move on to the mod

[General]

1. mp3 quality is quite low, try to find a better one
2. it should be better to use normal 50% at whole song as now the drum sound in non-kiai part is louder than kiai part, which is a bit strange.

[Oni]
In general, the map is quite streamy which some of them fits the music but some of them not, also some of them are better to break down. i would try to point out something that could be changed.

00:00:177 - why not mapping starts from here? the music and drum are quite suitable for you to start mapping here as an intro.

00:04:389 (19,20,21,22) - imo the music here is d ddk, which the sound here is repeating in the whole song and i think d ddk fits bette. (e.g. like 00:07:759 (38,39,40,41) where you use d ddk

00:12:815 (71,72,73,74,75,76) - kdd kdd - i think even though you want to change the pattern using, starting from k would be better than starting from d as k could emphasize high/hard beat more.

00:15:342 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - imo this stream is not quite fitting neither the music nor vocal. break down the stream will be much better to emphasize the hard beat here. maybe you could try this pattern : d d K kkd d K k

00:17:027 - add a D here as you could here the hard beat here, also same as 00:20:397 (122)

00:18:712 - also for this stream, as the same as the above

00:43:988 (273,274,275,276,277) - - as you used K at 00:43:567 (271), I suppose you should be emphasizing the hard beats here, so i would prefer using K K D here.

00:44:830 (280) - delete - as after those hard beats, is better to delete this to emphasize it. Also, there is no music here.
00:45:041 (281) - delete - ^

00:45:462 - add k

The rest of the song is just repeating, and the suggestions are same as the above.

[Muzukashii]
00:00:177 - same as oni, mapping start here could be better

00:11:551 (38) - why K?

00:15:342 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - note that 00:15:342 - 00:15:763 and 00:16:185 - 00:16:606 is the same sound, i would prefer using the same pattern here. e.g. d ddd d k kkk k

That's why i'm not quite sure about how you map as you're always using different (or random i could say) patterns for the SAME sound.

or you may follow 00:18:712 (73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) , this pattern fit the music better.

01:03:366 - not quite understand the break here. the music sentence is from 00:59:153 to 01:02:102, and 01:02:523 - 01:05:472. Here you're giving break at the middle of the sentence and not giving break at where the sentence end (01:02:313). Also consider deleting 01:02:313 (130) as not only because of the sentence, but also the overall difficulty, long 1/2+1/4 streams does not appears in the rest of your map and that is not quite good to have it here.

01:06:736 (150,152,154) - not quite sure what these finishes for, consider removing the finish here?

01:14:318 (175,176,177,178,179,180) - maybe k k d dk will do better for here?

[Futsuu]
00:08:181 (15) - delete? - it could fit the flow better

00:23:978 (56) - again why finish here, remove the finish should be better.

00:38:511 (19) - delete? - it could fit the flow better

01:15:161 (115) - move to 01:15:056

[Kantan]
00:10:287 (12) - imo is better to avoid using finishes at where it is not a hard beat in Kantan. consider remove the finish here.
00:12:815 (16) - ^

00:15:342 (19,20,21,22) - why not following 00:18:712 (24,25) to use K D?

that's all for the mod

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Mod as request >.0


First of all, i wonder why is it graveyarded. If you're going to continue to rank this beatmap you should be reviving it first.

well, let's move on to the mod

[General]

1. mp3 quality is quite low, try to find a better one
2. it should be better to use normal 50% at whole song as now the drum sound in non-kiai part is louder than kiai part, which is a bit strange.

[Oni]
In general, the map is quite streamy which some of them fits the music but some of them not, also some of them are better to break down. i would try to point out something that could be changed.

00:00:177 - why not mapping starts from here? the music and drum are quite suitable for you to start mapping here as an intro.

00:04:389 (19,20,21,22) - imo the music here is d ddk, which the sound here is repeating in the whole song and i think d ddk fits bette. (e.g. like 00:07:759 (38,39,40,41) where you use d ddk

00:12:815 (71,72,73,74,75,76) - kdd kdd - i think even though you want to change the pattern using, starting from k would be better than starting from d as k could emphasize high/hard beat more.

00:15:342 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - imo this stream is not quite fitting neither the music nor vocal. break down the stream will be much better to emphasize the hard beat here. maybe you could try this pattern : d d K kkd d K k

00:17:027 - add a D here as you could here the hard beat here, also same as 00:20:397 (122)

00:18:712 - also for this stream, as the same as the above

00:43:988 (273,274,275,276,277) - - as you used K at 00:43:567 (271), I suppose you should be emphasizing the hard beats here, so i would prefer using K K D here.

00:44:830 (280) - delete - as after those hard beats, is better to delete this to emphasize it. Also, there is no music here.
00:45:041 (281) - delete - ^

00:45:462 - add k

The rest of the song is just repeating, and the suggestions are same as the above.

[Muzukashii]
00:00:177 - same as oni, mapping start here could be better

00:11:551 (38) - why K?

00:15:342 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - note that 00:15:342 - 00:15:763 and 00:16:185 - 00:16:606 is the same sound, i would prefer using the same pattern here. e.g. d ddd d k kkk k

That's why i'm not quite sure about how you map as you're always using different (or random i could say) patterns for the SAME sound.

or you may follow 00:18:712 (73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) , this pattern fit the music better.

01:03:366 - not quite understand the break here. the music sentence is from 00:59:153 to 01:02:102, and 01:02:523 - 01:05:472. Here you're giving break at the middle of the sentence and not giving break at where the sentence end (01:02:313). Also consider deleting 01:02:313 (130) as not only because of the sentence, but also the overall difficulty, long 1/2+1/4 streams does not appears in the rest of your map and that is not quite good to have it here.

01:06:736 (150,152,154) - not quite sure what these finishes for, consider removing the finish here?

01:14:318 (175,176,177,178,179,180) - maybe k k d dk will do better for here?

[Futsuu]
00:08:181 (15) - delete? - it could fit the flow better

00:23:978 (56) - again why finish here, remove the finish should be better.

00:38:511 (19) - delete? - it could fit the flow better

01:15:161 (115) - move to 01:15:056

[Kantan]
00:10:287 (12) - imo is better to avoid using finishes at where it is not a hard beat in Kantan. consider remove the finish here.
00:12:815 (16) - ^

00:15:342 (19,20,21,22) - why not following 00:18:712 (24,25) to use K D?

that's all for the mod

Thanks! I change the mp3!
and somewhere I don't fix ~ But 80% of them I fix~