1. 01:22:244 (2) - clap(+whistle) at slider start
2. 01:23:934 (4) - clap(+whistle) at slider start
3. 01:25:624 (6) - clap at slider start
4. 03:01:962 (4) - clap at slider start
5. 03:03:652 (6) - clap at slider start

1. 01:27:737 (1,2,3) - personally i don't like pattern like this i know that this is a easy diff but think about to add something in the empty places like : 01:29:004 - or 01:30:695 - ecc.. Tried to find simple patterns here, so this is a "challanged" one for the new player, but also not too hard.
2. 01:57:314 (3,4) - what about to make the slider 01:57:314 (3) - in a other way so to make a blanket with the next slider? something like:
   don't look at combo numbers :O Changed

1. 00:17:596 (2) - what about to make this slider like this: atm the actual flow is not so good Changed
2. 00:48:230 (5,6) - what about to make a slider of this 2 circles?Changed
3. 00:55:624 (1,2) - make a better blanket here Imo, its fine
4. 01:19:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - to not use many circles here what about to make 01:19:709 (1,2) - to a slider Changed
5. 01:28:582 (2,1) - uhm this overlap is for first uglu and can be very confusional for many player try to improve it maybe like this: Same as above, i'm always trying to find new patterns, and i used that one on a ranked map before (:
6. 01:30:272 (2,1) - same here^
7. 01:34:497 (1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is a bit hard for a normal imo try to make more visble 01:35:765 (4) - maybe with something like this,this is just a suggestion how to fix it but the complicate pattern itself should be fixed like the next one : 01:36:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
   Same as above, i used that one on a ranked map before (:
8. 01:53:934 (1,2) - make a better blanket here Should be fine
9. 02:01:540 (1) - here the rhythm should be like: sounds a bit better Wanted to have something different, the patterns before and after are the same
10. 02:03:230 (4,5) - improve this blanket No ;w;
11. 02:08:300 (3,4) - this pattern is cute but i think if it were not stacked would be better I followed the other diffs here
12. 02:26:680 (2,4) - improve the little overlap between this 2 sliders Plays fine
13. 02:40:413 (3) - new combo here for read better this pattern It's readable enough and its not too hard for the player
14. 02:57:737 (1,2) - replace this 2 circles with a slider Changed
15. 03:06:610 (2,1) - like i said before this overlap is ugly and confusional
16. 03:08:300 (2,1) - same^ Same too
17. 03:12:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same again about this patterns

1. HP and OD +1

1. 01:19:075 (4,5) - make a better blanket here
2. 01:35:976 - feels a bit empty here add a circle Would change my rythm pattern and pattern
3. 02:02:807 (4,1) - iprove this overlap Wanted to have it like this, flows better, when playing
4. 03:00:061 (3) - new combo here for helping to read the rhythm Should be readable enough (:

1. HP +1

1. 01:00:695 (7) - new combo here would be cute
2. 01:41:258 (7) - new combo here would be cute
3. 03:19:286 (6) - new combo here would be cute

Wolf wrote:

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General

• Besides the SB you said to me that you were already fixing, this looks fine.

Easy

1. 00:28:582 (3) - I might be seeing things, but I honestly think the middle of it is a bit higher than it should be. If you check 00:27:737 (2,3) - the blanket looks a bit odd in comparison to 00:26:892 (1,2) -. You should at least give it a try and move the middle node of 00:28:582 (3) - to x:336 y:232.

Haha you're right, Changed!

1. 00:33:652 (4,5,1) - Flow doesn't work nice here imo, would be a lot better if 00:34:920 (5,2) - was placed a bit higher to give a better variation when playing.

Imo, it flows better straight here, maybe it's just me, but that's what i think.

1. 00:57:314 (2) - There should a clap on the end of it, as you can still hear that specific "drums" that you've chosen to add claps for the pattern. I know there is sort of a "breakdown" there as well, but I think the emphasis should've been on the clap to keep the consistency.

Oh my, i wouldn't of noticed that, added!

1. 02:08:300 (2) - Shouldn't have a NC here? Looks pretty reasonable to me since it begins a new section of the song. Plus, it'd make consistency with only two combos, following the next objects: 02:10:835 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - . Ok, i fixed that (:

Normal

1. 00:27:737 (2) - Ctrl+g here works better for the flow imo, it looks kinda harsh to me the way it is.

Ye, i know, but i wanted to make a "curve" repeating pattern. As in, a flower typed one, which goes from outside to the inside. Its hard to explain this o.o

1. 01:20:131 - Hm, it feels pretty empty without anything here, I honestly think there must be something there to follow the emphasis on the song, based on what you've done with 01:20:342 (2,3,4) - . Maybe adding a circle or adding a reverse arrow to 01:19:709 (1) - should do the trick if you don't want something a bit hard for a normal.

It's a bit challenging for the new player, yes. But that's the reason why i create such patterns, i want them to be prepared and learn for the more difficult diffs.

1. 02:05:765 (2) - Consider removing the clap on the end of it, doesn't make any sense at all.

Moved this one to the actuall beat!

1. 02:42:948 (1) - This doesn't look good to me, it's a bit excessive two arrows on that slider (I broke my combo here when tesplaying aaaa), and I think it should've ended at 02:43:370 - to give more emphasis on the vocals. Though if you still want all those ticks mapped, consider making another pattern for it. I find the pattern below better though. Oh and the same applies for 02:46:328 (1) -, though there looks more reasonable since it doesn't follow the vocals, but you might want to change it as well for consistency (considering you've changed the patterns before).

Ya, i know what you mean, it's just that i don't want to use a 1 reserve again

Hard

1. 00:25:201 (4) - Hmm, better not start this slider with it being curved, looks somewhat weird in parallel with 00:24:357 (3) - . You might want to start is straight shape, then make it curved, it looks better for flow, considering it'd be a nice blanket.

You're totally right, yes. It flows better if it goes curved though, since the others are straight, and if that'd be straight then it doesn't fit the vocal and doesn't flow

1. 00:58:582 (6,7) - Pointing this one more the "personal" side. I feel uncomfortable with fast stacks, especially on a hard. Though it's not a serious thing, I'm still suggesting a pattern below so you can take a better look on what I'm talking about. This same thing applies also for 02:07:877 (4,5) -.

I tried to make it actually easier to play here o.o Since a double is too hard imo

Goddess

1. 01:00:695 (7) - I really think this shouldn't be at the center, I wonder why you haven't finished the "circle" here, it'd look so nice. Note that you'll also have to move 01:00:483 (6) - to get a better place on the grid. This is also better for flow of course.

That's on purpose, didn't want a circle one c(:

1. 02:41:892 (3) - Shouldn't this have a finish? Sounds quite reasonably since it matches with your other patterns like this, before and after.

I followed the drums here, so i placed a finish on every drum. It would make sense yes, but not with my meaning of the finishes (:

1. 03:31:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Unfinished circle AAAA. Just kidding . xD

Nice mapset, you deserve it: Aaaaw thanks ><
By the way, I actually never had the chance to welcome you back at the game. I have to do it, since I remember you did it to me when I returned as well.
Welcome back. Thank you a lot (: