Hey Crimmi,
Sorry for the delay.
Full mod to follow.
[general]
The dark purple is virtually impossible to see on a black background, which is prevalent in the BG video.
[Timing]
00:17:966 - You need a red line to reset the metronome after the 5/4 measure
Double check how the other ranked maps did it just to verify. This never should have been bubbled with this error.
[SB]
In general, the lyrics need to be faded in. You don't really need it if you're going to put a flash on TOP of the lyrics, but when they just appear it looks bad IMO.
00:31:879 - sb3.png comes in without a fadein. While this is sort of OK, I think it would be better if you fade in for 1/4th or 1/8th of a beat. It may help to fade in the font effect as well using tweening 2.
00:37:966 - sb4.png really needs a fadein. It also fades out before the lyrics are over.
00:45:793 - needs fadein, IMO it needs to move slower and fade out after the next lyrics have begun at 00:52:749 -
00:52:749 - needs fadein
00:59:706 - I like that you're going to fade this out a bit, but you've over exaggerated the effect. Make the scale go down to ~90% then back up to 100%, fade go down to 80% then back to 100%, then repeat 2x and fade out/scale down like normal on the last one.
01:01:227 - see sb3.png. It would help to fade in the font effect as well. Consider using tweening 2.
01:26:227 - you fade out before the lyrics are finished.
Sorry for the delay.
Full mod to follow.
[general]
The dark purple is virtually impossible to see on a black background, which is prevalent in the BG video.
[Timing]
00:17:966 - You need a red line to reset the metronome after the 5/4 measure
Double check how the other ranked maps did it just to verify. This never should have been bubbled with this error.
[SB]
In general, the lyrics need to be faded in. You don't really need it if you're going to put a flash on TOP of the lyrics, but when they just appear it looks bad IMO.
00:31:879 - sb3.png comes in without a fadein. While this is sort of OK, I think it would be better if you fade in for 1/4th or 1/8th of a beat. It may help to fade in the font effect as well using tweening 2.
00:37:966 - sb4.png really needs a fadein. It also fades out before the lyrics are over.
00:45:793 - needs fadein, IMO it needs to move slower and fade out after the next lyrics have begun at 00:52:749 -
00:52:749 - needs fadein
00:59:706 - I like that you're going to fade this out a bit, but you've over exaggerated the effect. Make the scale go down to ~90% then back up to 100%, fade go down to 80% then back to 100%, then repeat 2x and fade out/scale down like normal on the last one.
01:01:227 - see sb3.png. It would help to fade in the font effect as well. Consider using tweening 2.
01:26:227 - you fade out before the lyrics are finished.