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Melody Chubak - bu bu poruche ~LocoRoco Yellow's Theme~

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Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Guu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年6月24日 at 23:21:14

Artist: Melody Chubak
Title: bu bu poruche ~LocoRoco Yellow's Theme~
Source: LocoRoco
BPM: 171
Filesize: 4240kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.84 stars, 72 notes)
  2. Hard (4.81 stars, 248 notes)
  3. Normal (4.26 stars, 202 notes)
Download: Melody Chubak - bu bu poruche ~LocoRoco Yellow's Theme~
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My second map.
PSP game,LocoRoco Yellow's Theme song.
Thank You！
Last edited by Guu , edited 10 times in total.
ACC
54 posts
Joined March 2009
ACC
除了感觉圈圈缩得有点慢，其他Good job……
Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Guu

Hillman_Q wrote:

除了感觉圈圈缩得有点慢，其他Good job……
多谢~
已经把HARD的速度调快了一点
我竟然感觉不出区别……大概因为是自己做的吧，快慢玩起来都一样= =
antony11
153 posts
Joined August 2008
antony11
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
himydanny
基友- -这真的是你的第二张图么？

做的太好了，我找不到一点需要改进的地方；如果这图现在就rank我也不会意外。

这就是所谓天赋型mapper么...(羡慕中..
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
good good~
hbra000
13 posts
Joined February 2009
hbra000
不错的MAP
嘛,只要是我能FC的都是好MAP...(摸头
:D
mican
mican
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Guu
哇~~~5个星星啦
谢谢~~^^
沉浸在海星之中……=V=
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
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Starrodkirby86
Wow! You did an excellent job with this. :)

Everything here are suggestions! :o

[Easy]:
01:07:75 (7) - Add a Finish here?

[Normal]:
All good~

[Hard]:
00:25:65 (1) - I don't like the constant use of Finishes here.
01:55:47 (1,2) - For consistency with the previous combination, move this 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.

[Normal] looks a little boring with its Difficulty settings (All set to default, boo).

You should get a different background for [Hard]. :3

If I were to be very critical about this map, I would have to see it has a lot of distance snap feel to it. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but you should eventually make maps really fun without all that. But who cares, this map rules regardless of your use of DS or not (If you don't use it, then that's pretty good intuitive spacing. Now make something REALLY awesome with that)

Starred~
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
damn lag network. del this reply if needed
Guu
125 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Guu
^__^~
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
<Easy>
cool

<Normal>
01:40:03 (2,3,4) - turn off distance snap down a bit (picture)

<Hard>
01:28:45 (1) - remove claps change to whistles
01:29:16 (3) - ^
(use hitsounds like 00:37:93 (1,2,3,4) )

timing is fine for me
good map and hitsounds


EDIT
All good now
bubbled
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
good map :)

shooting star~~~~~ XD
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
:) :) :) :)
anonymous_old
0 posts
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anonymous_old
General
Redo breaks. I know the ones in Hard are wrong.

Easy
Make Overall Difficulty one or two. If you change the Overall Difficulty redo your breaks too.
Looks great.

Normal
Awesome.

01:24:60 (1) - <3
01:51:26 (1) - Unexpected jump.
01:54:95 (3,1) - Too close.
02:01:09 (8) - Move to the right and up a little bit so it lines up with (7). Maybe two up and two right?
02:02:14 (1,2,1,2) - Reverse?

Hard
Perfect.

New combo on these?
01:55:12 (2)
01:57:93 (2)
LuigiHann
Resident Skinner
4,432 posts
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LuigiHann
Very few problems with this map. However:

[Normal]
01:24:60 (1) - As cute as this slider is, the way it overlaps itself at the stem is not allowed.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot061-0.jpg

You need to do something like this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot062-1.jpg (terrible rough sketch, sorry) so that it doesn't overlap itself. Hopefully you can redo that and still have it be cute.

Also, HP drain on [Hard] feels a little high. Toward 01:41:79 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) I found myself almost failing for no real reason.

Fix those and I'll rebubble. Cute map overall.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
LuigiHann
Resident Skinner
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LuigiHann
I see you updated it. It's rankable now, but I think it just needs one more little node in the "stem" to give it that cute curve again

http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot064-6.jpg

Also, consider adding copying that slider shape into the other difficulties too, since it's a really cute piece of slider art that it'd be a shame for players of the other difficulties to miss it.

Hate to slow you down, just want to help you get the map to be the best it can be :)

Download: Melody Chubak - bu bu poruche ~LocoRoco Yellow's Theme~ (Guu) [Normal].osu
LuigiHann
Resident Skinner
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LuigiHann
All riiiiiight, looks great now. Bubble time
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
looks good


[Normal]
looks good


[Hard]
02:12:31 (1) - end one beat earlier


fix and i will rank (call me in IRC or forum pm me)

Edit: fixed and ranked
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