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Sushi971 - Techno Blocks

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Sushi
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Sushi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 23 avril 2009 at 20:56:06

Artist: Sushi971
Title: Techno Blocks
Source: Tetris
BPM: 149
Filesize: 5348kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,55 stars, 352 notes)
  2. Insane (4,89 stars, 426 notes)
  3. Normal (3,19 stars, 154 notes)
Download: Sushi971 - Techno Blocks
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Techno Blocks, Own made Tetris Based Music.

Yeah, i'm the artist >_>

Enjoy :)
Last edited by Sushi , edited 35 times in total.
Starrodkirby86
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Ain't a lot to say. Most of this is Nazi-ing.

[Hard]:
00:23:14 (1) - 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.
00:29:58 (1,2) - 2 to the right on Grid Level 3.
00:55:96 (2) - 1 to the left on Grid level 3.
01:27:77 (3) - To me, that little right in with the shape there looks really ugly.
02:43:68 (9) - 1 to the right on Grid Level 3.
02:54:55 (2) - Same as above~

Finish it up, sir. It's a great map, though maybe some people will raise eyebrows seeing your name as the artist. But that's okay. Get the storyboard done as well!
Sushi
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Sushi
Everything fixed :D

Going to add hitsounds soon
Jarby
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Jarby
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Sushi
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Sushi
Fixed and added hitsounds
SteRRuM
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SteRRuM
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Sushi
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Ekaru
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Ekaru
Storyboard's good. Apparently when I fail I have sucky Tetris skills. :(

Map's fine. I feel it's too long, but eh. And...

...Why are the stone heads from Rhythm Heaven singing in the background? <_<; Star for the sake of the stone heads!
Takuma
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Takuma
FUN.
Normal:
  1. 02:02:40 (1) - Eh, you might want to make this jump a little less hard considering this is an easy difficulty.
Hard:
  1. 01:42:57 (7) - 1 level 3 grid up
Insane:
  1. 00:09:45 (6) - 1 level 3 grid down, then 1 level 3 grid left
  2. 00:42:47 (1) - 3 level 3 grid up, 1 level 3 grid left
Map was flawless, but I posted some things that could make it look better.
This post is a suggestion.
whymeman
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whymeman
Hmm.....

Interesting storyboard. I can never get it to work like that even if I wanted to. :cry:

Great job and star for effort. :)
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Easy:
00:48:311 (1) shift 1 notch up on the lvl 3 grid
01:43:076 (1) I find it a little hard to do the same movement as 01:41:062 (3,4) in half the time.

Hard:
01:31:801 (1,2) shift 1 notch to the right on lvl 3 grid
02:02:405 (1,2) shift 2 notches up on the lvl 3 grid

Insane:
00:25:156 (1,3) line up the 1 with the end of 4 and make a larger jump
00:33:210 (5-7) hard to read, new combo color?

Storyboarding
the yellow squares do not have a well-defined border, so I would advise darkening the edges more
the red L has a very uneven border this one needs a more even darker border.
I am not sure if you want to do this, when you erase a row, some of the blocks have thier border cut off, so you might want to create separate sprites for after they cleared.
All of the storyboarding works so far so good work.

Nice map overall. Here's a star.
Sushi
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Sushi
Fixed, except for the hard to read combo. I didn't modify this yet because new combo colour looks... weird. i'll wait for this one.

For the storyboard, i'll correct the graphics when all the storyboard will be scripted
Jeffro
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Jeffro
Very nice. This map is PERFECT :)

Starred!
0_o
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0_o
Normal
Honestly, I kind of like this better with all linear sliders, fits the tetris theme better imo.. just throwing that out there. It's your map, not mine :P
01:36:63 (1,2,3) and so on - This pattern tripped me up at the beginning, maybe a little too challenging for normal..

Hard
00:22:53 (5,1) - Looks a bit sloppy with 5 partially covering 1.
01:48:81 (6,7,8) - mm, this doesn't go too well with the music imo..
02:50:12 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't flow very well
03:19:01 (6,7,8) - Same as before
Also I don't think kiai time really works in this kind of song. The mood is fairly linear throughout, and it just kind of feels like the kiai time is in there for the sake of using kiai time.

Insane
Besides some confusing clusters (it is Insane i suppose..), nothing really popped out at me

Great job, nice to see some original work :)

Download: TDGJJYS - Diao Zone (sherrie__fay) [Snowy's Hentai].osu
Sushi
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Sushi
Fixed some things,

The hard normal pattern is... hard but, i don't know yet how to change it (maybe deleting the third stacked circle?)

0_o wrote:

01:48:81 (6,7,8) - mm, this doesn't go too well with the music imo..
Err, Listen to the ... how to say.. "boom"
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Normal-
00:26:56 (3) - I think it lacks a clap at end
00:51:53 (1) - would you be so kind as to align start and end? (turn off grid snap to do so)
00:57:97 (x) - redo the break
01:26:56 (3) - I don't like how the claps just randomly start
01:36:63 (1,2,3) - same as what 0_o said, since its not really easy to point how it matches the audio, this isn't suitable for
01:42:87 (6) - GAH finish!? whistle instead please!
01:49:31 (6) - ^
01:55:55 (5) - ^
02:02:00 (5) - ^
02:03:21 (2) - turn off the slider whistle

Hard-
00:54:75 (1) - stick with hitsounds like the ones before this slider, not finish.
00:57:97 (x) - redo the break
01:55:55 (6) - kill finish~!
02:02:00 (6) - ^
02:03:21 (2) - kill slider whistle?
02:28:57 (2) - lonely clap? remove or follow up
02:39:45 (4,5,6) - either remove finish or remove the last clap
02:45:49 (2,3) - ^
02:58:78 (1) - remove finish, the finishes after this point don't work well with quiet audio, imo

Insane-
00:11:26 (1,2,3) - bad finishes~ if you wanna keep, remove the finish from 3's end
00:51:53 (1) - aim for "perfect" square? (no grid snap~)
00:54:75 (1) - same as hard
01:27:77 (3) - aim for perfection? though might not work well on this slider..
02:03:21 (3) - same as normal and hard
02:29:78 (7) - curve slider so end and next beat align? nah.. your choice
02:32:20 (2) - align? still your choice..

For all- WHISTLE SPAM </3 (ahh my poor ears)!!!!! Finish should be a finisher, but its loud, so don't so so often; the audio is quiet enough for whistle to stand out!
And redo all breaks

Still, very nice map and I look forward to last bit of storyboarding!~
Sushi
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Sushi
That was a Nazi post =D

I didn't aim for square perfection, it's quite hard >.>

Everything else is fixed
vytalibus
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[Normal]
01:55:55 (5) - A bit of a surprise to have a slider like this. Reconsider?
02:02:00 (5) - ^

Storyboard is pretty nice. If you want some suggestions though, don't make the block movements too fast. Make it look like the game, with its blocky animations.

I would've bubbled, but even after Larto's check, I'm still not sure about timing. Seems to be off on some parts, but I can't really tell.
Skyripper
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Skyripper
*am trying to guess music editor*

cakewalk? garageband? fruity loops?! Finale? Guitar Pro?!?!! *dies and gives up*

Tell me this. In whatever program you made it in, did you use 149 BPM for the entire song? If so, the timing issues they describe must be offset related and can be easily fixed from there. I notice a little lateness at the beginning that progressively gets early until the end.

[Normal]
01:52:33 (2) - nudge a bit down (nazi)

[Hard]
I think a nice balancing factor for this difficulty would be to take the slider tick down to .5. I say this because it will cut down on some 2x slider breaks.
01:24:55 (2) - This one especially is just really hard to predict.
This is, of course, completely up to you.
03:19:72 (9) - that finish doesn't fit very well. maybe try a whistle? or nothing

[Insane] same thing about slider tick rate
00:22:13 (4) - slight nudge right (to match spacing)
00:33:21 (5) - new combo imo (for readability)
00:34:82 (1) - ^
00:41:26 (3) - ^
01:13:47 (3,4,5) - spacing... uniformity my friend!
01:18:31 (3,4,5) - ^

no really big problems or anything! and you did a really nice job on the song (cover)
awp
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awp
timing timing timing aaaaa

Offset: 6436 is what I got.

This is impressive stuff. The storyboard is fun (though the bubbles that pop up look a little amateur) and the maps are well laid out. I went over them roughly (sans-nazi) and nothing jumped out at me. Good job~
Sushi
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Kyocciola
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Kyocciola
Using grid 3
Normal
01:36:63 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - quite boring and unwell spaced.. Its a bit confusing, try to distance them or put some sliders

Hard
00:23:75 (3) - 1 square down
01:16:70 (1) - take care of the spacing
02:39:05 (3) - 2 up
02:53:95 (1,2,3,4) - the note after the sliders confusing me a bit when i played it
03:03:21 (2) - 1 to the right

Insane
Ok!


Very good map! Starred~! (And, if i cuold do it, Bubbled~! XD")

Sushi
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Daru
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Daru
In addition to what I said in IRC:

Offset: 6600


Insane:
02:02:37 (1) - This slider is in the previous 1x timing section. Move the timing section divisor back.

... that's really it. ^^;
Nice map, and insane SB.
CheeseWarlock
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[Hard]
03:04:42 (5,1) - This sounds bad.

[Storyboarding/Skinning]
I love this storyboard, but there are a few things I think could be nicer. These are all suggestions, not required changes.

How about a custom HP bar? Some of them cover the top level of blocks, which is important for the last part of the storyboard.

It would be nicer if it said "Song, map and storyboard by Sushi971" at the beginning. It looks strange to have your name repeated like that.

The breaks would be more exciting if they had sound effects. And you can add blank sectionpass and sectionfail sounds and images to get rid of the default breaks.

The Bomberman appearance at the end isn't exciting enough. He should appear a bit faster, say something a bit more exciting (at least "I'm here to help!"), and there should be an actual EXPLOSION.
Sushi
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Sushi
Okay Fixed some things.

Daru, the 6400 offset is way too early, and the error you found happened because offset was changed.

Cheese, Changed the slider's hitsound as in Insane.

For the skin/SB, i'll soon add the scoreBar, and i'll change the "card".

EDIT : SB/Skin issues fixed
Larto
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Larto
Hard:
01:55:96 (1) - Hidden Repeat.

That's it.
Sushi
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Sushi
Fixed
Paulo8624
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Paulo8624
I liked this map! Did you make all those tetris-thing at the Storyboard? Cool!

!Star~
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
overall volume is a bit loud
00:21:73 (4) - align w 3
01:23:74 (1,2,1) - needs hitsound
01:41:46 (4,5,6,1) - just sounds really awkward
01:52:33 (2) - align w 1
01:55:55 (5) - finishspam hurts my ears
02:02:00 (5) - ^
02:03:21 (2) - why is the vertical segment slightly crooked?
02:09:25 (2) - hitsound this
ends in a kinda strange spot...


[Hard]
00:09:65 (3,4) - timeline placement is unintuitive
00:30:19 (3,4) - too much finish imo
00:36:63 (3,4) - ^
00:54:75 (1) - ^
01:26:96 (1) - align w 5
01:42:06 (5,6,7,8,1) - unintuitive timeline placement
01:48:51 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:10:45 (1) - align w 5
02:30:39 (1,2) - improper stacking
02:35:42 (3) - symmetry
02:36:23 (5,2) - slider overlap is ugly
02:51:93 (3) - stack on fading 6? :P *nazi*
03:12:27 (5,6,7,8) - unintuitive


[Insane]
00:36:63 (3,4,5) - this is a bit nitpicky but can you make these curve
parallel to each other? ^^U
00:54:75 (1) - overusing finish
01:21:73 (3,4) - design is a bit ugh
01:34:21 (3) - stack under 1
03:19:72 (10) - why jump? o-o;
Sushi
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Fixed most of the parts, some of them were already fixed (SFG, you modded an old version =P)
Gens
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Gens
Oh wow. This beatmap is good.
Here are some opinions:

[Overall]
  1. I think Hitsounds are too loud on the first section of the map. The Sampleset should be set louder (Like it's right now) until 00:19:321. (I think the volume on the whole map is too loud, but that's just my opinion~)
  2. I wouldn't suggest using Kiai Time on the map. I mean, there's no real chorus for a tetris song.
  3. At 01:36:687 and 03:06:838, you could use the same effect Rolled did on Colorado Sunrise. This "effect" is just using the Normal Sampleset, but in a very low volume. That way beats sound like bass, and that's what you're mapping in this section. This effect would stop right on 01:49:523, of course. (You'll need to delete all hitsounds tough...)
[Normal]
02:07:24 (1) - Since there's no Easy for this song (I agree this difficulty is Easy enough), Could you make this spinner shorter? I mean, it's for noobish players you know... (Sounds cool 2 white ticks earlier)
This wouldn't apply to the other difficulties me thinks.

[Hard]
00:22:54 (5) - Ugly.

[Insane]
01:21:73 (3,4) - Ugly.
03:19:72 (10) - Remove finish? Hard has no finish at the end...


Aside from that, this map definitely has rankable quality.
You get my star. :D
Sushi
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Larto
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RemmyX25
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I'm pretty comfortable ranking this! :)

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this is meta as fuck
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