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Insane:
BPM 160.00
change the slider tick rate to 2
00:22:73 (2) - move a quarter beat backward
00:23:01 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:44:20 (1,2,3) - a little hard
I am not sure that many streams will be fun, but this map has potential.
BPM 160.00
change the slider tick rate to 2
00:22:73 (2) - move a quarter beat backward
00:23:01 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:44:20 (1,2,3) - a little hard
I am not sure that many streams will be fun, but this map has potential.
'Sup. I only modded [Insane], I'm sorry. More on that later though.
[Insane]:
00:24:51 (3,4) - Space out more.
00:30:23 (6) - Space out a wee bit more. :3
00:35:95 (6) - New combo perhaps?
00:36:33 (7,8,9) - Unless you plan on keeping this trap, space it out. XD
00:42:14 (9,10) - Space out a wee bit more.
00:43:45 (1) - Extend this slider so it ends on that red tick ahead.
00:45:33 (4,5) - IT'S A TRAP
00:46:45 (6) - New combo.
00:51:14 (7) - I think it'd be better for this to be a new combo so then the spacing inconsistency can be waivered.
00:53:01 (3,4,5) - Unfortunately, you got to space this out more. :/
00:55:83 (10) - New combo.
00:58:26 (4) - New combo.
00:59:76 (8) - New combo.
01:01:73 (12) - Space out a wee bit more (So it kind of looks like it's between them)
01:03:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This might be a little confusing since you made the 1/4 patterns similarly clustered to this.
01:05:01 (8) - Extend the slider ahead to the red tick.
01:10:26 (5) - New combo. And maybe it space it out farther.
01:11:76 (9) - New combo.
01:15:61 (3,4) - Space in together more.
01:24:23 (2,3) - Space in together more.
Try 160BPM, possibly. No decimals.
What makes this a little awkward is this if you're making a difficulty that's going to be like CTB, then you have to make it sure it plays very well in CTB. Then again...Who has ever heard of an exclusive CTB difficulty? I mean, shouldn't these difficulties be already playable and well done over on its osu! regular counterpart too? Maybe you can make the same defense with this as Taiko, but who knows...
If there is an exclusive difficulty like that, then it might go into Approved, despite the fact that it breaks no actual barriers in scoring and other items.
If you're aiming it to be ranked, add in an easier difficulty...
[Insane]:
00:24:51 (3,4) - Space out more.
00:30:23 (6) - Space out a wee bit more. :3
00:35:95 (6) - New combo perhaps?
00:36:33 (7,8,9) - Unless you plan on keeping this trap, space it out. XD
00:42:14 (9,10) - Space out a wee bit more.
00:43:45 (1) - Extend this slider so it ends on that red tick ahead.
00:45:33 (4,5) - IT'S A TRAP
00:46:45 (6) - New combo.
00:51:14 (7) - I think it'd be better for this to be a new combo so then the spacing inconsistency can be waivered.
00:53:01 (3,4,5) - Unfortunately, you got to space this out more. :/
00:55:83 (10) - New combo.
00:58:26 (4) - New combo.
00:59:76 (8) - New combo.
01:01:73 (12) - Space out a wee bit more (So it kind of looks like it's between them)
01:03:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This might be a little confusing since you made the 1/4 patterns similarly clustered to this.
01:05:01 (8) - Extend the slider ahead to the red tick.
01:10:26 (5) - New combo. And maybe it space it out farther.
01:11:76 (9) - New combo.
01:15:61 (3,4) - Space in together more.
01:24:23 (2,3) - Space in together more.
Try 160BPM, possibly. No decimals.
What makes this a little awkward is this if you're making a difficulty that's going to be like CTB, then you have to make it sure it plays very well in CTB. Then again...Who has ever heard of an exclusive CTB difficulty? I mean, shouldn't these difficulties be already playable and well done over on its osu! regular counterpart too? Maybe you can make the same defense with this as Taiko, but who knows...
If there is an exclusive difficulty like that, then it might go into Approved, despite the fact that it breaks no actual barriers in scoring and other items.
If you're aiming it to be ranked, add in an easier difficulty...
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Topic Starter
i completely renewed "Insane"
its now properly distance snapped.
its now properly distance snapped.
Weird map.
Grid level 3, grid snap on and distance snap off unless otherwise stated.
[Insane]
00:29:205 (3,4) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:42:142 (9,10,11,12) - *Suggestion* - Move these 1 grid to the left.
00:43:080 (12) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:07:642 (6,7,8) - ^
[Normal]
00:21:705 (7) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:22:080 (8,1,2,3) - Move 2 grids to the right.
00:26:955 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:27:330 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Move 2 grids to the right.
00:32:955 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:33:330 (6,7,8,1,2) - Move 2 grids to the right.
00:38:995 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:39:330 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Move 2 grids to the right.
01:01:080 (4) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:11:767 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up.
01:19:080 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:19:455 (1-end of map) - Move the rest of the notes from here to end 2 grids to the right.
01:24:330 (2,1) - Move 2 of purple combo and (1) of yellow combo 1 grid up.
01:24:705 (3) - Move 1 grid down.
[Easy]
00:04:455 (5) - Move 1 grid up.
00:49:455 (1) - Move 5 grids up. It was a hard choice but this was the best way to make this part symmetrical.
01:19:455 (6) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:19:830 (7,8,9,1) - Move 2 grids to the right.
01:24:330 (2) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:24:705 (3,4) - Move 2 grids to the right.
01:25:455 (5,6,7) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:26:205 (7) - Move 1 grid down.
Grid level 3, grid snap on and distance snap off unless otherwise stated.
[Insane]
00:29:205 (3,4) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:42:142 (9,10,11,12) - *Suggestion* - Move these 1 grid to the left.
00:43:080 (12) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:07:642 (6,7,8) - ^
[Normal]
00:21:705 (7) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:22:080 (8,1,2,3) - Move 2 grids to the right.
00:26:955 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:27:330 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Move 2 grids to the right.
00:32:955 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:33:330 (6,7,8,1,2) - Move 2 grids to the right.
00:38:995 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
00:39:330 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Move 2 grids to the right.
01:01:080 (4) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:11:767 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up.
01:19:080 (5) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:19:455 (1-end of map) - Move the rest of the notes from here to end 2 grids to the right.
01:24:330 (2,1) - Move 2 of purple combo and (1) of yellow combo 1 grid up.
01:24:705 (3) - Move 1 grid down.
[Easy]
00:04:455 (5) - Move 1 grid up.
00:49:455 (1) - Move 5 grids up. It was a hard choice but this was the best way to make this part symmetrical.
01:19:455 (6) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:19:830 (7,8,9,1) - Move 2 grids to the right.
01:24:330 (2) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:24:705 (3,4) - Move 2 grids to the right.
01:25:455 (5,6,7) - Move 1 grid to the right.
01:26:205 (7) - Move 1 grid down.
Topic Starter
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He~n~tai desuka~?
Easy-
nothing wrong with it, just extremely dull, add hitsounds please.
Normal-
00:02:76 (4,5) - 5's on the 4 slider end
00:20:95 (5,6,7) - align with fading 1,2 on bottom
00:26:95 (5,6,7) - ^
^why is the spacing different even though the beat is the same for those two...?
00:34:45 (1,2) - down a tick to match fading 3 from last combo
01:08:39 (9) - right a tick, to align with 6
01:23:95 (1,2,3,4,1) - up a tick so 1 aligns with 5 from last combo
Hitsounds please~!
Insane-
01:07:26 (5,6,7,8) - place directly under fading notes
Yay hitsounds! For this diff, could you seperate the streams more, so people know where theres a gap between them (the ones right now are a bit small)
CtB-
hmm I'll comment on how it sounds...err, I'll see...
00:37:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - match vocal better (I say get rid of the 6)
I may not be the best ctb player, but please reduce the overall and increase circle size.
Add more new comboes or else the ctb guy will have a full plate most of the time~
Hitsounds... are okay
Add hitsounds to Easy and Normal and I'll give you the priority star.
Edit- kk, star~
Easy-
nothing wrong with it, just extremely dull, add hitsounds please.
Normal-
00:02:76 (4,5) - 5's on the 4 slider end
00:20:95 (5,6,7) - align with fading 1,2 on bottom
00:26:95 (5,6,7) - ^
^why is the spacing different even though the beat is the same for those two...?
00:34:45 (1,2) - down a tick to match fading 3 from last combo
01:08:39 (9) - right a tick, to align with 6
01:23:95 (1,2,3,4,1) - up a tick so 1 aligns with 5 from last combo
Hitsounds please~!
Insane-
01:07:26 (5,6,7,8) - place directly under fading notes
Yay hitsounds! For this diff, could you seperate the streams more, so people know where theres a gap between them (the ones right now are a bit small)
CtB-
hmm I'll comment on how it sounds...err, I'll see...
00:37:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - match vocal better (I say get rid of the 6)
I may not be the best ctb player, but please reduce the overall and increase circle size.
Add more new comboes or else the ctb guy will have a full plate most of the time~
Hitsounds... are okay
Add hitsounds to Easy and Normal and I'll give you the priority star.
Edit- kk, star~
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Whoa ho ho, I'm liking this~
Easy~
Easy~
- 00:06:70 (9) - Redo break after this beat.
- 00:42:14 (6) - Suggestion: Maybe add a beat here?
- 01:14:01 (4) - ^
- 00:53:48 (3) - Move this 1 tick to the left, so it's touching 2 a bit. OR you could space them out like 01:13:45 (5,6,7) not touching at all.
- 00:53:95 (5) - Then perhaps make this closer to 4.
- 00:30:23 (6,7) - Move these both a tick to the right.
How will this work if you're going for a ranked map? Are you?Ryuukun wrote:
The CTB difficulty is really only for CTB.
Please don't rate it as osu mode song.
Topic Starter
ok changes applied.
About the CTB map.
do i have to delete it to get it ranked?
About the CTB map.
do i have to delete it to get it ranked?
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Topic Starter
i took out the CtB diff for now until CtB diff is officially approved.
Timing is correct, offset also sounds right.
Just the leap between normal and Insane is a bit too high. Also, Insane is pretty much just deathstream, a bit of variety wouldn't hurt but technically speaking there is no beat that is off or out of place.
Also, some parts seem carbon copies of each other. Try to differentiate them a bit more
Edit: Also, stard
Just the leap between normal and Insane is a bit too high. Also, Insane is pretty much just deathstream, a bit of variety wouldn't hurt but technically speaking there is no beat that is off or out of place.
Also, some parts seem carbon copies of each other. Try to differentiate them a bit more
Edit: Also, stard
Topic Starter
applied it as much as possible i also will make an Hard version now
Man, it's like they say Egg Roll a billion times...Hi again. 
[Easy]:
00:19:45 (1) - Move it ever so slightly (to the left preferably) on Grid Level 1 with Grid Snap on. It'll resnap accordingly. :3
00:40:45 (5) - New combo?
00:47:95 (3) - Move 1 down on Grid Level 3.
00:56:95 (x) - There should be an inherited time section that makes this area Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficulties)
01:08:58 (x) - Make an inherited timing section here that ends the Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficulties)
01:08:95 (1) - Make an inherited timing section here that makes this area Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficultes)
01:20:95 (1) - Make an inherited timing section here the ends the Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficulties)
[Normal]:
00:05:76 (4) - Perhaps makes this slider end have a Finish?
00:53:95 (5) - Space closer to (4). [Hm...up to you though]
01:01:45 (5) - Maybe this would look better if you moved it 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.
[Hard]:
00:34:45 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too much finishes. Remove a few. (I said few, not all)
00:54:04 (7) - Move this to the white tick before it (So move 1 to the left on 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor) and readjust spacing.
[Insane]:
00:42:14 (9) - Totally optional, new combo?
01:07:26 (5,6,7,8) - Make them stack accordingly...It looks really with those overlaps.
The items in bold you should take note.
Have a star. I think it looks way better now, though there's still some polishing to do. I can't really say anything else, so...here! Take it! Enjoy it...I really think you should implement the Kiai parts I suggested to you.
[Easy]:
00:19:45 (1) - Move it ever so slightly (to the left preferably) on Grid Level 1 with Grid Snap on. It'll resnap accordingly. :3
00:40:45 (5) - New combo?
00:47:95 (3) - Move 1 down on Grid Level 3.
00:56:95 (x) - There should be an inherited time section that makes this area Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficulties)
01:08:58 (x) - Make an inherited timing section here that ends the Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficulties)
01:08:95 (1) - Make an inherited timing section here that makes this area Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficultes)
01:20:95 (1) - Make an inherited timing section here the ends the Kiai Style. (This applies to all difficulties)
[Normal]:
00:05:76 (4) - Perhaps makes this slider end have a Finish?
00:53:95 (5) - Space closer to (4). [Hm...up to you though]
01:01:45 (5) - Maybe this would look better if you moved it 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.
[Hard]:
00:34:45 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too much finishes. Remove a few. (I said few, not all)
00:54:04 (7) - Move this to the white tick before it (So move 1 to the left on 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor) and readjust spacing.
[Insane]:
00:42:14 (9) - Totally optional, new combo?
01:07:26 (5,6,7,8) - Make them stack accordingly...It looks really with those overlaps.
The items in bold you should take note.
Have a star. I think it looks way better now, though there's still some polishing to do. I can't really say anything else, so...here! Take it! Enjoy it...I really think you should implement the Kiai parts I suggested to you.
I find this map very attractive and hope for it's luck through these hard times.
hard:
00:53:95 (7) - move more close to 6
insane:
00:39:70 (6) - move close to 5
00:43:08 (12) - ugly
01:07:64 (6,7,8) - ugly...move it when holdling shift and put these on 4 5
give you start
00:53:95 (7) - move more close to 6
insane:
00:39:70 (6) - move close to 5
00:43:08 (12) - ugly
01:07:64 (6,7,8) - ugly...move it when holdling shift and put these on 4 5
give you start
Topic Starter
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Download: Ryu - Bloomin' Feeling (vivicat) [Nold's Style].osu
Download: Ryu - Bloomin' Feeling (vivicat) [Nold's Style].osu
just looks good enough ^^ its not perfect but timing and so on looks fine @ least in my eyes xD
Requested Insane Mod:
00:03:51 (5,6) - Nazi spacing up a grid if u feel like it.
aw fuk it lol MOD FAILED heres a star tho. couldnt pick up any big obvious errors i guess..
00:03:51 (5,6) - Nazi spacing up a grid if u feel like it.
aw fuk it lol MOD FAILED heres a star tho. couldnt pick up any big obvious errors i guess..
Topic Starter
Shall i correct the thing you found or not? oO (confused)
you can always correct tiny spacing errors if you want. But it is not really required to PERFECTLY align and space everything within half a grid level 3. If you look at the one thing i posted it looks one grid down too far from the rest of the pattern. (if i remember correctly)
Inherit all your timing sections!
Offset is 1480. Use the 3 Rs. Resnap, recalc, resubmit.
Offset is 1480. Use the 3 Rs. Resnap, recalc, resubmit.
[Hard]
00:38:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - These combos are all squished together, space them out a bit.
00:50:13 (3) - This slider doesnt fit. Use 2 stacked circles instead.
00:59:11 (1) - ^
01:09:61 (2) - ^
01:15:61 (3) - ^
01:24:23 (2) - ^
[Insane]
Wow.. lower the Overall Difficulty by 2 ticks.
00:38:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - These combos are all squished together, space them out a bit.
00:50:13 (3) - This slider doesnt fit. Use 2 stacked circles instead.
00:59:11 (1) - ^
01:09:61 (2) - ^
01:15:61 (3) - ^
01:24:23 (2) - ^
[Insane]
Wow.. lower the Overall Difficulty by 2 ticks.
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I'm so tired to nazi combo colors 
- Hard & Insane don't need that spinner.
- Your maps are not sync on the ticks.
- What is this file? "Kitamura Eri - Apron Dake wa Toranai de! (Ryuukun) [Insane.osb"
~Easy~
00:46:480 - (1)~(3)
Wrong spacings.
01:14:230
No break please -_-
~Normal~
~Hard~
No notes' issues.
~Insane~
Download: Kitamura Eri - Apron Dake wa Toranai de! (Ryuukun) [Insane].osu
Open your .osu files with NotePad and fix these.
- Hard & Insane don't need that spinner.
- Your maps are not sync on the ticks.
- What is this file? "Kitamura Eri - Apron Dake wa Toranai de! (Ryuukun) [Insane.osb"
~Easy~
00:46:480 - (1)~(3)
Wrong spacings.
01:14:230
No break please -_-
~Normal~
~Hard~
No notes' issues.
~Insane~
Download: Kitamura Eri - Apron Dake wa Toranai de! (Ryuukun) [Insane].osu
Open your .osu files with NotePad and fix these.
[General]+Star
PreviewTime: 1480
Countdown: 0
[Metadata]
Tags:anime yui
[Events]
//Background and Video events
1,1330,"Koharu Biyori OP.avi"
Topic Starter
DJPop wrote:
I'm so tired to nazi combo colors
- Hard & Insane don't need that spinner.
- Your maps are not sync on the ticks.
- What is this file? "Kitamura Eri - Apron Dake wa Toranai de! (Ryuukun) [Insane.osb"
fixed
~Easy~
00:46:480 - (1)~(3)
Wrong spacings.
fixed
01:14:230
No break please -_-
fixed
~Normal~
~Hard~
No notes' issues.
~Insane~
[attachment=0:ed748]Kitamura Eri - Apron Dake wa Toranai de! (Ryuukun) [Insane].osu[/attachment:ed748]
fixed (most of it at least)
Open your .osu files with NotePad and fix these.[General]+Star
PreviewTime: 1480
Countdown: 0
[Metadata]
Tags:anime yui
[Events]
//Background and Video events
1,1330,"Koharu Biyori OP.avi"
fixed
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You don't need do this.
[Normal]
00:27:730 (4) - New combo.
00:48:542 (4, 1) - Spasing?
00:57:730 (3) - Up 3 grid.
[Hard]
00:31:480 (4) - New combo?
00:37:480 (4) - Maybe remove new combo and add new combo here 00:38:980
00:44:230 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:07:292 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Down 1 grid?
01:15:355 (2, 3) - Spasing problem.
Starred. ^^
[Normal]
00:27:730 (4) - New combo.
00:48:542 (4, 1) - Spasing?
00:57:730 (3) - Up 3 grid.
[Hard]
00:31:480 (4) - New combo?
00:37:480 (4) - Maybe remove new combo and add new combo here 00:38:980
00:44:230 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:07:292 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Down 1 grid?
01:15:355 (2, 3) - Spasing problem.
Starred. ^^
Topic Starter
good eyes :Otieff wrote:
You don't need do this.
[Normal]
00:27:730 (4) - New combo.
00:48:542 (4, 1) - Spasing?
00:57:730 (3) - Up 3 grid.
[Hard]
00:31:480 (4) - New combo?
00:37:480 (4) - Maybe remove new combo and add new combo here 00:38:980
00:44:230 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:07:292 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Down 1 grid?
01:15:355 (2, 3) - Spasing problem.
Starred. ^^
everything fixed
[Easy]
00:19:48 (1,2) - spacing is too close
00:27:73 (4) - use a different hitsound
00:31:48 (1,2,3,4) - overusing whistle
01:01:45 (2,3,1,2,3) - this area doesnt look snapped
id suggest deleting the part before the MASSIVE break and doing another break somewhere else but thats just me~
[Normal]
00:02:23 (3) - looks weird. if its meant to be slanted, make it more obvious. if its meant to be flat, make it flat...if its meant to curve inno what to tell you but its not curving
00:34:48 (1) - hitsound
00:53:98 (5) - end with a finish
resnap
01:17:58 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - finishspam
[Hard]
im guessing you still need to resnap
00:03:73 (6) - hitsound
01:23:20 (6) - ^
[Insane]
00:03:73 (6) - hitsound the beginning
00:04:76 (2,3,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - clusterfucky
00:45:54 (3) - hitsound the end
01:02:04 (6) - ^ and tilt the end of this slightly farther east so it aligns with 1 ^_^
01:08:98 (1,2,3) - clusterfucky
01:14:04 (6) - illegal self-overlap. NOT RANKABLE
01:17:98 (4) - you can do a better job stacking the end here
01:23:23 (10) - hitsound the beginning
i would highly recommend that you increase your spacing cus this difficulty is clusterfucky all the way through :<
00:19:48 (1,2) - spacing is too close
00:27:73 (4) - use a different hitsound
00:31:48 (1,2,3,4) - overusing whistle
01:01:45 (2,3,1,2,3) - this area doesnt look snapped
id suggest deleting the part before the MASSIVE break and doing another break somewhere else but thats just me~
[Normal]
00:02:23 (3) - looks weird. if its meant to be slanted, make it more obvious. if its meant to be flat, make it flat...if its meant to curve inno what to tell you but its not curving
00:34:48 (1) - hitsound
00:53:98 (5) - end with a finish
resnap
01:17:58 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - finishspam
[Hard]
im guessing you still need to resnap
00:03:73 (6) - hitsound
01:23:20 (6) - ^
[Insane]
00:03:73 (6) - hitsound the beginning
00:04:76 (2,3,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - clusterfucky
00:45:54 (3) - hitsound the end
01:02:04 (6) - ^ and tilt the end of this slightly farther east so it aligns with 1 ^_^
01:08:98 (1,2,3) - clusterfucky
01:14:04 (6) - illegal self-overlap. NOT RANKABLE
01:17:98 (4) - you can do a better job stacking the end here
01:23:23 (10) - hitsound the beginning
i would highly recommend that you increase your spacing cus this difficulty is clusterfucky all the way through :<
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Wow.
I don't quite feel comfortable ranking this because of the... *erhem*... content... but i wont bubble pop over it.
Insane:
This almost matches Hitos style of overmapping... but not quite. It's close though.
00:07:48 (9) - Might i suggest a finish sound here?
01:08:60 (1,2,3,4) - Shouldn't these be stacked on 1/4 ticks instead of 1/8 ticks?
Cute map though.
I don't quite feel comfortable ranking this because of the... *erhem*... content... but i wont bubble pop over it.
Insane:
This almost matches Hitos style of overmapping... but not quite. It's close though.
00:07:48 (9) - Might i suggest a finish sound here?
01:08:60 (1,2,3,4) - Shouldn't these be stacked on 1/4 ticks instead of 1/8 ticks?
Cute map though.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
*pop*
- Hard:
Hmm? O: I see some notes that aren't snapped!
Please resnap the notes.
01:11:41 (8) - Tooooo close to 01:11:08 (6,7).
01:15:58 (3,4,5,6,7) - Let's see.. (3,4,5) are spaced the same on the timeline, while (6,7) are spaced a tad further. However, these are spaced the same on the grid.
- Insane:
00:42:73 (11) - New combo.
00:44:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:98 (1) - ^
Sorry, this post wasn't very thorough and is poor in quality, but I'm actually in a rush to do something.
I might come back later and give a better mod post. >w<
EDIT: Modding done in IRC.
Bubbled!
- Hard:
Hmm? O: I see some notes that aren't snapped!
Please resnap the notes.
01:11:41 (8) - Tooooo close to 01:11:08 (6,7).
01:15:58 (3,4,5,6,7) - Let's see.. (3,4,5) are spaced the same on the timeline, while (6,7) are spaced a tad further. However, these are spaced the same on the grid.
- Insane:
00:42:73 (11) - New combo.
00:44:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:98 (1) - ^
Sorry, this post wasn't very thorough and is poor in quality, but I'm actually in a rush to do something.
I might come back later and give a better mod post. >w<
EDIT: Modding done in IRC.
Bubbled!
*gulp* this map should be hard to be modded...
Easy
[00:03:720] (2, 2, 3) clap here
[00:22:137] (5) clap here...
[00:27:687] (4) ... and here
[00:33:719] clap on the next 2 4th purple beats
[01:03:713] (2, 4) whistle here
Normal
[00:22:157] (2) clap here...
[00:28:131] (2) ...and here...
[00:34:150] (2) ...and here...
[00:40:130] (2) ... and here!
That's all for now... Star'd!
Easy
[00:03:720] (2, 2, 3) clap here
[00:22:137] (5) clap here...
[00:27:687] (4) ... and here
[00:33:719] clap on the next 2 4th purple beats
[01:03:713] (2, 4) whistle here
Normal
[00:22:157] (2) clap here...
[00:28:131] (2) ...and here...
[00:34:150] (2) ...and here...
[00:40:130] (2) ... and here!
That's all for now... Star'd!
[Easy]
00:22:48 (1) - Whistle on slider end.
00:34:48 (1) - ^
00:42:35 (3) - Clap?
01:20:23 (1,2) - Spacing?
[Normal]
00:53:98 (5) - Whistle on ending point?
[Hard]
Fine.
[Insane]
00:25:48 (1,2,3) - A little confusing these three notes.
01:26:04 (5) - Whistle here?
Good job, nice map! Starred.
00:22:48 (1) - Whistle on slider end.
00:34:48 (1) - ^
00:42:35 (3) - Clap?
01:20:23 (1,2) - Spacing?
[Normal]
00:53:98 (5) - Whistle on ending point?
[Hard]
Fine.
[Insane]
00:25:48 (1,2,3) - A little confusing these three notes.
01:26:04 (5) - Whistle here?
Good job, nice map! Starred.
What... what.
Offset: 1465
Offset: 1465
Topic Starter
Zekira wrote:
What... what.
Offset: 1465 fixed
osuplayer111 wrote:
[Easy]
00:22:48 (1) - Whistle on slider end. put in a finish instead
00:34:48 (1) - ^ put in a finish instead
00:42:35 (3) - Clap? put in a whistle instead
01:20:23 (1,2) - Spacing? its all the same
[Normal]
00:53:98 (5) - Whistle on ending point? i disagree D:
[Hard]
Fine. thanks
[Insane]
00:25:48 (1,2,3) - A little confusing these three notes. agreed fixed
01:26:04 (5) - Whistle here? i disagree D:
Good job, nice map! Starred.
EASY
fine =D
NORMAL
00:02:79 (4) - adjust slider end so it will be aligned with 00:01:85 (2)
00:23:04 (2,3,1,2) - drag these up so they'll be aligned with 00:22:48 (1) 's end... (1 tiny grid up)
HARD
00:24:54 (1,2) - I think this 2 hitcircle will look better if you drag 2 to the end of this 00:22:48 (1) slider
00:31:48 (1,1) - Move 1 tiny grid up
00:59:79 (1,2) - drag/move these 1 tiny grid to the RIGHT so the start of 00:59:23 (2) is exactly at the start 01:00:73 (2) plus 01:01:48 (3) - will be aligned ^-^
01:20:60 (4,1,2) - These should look like a triangle. tright?
INSANE
00:25:71 (3) - move 1 tick to the right (1/8)
I like Insane! great map too! star,
fine =D
NORMAL
00:02:79 (4) - adjust slider end so it will be aligned with 00:01:85 (2)
00:23:04 (2,3,1,2) - drag these up so they'll be aligned with 00:22:48 (1) 's end... (1 tiny grid up)
HARD
00:24:54 (1,2) - I think this 2 hitcircle will look better if you drag 2 to the end of this 00:22:48 (1) slider
00:31:48 (1,1) - Move 1 tiny grid up
00:59:79 (1,2) - drag/move these 1 tiny grid to the RIGHT so the start of 00:59:23 (2) is exactly at the start 01:00:73 (2) plus 01:01:48 (3) - will be aligned ^-^
01:20:60 (4,1,2) - These should look like a triangle. tright?
INSANE
00:25:71 (3) - move 1 tick to the right (1/8)
I like Insane! great map too! star,
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[Easy]
Fine.
[Normal]
01:25:27 (1) - Just a personal peeve, the ending looks like it should be symmetrical.
[Hard]
Fine.
[Insane]
Fine.
Star'd.
Fine.
[Normal]
01:25:27 (1) - Just a personal peeve, the ending looks like it should be symmetrical.
[Hard]
Fine.
[Insane]
Fine.
Star'd.
Topic Starter
i wasn't exactly sure what you meant but it really looked weird.K2J wrote:
[Normal]
01:25:27 (1) - Just a personal peeve, the ending looks like it should be symmetrical.
so i changed it.
*Hearts*