1. Hard (4.74 stars, 294 notes)
2. Normal (2.49 stars, 138 notes)
3. TwInsane (4.88 stars, 341 notes)

Pink Agate wrote:

MOD

[Normal]

Time Information
00:04:691 Object's end is not snapped!
什么？

00:04:691 (4) - 没对好线
什么？

00:49:562 (4) - 哲♂学滑条，毫无意义，我觉得换成普通点的就可以了，你突然弄个这个在非高潮段里感觉很怪
你说得队

01:41:605 - 这条绿线没意义吧，KIAI又不是从这里开始，不如删了它？
你说得队

[Hard]

00:06:779 (4) - 没包好看，忘右边移一些吧
你说得队

02:09:127 (1) - 这个可以往上提一点好看，你看后面的滑条快碰到这个circle了，不够美观
你说得队

02:17:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里一段有点挤的排列，不如想法弄宽松些？
你说得队

02:19:040 (5,6) - 这里删掉circle试试？我感觉这里放个三连毫无意义
删了一个

02:19:301 (7) - 按照上面的建议，这里开头唱；“的~··········”前面没有鼓点直接从这里开始放note也不会感觉奇怪
什么？

02:27:388 (3) - 从这里开始后面那几个note太普通了，这里开始人声唱；“的~··········”拉的很长，这里又是结尾段，不如改换成有造型的长滑条
你说得队

[Twisane]

一堆没对齐线的，自己打开AIMOD检查一下

你说得队

02:32:125 - 没加红线
你说得队

00:33:909 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这几个circle分开来放外边比较好玩，连按三下真是遭殃
00:36:257 (7,8,9) - 这里也是，不如排成这样

暂不考虑这么做

没其他了，快给KD
点个赞

1. 其实感觉这图有kiaitime也挺不错的

1. 00:15:127(2)感觉弄成这样好点
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:344(3)稍微往下挪点放在24中间
3. 00:31:822(2)感觉这个节奏好要点
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:43:301(1)这里开始这一段建议跟之前那段下一样的音效
5. 00:58:953(2)我来来回回看了4、5次，还是觉得这个形状好别扭，要不就改成一个弧试试

1. OD-1？（因为感觉和Normal差的有点多 insane也才7
2. 00:11:475(4)感觉这里还是要个whistle好 00:11:996(1)这个的whistle也可以弄到尾上去，clap实在是有点听不清
3. 00:19:562(4)我觉得很多这种地方都可以稍稍改一下让排版更好看点
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:49:562(7)nc
5. 01:15:127(3)尾再向下拉点
6. 02:00:779(2,4)没叠好

1. 00:47:475(11)nc
2. 01:02:083(9)^
3. 01:14:083(4)这个slider的弧度再大点吧
4. 01:44:344(3)x:252 y:191
5. 01:44:866(5)x:247 y:242
6. 02:30:779(4)改变了sv加个nc
   Nice diff

Melt wrote:

:3

[General]

1. 其实感觉这图有kiaitime也挺不错的
   妹贴爷都这么说了，加

[Normal]

1. 00:15:127(2)感觉弄成这样好点
   好
   
2. 00:20:344(3)稍微往下挪点放在24中间
   排列已改
   
3. 00:31:822(2)感觉这个节奏好要点
   你说得队
   
4. 00:43:301(1)这里开始这一段建议跟之前那段下一样的音效
   好
   
5. 00:58:953(2)我来来回回看了4、5次，还是觉得这个形状好别扭，要不就改成一个弧试试
   好

[Hard]

1. OD-1？（因为感觉和Normal差的有点多 insane也才7
   好
   
2. 00:11:475(4)感觉这里还是要个whistle好 00:11:996(1)这个的whistle也可以弄到尾上去，clap实在是有点听不清
   好
   
3. 00:19:562(4)我觉得很多这种地方都可以稍稍改一下让排版更好看点
   好
   
4. 00:49:562(7)nc
   我加在6上了 感觉要好看一些
   
5. 01:15:127(3)尾再向下拉点
   好
   
6. 02:00:779(2,4)没叠好

好了

[Twisane]

1. 00:47:475(11)nc
   加在9上了
   
2. 01:02:083(9)^
   好
   
3. 01:14:083(4)这个slider的弧度再大点吧
   好
   
4. 01:44:344(3)x:252 y:191
5. 01:44:866(5)x:247 y:242
   这样会很奇怪吧。。
   
6. 02:30:779(4)改变了sv加个nc
   好
   
   Nice diff

差不多就这样 :3

tutuhaha wrote:

[Hard]
AR+1
玩起来第一感觉是SV太大间距有点略小
好

00:29:214 (7,1) - 碰着了往下移一点
00:31:822 (3,4) - 和音乐的话这俩离得有点远
换排列了

00:34:692 (4) - 要是我的话会把这个删掉
听神mapper的

00:43:822 (2) - whistle
00:44:344 (4) - ^在尾巴
00:48:779 (5) - ^
00:50:083 (4) - whistle
00:51:127 (7) - ^
这段24的whistle怎么都不见了听着有点拙计不知道是不是因为我太捉急了
这段加了whistle柑橘有点吵，再议

01:07:301 (8,1) - 总觉得不是这边跳是接下来长白线跳
换排列了

01:11:735 (X) - add note
再议，柑橘现在这样有点带感

01:16:692 (2,3) - 应该是这边跳
换排列了

01:20:866 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ar6看起来太捉急了
AR已+1

01:51:909 (1,2) - 应该是这里跳
再议

01:56:866 (5,6) - ctrl+g
好

01:57:388 (7) - whistle
好

01:57:909 (1,2) - 给我跳
好

[Normal]
2,4拍的whistle还是全部加上去比较好，clap+whistle也萌大奶
因为whistle的声音很亮，而且你确实加whistle是跟着24下的，所以一旦哪里缺失了就会觉得很奇怪，而且你这个调的声音又低多加点whistle没啥问题真的
其实就前面一点没有加whistle，我加了感觉有点吵

加油啊亲
给神麻婆跪了<(_ _)>

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
About the tags, I think they should be liang yong qi, dan xiao gui. Spacing is needed.
Not sure though.
01:04:170 - At least set a kiai burst here? It will be nice.

[Normal]
00:33:909 (1) - Remove the whistle? Seems kinda unnecessary.
00:51:648 (6,1) - (6) needs nc, but not (1).
01:19:822 (4,1) - Not recommend for an easist diff.
02:04:692 (4,5) - ^
02:23:475 (7) - Nc.

[Hard]
00:34:953 (1) - Remove the whistle?
01:36:518 (4) - Nc.
01:41:475 - Add a note? 再议，其它全部FIX
02:11:475 (4) - Ctrl+G?
02:12:518 (6) - ^
02:18:257 (3) - The position is too low, move high a bit.

[TwInsane]
00:29:214 (7) - Nc.
02:00:518 (8) - ^
Nice diff.

Imo Normal and Hard need more hitsounds. More.
Good luck! :3

1. 00:25:040(5)虽然是有clap 不过这clap太合音乐导致没啥感觉... 快怒加whistle
2. 00:26:083(6)^
3. 00:49:040(3)00:50:083(4)00:51:127(5)whistle然后做个音量递减会不错o.o
   嘛 ..这音效确实略纠结 感觉后面可以看着补一下 就不提了
4. 02:13:040(3)这个方向会不会好点
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:08:270(5)x:203 y:222
2. 00:57:648(6)whistle?
3. 01:41:735(1)感觉可以加点音量

BakaHuang wrote:

:D

Hard

00:04:170(2)-其实(2)放到(1)的右边slider向右弯的话就能很好利用右边的编辑面啦
没看懂这个orz不过换了个排列

00:07:822(1)-~00:08:866(1)-我觉得是没啥nc的必要..
00:16:170(1)-~00:17:214(1)-^ 嘛 毕竟都hard了..小跳一下应该可以把XD
上面两个没有动，加NC是为了更好地读图。如果还有人提出的话就改

00:32:866(5)-不从这开始nc吗?
好

= =看了下也没啥问题..nc和我想的不太一样啦 不过这无所谓~
不要在意细节

Normal

00:23:475(4,5,6)- http://puu.sh/2PKqO.jpg 我觉得这样排版好一点?
02:28:692(4,5)- http://puu.sh/2PKx7.jpg 这样放可以利用下右边谱面w
以上两个全改
其他没什么啦 mod有点水 nc问题可以忽略 好好利用这个谱面作图 slider弯向挺重要的 加油=3=!

NoeL-CIFER wrote:

[General]
完成度已经很高了，基本没什么需要mod，希望华语歌的map越来越多
[Easy]
00:55:822这里换spin比较好
再议

[Hard]
00:20:605(3)个人喜欢放到(1)上
好

02:23:996到02:23:996 vol-10%
音效改了

最后几个slider真是esu
一点也不恶俗好吧

 M,0,40378,,450,300

SPOILER

bokito wrote:

[Insane]
00:14:866 (2)

SPOILER

我觉得这个可以更加哲♂学点 这个图只是例子我画得不够哲♂学 你看你自己了

已改

00:31:822 (3) - 感觉这个可以哲♂学点

SPOLIER

unrank

00:32:866 (5) - ^
unrank

01:04:692 (2) - 我感觉这个有点违和 改成三个circle貌似会好点(其实一样好违和< <)
或者放一个circle 后面接一个1/2 slider
保持原状

01:40:953 (1) - 有个这么哲♂学的slider 怎么不这么放？

SPOILER

当然 后面那些也要改改了

已改

[Hard]
00:48:257 (4,5) - 无意中乱按 发现不错

SPOILER

多哲♂学 哈哈

已改

[Normal]
01:14:605 (3) - 这个还是圆滑点好
已改

没了 找不到了orz

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey

General
- I suggest you put in about 1 second of lead-in time. The start feels borderline sudden atm
OK

Normal
00:55:822 (6) - NC, like 01:33:388 (1) -
Fixed

Hard
00:34:692 - Add note, the vocals seem pretty dominant here
OK

00:34:953 (1) - Whistle sounds nice
OK

02:23:475 (3) - Ctrl + G, flows a bit better into (4) imo instead of the cramped in zig-zag feel
Great!


TwInsane
00:07:301 (6) - you could move this up here to make it neater with (2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/822355
OK

02:30:779 (1) - Snapping this to 1/6 (on 02:31:127) sounds more accurate...but i feel like a new timing point(s) will be needed instead. If you could get a timing expert to check, that's be awesome
I changed these same with Hard

Unsnapped green lines:

01:41:703 -
01:41:768 -
02:15:094 -
02:15:159 -
02:30:746 -
02:30:812 -

Well these green lines were once 1/16 snap but, I changed to 1/8

Lovely map! It's definitely almost there! good luck <3
Thanks~

Heanday wrote:

Hi, from My Modding Queue ( M4M with -Umi- Swap cause he don't like the song :3 )

[Hard]

00:28:692 (5) - You added finish, or whistle before, for this song, this one need whistle in my opinion
Added whistle

00:29:214 (7) - Same on revers
no, current sounds better

00:44:344 (4) - Early slider whistle ? Sonds good
Sure

01:20:866 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I just, love this part <3, could be nice if you space just a bit here => 01:22:431 (8) - & pack the 9 ( just a suggestion )
sorry but I don't know what you mean

02:11:475 (4) - Ctrl G ? Better flow i think.
OK

Well, i totaly love this map, sorry for short mod.

Normal is just perfect, ( a bit boring a lit sometimes, like, always same rythm, but that's ok
I'll change my map style of Nomal in my next beatmap.

Hard Awesome, it's why i Star


Insane Deceive me a bit, make it more jumpy could be nice, it's a bit too easy ^^, when i finished to test play Hard lvl, i was suspected a crazy awesome insane with cool jump, but no, but that's fine, cool map ~ Bye <3

1. 01:15:127 (3) - 现在命名一个点就可以拉得很圆何必这么多点弄得这么奇葩

1. 00:55:822 (1) - 这个折返点听起来实在太奇怪，要么就换个拍子，要么就把折返点音量降低吧，还刻意加个whistle什么心态

Awaken wrote:

猥人姥爷我们来爱爱

Nymph wrote:

官網卡比下不動圖稍後

1. 01:15:137 (3) - Missing a whistle on slider head?
2. 01:33:919 (5) - This whistle on slider end sounds weird

Breeze wrote:

翻遍了wiki也没找到这歌的英文翻译，不过你的mp3歌曲信息里是The Poltron，你确定是Chicken Chic？如果没有官方翻译的话直接用“Dan Xiao Gui“的拼音就好了啊

[Hard]

1. 01:15:137 (3) - Missing a whistle on slider head?
2. 01:33:919 (5) - This whistle on slider end sounds weird

长slider的形状拉得挺好，然后那些1/2拍的小跳的组合也挺有意思，其他地方强烈的老图既视感，现在这种风格还真是少见了，难得

call me back

Stefan wrote:

好工作，继续前进！ wwww

Weiren wrote:

translation software

Garven wrote:

Wait wait wait. A Weiren map that's not Aniki-related? Account sharing, maybe? q:

Grats~