Hi
[Insane]
Can't you give it a custom diffname? It's for approval anyways, then "Insane" feels a bit bland
00:00:210 (1,2,3) - Can you please space them more (or less) so the distance wouldn't eb the exact same as the following sstream?
00:08:207 (5,6) - These 2 are low spaced, while the others 00:07:208 (2,3,4) - all have big spacing. Why not use it here too?
00:15:205 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is soo low compared to the previous parts. Why not increase it?
00:52:862 (4,5,6) - The emphasis feels a bit odd. Sliderends have no emphasis, but (4,5) (all 3 audible parts) are of equal power in the music. imo 3 circles would work better
00:58:860 (5,6) - The lower spacing actually makes this a bit awkward
01:12:856 (8,1) - nazi - why not tro to match (8)'s head so it's perfectly on top of (1)'s tick?
01:24:020 (1,1) - Spinnerstarts have absolutely 0 emphasis, so it's better to start the spinner 1/4 (or 1/2) later, and a circle on the strong sound (applies to both spinners)
01:35:183 (2,3,4) - Not a fan of these overlaps, consider spacing them out more
01:51:179 (2,3,4,5) - Flow feels really broken here. It's a circle, then completely the otherway around (from (4,5)
02:20:837 (4,6) - See the nazi suggestion made above
03:07:990 (1) - Is there a need for the whole stream to have whistles? Can't you just juse them as a different sampleset as hitnormal, so the ears of people who turn off custom sounds don't get raped by the default skin's whistls
03:16:322 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this prettier. I do think this rhythm is nice, but the slightoverlaps make this look a little bad. Why not make them all blankets?
03:24:819 (1) - Why is there a NC? There is no sound which supports it
03:24:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - The combo is really long, especially when you apply ^^, so add a few NCs, 03:25:486 (7) - if you only do this one, it's already fine!
03:59:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap feels a bit untidy
Hmm, usually I dislike old maps, but this one's not that bad
Good job!
[Insane]
Can't you give it a custom diffname? It's for approval anyways, then "Insane" feels a bit bland
00:00:210 (1,2,3) - Can you please space them more (or less) so the distance wouldn't eb the exact same as the following sstream?
00:08:207 (5,6) - These 2 are low spaced, while the others 00:07:208 (2,3,4) - all have big spacing. Why not use it here too?
00:15:205 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is soo low compared to the previous parts. Why not increase it?
00:52:862 (4,5,6) - The emphasis feels a bit odd. Sliderends have no emphasis, but (4,5) (all 3 audible parts) are of equal power in the music. imo 3 circles would work better
00:58:860 (5,6) - The lower spacing actually makes this a bit awkward
01:12:856 (8,1) - nazi - why not tro to match (8)'s head so it's perfectly on top of (1)'s tick?
01:24:020 (1,1) - Spinnerstarts have absolutely 0 emphasis, so it's better to start the spinner 1/4 (or 1/2) later, and a circle on the strong sound (applies to both spinners)
01:35:183 (2,3,4) - Not a fan of these overlaps, consider spacing them out more
01:51:179 (2,3,4,5) - Flow feels really broken here. It's a circle, then completely the otherway around (from (4,5)
02:20:837 (4,6) - See the nazi suggestion made above
03:07:990 (1) - Is there a need for the whole stream to have whistles? Can't you just juse them as a different sampleset as hitnormal, so the ears of people who turn off custom sounds don't get raped by the default skin's whistls
03:16:322 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this prettier. I do think this rhythm is nice, but the slightoverlaps make this look a little bad. Why not make them all blankets?
03:24:819 (1) - Why is there a NC? There is no sound which supports it
03:24:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - The combo is really long, especially when you apply ^^, so add a few NCs, 03:25:486 (7) - if you only do this one, it's already fine!
03:59:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap feels a bit untidy
Hmm, usually I dislike old maps, but this one's not that bad
Good job!