1. 00:06:828 (2,3) - lol this circles should start on 00:06:735 not on 00:06:828 XD.
2. 00:45:735 (1,2) - Can you avoid these sliders from overlapping? They don't look good. Meanwhile, the new combo should be on 00:46:110 (2) not on 00:45:73 (1) since the downbeat is on 00:46:110 and that's the part where the rhythm changes.
3. 00:58:110 (1,3) - Avoid the overlaps of these two sliders too. :3
4. 01:09:172 (4,5) - Can you make a beat blanket out of these sliders? It'll improve the flow of your gameplay if you'll do.

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi!

[notice]I teach something called "Flow", The Flow is a concept that is added to the maps, which is to make every jump paresca normal movement of the Mouse ...
[Easy]
00:08:610 (2,3) Do not think it could be better with one single slider? I say not to rush ..
Upbeat sliders plays very awkard IMO
00:20:610 (1,2) ^
There is lyrics in that verse
Good Luck :3

Entreal wrote:

01:10:110 - I don't think you actually need this, since the other diff doesn't have that.
I think you mean the green line.I use them to emphasize the dimming part of the song.And I can use that since it is a guest diff.

1. had two osb files. you must remove one.
2. lead-in should be set to 2000ms in all diffs imo.
3. Preview Time is not same as between diffs. you must adjust Easy

1. 00:07:110 (1) - what is this note follow? the slider is not follow instrument/vocal imo.
   00:07:110 (1,2) - should exchange these.
   
   00:07:110 (1) - circle
   00:07:485 (2) - 2/1 slider
   ^like this.
3. 01:10:860 (3,4) - these hitsound is hard to hear. this volume may confuse to the beginner.
   01:10:110 - 30%
   01:10:485 - 28%
   01:10:860 - 26%
   01:11:235 - 24%
   01:11:610 - 22%
   01:12:735 - 20%
   try this.
4. 01:14:985 - why did you put green line here? I think should place in 01:15:172 -

1. sorry, I could not mod this diff. I was not able to suggest those because could not understand many pattern.

1. AR+1
   this map had many continuous circles. so AR7 is low imo.
2. 00:04:672 (2,3) - exchange these notes. these did not follow vocal and instrument, so that would be better.
3. 00:05:422 (4,5,6) - remove (5,6) and add reverce (4). or remove only (5).
   vocal did not have large volume in 00:05:985, so not fit that.
4. 00:16:672 (2,3) - same as 00:04:672 (2,3)
5. 00:21:735 (5,1) - this jump is not follow song. instrument and vocal does not have large volume and not needs uplift here imo.
   
   
   ^ my suggestion
6. 00:22:860 (3,1) - same as above.
   
   
7. 00:30:735 (1) - this rhythm / volume setting is too bad.... not follow song. in addition not fit kick slider here.
   you should remove green lines and change 1/1 slider.
8. 00:56:235 (2,1) - this placement would confuse players. I suggest to add circle in 00:56:610 - .
   sorry, I could not find to other suggestions.

1. you forgot to uncheck countdown.
2. 00:02:797 (1,2,3) - suggest to add symmetry.
   
   
   like this.

1. 00:09:360 (4) Clap on sllider's end (if I follow your rythm)
2. 00:21:360 (2) You can fit this slider with (1) like this :
   Screen and code

   
   

   420,152,20610,38,0,P|400:184|344:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   270,177,21360,2,0,P|264:224|292:272,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   368,288,22110,6,0,P|304:348|212:296,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:26:610 (2) I think you can do this slider with only 3 points (looks like the previous algorithm). Remake it imo.
4. 00:37:860 (2) You can fit this slider with (1) if you move (2) one grid right (x: 144; y:204). Move (3) if you fix this point ^^
5. 00:43:110 (1,2,3) Yeah, I don't really like that because I have the feeling this is too repetitive. (4* the same pattern) I think you can try this instead of what you're doing : http://puu.sh/2fSSm. The singer is holding the note so you can do a slider instead of 2 circles and if you want to do a symetry, you can do exactly what I have done on the screenshot.
6. 00:54:735 (6,1) I think you can do a better curve than this. Try to put (6) => x:276 ; y:260 and (1) => x:292 ; y:180
   
   Screenshot

   

1. 00:09:735 (4) Move to x:408 ; y:72
2. 00:22:110 (1) I think you can move the red point in this slider 1 grid right to be on the middle of the grid.
3. 00:23:610 (3) CTRL + J (1) for the general symetry.
4. 00:45:360 (5,1) I think this is better to replace these two circles by one slider. If you don't want to do this, please, do this : 00:45:735 (1,2) rever
5. 00:51:360 (4) clap on slider's end?
6. 00:55:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) There is too much clap here : for me, remove clap on (2) (3) and (7)'s start
7. 01:04:110 (5) CTRL + J (3) and reverse selection for the symetry.
8. 01:05:985 (1,2) Reverse clap (following your previous rythm)
9. 01:06:735 (3) clap here (^)
10. 01:07:485 (6) ^
11. 01:07:860 (7) remove clap at the beginning and put it at the end of this slider
12. 01:08:985 (1) clap (slider's end)
13. 01:09:360 (2) remove clap
14. 01:09:735 (3) clap

1. 00:18:360 (4) Move to x:216; y:24 (you can move (5) a little bit to the right)
2. 00:34:672 (4) I think you can rework a little this slider to fit more with (2,3)
3. 00:36:922 (3,1) reverse NC
4. 01:14:797 (4) Reverse is not needed for me on this slider. Remove the reverse but finish the slider at 01:14:985 -

1. 00:10:016 (2) Move to x:224 ; y:252 => do a better curve here.
2. 01:00:547 (1,2,3) You don't put a lot of jump in this diff so this jump is wayyy to big here. Please reduce distance spacing between these circles. It could be unreadable if this the distance spacing is too big.
3. 01:14:891 (2,3,4) You can do a better curve (follow (1)'s direction)

1. 00:17:610 (3,4,1,2) - 4 and 2 are at the same heigh but not the end of 3 and 1. Moreover the blanket of 1 isn't really good but if you move 4,1 and 2 a little higher you'll fix both issues.
2. 01:02:610 (3) - It's nearly aligned with the previous and the following note. Maybe move it up a little (or if you don't want the alignement because i think it doesn't look good like this)
3. Very good diff. I hardly find anything.

1. 00:04:860 (2) - I think it suits fits better the music if you remove it.
2. 00:05:047 (3) - Move it one grid right in order to be aligned with 4 and 5 (and match with 6) or move it one grid left in order to smooth the shape of your 3 notes.
3. 00:05:422 (5) - It's a long combo for a normal. Maybe NC?
4. 00:23:610 (3) - Not really symmetrical. Fix this.
5. 00:29:985 (6) - I'm not sure the clap is really useful here. (And again it's a long combo. Maybe NC?)
6. 00:38:422 (3) - Again, it's not perfectly symmetrical (The end point should be a little lower and the red point on the axis)
7. 00:45:735 (1) - Move it one grid up in order to be at the same high than the previous note (and the slider).
8. 00:46:482 (3) - Move it one grid down in order to be at the same high than the previous note.
9. 00:46:860 (4) - Move it to x=128 and y=220 (because of 1 and 5)
10. 00:52:110 (1,2) - I know i repeat myself but they aren't at the same high. I know it's not a big deal but when it's just a difference of one grid it's.... I don't know how to describe it but it's bothering.

1. 00:20:235 (3,4) - Move them one grid right in order to be aligned with the slider.
2. 00:30:735 (1) - Why this slider? It doesn't match with the song and bring no hotsound?
3. 00:44:422 (3) - The blanket isn't very good. Move it a little higher.
4. Correct diff. A little straight to my taste. I think it would work better with more curve but it's just my opinion.

1. 00:04:110 (1,2) - I find this jump a little too hard. Moreover the placement of the note 1 seems random.
2. 00:10:016 (2) - Move it to x=228 y=248.
3. 00:10:672 (4) - Move it to x=356 y=212. In this place it's tails is on the same place than 00:09:922 (1).
4. 00:23:235 (3,1) - Nearly at the same high (i think i might start upsetting you with that).
5. 00:32:235 (4,5) - Ctrl+g is maybe more pleasant to play than the square.
6. 00:46:860 (3) - The blanket is bad and the slider isn't symmetrical. Try this:
   
   
7. 01:04:485 (1,3,6) - I'll let you guess this one.

angelfix wrote:

:( i have to delay my mod one day, please do not be angry

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Mod for popner's queue
Here is some suggestions:

[Easy]

1. 00:17:610 (3,4,1,2) - 4 and 2 are at the same heigh but not the end of 3 and 1. Moreover the blanket of 1 isn't really good but if you move 4,1 and 2 a little higher you'll fix both issues. ok
2. 01:02:610 (3) - It's nearly aligned with the previous and the following note. Maybe move it up a little (or if you don't want the alignement because i think it doesn't look good like this) linear seems not so pretty here,so no
3. Very good diff. I hardly find anything.

Well i really like the Easy and Insane Diff. Good luck getting it ranked .

thanks :3

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue
General
there are 2 osb files in ths song folder, delete one. Wierd. I already deleted the one once and it still appears -.-
add "opening" in the tags Lol it's ending and it is not needed in tags. Never seen it to a map so far.
Uncheck "Letterbox" since there are no Break Time. Fixed


Normal
Placement
00:15:360(3) use ×0.8 spacing.in this diff, you should set same spacing for newbie. Normal difficulties are from a bit higher level than "newbie" however, it wont be hard to predict it. Although, I refuse to change this as it kills the beat blanket.
00:32:047(2)^ ^
Rhythm
00:04:860(2,3,4,5) this 4 combos seem difficult for newbie, try to make easier? e.g) Fixed

SPOILER

00:55:860(2,3,4,5)^ I wont change it here, it's a Kiai time so it's more enjoyable to be a bit harder there.
00:06:547(4) start at 00:06:360 betterNot really. Listen to the song carefully.
00:47:422(6) it's too long and weird... please follow the vocal? Just because it's a normal difficulty I do not wish to use more sliders or circles to cover a lot similar parts of the map. I did it to specific places where it fits. It wont change there.

SPOILER

00:54:922(6) a bit difficult for Normal... consider to replace a note or something. No need, the stream is kinda fast so even a small click will get it done, it's not hard for the player to react afterwards.
00:58:110(1) end at 01:00:360? current seems difficult because the note at 01:01:110 is too far from center line. I wont change this yet, but I'll note it. I'm fifty fifty so I would like to hear it from some more mods.
01:10:672(2) delete 1 reverse better, it's difficult to expect. Fixed
Hit Sonud
some Normal-whistle hears loudly and overadded I suppose.
00:34:110(1) same as Easy I don't understand you here..

Hard
AR7 better because Insane has AR8 AR is not meant to be different to all difficulties. AR8 is good enough to read the hard and insane.
Placement
00:05:235(3) move like this? it's more clear Fixed

SPOILER

00:15:735(2) too far for Hard, please replace. That was actually a accidental move. Thanks for noticing. Fixed.
00:34:297(2,3,4) just suggestion, but it's more beautiful than current imo Fixed

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:06:922(4) to follow the music more consistence,I suppose this would be better

SPOILER

00:07:485(2) you shouldn't set like this long slider. it's Hard diff, so put notes & slider positively. There's no rule saying I shouldn't use such slider. This slider follows the vocal behind and it will simply look terrible to replace it as it will simply add more sound there.
00:26:047(5) move at 00:26:235? No. It's off sync.
00:51:735 umm, blank is weird. add a note here? That blank covers a part of the song. I want it this way for lots of reasons
01:02:422 add a note better to follow the music. There's a break in the lyrics there. It does actually follow the music. Listen more carefully.

Insane
Placement
01:02:235(2) Ctrl+G? Changed the previous one instead. Your way did not feel comfortable for my hand.
Rhythm
00:07:485(1) too long slider for Insane, like this? No, I said why above~

SPOILER

00:29:422(1,2,3,4) to follow the vocal, maybe like this? No thanks, it feels better this way

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:10:110(3) add finish at head Fixed

need more work I suppose, good luck.

Thanks for your suggestions and mods.

Updated~

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue

Easy
Placement
00:32:610(3,4) make blanket better? good enough

SPOILER

01:05:235(2,3) to make beautiful, like this?blanket is better

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:47:235 add a note better to follow the vocal. good enough
Hit Sonud
00:28:110(1,2) delete whistle at end? there isn't whistle at 00:25:110(1,2) fixed
00:34:110(1) finish is loud, maybe whistle better start of kiai time, does not affect the gameplay at all



need more work I suppose, good luck.

~random from #modreqs~

1. 00:13:485 (2) - add clap head
2. 00:19:485 (2) - ^
3. 00:23:610 (3) - add finish head
4. 00:25:110 (1) - ^
5. 00:25:110 (1,2) - add whistle tail like 00:28:110 (1,2) -
6. 00:50:610 (3) - remove finish head
7. 00:52:110 (1) - add finish head
8. 00:58:110 (1) - ^

1. 00:04:110 (1) - add clap tail
2. 00:04:860 (2) - ^
3. 00:06:547 (4) - add clap head
4. 00:07:485 (1) - ^
5. 00:10:672 (2) - ^
6. 00:11:985 (5) - add clap
7. 00:14:985 (2) - add clap head
8. 00:16:485 (4) - add clap
9. 00:17:985 (2) - add clap head
10. 00:19:485 (1) - add clap
11. 00:20:422 (3) - add finish
12. 00:27:735 (4) - add clap head
13. 00:41:422 (5) - change clap to finish at head & remove clap tail
14. 00:44:422 (4) - add finish head
15. 00:47:422 (6) - ^
16. 00:53:422 (4) - ^ & add clap tail
17. 00:54:360 (5) - add clap tail
18. 00:56:422 (5) - change clap to finish at head
19. 01:01:110 (1) - remove clap tail
20. 01:02:235 (2) - add clap
21. 01:02:610 (3) - remove clap tail
22. 01:03:735 (4) - add clap
23. 01:04:110 (5) - add finish head & remove clap at reverse
24. 01:05:985 (1) - add clap
25. 01:06:360 (2) - remove clap
26. 01:06:735 (3) - add clap
27. 01:07:485 (6) - ^
28. 01:07:860 (7) - swap clap head to tail
29. 01:08:610 (1) - add clap tail
30. 01:09:360 (2) - remove clap
31. 01:09:735 (3) - add clap head
32. 01:10:485 (1) - add clap
33. 01:11:422 (3) - add finish
34. 01:12:547 (6,7) - ^
35. 01:13:110 (1) - swap clap head to tail

1. 00:05:235 (3) - add clap
2. 00:07:485 (1) - add clap tail
3. 00:08:328 (2) - add clap
4. 00:11:235 (3) - ^
5. 00:15:360 (4) - remove clap
6. 00:17:235 (3) - add clap
7. 00:18:360 (4) - add clap tail
8. 00:20:235 (3) - add clap
9. 00:20:422 (4) - add finish
10. 00:21:735 (5) - add clap
11. 00:22:860 (3) - add clap tail
12. 00:30:172 (8) - remove clap tail
13. 00:33:735 (1) - add clap head
14. 00:38:422 (3) - add finish head
15. 00:41:422 (3) - ^
16. 00:42:735 (5) - add clap tail
17. 00:43:016 (6) - add clap
18. 00:43:860 (2) - add clap tail
19. 00:44:422 (3) - add finish head
20. 00:47:422 (6) - ^
21. 00:48:547 (7,8) - add finish
22. 00:50:422 (4) - add finish head
23. 00:53:422 (2) - ^
24. 00:53:422 (2) - add clap tail
25. 00:54:922 (4) - add clap
26. 00:56:235 (3) - change clap to finish at tail
27. 00:57:172 (6) - remove clap at reverse & tail
28. 00:59:422 (4) - add finish head
29. 01:00:922 (7) - remove clap
30. 01:02:610 (4) - add clap tail
31. 01:04:485 (1) - add clap head
32. 01:05:422 (3) - add finish head
33. 01:07:110 (1) - swap clap head to tail
34. 01:08:422 (4) - add finish
35. 01:10:485 (2) - add clap
36. 01:11:047 (5) - add finish tail
37. 01:12:735 (9) - add finish
38. 01:13:110 (1) - add clap at reverse

Nemis wrote:

[notice]From the TAM's Queue

[Insane]
00:01:672 (3,1) - There is a spacing issue - Fixed
00:02:797 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make this pattern perfectly symmetric and move it in the center - Fixed
00:04:297 (2,3) - Fix the blanket - Fixed
00:16:485 (5,6,7) - I suggest to flip this pattern vertically to have a zigzag movement /\/\ - I don't get what you mean .-. Picture please? D:
00:22:110 (1,2) - Make a blanket here - I'm not sure if I got your point here but I did a change .-.
00:23:610 (5,6) - I suggest to make it here too - ^
00:23:610 (5) - New combo - Fixed
00:31:672 (2) - Why don't you flip this horizontally? it flows better like this 00:33:360 (9,10) - - Fixed
00:37:485 (2) - Same as above - Fixed
00:45:360 (6) - Same again - Fixed
00:50:422 (4,5) - I suggest to make a blanket here - Distance wont allow me - If you have a more clear suggestion of how to do it, feel free~
00:55:860 (2) - I suggest to move this slider 1 square to right to make the start centrate - I think you mean left(Fixed)
00:57:360 (6) - Same - Fixed
01:03:172 (2) - CTRL + G? It flows a lot - Umm okay I think the jump afterwards is kinda big but we'll see.
01:04:110 (1) - I suggest to flip this slider horizontally - Fixed
01:04:485 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make a perfect triangle - Fixed
01:08:610 (5) - I suggest to flip this slider horizontally again - Fixed
01:15:172 (4) - I suggest to start a slider here that finishes on 01:15:735 (5) - - Not sure, I like how it ends here - I'll keep it in mind though.

[Hard]
00:13:110 (1,2) - I suggest to move this pattern in the center fixing the stream - Did my best .-.
00:18:922 (6,1) - Make a blanket here - Fixed
00:28:110 (1) - Blanket here with 00:27:360 (2) - 's start - Fixed
00:29:610 (4,5) - I would try to make a blanked here - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692868 I did this to create a rectangle with their center, I couldn't make a Blanket .-.
00:39:172 (5,1) - The blanket is good but not the spacing... fix it - Fixed
00:52:860 (3,4) - You should unstack them - Fixed
01:01:110 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing - Fixed
01:15:172 (4) - I suggest to start a slider here that finishes on 01:15:735 (5) - - Same as in Insane~

[Normal]

00:55:860 (2,3,4,5) - You should try something else for this - 00:56:047 (3) - Deleted, I hope it's better now
01:03:735 (4) - Move this note 1 square down to stack it with 01:05:985 (2) - - Fixed
01:15:172 (4) - I suggest to start a slider here that finishes on 01:15:735 (5) - - Same as others above!

Nemis wrote:

From the TAM's Queue
[Easy]
Nothing to say except that 00:10:110 (1,2) - 'cause I think you should fix their forms... but since you did a blanked with 00:13:485 (2) - it's fine
it's fine

Nemis wrote:

[Insane]
00:16:485 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/2v1mo
00:22:110 (1,2) - It's good
00:55:860 (2) - Yes, left*

[Hard]
00:29:610 (4,5) - your screen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692868 is a good idea

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue!

Easy

00:14:620 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:620 (1) - ^

fixed all

2015-08-23 23:15 [Luxord]: No hope
2015-08-23 23:18 whymeman: screw this.......
2015-08-23 23:18 *whymeman uses 1/16
2015-08-23 23:18 [Luxord]: LOL
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: 1540
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: seems ok
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: try it
2015-08-23 23:20 whymeman: pretty close
2015-08-23 23:20 whymeman: 1541
2015-08-23 23:20 whymeman: have to test it though
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: damn,. :shock: 
2015-08-23 23:21 [Luxord]: you can actually tell the difference of one ms
2015-08-23 23:21 [Luxord]: ok.
2015-08-23 23:23 whymeman: i'm PICKY with timing
2015-08-23 23:23 whymeman: >:V
2015-08-23 23:24 whymeman: Okay, need to do about 7 or 8 +ms
2015-08-23 23:25 [Luxord]: 1549?
2015-08-23 23:25 [Luxord]: 48?
2015-08-23 23:25 whymeman: i'd try 48
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2015-08-24 00:02 whymeman: Also
2015-08-24 00:03 whymeman: you just updated the map?
2015-08-24 00:03 [Luxord]: yes
2015-08-24 00:03 [Luxord]: why
2015-08-24 00:03 [Luxord]: o.o
2015-08-24 00:03 whymeman: Just making sure
2015-08-24 00:03 whymeman: also, I you got the timing in Normal wrong
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: really?
2015-08-24 00:04 whymeman: xx38 =/= xx48 ([b]Note: Other difficulties had 1548ms[/b])
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: yes
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: noticed
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: updating
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: ;D
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: done
2015-08-24 00:04 whymeman: good