1. Are you sure you want to add a 10seconds break in a song that lasts only a minut? I think that considering the length it would be better with no break
2. Consider adding some tags
3. Combo colours 1 and 2 are too much alike so it's hard to see NC, Same for colours 3 and 4. I believe it's unrankable issue

1. Approach Rate -1 or -2
2. 00:04:859 (2,3,4) - spacing should be consistent in easy diff. You can't go from 1.0 to 0.5 like this. Stick to something
3. 00:04:859 (2,3,4) - ^
4. 00:50:606 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:07:109 (1,2) - stacking notes is not recommended in easy difficulty, it will confuse new players
6. 00:12:359 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:07:109 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:12:359 (4,5) - ^
9. 00:16:108 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders could be prettier.
10. 00:40:107 (4) - wrong spacing
11. 00:42:356 (1,2,3) - ^

1. Approach Rate -1
2. Circle Size -1
3. 00:12:921 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe a bit too hard for a normal
4. 00:21:921 (5,1,2,3) - ^
5. Overall I think this map is too hard to be labelled normal as it is, considering the bpm, you should probably remove some notes to make it easier
6. 01:01:105 (1,2,3) - rework the shape of this combo, 01:02:042 (2) looks really odd

1. Your combos or either too long or too short (a one-circle combo between two 11 or 12 circles combo? don't do that). I suggest a few changes here, but feel free to try other patterns, whatever feels right to you, but your combos are overall too long. And avoid one-note combo except for very specific reasons.
2. 00:03:360 (7) - NC
3. 00:04:297 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:05:422 (5) - NC
5. 00:14:796 (3) - NC
6. 00:37:107 (1) - remove NC
7. 00:39:169 (4,1) - homogenize the shape of this pattern
8. 01:15:166 (1) - ^

1. Same comment about the combos
2. This map looks better than the rest of the set imo, no comment! gj ^^

• HP-1 and OD-1 feels better
  Insane has less stars than Hard.This is possibly caused by too strict about the spacing in Insane, since everything is a jump.
  a bit too bland.Try to add a clap on every upbeat.
  00:03:734 (6,7,8) - could be stacked
  00:10:109 (3,4) - could be a better blanket
  00:11:422 (6,7) - ^
  00:12:827 (9,10,11,1) - uneven spacing
  00:25:108 (9) - finish
  00:38:419 (4,6) - a bit ugly overlapping
  00:43:856 (1,2) - ^
  00:46:481 (5,6,7) - could be stacked
  00:59:418 (5) - This curve could be more natural.You can utilize the approach circle of (4) to make a nice slider
  01:00:542 (6,7,8) - this jump is pretty large....
  01:05:979 (5,6) - could be parallel
  01:09:167 (8,9,1) - a bit ugly overlapping

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1. What is the meaning of the SB? imo it's useless, delete it.

1. 00:16:108 (3) - fix spacing.. snap it.
2. 00:13:109 (1) - finish at the start of this slider..
3. 00:20:608 (5,6) - arrgh the claps arrgh, delete it change it to whistle if you want to..
4. 00:20:608 (5) - finish at the end of this slider
5. 00:22:858 (6) - finish at the repeater of this slider (the one with the arrow thingy..)
6. 00:37:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - those claps are wrong, the claps should be put on the 3rd beat... around here...
   
7. 00:37:107 - finish hitsound
8. 00:43:106 - ^
9. 00:49:106 - ^
10. 00:52:106 - ^
11. 00:53:605 (1,2) - spacing error... again.

1. 00:43:294 (2) - delete
2. 00:50:981 (5,6,7) - don't stack these. it's confusing

1. Reduced Slider Velocity from 3.20 -> 2.20.
2. 98% of the notes are distance snapped(did cheat them a bit for some stacks).

Zexion_Vi wrote:

Just a small thing, if your diff's are ready, move your mapset to pending so you can get more mods there :3

No kudosu!

1. BG size is little large. please use this .jpg file.
   
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2. Combo color (1) and (2) is similar. please change diffrent color.
3. Add Lead-In 1500 in all diff.
4. Please exclude a check of the countdown in all diff.

1. AR-1 BPM160 and AR9 is not match.
2. 00:19:671 (5) - remove clap of slider end.
3. 00:30:732 - volume is very low. Please 15%~20% up.

1. HP-1
2. 00:30:732 - same reason above in insane diff.

1. 00:06:734 (7) - add clap
2. 00:09:734 (5) - ^
3. 00:15:734 (7) - ^
4. 00:30:732 - same reason above in insane diff.

1. HP-1
   This diff is well done in comparison with other diff.

Guy wrote:

Hi! from your m4m queue.

[Easy]

1. HP-1 fixed
   This diff is well done in comparison with other diff.

Thanks~:3

good luck~

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

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TrigonometrY wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue
[Easy]
00:19:108 (1,2) - they are too gripped. Spread the ends of sliders: fixed

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00:37:107 (1) - rotate by 3 degrees and move to 196;140? fixed
01:01:105 (1,2,1) - they overlap a bir ugly, especially 01:02:605 (2,1) - how about like this: fixed

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Good luck.

upd: I see, you changed timing. Resnap all notes.

changed as well

Foreverends wrote:

hi, come for mod

Easy
I think this diff is a bit hard, just like normal
00:01:110 (1,2,3) - here is my opinion that the rhythm of it is a bit fast, here is the suggestion to fix it
00:02:047 (2) - delete this slider, 00:01:110 (1) - change to reverse slider and press ctrl+g to this slider, 00:02:797 (3) - put it on 00:02:610 - and pull this slider to 00:03:735 - like this

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00:13:672 (2) - delete this slider, 00:13:110 (1) - pull this slider to 00:13:672 - and you may add a note on 00:14:235 - like this

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00:19:110 (1,2) - ^

ok to all

Kiyro wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:110 (1,2) - 1/2 is too hard for an easy. http://puu.sh/25xhm
00:19:110 (1,2) - ^
00:50:610 (3) - Ugly slider btw, delete the red point.
00:55:110 (1) - 2 reverse are confusing. http://puu.sh/25xj4
01:01:110 (1) - ^
01:04:110 (1) - ^
01:02:610 (2) - Make it symmetrical.

ok to all

1. The title should be Nobodyknows, fix it, please
2. Your combo colours are... not suitable. Especially in Kiai part. It should be epic and bright, but your colours are gray D: Maybe change them? Or use same colours within whole map
3. Audio lead-in - 1 in all diffs
4. PreviewTime: 37110 in Easy as it is inconsistent with other diffs
5. Disable countdown in Insane
6. You have inconsistent combo colour code in all diffs, fix it

1. 00:01:110 (1) - finish due to it's beginning and sounds good
2. 00:01:110 (1,2) - this slider looks not nice with the second one D: Try this:
   
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3. 00:04:110 (1) - maybe finish too? In music there is one
4. 00:07:110 (1) - same here (and so on)
5. 00:25:110 (1) - would be better if you put finish here
6. 00:28:110 (3) - maybe new combo?
7. 00:59:235 - add a note here as it has the strong vocal
8. 01:05:610 (3) - fix this slider, osu update broke it D:
9. 00:37:110 - snap kiai to timing. It must be snapped
10. 01:01:108 - snap the kiai's ending

1. 00:04:110 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Distance between them is wider than between 00:01:110 (1,2), though it have 1/1 between them. Fix it and make consistent
2. 00:05:610 (4) - put new combo here
3. 00:13:110 (1,2,3) - again, distance is low, you can fix it this way for example:
   
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4. 00:25:110 - add a note here
5. 00:25:110 - volume up please, I can't hear a note
6. 00:26:797 (1) - 4 reverses are too much. They are unexpected and read badly. Players may fail here, so split this reverse slider, please. For example:
   
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7. 00:30:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - too fast gradation in volume. In the end it's too loud
8. 00:37:110 (1) - remove nc, it's unecessary
9. 00:38:797 (6,7) - don't stack it, please. Before there are 1/2 notes that are stacked (00:38:235 (4,5) - ), so players may think that this is 1/2 too
10. 00:37:110 (1) - change clap to finish
11. 00:40:110 (1) - same here
12. 00:48:922 (1) - finish to the reverse
13. 00:50:610 (4) - move to 00:50:422? To make rhythm as you used before
14. 00:50:797 and 00:51:172 - add notes too?
15. 00:55:860 (5) - again, 4 reverses. Split it
16. 00:57:360 (7) - remove finish, sounds bad
17. 01:05:985 (5) - too many reverses!
18. 01:09:172 (6,7) - maybe arrange them this way (and also how to fix reverses on (7))
    
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1. Fix your comboes
2. 00:01:485 (2) - move clap here
3. 00:01:672 (3) - remove clap
4. 00:04:110 (5,1) - move them so that they won't touch each other?
5. 00:22:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe use this rhythm:
   
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6. 00:24:828 (3) - finish in the end
7. 00:25:297 (4) - new combo here, due to new part
8. 00:25:110 ~ also, add some soft whistles to this part
9. 00:29:047 (5) - finish don't suit this note
10. 00:42:547 - add note here, please. it's better to play and sounds better too
11. 00:48:547 (7,8,9,1) - may seem as 1/1 because of sudden jump. maybe fix like here:
    
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12. 00:54:360 (3,4,5) - they look bad for me D: Try to arrange it better way or change slider stream to circle stream?
13. 00:55:860 (1,2,1,2) - they have same spacing, but between 00:56:235 (2,1) - 1/1. May seem that they are all 1/2, so I advise you to change spacing:
    
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14. 01:01:110 ~ this part has strange claps D: Maybe put it on every second beat?
15. 01:11:047 (5,6,7,8) - distance between them must be equal
16. 01:14:797 (4) - remove clap, sounds awful
17. 01:06:917 (18) - unsnapped
18. 01:07:011 (19) - ^

1. AR -1, as 9 is too high and doesn't fit this song D:
2. Also, your sliders are broken, so Timing -> Recalculate slider length
3. Resnap all notes
4. 00:01:110 (1) - remove clap
5. Why you have claps on every first beat? D:
6. 00:25:110 (1) - finish and add some whistles to this part
7. 00:46:110 (4) - maybe ctrl+g for better flow?
8. 01:00:547 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g in this way:
   
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kelvinli wrote:

updated, all mods considered
http://puu.sh/26wkX
But the combo colours didn't change, so I guess I don't have to?I think I'd need some guidelines

1. 00:36:735 ~ 00:37:110 - The turning of the Background into black white looks cool but one thing I noticed is that the background kind of moved a few grids to the left on [Easy]. I don't if it's just me but I tried redownloading and the problem is still there. You might want to fix that because it'll be a total mess if people play this map.

1. 00:07:110 (1) - You better find a way to turn this slider into a beat blanket. It'll improve your map structures as well as it's flow. If you're not so sure about what a beat blanket looks like, try checking the image together with the description below:
   
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   As you can see, the curve slider (1) is trying to surround the previous slider which is (2) perfectly.. Right now, your current beat blanket surrounds the previous slider but it is not well placed. If you will check the distance around (2), you will notice that they are not all the same compared to the image that i showed above, the spacing remains consistent throughout the slider head.
2. 00:11:610 (2) - It would be better if this slider makes a mini blanket too with the slider on 00:13:485 (2), same thing that you did with 00:13:485 (2,1). Try following the map structure I did below:
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   Meanwhile, it's your choice whether you wanna change the slider on 00:10:110 (1) since I believe you made them identical to form a symmetry. But I already tried doing that and it doesn't look good. One thing I can suggest you for this one is to avoid having two identical sliders for this part. Try to look for a way to avoid this problem, but it's fine if you keep it that way, I'm pretty sure it's not that obvious to some players.
3. 00:15:360 (2) - This slider also has blanket issues with 00:13:485 (2). Can you at least try fixing them to improve the gameplay for this difficulty? I know I'm trying to act so picky about this one, but every suggestion is worth a fix so I hope you'll fix them. ^^
4. 00:21:360 (2,1,3,4,1) - I really don't like how this flow. Just like the rest of my suggestions, you should fix these sliders and circles. I'm not sure if you're trying to make blankets out of this objects but you should turn this one into perfect blanket, you not only improve the visuals of this difficulty, but also the flow of gameplay so it's best that you fix this objects.
5. 00:38:610 (3,4) - Another one of these blankets. Please fix them to improve your difficulty's flow in gameplay and visuals. ^^
6. 00:40:110 (1,2) - These sliders I believe doesn't make any sense at the music at all. It feels like you're just trying to fill up the rhythm with some random long sliders just for the sake of having a 'flow' of objects. What I can suggest here is you to not use [1 1/2] sliders and use [1/1] sliders instead, maybe add a note perhaps if you find it more fitting (which I do) XD
7. 00:50:610 (3) - I know I don't have the right to judge maps badly, but using a simple curve sliders with 3 anchors could've been better. These sliders don't make a great flow since it's not a perfectly curve slider. Feels like this slider came from the old school. lol. But I don't hate this one, you can keep it this way if you think it's not wrong. But I would really suggest you change it to a simple curve slider instead.
8. 00:59:610 (3) - Another one of your beat blanket problems. Can you try to find a way to fix them please?
9. 01:05:610 (3) - Almost perfect blanket. Try to fix this one a little bit more.

1. Bump your Overall Difficulty and HP Drain +1 to maintain a good diff spread with this difficulty.
2. 00:01:110 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing used for these three sliders .8 (0.77 to be specific) when all of the other hit objects you used have x1.0 spacing? Fix this up please. Also, you might want to make some cute blankets too if you want ^^ But don't mind me, it feels like I've been modding blankets all this time. lol
3. 00:05:610 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like these circles were just placed randomly just for the sake of filling up empty timelines. D: Can you just make a square pattern with these circles? They don't look good, especially since two circles (00:05:985 (2,4)) are overlapping with each other. Please find a way to fix this one.
4. 00:11:610 (2) - This slider is totally off and is not making any sense with the music. I say you replace this one with [1/1] sliders instead. They will make much more sense if you'll try doing my suggestion.
5. 00:22:860 (3,1) - Please fix the spacing. Circle (1) is too near from the previous circle. This will make quite a confusion for Normal players because you remained consistent with the spacing and all throughout suddenly, you have this sudden change in spacing. D:
6. 00:26:610 (5) - I believe the new combo should be marked here instead of the circle in 00:26:797. Meanwhile, this part feels so hard for Normal players. I would suggest you to unstack this circle instead to make it a bit more readable for players. OR. Reduce a few circles in this part.
7. 00:30:735 (1) - Okay, you're overmapping. >.> This is a normal diff, don't put any gimmicks around here. Please change this one into a hit circle instead or a [1/1] slider.
8. 00:50:610 (4,5,6) - It would make much more sense if you'll move [1/2] beat backwards since there is a loud beat that occurred on this part and it's bad to just ignore it. I hope you'll follow this one so you could emphasize the big beat a lot more. By the way, you should add a finish on (4) if you followed my suggestion.
9. 00:52:110 - If you happen to follow my suggestion above, add a note here.

1. 00:04:110 (5,1) - Can you somehow try to look for a way to avoid this kind of overlap? I'm sorry if my strictness came over again XD But fixing this won't be a bad you know XD
2. 00:17:610 (1,2,3,4) - I hope you could notice what's wrong here. There's a spacing error here so better fix it for better flow of gameplay.
3. 00:22:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Weird overlaps. They don't look good for my taste. Can you somehow try to avoid them? Try doing the thing that you did on 01:04:485 (1,2). If you'll look carefully, they don't overlap and thus, they look a lot more better XD
4. 00:25:672 (3,4,5) - These circles are better if they're unstacked. Why not follow the image instead? I know there's a lot more ideas other than that but they play good to me XD:
   
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5. 00:30:735 (1) - I'm not sure If still have to point this out, but you're overmapping. Yes, I stated that this one in Normal, but really, there's no need for a 1/4 reverse slider on this part. Why not just add a simple circle? It'll emphasize the map a bit more/
6. 00:44:422 (3) - This wave slider is poorly done in my honest opinion. Can you try to make a perfect curve? I'm not really good at making one too since I'm not a fan of wave sliders. But you could try visiting this page to learn more about making sliders: Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.

1. You're HP Drain is so painful. Please change it to 6 instead. x.x
2. Can you do AR8? The circles appear fast in a wrong way. I believe using AR 8 would solve this problem.
3. 00:06:547 (3) - Please stop this overmapping. D: Replace this slider with a circle instead. This thing is not necessary.
4. 00:42:547 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Please.. Just no. This is too much. You are demanding too much in terms of difficulty and challenge when in fact, the song doesn't calls for one. Please try to reduce the spacing for this one. This is too insane for this song.
5. 00:43:860 (1) - The little turns near the slider's head doesn't look good. Why not try doing the image I provided below?:
   
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6. 00:46:485 (5,6,7) - Too much x.x What about stacking these circles instead?
7. 00:59:422 (5) - This is the most not-so-creative sliders i've seen throughout the whole difficulty. Can you try replacing this with a more unique and creative slider? Please? XD
8. 01:09:922 (4) - I think you should replace this with a hit circle instead. Since I believe you need to emphasize the change in rhythm on 01:10:110. And by this, I am suggesting you to add a [1/2] slider on 01:10:110 to emphasize the change in rhythm.
9. 01:11:047 (1) - This slider feels random. Making a straight or a curve slider would best do this one in my opinion.

Philippines wrote:

Hi there! Here's the mod that I promised from my queue. Thanks for the M4M btw. ^^

[Storyboard]

1. 00:36:735 ~ 00:37:110 - The turning of the Background into black white looks cool but one thing I noticed is that the background kind of moved a few grids to the left on [Easy]. I don't if it's just me but I tried redownloading and the problem is still there. You might want to fix that because it'll be a total mess if people play this map.

I'll leave Kiyoshi to fix this.Although it seems that it is easy as fuck, I suck at storyboarding.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:110 (1) - You better find a way to turn this slider into a beat blanket. It'll improve your map structures as well as it's flow. If you're not so sure about what a beat blanket looks like, try checking the image together with the description below:
   
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   As you can see, the curve slider (1) is trying to surround the previous slider which is (2) perfectly.. Right now, your current beat blanket surrounds the previous slider but it is not well placed. If you will check the distance around (2), you will notice that they are not all the same compared to the image that i showed above, the spacing remains consistent throughout the slider head.
2. 00:11:610 (2) - It would be better if this slider makes a mini blanket too with the slider on 00:13:485 (2), same thing that you did with 00:13:485 (2,1). Try following the map structure I did below:
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   Meanwhile, it's your choice whether you wanna change the slider on 00:10:110 (1) since I believe you made them identical to form a symmetry. But I already tried doing that and it doesn't look good. One thing I can suggest you for this one is to avoid having two identical sliders for this part. Try to look for a way to avoid this problem, but it's fine if you keep it that way, I'm pretty sure it's not that obvious to some players.
3. 00:15:360 (2) - This slider also has blanket issues with 00:13:485 (2). Can you at least try fixing them to improve the gameplay for this difficulty? I know I'm trying to act so picky about this one, but every suggestion is worth a fix so I hope you'll fix them. ^^
4. 00:21:360 (2,1,3,4,1) - I really don't like how this flow. Just like the rest of my suggestions, you should fix these sliders and circles. I'm not sure if you're trying to make blankets out of this objects but you should turn this one into perfect blanket, you not only improve the visuals of this difficulty, but also the flow of gameplay so it's best that you fix this objects.
5. 00:38:610 (3,4) - Another one of these blankets. Please fix them to improve your difficulty's flow in gameplay and visuals. ^^
6. 00:40:110 (1,2) - These sliders I believe doesn't make any sense at the music at all. It feels like you're just trying to fill up the rhythm with some random long sliders just for the sake of having a 'flow' of objects. What I can suggest here is you to not use [1 1/2] sliders and use [1/1] sliders instead, maybe add a note perhaps if you find it more fitting (which I do) XD
7. 00:50:610 (3) - I know I don't have the right to judge maps badly, but using a simple curve sliders with 3 anchors could've been better. These sliders don't make a great flow since it's not a perfectly curve slider. Feels like this slider came from the old school. lol. But I don't hate this one, you can keep it this way if you think it's not wrong. But I would really suggest you change it to a simple curve slider instead.
8. 00:59:610 (3) - Another one of your beat blanket problems. Can you try to find a way to fix them please?
9. 01:05:610 (3) - Almost perfect blanket. Try to fix this one a little bit more.

Just a side note, if you can't seem to find a way to fix the blankets/spacing in your map, you could try turning off the grid snap. This way, you would be able to have a freedom to place the anchor points wherever you want. Good luck fixing all the errors. I'll be looking forward to getting this difficulty fixed XD

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1. 00:06:828 (2,3) - lol this circles should start on 00:06:735 not on 00:06:828 XD.
2. 00:45:735 (1,2) - Can you avoid these sliders from overlapping? They don't look good. Meanwhile, the new combo should be on 00:46:110 (2) not on 00:45:73 (1) since the downbeat is on 00:46:110 and that's the part where the rhythm changes.
3. 00:58:110 (1,3) - Avoid the overlaps of these two sliders too. :3
4. 01:09:172 (4,5) - Can you make a beat blanket out of these sliders? It'll improve the flow of your gameplay if you'll do.

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi!

[notice]I teach something called "Flow", The Flow is a concept that is added to the maps, which is to make every jump paresca normal movement of the Mouse ...
[Easy]
00:08:610 (2,3) Do not think it could be better with one single slider? I say not to rush ..
Upbeat sliders plays very awkard IMO
00:20:610 (1,2) ^
There is lyrics in that verse
Good Luck :3

Entreal wrote:

01:10:110 - I don't think you actually need this, since the other diff doesn't have that.
I think you mean the green line.I use them to emphasize the dimming part of the song.And I can use that since it is a guest diff.

1. had two osb files. you must remove one.
2. lead-in should be set to 2000ms in all diffs imo.
3. Preview Time is not same as between diffs. you must adjust Easy

1. 00:07:110 (1) - what is this note follow? the slider is not follow instrument/vocal imo.
   00:07:110 (1,2) - should exchange these.
   
   00:07:110 (1) - circle
   00:07:485 (2) - 2/1 slider
   ^like this.
3. 01:10:860 (3,4) - these hitsound is hard to hear. this volume may confuse to the beginner.
   01:10:110 - 30%
   01:10:485 - 28%
   01:10:860 - 26%
   01:11:235 - 24%
   01:11:610 - 22%
   01:12:735 - 20%
   try this.
4. 01:14:985 - why did you put green line here? I think should place in 01:15:172 -

1. sorry, I could not mod this diff. I was not able to suggest those because could not understand many pattern.

1. AR+1
   this map had many continuous circles. so AR7 is low imo.
2. 00:04:672 (2,3) - exchange these notes. these did not follow vocal and instrument, so that would be better.
3. 00:05:422 (4,5,6) - remove (5,6) and add reverce (4). or remove only (5).
   vocal did not have large volume in 00:05:985, so not fit that.
4. 00:16:672 (2,3) - same as 00:04:672 (2,3)
5. 00:21:735 (5,1) - this jump is not follow song. instrument and vocal does not have large volume and not needs uplift here imo.
   
   
   ^ my suggestion
6. 00:22:860 (3,1) - same as above.
   
   
7. 00:30:735 (1) - this rhythm / volume setting is too bad.... not follow song. in addition not fit kick slider here.
   you should remove green lines and change 1/1 slider.
8. 00:56:235 (2,1) - this placement would confuse players. I suggest to add circle in 00:56:610 - .
   sorry, I could not find to other suggestions.

1. you forgot to uncheck countdown.
2. 00:02:797 (1,2,3) - suggest to add symmetry.
   
   
   like this.

1. 00:09:360 (4) Clap on sllider's end (if I follow your rythm)
2. 00:21:360 (2) You can fit this slider with (1) like this :
   Screen and code

   
   

   420,152,20610,38,0,P|400:184|344:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   270,177,21360,2,0,P|264:224|292:272,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   368,288,22110,6,0,P|304:348|212:296,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:26:610 (2) I think you can do this slider with only 3 points (looks like the previous algorithm). Remake it imo.
4. 00:37:860 (2) You can fit this slider with (1) if you move (2) one grid right (x: 144; y:204). Move (3) if you fix this point ^^
5. 00:43:110 (1,2,3) Yeah, I don't really like that because I have the feeling this is too repetitive. (4* the same pattern) I think you can try this instead of what you're doing : http://puu.sh/2fSSm. The singer is holding the note so you can do a slider instead of 2 circles and if you want to do a symetry, you can do exactly what I have done on the screenshot.
6. 00:54:735 (6,1) I think you can do a better curve than this. Try to put (6) => x:276 ; y:260 and (1) => x:292 ; y:180
   
   Screenshot

   

1. 00:09:735 (4) Move to x:408 ; y:72
2. 00:22:110 (1) I think you can move the red point in this slider 1 grid right to be on the middle of the grid.
3. 00:23:610 (3) CTRL + J (1) for the general symetry.
4. 00:45:360 (5,1) I think this is better to replace these two circles by one slider. If you don't want to do this, please, do this : 00:45:735 (1,2) rever
5. 00:51:360 (4) clap on slider's end?
6. 00:55:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) There is too much clap here : for me, remove clap on (2) (3) and (7)'s start
7. 01:04:110 (5) CTRL + J (3) and reverse selection for the symetry.
8. 01:05:985 (1,2) Reverse clap (following your previous rythm)
9. 01:06:735 (3) clap here (^)
10. 01:07:485 (6) ^
11. 01:07:860 (7) remove clap at the beginning and put it at the end of this slider
12. 01:08:985 (1) clap (slider's end)
13. 01:09:360 (2) remove clap
14. 01:09:735 (3) clap

1. 00:18:360 (4) Move to x:216; y:24 (you can move (5) a little bit to the right)
2. 00:34:672 (4) I think you can rework a little this slider to fit more with (2,3)
3. 00:36:922 (3,1) reverse NC
4. 01:14:797 (4) Reverse is not needed for me on this slider. Remove the reverse but finish the slider at 01:14:985 -

1. 00:10:016 (2) Move to x:224 ; y:252 => do a better curve here.
2. 01:00:547 (1,2,3) You don't put a lot of jump in this diff so this jump is wayyy to big here. Please reduce distance spacing between these circles. It could be unreadable if this the distance spacing is too big.
3. 01:14:891 (2,3,4) You can do a better curve (follow (1)'s direction)

1. 00:17:610 (3,4,1,2) - 4 and 2 are at the same heigh but not the end of 3 and 1. Moreover the blanket of 1 isn't really good but if you move 4,1 and 2 a little higher you'll fix both issues.
2. 01:02:610 (3) - It's nearly aligned with the previous and the following note. Maybe move it up a little (or if you don't want the alignement because i think it doesn't look good like this)
3. Very good diff. I hardly find anything.

1. 00:04:860 (2) - I think it suits fits better the music if you remove it.
2. 00:05:047 (3) - Move it one grid right in order to be aligned with 4 and 5 (and match with 6) or move it one grid left in order to smooth the shape of your 3 notes.
3. 00:05:422 (5) - It's a long combo for a normal. Maybe NC?
4. 00:23:610 (3) - Not really symmetrical. Fix this.
5. 00:29:985 (6) - I'm not sure the clap is really useful here. (And again it's a long combo. Maybe NC?)
6. 00:38:422 (3) - Again, it's not perfectly symmetrical (The end point should be a little lower and the red point on the axis)
7. 00:45:735 (1) - Move it one grid up in order to be at the same high than the previous note (and the slider).
8. 00:46:482 (3) - Move it one grid down in order to be at the same high than the previous note.
9. 00:46:860 (4) - Move it to x=128 and y=220 (because of 1 and 5)
10. 00:52:110 (1,2) - I know i repeat myself but they aren't at the same high. I know it's not a big deal but when it's just a difference of one grid it's.... I don't know how to describe it but it's bothering.

1. 00:20:235 (3,4) - Move them one grid right in order to be aligned with the slider.
2. 00:30:735 (1) - Why this slider? It doesn't match with the song and bring no hotsound?
3. 00:44:422 (3) - The blanket isn't very good. Move it a little higher.
4. Correct diff. A little straight to my taste. I think it would work better with more curve but it's just my opinion.

1. 00:04:110 (1,2) - I find this jump a little too hard. Moreover the placement of the note 1 seems random.
2. 00:10:016 (2) - Move it to x=228 y=248.
3. 00:10:672 (4) - Move it to x=356 y=212. In this place it's tails is on the same place than 00:09:922 (1).
4. 00:23:235 (3,1) - Nearly at the same high (i think i might start upsetting you with that).
5. 00:32:235 (4,5) - Ctrl+g is maybe more pleasant to play than the square.
6. 00:46:860 (3) - The blanket is bad and the slider isn't symmetrical. Try this:
   
   
7. 01:04:485 (1,3,6) - I'll let you guess this one.

angelfix wrote:

:( i have to delay my mod one day, please do not be angry

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Mod for popner's queue
Here is some suggestions:

[Easy]

1. 00:17:610 (3,4,1,2) - 4 and 2 are at the same heigh but not the end of 3 and 1. Moreover the blanket of 1 isn't really good but if you move 4,1 and 2 a little higher you'll fix both issues. ok
2. 01:02:610 (3) - It's nearly aligned with the previous and the following note. Maybe move it up a little (or if you don't want the alignement because i think it doesn't look good like this) linear seems not so pretty here,so no
3. Very good diff. I hardly find anything.

Well i really like the Easy and Insane Diff. Good luck getting it ranked .

thanks :3

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue
General
there are 2 osb files in ths song folder, delete one. Wierd. I already deleted the one once and it still appears -.-
add "opening" in the tags Lol it's ending and it is not needed in tags. Never seen it to a map so far.
Uncheck "Letterbox" since there are no Break Time. Fixed


Normal
Placement
00:15:360(3) use ×0.8 spacing.in this diff, you should set same spacing for newbie. Normal difficulties are from a bit higher level than "newbie" however, it wont be hard to predict it. Although, I refuse to change this as it kills the beat blanket.
00:32:047(2)^ ^
Rhythm
00:04:860(2,3,4,5) this 4 combos seem difficult for newbie, try to make easier? e.g) Fixed

SPOILER

00:55:860(2,3,4,5)^ I wont change it here, it's a Kiai time so it's more enjoyable to be a bit harder there.
00:06:547(4) start at 00:06:360 betterNot really. Listen to the song carefully.
00:47:422(6) it's too long and weird... please follow the vocal? Just because it's a normal difficulty I do not wish to use more sliders or circles to cover a lot similar parts of the map. I did it to specific places where it fits. It wont change there.

SPOILER

00:54:922(6) a bit difficult for Normal... consider to replace a note or something. No need, the stream is kinda fast so even a small click will get it done, it's not hard for the player to react afterwards.
00:58:110(1) end at 01:00:360? current seems difficult because the note at 01:01:110 is too far from center line. I wont change this yet, but I'll note it. I'm fifty fifty so I would like to hear it from some more mods.
01:10:672(2) delete 1 reverse better, it's difficult to expect. Fixed
Hit Sonud
some Normal-whistle hears loudly and overadded I suppose.
00:34:110(1) same as Easy I don't understand you here..

Hard
AR7 better because Insane has AR8 AR is not meant to be different to all difficulties. AR8 is good enough to read the hard and insane.
Placement
00:05:235(3) move like this? it's more clear Fixed

SPOILER

00:15:735(2) too far for Hard, please replace. That was actually a accidental move. Thanks for noticing. Fixed.
00:34:297(2,3,4) just suggestion, but it's more beautiful than current imo Fixed

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:06:922(4) to follow the music more consistence,I suppose this would be better

SPOILER

00:07:485(2) you shouldn't set like this long slider. it's Hard diff, so put notes & slider positively. There's no rule saying I shouldn't use such slider. This slider follows the vocal behind and it will simply look terrible to replace it as it will simply add more sound there.
00:26:047(5) move at 00:26:235? No. It's off sync.
00:51:735 umm, blank is weird. add a note here? That blank covers a part of the song. I want it this way for lots of reasons
01:02:422 add a note better to follow the music. There's a break in the lyrics there. It does actually follow the music. Listen more carefully.

Insane
Placement
01:02:235(2) Ctrl+G? Changed the previous one instead. Your way did not feel comfortable for my hand.
Rhythm
00:07:485(1) too long slider for Insane, like this? No, I said why above~

SPOILER

00:29:422(1,2,3,4) to follow the vocal, maybe like this? No thanks, it feels better this way

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:10:110(3) add finish at head Fixed

need more work I suppose, good luck.

Thanks for your suggestions and mods.

Updated~

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue

Easy
Placement
00:32:610(3,4) make blanket better? good enough

SPOILER

01:05:235(2,3) to make beautiful, like this?blanket is better

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:47:235 add a note better to follow the vocal. good enough
Hit Sonud
00:28:110(1,2) delete whistle at end? there isn't whistle at 00:25:110(1,2) fixed
00:34:110(1) finish is loud, maybe whistle better start of kiai time, does not affect the gameplay at all



need more work I suppose, good luck.

~random from #modreqs~

1. 00:13:485 (2) - add clap head
2. 00:19:485 (2) - ^
3. 00:23:610 (3) - add finish head
4. 00:25:110 (1) - ^
5. 00:25:110 (1,2) - add whistle tail like 00:28:110 (1,2) -
6. 00:50:610 (3) - remove finish head
7. 00:52:110 (1) - add finish head
8. 00:58:110 (1) - ^

1. 00:04:110 (1) - add clap tail
2. 00:04:860 (2) - ^
3. 00:06:547 (4) - add clap head
4. 00:07:485 (1) - ^
5. 00:10:672 (2) - ^
6. 00:11:985 (5) - add clap
7. 00:14:985 (2) - add clap head
8. 00:16:485 (4) - add clap
9. 00:17:985 (2) - add clap head
10. 00:19:485 (1) - add clap
11. 00:20:422 (3) - add finish
12. 00:27:735 (4) - add clap head
13. 00:41:422 (5) - change clap to finish at head & remove clap tail
14. 00:44:422 (4) - add finish head
15. 00:47:422 (6) - ^
16. 00:53:422 (4) - ^ & add clap tail
17. 00:54:360 (5) - add clap tail
18. 00:56:422 (5) - change clap to finish at head
19. 01:01:110 (1) - remove clap tail
20. 01:02:235 (2) - add clap
21. 01:02:610 (3) - remove clap tail
22. 01:03:735 (4) - add clap
23. 01:04:110 (5) - add finish head & remove clap at reverse
24. 01:05:985 (1) - add clap
25. 01:06:360 (2) - remove clap
26. 01:06:735 (3) - add clap
27. 01:07:485 (6) - ^
28. 01:07:860 (7) - swap clap head to tail
29. 01:08:610 (1) - add clap tail
30. 01:09:360 (2) - remove clap
31. 01:09:735 (3) - add clap head
32. 01:10:485 (1) - add clap
33. 01:11:422 (3) - add finish
34. 01:12:547 (6,7) - ^
35. 01:13:110 (1) - swap clap head to tail

1. 00:05:235 (3) - add clap
2. 00:07:485 (1) - add clap tail
3. 00:08:328 (2) - add clap
4. 00:11:235 (3) - ^
5. 00:15:360 (4) - remove clap
6. 00:17:235 (3) - add clap
7. 00:18:360 (4) - add clap tail
8. 00:20:235 (3) - add clap
9. 00:20:422 (4) - add finish
10. 00:21:735 (5) - add clap
11. 00:22:860 (3) - add clap tail
12. 00:30:172 (8) - remove clap tail
13. 00:33:735 (1) - add clap head
14. 00:38:422 (3) - add finish head
15. 00:41:422 (3) - ^
16. 00:42:735 (5) - add clap tail
17. 00:43:016 (6) - add clap
18. 00:43:860 (2) - add clap tail
19. 00:44:422 (3) - add finish head
20. 00:47:422 (6) - ^
21. 00:48:547 (7,8) - add finish
22. 00:50:422 (4) - add finish head
23. 00:53:422 (2) - ^
24. 00:53:422 (2) - add clap tail
25. 00:54:922 (4) - add clap
26. 00:56:235 (3) - change clap to finish at tail
27. 00:57:172 (6) - remove clap at reverse & tail
28. 00:59:422 (4) - add finish head
29. 01:00:922 (7) - remove clap
30. 01:02:610 (4) - add clap tail
31. 01:04:485 (1) - add clap head
32. 01:05:422 (3) - add finish head
33. 01:07:110 (1) - swap clap head to tail
34. 01:08:422 (4) - add finish
35. 01:10:485 (2) - add clap
36. 01:11:047 (5) - add finish tail
37. 01:12:735 (9) - add finish
38. 01:13:110 (1) - add clap at reverse

Nemis wrote:

[notice]From the TAM's Queue

[Insane]
00:01:672 (3,1) - There is a spacing issue - Fixed
00:02:797 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make this pattern perfectly symmetric and move it in the center - Fixed
00:04:297 (2,3) - Fix the blanket - Fixed
00:16:485 (5,6,7) - I suggest to flip this pattern vertically to have a zigzag movement /\/\ - I don't get what you mean .-. Picture please? D:
00:22:110 (1,2) - Make a blanket here - I'm not sure if I got your point here but I did a change .-.
00:23:610 (5,6) - I suggest to make it here too - ^
00:23:610 (5) - New combo - Fixed
00:31:672 (2) - Why don't you flip this horizontally? it flows better like this 00:33:360 (9,10) - - Fixed
00:37:485 (2) - Same as above - Fixed
00:45:360 (6) - Same again - Fixed
00:50:422 (4,5) - I suggest to make a blanket here - Distance wont allow me - If you have a more clear suggestion of how to do it, feel free~
00:55:860 (2) - I suggest to move this slider 1 square to right to make the start centrate - I think you mean left(Fixed)
00:57:360 (6) - Same - Fixed
01:03:172 (2) - CTRL + G? It flows a lot - Umm okay I think the jump afterwards is kinda big but we'll see.
01:04:110 (1) - I suggest to flip this slider horizontally - Fixed
01:04:485 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make a perfect triangle - Fixed
01:08:610 (5) - I suggest to flip this slider horizontally again - Fixed
01:15:172 (4) - I suggest to start a slider here that finishes on 01:15:735 (5) - - Not sure, I like how it ends here - I'll keep it in mind though.

[Hard]
00:13:110 (1,2) - I suggest to move this pattern in the center fixing the stream - Did my best .-.
00:18:922 (6,1) - Make a blanket here - Fixed
00:28:110 (1) - Blanket here with 00:27:360 (2) - 's start - Fixed
00:29:610 (4,5) - I would try to make a blanked here - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692868 I did this to create a rectangle with their center, I couldn't make a Blanket .-.
00:39:172 (5,1) - The blanket is good but not the spacing... fix it - Fixed
00:52:860 (3,4) - You should unstack them - Fixed
01:01:110 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing - Fixed
01:15:172 (4) - I suggest to start a slider here that finishes on 01:15:735 (5) - - Same as in Insane~

[Normal]

00:55:860 (2,3,4,5) - You should try something else for this - 00:56:047 (3) - Deleted, I hope it's better now
01:03:735 (4) - Move this note 1 square down to stack it with 01:05:985 (2) - - Fixed
01:15:172 (4) - I suggest to start a slider here that finishes on 01:15:735 (5) - - Same as others above!

Nemis wrote:

From the TAM's Queue
[Easy]
Nothing to say except that 00:10:110 (1,2) - 'cause I think you should fix their forms... but since you did a blanked with 00:13:485 (2) - it's fine
it's fine

Nemis wrote:

[Insane]
00:16:485 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/2v1mo
00:22:110 (1,2) - It's good
00:55:860 (2) - Yes, left*

[Hard]
00:29:610 (4,5) - your screen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692868 is a good idea

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue!

Easy

00:14:620 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:620 (1) - ^

fixed all

2015-08-23 23:15 [Luxord]: No hope
2015-08-23 23:18 whymeman: screw this.......
2015-08-23 23:18 *whymeman uses 1/16
2015-08-23 23:18 [Luxord]: LOL
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: 1540
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: seems ok
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: try it
2015-08-23 23:20 whymeman: pretty close
2015-08-23 23:20 whymeman: 1541
2015-08-23 23:20 whymeman: have to test it though
2015-08-23 23:20 [Luxord]: damn,. :shock: 
2015-08-23 23:21 [Luxord]: you can actually tell the difference of one ms
2015-08-23 23:21 [Luxord]: ok.
2015-08-23 23:23 whymeman: i'm PICKY with timing
2015-08-23 23:23 whymeman: >:V
2015-08-23 23:24 whymeman: Okay, need to do about 7 or 8 +ms
2015-08-23 23:25 [Luxord]: 1549?
2015-08-23 23:25 [Luxord]: 48?
2015-08-23 23:25 whymeman: i'd try 48
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2015-08-24 00:02 whymeman: Also
2015-08-24 00:03 whymeman: you just updated the map?
2015-08-24 00:03 [Luxord]: yes
2015-08-24 00:03 [Luxord]: why
2015-08-24 00:03 [Luxord]: o.o
2015-08-24 00:03 whymeman: Just making sure
2015-08-24 00:03 whymeman: also, I you got the timing in Normal wrong
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: really?
2015-08-24 00:04 whymeman: xx38 =/= xx48 ([b]Note: Other difficulties had 1548ms[/b])
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: yes
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: noticed
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: updating
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: ;D
2015-08-24 00:04 [Luxord]: done
2015-08-24 00:04 whymeman: good