Recheck.
I was going to ignore such flaws the previous time because of the 1st map, but I change my mind now.. This may be bad for your future mapping. The flwas are about spacing, they makes the composition of your map not clear. If you lower the AR you will find them easily.
[Destiny]
00:02:389 (7,8,9) - spacing
00:19:205 (1,2,3,4,5) - the part is still not good enough. The spacing between 00:19:205 (1,2,3) seems random, so does the spacing between the parallel sliders (00:19:205 (1,4,5)).
00:22:453 (2,3,4) - similar case. This will be better:
00:47:676 (2) - similar case.
00:48:440 (4) - similar case.
00:50:924 (4,3) - try to avoid this overlap.
00:51:880 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - to flow better, you can try this: (notice the position of (1,2,3), and the movement direction)
00:54:173 (6,1,2) - similar case of spacing. (Like stack end of 00:54:555 (1) on 00:53:791 (4))
01:02:198 (1,2) - exchanging them will provide a better rhythm:
01:03:058 (4) - remove this circle? There it has no support in music. Also adjusting the spacing is needed if you apply this.
01:02:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again about spacing, notice the red line I drew:
01:04:491 (1,2,3,4) - ^ similar case, try to adjust the spacing between the slider ends.
01:06:784 (7,1) - similar case
These are not all flaws, and I think you can find all of them now. It is your first map so I think you will put full effort on improving it. When you think your are ok, call me back again.
And 1366x768 BG: