1. Boss' Easy (2.63 stars, 191 notes)
2. Rue's Normal (3.45 stars, 204 notes)
3. Stressboxer (5 stars, 600 notes)
4. TuHard (5 stars, 396 notes)

1. Video contains audio - please reencode without.
2. Delete .osb
3. I think original title is without "(DnB remix)" at the end, afaik PESS is one who did a remix, so IMO it's unnecessary to add it into title.
4. Why is source set as Black Rock Shooter? Does it appear in original anime? Or is it just fanmade AMV? If so maybe consider just putting Black Rock Shooter into tags?

Marcin wrote:

Just a random pass-by

1. Video contains audio - please reencode without. please check it again.(maybe you need rename mp3 or video)
2. Delete .osb it's doesn't make any sense, really.
3. I think original title is without "(DnB remix)" at the end, afaik PESS is one who did a remix, so IMO it's unnecessary to add it into title. no, Dnb remix is style not for someone remix it.
4. Why is source set as Black Rock Shooter? Does it appear in original anime? Or is it just fanmade AMV? If so maybe consider just putting Black Rock Shooter into tags? I forget to fix it. I will fix it next time

Fark, just spotted that it's 7 month old, nvm.

Marcin wrote:

http://db.tt/8Wag3LAM about osb. I said, remove osb it's doesn't make any sense.
About video - sorry, my mistake, I should adjust player
And title: If it's a style, then it should be obviously in tags? Or perhaps you have a source confirming that song have originally (DnB remix) in it's title. I will check it later

Foreverends wrote:

pm reqs~~~~~~

General
在tags加個boss? 改了

Stressboxer
00:12:114 (3,4) - 感覺00:12:114 (3) - 可以扭圓一點

微量分別

ok轉個角度

00:16:114 (6) - NC -v- 我覺得現在這樣OK的
00:21:948 (2,3) - 兩個slider頭分開一點點好像更好,差不多就像00:32:614 (2,3) - (一開始打有點混淆到;w; 這是故意的 我做出分開來的 前段stack再下一段分開
其後就有很多像00:21:948 (2,3) - 的stack,分不分開由你決定喇~~~ ~
00:23:781 (7,1) - 個人認為是可以試一下放3連打

maybe?

我覺得三連反而混雜了些所以不打算改
01:08:781 (5) - ctrl g? ctrl+g的跳就不對了 方向會相反01:08:781 (5) - 可以聽到人聲的發力點 因此這地方jump應該要比先前都大 反過來反而沒力了
01:21:781 (9) - ^ 調動些位置方向不變

我實在是捉不下去了(吐血
sorry全是沒用mod;w;(淚奔
god map求速rank ;w;

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Boss' Easy]
01:02:781 (4) - NC
02:30:444 (1,2,3) - 往右移兩格？

[Stressboxer]
01:51:864 (9) - 移到 01:51:948 (9) - ?_? 放25%聽聽看阿 我這是沒錯的
02:32:445 (8) - 往下移一格 好

我看了一小時什麼都沒看出來
有什麼問題你來lol打我阿

1. 00:00:115 - 00:21:448 这一段的sliderslide的音效在这个diff里特别明显，个人觉的调小一点或者直接静音比较好.
2. 01:02:114(3)这个clap前后没有照应感觉有点突兀，考虑换成whistle？
3. 01:08:448(3,4) 3(137,43) 4(52,75)
4. 02:33:777(3,4) 3(375,43) 4(460,75)

1. 00:26:114(4)i think this slider start at 00:25:948 may better to me
2. 01:47:448(1)try this rhythm?
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:03:614(3)感觉可以删掉这个note
2. 00:12:948(5)可以试试移动到00:13:114
3. 01:15:614(3)这个note的音效还是用sc1吧0.0
4. 02:40:970(3)^

1. 00:14:281(2)因为感觉音乐还没变所以感觉这里可以空出来
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:53:303(4)挪到(164,56)叠一下 .-.

Melt wrote:

Hi

[Boss' Easy]

1. 00:00:115 - 00:21:448 这一段的sliderslide的音效在这个diff里特别明显，个人觉的调小一点或者直接静音比较好.
2. 01:02:114(3)这个clap前后没有照应感觉有点突兀，考虑换成whistle？
3. 01:08:448(3,4) 3(137,43) 4(52,75)
4. 02:33:777(3,4) 3(375,43) 4(460,75)

[Rue's Normal]

1. 00:26:114(4)i think this slider start at 00:25:948 may better to me
2. 01:47:448(1)try this rhythm?
   SPOILER

   

[TuHard]

1. 00:03:614(3)感觉可以删掉这个note
2. 00:12:948(5)可以试试移动到00:13:114
3. 01:15:614(3)这个note的音效还是用sc1吧0.0
4. 02:40:970(3)^

全改

[Stressboxer]

1. 00:14:281(2)因为感觉音乐还没变所以感觉这里可以空出来
   SPOILER

   
   
   該怎麼說 其實這地方是可以做多點變化的 至少對我來說是這樣 所以我選擇填滿
2. 02:53:303(4)挪到(164,56)叠一下 .-.
   改

有种智商被碾压的感觉orz 這是好還是不好orz...

1. According to the AiBat you have some problems with your skin elements! Pleease, check it out!
2. No one would look for Black_Rock_Shooter remove this tag, please. Instead of this, you can add Ordet (name of the studio) and ブラック★ロックシューター or ブラックロックシューター (japanese title) + mix (it's the mix of original song, after all). Oh, and adding Drum and bass to tags would be a good idea, too!

1. The song itself is pretty fast and kinda agressive. I'm 99% sure that AR3 willwork here better! Try it!
2. 00:11:448 (3,4) - please don't! Such things are too confusing for new players.Tail of theslider is too close to the previous object, therefore players may mistakenly click slider's tail. This is the easiest diff, be gentle with beginners!
   Note: 00:27:114 (2,4) - 01:17:781 (2,4) - 02:43:137 (2,4) - same happens here!
3. 00:28:114 (4,1) - nazi - you could make a neat blanket here. Apply my previous suggestion and see what can you do here!
4. 00:58:448 (4,2) - nazi - I'm being a little bit too picky, but yea, that stacked pattern will confuse beginners too!
   Note: whoops, the same happens to 01:39:114 (2,4) and 01:49:448 (1,3) -
5. 01:02:781 (1) - that beat is begging for a circle! Drums, vocals and even your rhythm! Everything says that you should place here a circle, do it, please!
   Note: disagree? Well, consider removing the circle on 01:12:781 (2) - then.
6. 01:45:448 (2) - noooo! Do not use such sliders, second reverse-arrow appears too late and players don't even expect it here. Such sliders are uncommon and confusing forbeginners. Can't you avoid it here?
7. 02:03:448 (2,3) - nazi - bakaboss :< that's the only stack in this diff. There's no any other objects stacked this way, it's just feels kinda inconsistent. :<
8. 02:22:444 (2) - how about removing this circle? It feels off vocals, and it's better if you will follow vocals only in this part! Well, just remove it because it sounds totally OFF your rhythm @.@
9. 02:34:804 (1,2,1) - someone is laaazy, I smell copypasta here. It's ok, but I don't like copypasted patterns.
   Imsagine this, you're a beginner. Trying out a new game. And all you see is copypasted patterns! Would you like to play this game? I wouldn't. That's why copypated patterns in the easiest diffs are pure evil!
   
   Try to re-work on thngs marked in bold! Also, try to avoid copypasta in your future maps! However, rhythm is awesome here!

1. Soft sampleset during the whole song? Well, I don't mind it. But seriously, Finish sounds are too noisy. Why didn't you copy green lines from other diff? It'd be much better, I think.
2. I'd consider increasing all diff settings except CS by one tick. Song itself is pretty fast, faster AR will PERFECTLY fit here. It's up to you, but I'd be happy to see AR5 here!
3. 00:25:448 (3) - the most helpful suggestion ever - move tail of the slider 1 grid right to make it perfectly parallel to 00:24:114 (1)
4. 01:16:448 (3,4) - nazi - didn't like the stack here. It kinda breaks your awesome flow, imo
   
   Amazing. Llove your flow here.

1. 00:03:114 (2) - should be extended by 1/2 to finish it on 00:03:448 - it'll fit with music and vocals way better.
2. 00:06:781 (1,2) - nazi - 01:54:448 (4,1) - if you care, make a better blanket here. It's just a little suggestion, anyway.
3. 00:16:448 - consider adding a circle here, that'd make more sense with vocals/music and it'll make your rhythm more consistent!
4. 00:26:198 - since there's absolutely NO beat here I can call this object overmapped. Try to make slider 1/4 shorter or silince it's tail if you want to keep this 3/4 part so much.
5. 01:39:281 (4) - well, same as above happens here. Actually slider ends on the previous white tick. :< random 3/4 overmapped beats don't make the map more interesting.
6. 02:05:948 - almost the same as above, you ignore LOUD beat and follow minor one to make map "more interesting". But ignored beat on 02:05:948 - sounds really, really weird. STR 2 would solve the problem, or you can simply make this slider 1/4 shorter.
   
   A couple of random beats and simple flow. Not bad.

1. Man, the only thing that really bugs me here, is OD8. Try to reduce it, OD7 will flow much better!
2. 00:23:281 (5,6) - rage generator. Such things were really hard for me, it took a lot of time to get used to them. However, I really like them now. ♥
   
   Awesome flow, great rhythm, amazing hitsounding. I love this diff!