Sonnyc wrote:

안녕하세요~

Rika:

00:23:495 (4) - 슬라이더 끝점에 완벽한 대칭을!! 이미 대칭됐음 ㅎ
00:35:495 (2) - NC 추천해요. 이전 슬라이더를 더 잘 살릴수 있을 겁니다. 간격도 약간 좁은 감이 있고.. 2를 반대방향돌리고 NC는 필요없을거 같아요.
00:35:995 (3) - ctrl+G가 보기도 좋고 플레이 흐름에도 적절하다고 봅니다 위에때문에 .
00:39:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이 난이도에 있는 몇 안되는 점프인데 좀 갑작스러운 감이 있는거 같습니다. 롱놋이 몇개 있지만, 전반적으로 점프는 여기 뿐이니까요 올 디스텐스 따라가면 너무 재미없는데 ㅠ
01:16:495 (2) - (1) 끝과 살짝 닿을락 말락 한데 더 떨어뜨리는게 나을거 같아요 조금 이동.
01:23:995 (1,5) - 이 슬라이더들, 미세하게 오프스크린이에요. 1 그리드 씩 안에 집어 넣어도 (2) 둘러 쌓는 데에는 무리가 없을거라고 생각합니다. 그리드 오프해도 ㄱㅊ음.
01:32:495 (5) - NC 추천합니다. 음악상 적절하고, (4) 이후 살짝 꺾이는 패턴에 잘 맞을 거에요 그다지 필요없을꺼 같음.

Relaxing song and map~

Strawberry wrote:

as you see i'm here~
okay just randomly taking a look. xD take it easy with that song.

[ General]
　

1. um~ i think the hitsounds volume could be rised a bit during the kiai times~

　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:16:495 (4) - umm~~ the point you set which on the red tick sounds not such good from my heard.. also you used a whistle to stress that beat.. wired.. anyway i feel the slider end at white tick 00:16:995 is totally enough~ and the whistle on that slider's tail is also consistent with other place of the same pattern~~! so why not?~ 我在這地方節奏設計本來就打算這麼做 實際上聽起來也沒這麼糟 而你說的符合前面的節奏 我認同你的看法 但若是整首歌都是2,4 clap/whistle不感覺枯燥乏味嗎 因此我還是決定保留這點
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   2. 00:29:495 (3) - i feel it would be looks better if you changed the curve upward~ yea because of the group circle made up by slider (1,3)'s heads and circle (2) seems like a curve which is upward also~ it would be more uniform and also more comfortable~ at least during my test. :p like this~ 抱歉 我還是想保留原本的pattern 我喜歡滑順些的 而不是頓點
      
      SPOILER

      
      
      

Ryafuka wrote:

M4M.

[Normal]
00:06:995 (1) - Delete clap instead add whistle and finish of S:C1 on slider begin.
00:09:995 (3) - Add whistle of S:C1 on slider begin.
00:12:995 (1) - Add whistle on slider begin.
00:35:495 (6) - Add new combo here? -> add here: 00:33:995 -
00:48:995 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think this overlap pattern are not easier for newbies. Can you change to like this http://puu.sh/23WVR or something?
I'm so sorry,b-but...;w; what's the different for overlaps or not? the slider start is really clear and readable for newbies.

00:54:995 (1,2) - same. this overlap pattern is not easier for newbies. I can just suggest onother pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616646. Delete reverse of 00:54:995 (1) - , add note 00:55:995 - here, and Rotate 90 anticlockwise for 00:56:495 (3) - .sorry again. but, still keep my pattern ;w;
01:00:495 (8,1,1,2) - uhm..sorry same as above. Can you this patterns change to something? ^
01:28:495 (2,1) - ^ ^

Zero__wind wrote:

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00:12:995 (1,2,3) - 感觉nazi 把它们3个一起 转-20° 转回水平 然后让3的纵坐标等于1和2纵坐标的平均数 再旋转摆回去吧 我懂你的意思 但是實際上並不會造成play太大的影響 因此我還是保持原本的位置
00:22:120 (1) - 蓝线起spinner unrankable吧 no,這是rankable的w
00:46:120 (1) - ^ ^
00:35:495 (6) - NC吧 N diff都出现8号了 在前面的mod也改過了 只是還沒updata而已w 謝謝提醒摟
00:45:495 (4) - 挪到(240,184)比较好看吧 抱歉 但是我覺得現在這樣就可以了
虽然不是建议 但是还是想表达一下 第二段Kiai的滑条作为N diff还是感觉会让新人吃电视

Royston wrote:

[Normal]
AR -1 maybe? It's a really peaceful song, so a slower AR could work. Up to you on this one AR 5 is fitter than 4 imo, sorry but I don't want to change it ;w;
01:12:995 (1,2) - I would delete (2) and extend (1) for an extra beat, since there isn't really a strong beat in the music at 01:13:495, so I think a longer slider would work better. but 01:13:995 (2) - is strong beat right? slider end don't need to "click". let's why I still used slider+note pattern here.
01:20:495 (2) - I like how this flows, but the previous combo burst from 01:18:995 (2) obscures the start of this slider, which could counfuse newer players. Since this is your easiest difficulty, I'd consider reworking it. Umm... I will consider if other modder mentioned it, but keep it now
01:33:745 - Add note here? Goes with the crescendo in the music. stars 3.24 now, I can't add more object into my diff Orz...

Xinely wrote:

try m4m

[Normal]
00:06:995 (1,2) - make like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616661? if yes don't forget about spacing in next note lol'd. thank your suggestion, but I still like my pattern more :>
00:22:120 (1) - make end in 00:24:245 - ? it's hard after spin suddenly appear note and far from center. It have 1/1 rhythm to buff, I think it's ok
00:35:495 (6) - NC? I was change it before, thanks your notice :3
00:44:495 (3,4) - make like this 00:44:495 (3,4) - ? uhh? what's your mean?
00:48:995 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - make this a pattern for this? here is the code

200,272,48995,6,0,P|134:310,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,252,49495,2,0,P|160:208|223:190,1,120
308,276,50495,6,0,P|374:313,1,60
384,248,50995,2,0,P|328:208|268:196,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,192,51995,6,0,P|159:116,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,140,52495,2,0,P|236:84|220:20,2,120
340,120,53995,1,0,0:0:0
460,100,54495,2,0,P|472:128|476:160,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:56:495 (2) - spacing? x1.00 -> x1.01 is ok lol
00:59:495 (5) - NC? ok
01:11:495 (5) - spacing it's not a big problem to read. btw, if I fixed this spacing, the pattern will be overlaps, ugly and hard to read.
01:14:495 (3) - ^ ^
01:25:745 (2,1) - ^ ^
01:29:495 (2,3) - i'm not sure but this spacing (2) is 1,05x and 01:30:745 (3) - this 1,07. fix it?

CXu wrote:

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1. 00:54:995 (1,2) - This overlap is pretty confusing. I'm fine with the overlaps later, like 01:00:495 (7,1), but this one is confusing because it's not 00:54:995 (1)'s endpoint that is overlapping. You should change the pattern a bit imo. ok, I understand your mean but the reverse point will not appear the hit300/100.png ...etc. so I keep the pattern atm, but I will consider it, thanks your notice :3
2. 01:13:995 (2,3) - The jump feels a bit random. Might want to just follow distance snap here, even though that would kill the current symmetrypattern.
   actually, we do not have any rules to formulate "the Easy diff or Normal diff can't used unequal spacing" just make fit pattern for it.
   

HelloSCV wrote:

From PM request

[Hard]

1. 개인적으로 00:24:995 (2) - 여기나 00:48:995 (1) - 여기의 피니시 소리가 너무 작은거 같아요, 40% 정도로 올려주시면 어떨까요? 괜찮은거 같음.
   
   - 00:15:495 (4) - 뒤쪽에 클랩 ok
   - 00:33:245 (7) - 클랩? 듣기 조금 이상하네요.
   - 01:03:995 (8) - 뉴콤보 + 01:04:995 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤삭제 저거 일부러 사쿠라 꽃색으로 뉴콤.
   - 01:06:495 (3) - 앞에 클랩? ok
   - 01:16:495 (2) - http://puu.sh/23hkj 이런 모양이 좀더 좋아보여요 ok
   - 01:19:995 (3) - 앞클랩 ok
   - 01:22:495 (8) - 리핏 클랩 ok
   - 01:32:995 (7) - ^ ^

Nice clam song I'm going to sta.... oh i'm already haha

jieusieu wrote:

[rika]
00:15:495 (4) - 슬라이더 가운데 뼈대가 틱과 하나가 되게 해주세요 ok
00:57:495 (8) - 1 그리드 업? 필요없는거 같음.
01:31:495 (2) - 그냥 대칭으로 하기엔 좀 아쉬운데... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616227 대충 이런? 반대보다 지금꺼 흐름이 좋음.


잡을게 없어서 같잖은걸 잡게 되네요 ㅜ,ㅜ

nice mapset )

Strawberry wrote:

as you see i'm here~
okay just randomly taking a look. xD take it easy with that song.

[ General]
　

1. um~ i think the hitsounds volume could be rised a bit during the kiai times~ i don't think so

　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. umm.. rising the OD to 6 or 7 would make a better effect since this diff is the top-level on that mapset.~ yea, the present setting with od 5 is also a bit closed with the normal diff you used od 4.. so i think it would be a problem we need to fix. :3 ok od+1.
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   2. 00:16:995 (5) - oh this slider is putting so low and.. you can see through the screenshot.. wired right? on the other hand, it think this pattern is much more suitable and will not break all you thought~
      SPOILER

      
      
      nice idea fixed.
   3. 00:36:495 (4) - i have no idea about that but personally i'd prefer to ctrl+g it for consistency (with slider (2) you know :p it's fine IMO
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   4. 00:47:495 (4) - let's see here~ firstly for the flow of slider (2,4) and circle (3), i'd like to ctrl+g this slider (4)~ but on the other side we will find that there has a sooo large spacing between slider (4) and circle (5). we won't make such amazing jump on that relaxing song and dreamlike map~ however we can also heard that there has a rise of the tone, that's why i think we can make a jump but not such big~ try moving the circle (5) onto x.344 y.152? yea, the same coordinate with the head of slider (2). :p not bad right? hmm,sorry i have keep this ;_; because it's playing fine to me.

you know when i modding&testing this map, it was like a dream, sweet and lead me to endless aftertastes.
i enjoy your map&song, now enjoy my stars. rika-chan ^^/

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi 日卡 m4m

General
BG如果有合适的1024*768就换 没有。。

Rika
00:06:745 (2) - 可以考虑移到00:07:495 (4) - 的头的位置 不好。
00:14:495 (3,4) - 4的波浪可以做成能包住3的形状 或者说放在能包住3的位置 用不着应该。
00:28:495 (2,3,4) - 让2的尾巴 3的尾巴 和4的头在一条线上 ^
00:30:995 (1) - 它没有任何必要长成这样儿 离前面的5远一点儿吧 ^
00:41:495 (7) - 可以做成波浪 就可以和前面的note构成正六边形了吧 如果距离还是不太够可以把前面的note统一往上移啊 ^
00:58:745 (3) - 建议离前面的1再远一点点 ^
01:03:995 (8) - 往上移一点 中间的锚点的坐标已经大于384了 ^
01:16:495 (2) - 轻微出界 ^
01:23:995 (1,5) - 严重出界 ^
01:30:495 (8,9) - 建议89 CTRL+G 像现在这样01:30:745 (9,1) - 比较坑 ^
01:35:495 (1) - 在spinner开始的时间加个finish音note再蓝线起spinner？ ^

Royston wrote:

Hi, M4M here.

[General]
Nice relaxing song, I like it!
The white combo colour is a kinda blinding during Kiai times, haha. You could consider replacing it with something else haha,it's looks fine IMO.

[Rika]
I Agree with the other modders and think OD +1 would be a good idea. yeah,already fixed.
00:17:495 (6,7,8) - Decrease the volume of these notes a bit? Since in the music the echo effect is pretty quiet. hmm,i guess unneed,sound fine to me.
00:43:995 (2) - I was really tempted to hit this note early because of the tight spacing. Maybe arrange a little differently? nope.
00:49:245 (2) - Delete this note? I don't feel it in the music i know, but sound really suitable.
01:29:495 (6,7) - Same as 00:17:495
01:23:995 (1,2) - Switch new combo so it's on (2) instead? nope.

Good luck, I enjoy your mapping style! Hope to see it ranked.

Ryafuka wrote:

[Rika]
OD +1? yeah.
00:01:995 (4) - Add whistle on slider end? nope.
00:06:245 - Add note here for follow the music? i want keep break to here
00:06:995 (3) - Delete clap instead add whistle and finish of S:C1 on slider begin?
00:09:995 - Add whistle of S:C1 on slider end. nope.
00:13:745 - ^
00:21:995 (1) - Add whistle of S:C1 on slider begin.
00:33:995 (1) - 1 grid down for stack to 00:33:745 (9) - . fixed.
00:36:495 (4) - Ctrl + G will be better than now? nope.
00:42:745 (8) - I feel this note will be better than now if you stack to 00:42:995 (1) - . http://puu.sh/23WtF no,it's really fits with music.
01:18:245 - Add note here for follow the music?
01:19:745 - ^
01:21:245 - ^ unneed.

good luck Rika.

Xinely wrote:

[Hard]
OD+1 and HD +1? No need HP+1.
00:09:245 (7,8) - like curved? example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/616703 nope.
00:28:995 (3) - crtl+G? sorry. i want keep same spacing to here.
00:31:995 (2) - spacing? what?
00:35:995 (3) - x:220 y:97? nope

Nice map >_<
Good luck Rika :3

CXu wrote:

Ohh it's this song <3
I guess M4M? haha.

Please take anything I say as a suggestion, and feel free to ignore my mod post~

[General]

1. Do you have a hit0.png that is in the same style as the rest of your skin? Right now the cross looks really out of place x.x Maybe just making the cross a bit smaller would help as well. Other than that, everything's fine~ sorry,i can't change this ;_;

[Rika]

1. OD +1? Even though it's a slow song, the map shouldn't give "free accuracy" you know xD
2. 00:01:995 (4) - ctrl+g? You'd get a counter-clockwise flow. nice fixed.
3. 00:03:495 (7,1) - Swap new combo. Makes reading the stack on sliderpath easier 00:02:995 (5,6,7), as well as putting 00:03:495 (7) - in the same combo as 00:05:495 (7) for symmetry. ^
4. 00:12:245 (6) - Stack under (4) instead for back-and-forth? Staying at the same place clicking 3 times kind of breaks the flow a bit imo, and doing this you'll get 00:11:745 (4,5,6,7) - lined up properly instead of (5,6,7) sticking out due to stacking. 00:11:995 - following downbit to here so i guess fine.
5. 00:16:995 (5) - This is awfully close to the bottom of the screen. Like 1mm or something. Even though it's not off-screen or anything, I still think you should move it up a bit. I just doesn't look good when nothing else is this close to the bottom. Just a little bit is enough: (4) to 184;288 | (5) to 213;373 and (6) a copy of (4). fixed by other mod.
6. 00:23:495 (4) - Remove clap from slider-end. The new music phase begins here, and you don't have claps in this phase. You could add a C1 whistle, like you do at 00:36:495 (4). yeah,sound nice ! fixed.
7. 00:30:495 (5,1) - Mm, this slight overlap between (5) and (1) irritates me Middle red anchor point to 348;172 and endpoint to 348;72 i want keep symmetrical for 00:31:995 (2) - .
8. 00:57:995 (1,3) - Move (1) 1 gridlvl4 down, and then move (3) 2 gridlvl4 down. They are a tad bit close atm. looks better,fixed.
9. 01:03:995 (8) - Same as with 00:16:995 (5). Move (6) to 184;352 | (7) to 256:304 | (8) 328;352 fixed.
10. 01:23:995 (1,5) - Both are a tad bit off-screen (if you play in 4:3). You should probably fix this. i see fixed.

That's all. Good luck!

Nymph wrote:

Hi.

[Rika]
00:09:745 (8) - the whistle at the end of the slider feel a little loud, maybe try to reduce the volumn a little bit? ok reduced 10%.
00:21:995 (1) - try to make this slider symmetric perfectly? (00:23:495 (4) - like this one) ok,fixed.
00:36:495 (4) - I think CTRL+G this one feels better imo.(for it goes just like slider2) sorry, i want keep this ;_;
00:57:495 (8,1) - I kinda dislike a spacing like this.... maybe consider move it farther away? hmm,i guess untijump fine to here,since i added a newcombo for (1).
01:12:245 (7) - double whistles sound weird for me... I suggest to delete this one. sorry,sound fine IMO.


most of these are just hitsound suggestion. nice music and map~!

call me back when you feel ready.