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The Offspring - Kristy, Are You Doing Okay?
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[eeeasy]
00:38:04 (4) - i dont like the whistle
imo overall volume could be a tick louder
00:42:74 (1) - line this up with 3
01:18:41 (4) - line this up with 3
02:38:84 (1) - random silent hit wtf
03:12:64 (1) - end this on the 3 and overall volume needs to go up in this section
[Normal]
00:43:05 (7,8,9,10) - line this up with 6
01:19:98 (2) - center this between 1 and 3
01:49:71 (4) - center this
02:57:31 (1) - line this up with 3
03:02:31 (6) - too much whistle
03:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5) - clusterfucky
03:22:66 (1) - add a finish
[Hard]
00:34:93 (7) - symmetry
00:39:31 (1) - line this up with 10
01:04:50 (1) - add a finish
01:30:63 (2,3,4,5,6) - overusing hitsounds
01:47:85 (3,4) - stack the endpoints
01:52:70 (5) - line this up with 4
02:15:39 (11) - add a finish
03:15:47 (2) - imperfect stacking
00:38:04 (4) - i dont like the whistle
imo overall volume could be a tick louder
00:42:74 (1) - line this up with 3
01:18:41 (4) - line this up with 3
02:38:84 (1) - random silent hit wtf
03:12:64 (1) - end this on the 3 and overall volume needs to go up in this section
[Normal]
00:43:05 (7,8,9,10) - line this up with 6
01:19:98 (2) - center this between 1 and 3
01:49:71 (4) - center this
02:57:31 (1) - line this up with 3
03:02:31 (6) - too much whistle
03:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5) - clusterfucky
03:22:66 (1) - add a finish
[Hard]
00:34:93 (7) - symmetry
00:39:31 (1) - line this up with 10
01:04:50 (1) - add a finish
01:30:63 (2,3,4,5,6) - overusing hitsounds
01:47:85 (3,4) - stack the endpoints
01:52:70 (5) - line this up with 4
02:15:39 (11) - add a finish
03:15:47 (2) - imperfect stacking
Lets see how I can help...
[eeeasy] (Done...
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01:15:91 (1) - This could line up evenly with 01:14:66 (1).
01:42:82 (1,2,3) - Slightly uneven shape (main focus is at (2) ).
02:12:87 (1) - If the two ends of this slider was at least almost evenly matched, it might look better.
03:12:64 (1) - The end of this slider isn't evenly lined up with (3).
Clean and nicely done overall.
[Normal] (Done... )
01:27:18 (1,1,2) - The shape of this section could look more even.
01:42:51 (5) - This needs to line up with (3).
01:54:09 (7,1,2,3,4) - If you can slide this row a bit to the right, then it should even out (4) with (5).
03:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The shape here looks a bit odd...
No major errors.
[Hard] (Done... )
01:10:28 (3,1) - Interesting jump.....
01:13:41 (5,1) - ^
03:23:59 (4) - looks a bit far off from the rest.
Not bad overall, but the volume thing is a bit odd when it dips around in the middle of a song. Still, the map is clean and well done. Star for effort.
[eeeasy] (Done...
01:15:91 (1) - This could line up evenly with 01:14:66 (1).
01:42:82 (1,2,3) - Slightly uneven shape (main focus is at (2) ).
02:12:87 (1) - If the two ends of this slider was at least almost evenly matched, it might look better.
03:12:64 (1) - The end of this slider isn't evenly lined up with (3).
Clean and nicely done overall.
[Normal] (Done...
01:27:18 (1,1,2) - The shape of this section could look more even.
01:42:51 (5) - This needs to line up with (3).
01:54:09 (7,1,2,3,4) - If you can slide this row a bit to the right, then it should even out (4) with (5).
03:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The shape here looks a bit odd...
No major errors.
[Hard] (Done...
01:10:28 (3,1) - Interesting jump.....
01:13:41 (5,1) - ^
03:23:59 (4) - looks a bit far off from the rest.
Not bad overall, but the volume thing is a bit odd when it dips around in the middle of a song. Still, the map is clean and well done. Star for effort.
Overall:
add a custom hitcircleoverlay.png and an approachcircle.png to the map. Doesn't matter if it is the default one, just add them.
Easy:
00:55:26 (5) - New Combo
00:57:76 (1) - Remove New Combo
Then bubble.
add a custom hitcircleoverlay.png and an approachcircle.png to the map. Doesn't matter if it is the default one, just add them.
Easy:
00:55:26 (5) - New Combo
00:57:76 (1) - Remove New Combo
Then bubble.
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Either put the kiai time in more sensible spots or just take it out. It, like, pops out for a few seconds for no reason usually.
The first section should be quiet, too. It doesn't make sense that it's so loud, then gets really quiet like it should've been all along. I like that crescendo effect, so that's why I care.
USE LESS WHISTLES! Damn, my ears. Oh, my poor ears. Poor, poor ears. I seriously think you used a bot to place these whistles. That's the only explanation for their frequency and randomness. eeeasy is the biggest offender by far. "Hey, I've got an ideeea! Let's put a whistle on every LONGASS slider! BRILLEEEANT!" It's mostly just a problem since the hit sound volume is pretty high.
Normal
03:12:64 (1) - This is kinda ugly. I mean, more than just the shape. But just seperate the slider ends a bit.
The first section should be quiet, too. It doesn't make sense that it's so loud, then gets really quiet like it should've been all along. I like that crescendo effect, so that's why I care.
USE LESS WHISTLES! Damn, my ears. Oh, my poor ears. Poor, poor ears. I seriously think you used a bot to place these whistles. That's the only explanation for their frequency and randomness. eeeasy is the biggest offender by far. "Hey, I've got an ideeea! Let's put a whistle on every LONGASS slider! BRILLEEEANT!" It's mostly just a problem since the hit sound volume is pretty high.
Normal
03:12:64 (1) - This is kinda ugly. I mean, more than just the shape. But just seperate the slider ends a bit.
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Spacing is fine
you use too many claps
and you use some random claps
it sounds not really good
using claps on heavy drumbeat notes are better
Also clap+whistle at the same time is noisy
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6641 this map also use a lot claps(very nice hitsounds)
you can take a look
have a star
you use too many claps
and you use some random claps
it sounds not really good
using claps on heavy drumbeat notes are better
Also clap+whistle at the same time is noisy
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6641 this map also use a lot claps(very nice hitsounds)
you can take a look
have a star
[eeeasy]
01:58:47 (2,1,2) - No. Change the patterns in here. They're dull and un-fun. :<
02:50:11 (1,2,3) - Hitsounds don't fit.
03:12:64 (1) - This is an ugly slider. Personally, I'd reshape the slider and end it 1/2 later.
03:20:47 (1,2,3) - Same with 02:50:11
[Normal]
00:45:24 (3) - End point does NOT fit.
00:56:20 (1) - Start point does NOT fit.
00:55:88 (4,1) - NO.
01:27:18 (1) - What's the single combo for?
01:50:34 (1) - I disapprove of the middle finish sound.
03:12:64 (1) - Ugly slider.
[Hard]
So many misplaced finish hitsounds... I'm not listing them all. I'll let you decide.
03:12:64 (1) - Ugly slider.
01:58:47 (2,1,2) - No. Change the patterns in here. They're dull and un-fun. :<
02:50:11 (1,2,3) - Hitsounds don't fit.
03:12:64 (1) - This is an ugly slider. Personally, I'd reshape the slider and end it 1/2 later.
03:20:47 (1,2,3) - Same with 02:50:11
[Normal]
00:45:24 (3) - End point does NOT fit.
00:56:20 (1) - Start point does NOT fit.
00:55:88 (4,1) - NO.
01:27:18 (1) - What's the single combo for?
01:50:34 (1) - I disapprove of the middle finish sound.
03:12:64 (1) - Ugly slider.
[Hard]
So many misplaced finish hitsounds... I'm not listing them all. I'll let you decide.
03:12:64 (1) - Ugly slider.
Yo, b4 u fix vytalibis's moddin, use this, I added some better hitsounds, no offense urs was too loud to me and didn't work
u better fix all ur breaks in easy and normal, hard looked alright
Download: The Offspring - Kristy, Are You Doing Okay (eee) [eeeasy].osu
Download: The Offspring - Kristy, Are You Doing Okay (eee) [Normal].osu
Download: The Offspring - Kristy, Are You Doing Okay (eee) [Hard].osu
u better fix all ur breaks in easy and normal, hard looked alright
Download: The Offspring - Kristy, Are You Doing Okay (eee) [eeeasy].osu
Download: The Offspring - Kristy, Are You Doing Okay (eee) [Normal].osu
Download: The Offspring - Kristy, Are You Doing Okay (eee) [Hard].osu
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Great. I'm sad now. I shouldn't rank it just for that...
Wow >.<!!!! i like The Offspring. 