[18:45] <peppy> it needs to be checked by both you and another bat Cyclone|IRC
[18:45] <peppy> and by checked i mean check everything
[18:45] <peppy> not just the changed you wanted made
In that case,
Hard:
00:39:33 (4) - This personally feels better if there's a small break here. By that i mean flip the slider around, then take off 1 of the repeats, then move it to the next white tick. (if you are confused, just catch me in IRC and i'll tell you what i mean)
00:42:66 (5) - I'd say remove the 6 and 7 that follows, since it doesn't follow the music, but the choice is yours.
00:50:44 (9,10,11,12) - I think this section would be better if the sliders were starting on white ticks. Simplest way to accomplish this would be to take off a repeat from the 8's slider, then move all the points keeping spacing in mind.
00:56:33 (2) - I'd say remove this, but again, the choice is yours.
01:13:78 (7,8) - Take off 1 repeat from the 7 and start the 8 on that white tick. Extend the 8 to make up the lost area at the end. (i'd also say put a finish sound on the very last sliderpoint of 8, but that may just be me)
01:52:22 (11,12,13) - This could be confusing for some players. If that is an issue for you, then a solution would be to make 11 1/2 beat long, and make what's left of 11 into a whole new repeating slider. That would make 11 have 2 points, 12 have 4 points, 13(which was 12) have 4 points, and 14(which was 13) have many many points still. I'd also say extend the fast repeating slider to the white tick the spinner starts at, and move that spinner 1/4 beat out of the way. This spinner will maintain an "Auto+2000," plus the slider will have a better feeling to it when it ends.
Normal:
Some of the slider patterns feel unintuitive to me. Meaning it feels as though some notes should be sliders, while others shouldn't. An example of this would be:
00:18:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel as though sliders should be on the current 2,5,2, and 5. Also, i feel as though a cutting the 2nd point of the 2nd 6 would also give it a nice feel. Then again, if you wanted to continue with that for the entire song, a lot of changing would need to be done, so it's up to you. All of this is optional, but i think it would have a better feel to it. If you do decide to follow this path, please go through the entire map to keep it consistent.