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AN CAFE - AROMA

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HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 05, 2009 at 7:58:32 PM

Artist: AN CAFE
Title: AROMA
BPM: 183
Filesize: 5214kb
Play Time: 02:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.62 stars, 346 notes)
  2. Normal (3.82 stars, 228 notes)
Download: AN CAFE - AROMA
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Here is An Cafe's newest song, Aroma. I've decided to map this since there's almost no Jrock here in osu! so I think we need some more *w*
It's not a great map, and now that I'm writing this, I realize it's also quite boring (not to mention the copy&paste problem), but I've tried my best, it's my first map, and I'm sure the next will be quite different and more fun.
I dedicate this to all the Cafekkos and the Jrock fans here in this great community!
Stay Nyappy!! o(≧∀≦)o

-19/03:
-Fixed some spacing and timing issues (thanks to Gabi8989).
-Added combo colours.
-20/03:
-Fixed some more timing.
-Started Normal difficulty.
-21/03
-Fixing timing and spacing.
-22/03
-Finally fixed most of the timing, turns out (thanks to Card_N'FoRcE) the problem was the bpm XD.
-Fixed also some spacing problems in Hard difficulty.
-Completed Normal difficulty.
-Added Hitsounds.
-27/03
-Remade part of the maps to make them less boring
-Fixed spacing issues (thanks to Kyocciola, vytalibus and fufe)
-Shortened some combos in Hard difficulty
-Changed some hits (thanks to fufe and Kyocciola)
-28/03
-Fixed spacing issues (thanks to Larto)
-30/03
-Fixed a timeline mistake (thanks to minyeob)
-Fixed spacing (thanks to Larto)
-31/03
-Fixed some little mistakes (thanks to Card N'FoRcE)
-02/04
-Increased overall difficulty in hard mode
-05/04
-Fixed a break (thanks to Zerostarry)
Last edited by HarryOrunitia , edited 45 times in total.
vytalibus
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870 posts
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vytalibus
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Diasios
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Diasios
starred
Gabi
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Joined December 2008
Gabi
note placement and timing is incorrect, i would avoid using 1/8 in the future.

for now put 1/4
[Hard] (note from now on ill count your 1/8 as 1/4 so dont move them to many ticks.
00:12:009-00:12:501 (4,5,6) move them 1 1/4 to the right
00:12:665 (7) shorten it by 1/4
00:14:663-00:15:617 (4,5,6,7,8) move them 1/4 to the right
00:20.290 (7) move 1 1/4 to the right
00:22.012-00:22:258 (1,2) move them 1/4 to the left
00:26:112 (13) move 1/4 to the left
00.29:227 (1,2,3,4,5) move 1/4 to the right
00:35:048-00:35:950 (8) (8,11) move both 1/4 to the right
00:39:968-00:41:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) move all 1/4 to the right (make sure they stay on the white and red ticks)
00.42:184-00.42:755 (1,2) move both 1/4 to the left
00:44:197 (7) shorten it by 1/4
00:46:035-00:47:101 (4,5,6,7,8) move all 1/4 to the right


well, i think you've got the hang of it now. there is alot more of what ive just said, go thru your map a couple of times to try and find them. when you fix them ill check thru your map again to see if theres any other mistakes.
HarryOrunitia
289 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
HarryOrunitia
Thanks a lot for your help, guys. At the moment I'm trying to fix the timing, but it's still a big mess.
I used 1/8 cause I needed a precise note placement that I can't seem to get with 1/4, even with vytalibus' timing settings...
I started making Normal difficulty, but it already seems as messy as the hard one XD I hope I'll be able to make a nice map in the end... XD
Gabi
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Gabi
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HarryOrunitia
289 posts
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HarryOrunitia

Gabi8989 wrote:

alright i can see at some points you might need to use 1/8, i looked thru your map again and heres what i got

[Hard]

00:22:012 (1) move 1/8 to the left
00:32:466 (1,2) move 1/8 to the right
00:40:826 (5,6) move 1/8 right
00:42:468 (2) move 1/8 to the right
00:51:856 (7) move 1/8 right
01:06:573 (8) move 1/8 to the right
01:11:493-01:12:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) move all 1/8 to the right (will land on white and red ticks)
01:15:264-01:16:084 (3,4,5) move all 1/8 to the right
01:16:699-01:18:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) move all 2 1/8 to the right (will land on white and red ticks) (move the seven 1 extra tick to the right)
01:19:282-(01:22:971) (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) lining them up
(1) move 3 1/8 to the right
(2,3,4) move 2 /1( to the right)
(5,6,7,8,9,10) move them 1/8 to the right (will land on white and red ticks)
(11) move 3 1/8 to the right (will land on white tick)
(12,13,14) move 2 1/8 to the right (lands on white and red ticks)
(15,16) move 1/8 to the right (lands on red and white)

01:23:627 (1,2) move 1/8 to the right
01:24:201 (3) move 1/8 left
01:24:611 (4,5) move 1/8 right
01:25:964 (7) move 1/8 right
01:27:563 (11,12,13) move 1/8 right


01:29:162-01:32:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) im gonne line them up
(1) 2 1/8 to the right (will land on white tick)
(2,3) 1/8 to the right (2 will land on red tick, 3 will land on white tick)
(4) 1/8 to the left (land on white tick)
(5) 1/8 to the right (land on white tick)
(6) 1/8 to the right
(7) 1/8 to the left
(8) 1/8 to the right
(9) 1/8 to the right and prolong it 2 1/8 (will start and end at white tick)
(10) move 2 1/8 to the right and make it 1/8 shorter (will start on white tick and land on red)

again, there are alot more of these time mistakes. i dont think 1/8 is really needed in this map. again, fix these mistakes, go thru your map again and try to listen very carefully. once you've uploaded your map again ill check it thru

Wow, thanks a lot again for your contribution, you're really helping me out. For now I re-uploaded it with your corrections, and now I'm going to try and find some more (I actually find them, but it seems like I'm unable to correct them XD)
Gabi
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HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia

Gabi8989 wrote:

dont forgett, after each time you make a change to your map, you need to go to
File -> Upload Beatmap -> Standard submission.

cause at the moment im looking at the changes but it seems like you didnt change any. remember that the notes will often land on white and red ticks when they are correct. in your map you have alot of notes on yellow and blue ticks. now while these sound like they match the vocals exactly, they dont. i had this problem when i made my first beatmap, but shortly after i got informed that using 1/8 is not recommended i listened thru my song again and made corrections.in the beginning i thought it was wierd, but now i know it sounds like it should.

good luck with it, your map is good, just needs better timing. remember, white and red ticks are better then yellow.
That's weird, I've actually uploaded the map again more than once using the standard submission... I'll try again though.
Gabi
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Gabi
its improved, but you've forgott to change some stuff. also as im listening to the song i feel like the offset is abit wierd. anyway here goes.

[Hard]

00:41:485 - move 1/8 to the right

you never changed this one

01:16:699-01:18:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
(1,2,3) - move all 3 1/8 to the right (will land on white and red ticks
(4,5,6,7,8,9) move all 1 1/8 to the right (will land on white and red ticks)

01:24:119 (3) - move 1/8 to the right
01:34:040 (1,2) Move (1) 3 1/8 to the right and (2) 1/8 to the right (1 will land on white and 2 will land on red tick)
01:35:106 (4) move 1/8 to the right
01:39:656-01:42:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
(1) move 2 1/8 to the right
(2,3,4,5,6,7) move 1/8 to the right
(8,9) move 2 1/8 to the right
(10,11) move 1/8 to the right

01:51:135 (8,9) move the (8) 2 1/8 to the right and the (9) 1/8 to the right

02:14:420-02:18:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) not completley sure how to fix this one, the vocals are wierd here

02:25:775 (7) move 1/8 to the right

02:22:137-02:33:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) <- atm you'll have to mix with this one yourself to see what makes you feel most comfortable. im starting to think the offset sounds abit wrong but it has worked so far.

02:34:835-02:37:295 - (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) same as above.

ill star, try to get a bat or something to look at it.
vytalibus
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vytalibus
[Normal]
00:22:50 (2) - Put this a bit closer to the previous slider.
00:25:13 (2) - ^
00:32:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space accordingly. Horrible spacing.
00:53:98 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:56:60 (2) - Same problem with 00:22:50
Okay, I see an abundance of slider-hitcircles with the same problem as 00:22:50. I won't repeat them all here; fix them.
Also, from 01:29:23, you started using different spacing. :(

[Hard]
00:49:23 (8,9) - Space accordingly. Too far from each other.
00:53:49 (1,2) - ^
00:57:46 (1) - Sounds very wrong. Make the spinner's start match the vocal's screeeeeeeam.
Starting with this part, you screwed up the spacing. Screwwwwwed up.
01:17:91 (5,6) - Same problem with 00:49:23.
01:19:39 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:54 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:24:64 (4) - Put this a bit further away from (3).
01:27:59 (11) - ^ from (10).
01:28:57 (13) - ^ from (12).
01:29:23 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Space accordingly. Horrible spacing.
01:38:90 (11,12) - ^
01:39:72 (1,2,3) - ^
01:41:68 (8,9,10,11) - ^
Yeah, after the break you completely used different spacing. Fix the spacing of everything from this point.
Kyocciola
146 posts
Joined November 2008
Kyocciola
Usando la grid 3

Normal
Consiglio: meno copia-incolla. O meglio, fallo, ma cerca una nuova posizione per le note! :) Sennò la mappa diventa troppo ripetitiva e, quindi, noiosa.
00:29:88 (2) - 2 a destra
00:31:68 (5) - 2 in giù
00:42:18 (1) - 2 a sinistra
01:01:36 (2) - 2 a destra
01:03:16 (5) - 2 giù
01:50:04 (5,6) - 1 a sinistra
01:56:44 (2) - 2 a sinistra
01:58:24 (5) - 2 giù


Hard
Consiglio: attento alle combo. Sconsiglio vivamente di andare oltre le 8-9 combo :)
Consiglio 2: come prima, occhio al giochino del copia-incolla.
00:49:39 (9) - 1 a sinistra
00:54:96 (6,7) - 2 giù (a meno che non siano fatti apposta X3)
00:57:46 (1) - beh forse potrebbe starci ancora qualche beat! Magari la spin falla iniziare sul "eeeeeeee" prolungato (XD)
01:18:73 (9) - 1 a sinistra
01:26:93 (10) - 4 a destra
01:27:59 (11) - 3 a sinistra
01:19:39 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 2 in giù
01:40:70 (5) - 2 in giù
Visto che la mappa è tutta uguale di lì in poi, non continuerò a moddarla. Controlla quello che ti ho scritto fin'ora, moddala e poi avvisami che la ricontrollerò e vedrò se non ho tralasciato nulla :)

Ti starrerò questa mappa non appena farai ciò e la renderai meno "monotona".
Btw, complimenti! Sei bravo! :D
fufe
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fufe
Looks pretty good. I don't see major problems.I found some minors and nazi adjustments if u want em. Here goes some stuff.

Normal: (Grid level 3)
00:12:01 (4) - re-align with 3
00:14:64 (4) - re-align with 3 -the next few combos are totally aligned. Do these too imo.
00:54:96 (5,6) - one grid too high. >.>
01:05:45 (5,6) - one grid too low <.<
01:06:60 (1,2) - re-align
01:39:72 (10) - new combo?
02:00:54 (5,6) - nudge one grid left
02:02:50 (3,4,5) - inequal spacing. I think it has something to do with a rounding bug in vertical vs horizontals.. watch how it changes if u take it out of grid snap and move it.
02:34:80 (10) - new combo?

Hard: again nothing big. suggestions for the sake of consistency.
01:17:91 (5) - spacing
Im actually seeing two different spacing patterns here. 01:18:08 (6,7,8) vs 01:19:39 (1,2,3) Not sure if that was intentional or not, or what that means for rankability.

*01:36:44 (1) - reduce by 2 repeats. add hit at 01:38:077(previous end)
*02:13:65 - add hit
*02:13:98 - add hit
*02:16:60 - add hit

*again. completely optional, i just thought it might be a good idea since the rest of the map so accurately maps the lyrics. I would try to get some sliders in the mix of those new hits if you choose to use them.

Just needs some tweaking, stard
HarryOrunitia
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Topic Starter
HarryOrunitia

fufe wrote:

Looks pretty good. I don't see major problems.I found some minors and nazi adjustments if u want em. Here goes some stuff.

Normal: (Grid level 3)
00:12:01 (4) - re-align with 3
00:14:64 (4) - re-align with 3 -the next few combos are totally aligned. Do these too imo.
00:54:96 (5,6) - one grid too high. >.>
01:05:45 (5,6) - one grid too low <.<
01:06:60 (1,2) - re-align
01:39:72 (10) - new combo?
02:00:54 (5,6) - nudge one grid left
02:02:50 (3,4,5) - inequal spacing. I think it has something to do with a rounding bug in vertical vs horizontals.. watch how it changes if u take it out of grid snap and move it.
02:34:80 (10) - new combo?

Hard: again nothing big. suggestions for the sake of consistency.
01:17:91 (5) - spacing
Im actually seeing two different spacing patterns here. 01:18:08 (6,7,8) vs 01:19:39 (1,2,3) Not sure if that was intentional or not, or what that means for rankability.

*01:36:44 (1) - reduce by 2 repeats. add hit at 01:38:077(previous end)
*02:13:65 - add hit
*02:13:98 - add hit
*02:16:60 - add hit

*again. completely optional, i just thought it might be a good idea since the rest of the map so accurately maps the lyrics. I would try to get some sliders in the mix of those new hits if you choose to use them.

Just needs some tweaking, stard
Thanks a lot, you corrections really helped me out!! :)
Lady Lucretia
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Lady Lucretia
Complimenti harry mi piace molto molto °w° :)
Kyocciola
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Kyocciola
Normal
01:36:44 (5) - 2 a sinistra
01:41:68 (7) - 2 a destra
01:51:19 (1) - 1 in giù
02:00:86 (6) - 1 a destra
02:03:49 (1) - falla finire un segno bianco dopo e vedi se ti suona meglio :)
02:31:52 (5) - 1 a destra


Hard
00:33:98 (6) - 1 a destra (e controlla dove hai fatto il copiaincolla così li correggi tutti)
00:56:60 (10) - accorciala, e fai partire la spin un segno bianco prima cioè quì 00:58:08 e falla finire a 01:00:05, vedi se ti piace di + :)
01:08:32 (1) - anche questa, controlla se un segnetto bianco + in là ti suona meglio :)
01:14:14 (1) - 2 a destra
02:03:32 (1) - anche questa, controlla se un segnetto bianco + in là ti suona meglio :)
02:16:60 (11) - 1 in giù
02:23:65 (13) - 1 a sinistra
02:24:31 (1,2,3) - 1 a destra



Starred~
Larto
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Larto
Hard:
00:12:67 (7) - 2 level 3 grids to the right
02:16:60 (11) - 1 Level 3 grid up

Normal:
Fine


Gogogo.
Henkie
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Henkie
I've seen your map and I like it :D
I think this map doesn't need any modding anymore lol

Perfetto~

Starred ;)
minyeob
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minyeob
[Hard]
1:52:885(1)-> Resnap with 1/4 beat snap divisor

Nice beatmap.
Have a star~
Larto
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Larto
dickhere
vytalibus
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vytalibus
I'm sorry, but this goes personally against my liking. Major copy-pasta everywhere, with only flips. I wouldn't rank this yet because I see more potential in this map than just copy-pasta; prove me right.
HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia

vytalibus wrote:

I'm sorry, but this goes personally against my liking. Major copy-pasta everywhere, with only flips. I wouldn't rank this yet because I see more potential in this map than just copy-pasta; prove me right.
Sorry vyt, probably you're right, and I would have accepted this advice before, but not now. I've spent a lot of time to improve this map, and all the people on this thread helped me a lot, so now that it seems complete to me, it would be painful to delete part of it and restart the mapping (and modding) process. You've been here 3 times and you only mentioned the "copy-pasta" problem now that I thought it was close to ranking... I think I'll wait for another BAT's opinion, and if he says the same as you, I'll start editing it.
But thanks anyway cause now I know what to do and not do for my next maps :)
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- Normal:
00:31:68 (5) - un quadretto più su, così è più chiara
01:03:16 (5) - ^
02:37:59 (1) - che ne dici di farlo finire a 2:40:378?

- Hard:
00:21:19 (8) - aggiungi qui, sotto lo slider
01:28:57 (13) - 2 quadretti più su, oppure spostalo sotto lo slider invece che sopra
01:42:50 (1) - non è snappato, mettilo bene; inoltre, che ne dici di farlo finire a 1:45:296? (ricordati di rimettere la pausa)
02:37:59 (1) - come a Normal

Non male, ma magari qualche suono in più qua e là ci starebbe bene ^^
E' promettente e lo stile mi piace, :arrow: Star'd
HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:
00:31:68 (5) - un quadretto più su, così è più chiara
01:03:16 (5) - ^
02:37:59 (1) - che ne dici di farlo finire a 2:40:378?

- Hard:
00:21:19 (8) - aggiungi qui, sotto lo slider
01:28:57 (13) - 2 quadretti più su, oppure spostalo sotto lo slider invece che sopra
01:42:50 (1) - non è snappato, mettilo bene; inoltre, che ne dici di farlo finire a 1:45:296? (ricordati di rimettere la pausa)
02:37:59 (1) - come a Normal

Non male, ma magari qualche suono in più qua e là ci starebbe bene ^^
E' promettente e lo stile mi piace, :arrow: Star'd
Grazie mille, aggiustato tutto tranne

01:42:50 (1) - non è snappato, mettilo bene; inoltre, che ne dici di farlo finire a 1:45:296? (ricordati di rimettere la pausa)
Perchè questo mi suona meglio se finisce prima.
Invece per quelli finali hai ragione tu, molto meglio allungarli un po'. Grazie ancora! :)
Yumiko
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Yumiko
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beatmastermap
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beatmastermap
carina la song è ben mappata! Starred
Sanji
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Sanji
bella canzone, mappata molto bene ^^
awp
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Honestly, I have no problems with the maps themselves. My only complaint is the combo colours - they're dark, and on an often-dark dark background. I'd probably rank it otherwise, but tbqh I think the combo colours could be brightened up a bit.
Zerostarry
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HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia

Zerostarry wrote:

Easy:
01:44:96 - Re-add this break again.

Other than that, saw no problems. Copypasta gets you -10 respect points though.
Fixed the break, thank you
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Larto
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Larto
Ranked!
Miharu_old
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Could you add the pv? =3
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