This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, August 30, 2010 at 8:49:34 PM

Artist: Fukuhara Kaori
Title: Sister Wars
Source: Lucky Star
Tags: Lucky Star Raki Suta Hiiragi Tsukasa
BPM: 152
Filesize: 5611kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.63 stars, 67 notes)
2. Normal (4.51 stars, 115 notes)
3. StrawberryStyle (4.99 stars, 220 notes)

Download: Fukuhara Kaori - Sister Wars
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ignore the first three posts! :3
Thanks to Azure_Kyte for the cursor and star2!
Rest of the skin is a creation of mine!
SB creation in progress...

BPM 152
Offset 640

You should start the first note at 00:13:27.
And make the combo less than 10 per color.

War!!:

Spacing throughout the map changes. Some of it can be taken as intuitive, the others can be nazi'd to death. I'll leave you to redo it, but I will point out main offenders. Change the slider tick rate to at least 1.

00:24:71 (1,1) - Remove new combo. You should also adjust this pattern so that the distance is the same.
00:28:46 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:29:85 (3) - Make it 1/2. Remove repeats so that a circle is placed on the 'te'.
00:34:78 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:36:16 (5) - Shorten by 1/4.
00:37:74 (10) - Add new combo.
00:41:69 (8) - Add new combo.
00:47:02 (7) - Replace with circle.
00:47:81 (8) - Add new combo.
00:49:38 (15) - Replace with circle.
00:51:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I have no problem with progressively harder difficulties, but this is really pushing it. Change it, along with the other streams.
00:59:06 (1) - Shorten by 1/4 and add a circle. Remove new combo.
01:00:44 (2) - Add new combo.
01:01:23 (4) - Spacing.
01:06:75 (4) - Add new combo.
01:17:21 (2) - Spacing.
01:21:56 (9,11) - Spacing.
01:25:31 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:62 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:35:37 (8) - Add new combo, remove repeat and add circles.
01:37:35 (11) - Spacing.
01:39:52 (1) - New combo.
01:41:69 (1) - Overlapped a lot. A cheap trick to overcome this is to vertical flip the first 12 notes in this combo.
01:43:27 (5) - Overlapped in an ugly way. Spacing.
01:44:85 (10) - Spacing. Add new combo. Actually, you can get away with the spacing by adding a new combo.
01:45:63 (3) - Shorten by 1/4.
01:47:22 (8) - Lengthen by 1/4.
01:48:40 (2) - Shorten by 1/4.
01:49:38 (5) - Move forward by 1/2 and add a circle at it's old position.
01:50:96 (7) - Add new combo.
01:51:85() - Add a circle.
01:58:86 (6) - Replace repeats with a spinner.
02:03:60 (5) - New combo.
02:09:91 (5) - New combo.
02:16:23 (13) - New combo.
02:19:58 (1) - Lengthen or shorten by 1/4.
02:21:36 (6,7,8) - Spacing.
02:24:12 (8) - Spacing.
02:24:32 (9) - New combo.
02:26:10() - Moving timing section back a 1/4.
02:30:04 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:31:42 (3) - Don't like this curve.
02:34:98 (3,6,7) - Spacing.
02:36:75 (8) - New combo.
02:40:90 - This whole double section is screwed up pretty bad.
02:57:48 (5) - New combo.
03:00:63 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - New combo on 5. Spacing.
03:03:79 (13) - New combo.
03:05:77 (1) - Remove new combos at logical times.
03:10:11 (1,2,5) - Fix slider lengths.
03:12:67 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:18:60 (6) - Spacing.
03:19:38 (1) - Fix lengths.
03:22:74 (11) - New combo. Change hitsound.
03:25:31 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:26:69 (3) - Fix slider length.
03:31:62 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:33:00 (5) - Spacing.
03:38:53 (9) - New combo.
03:42:05 (2) - Fix length.
03:43:07 (5) - Spacing.
03:43:27 (6) - Spacing, add new combo.
03:44:65 (7) - Fix slider length.
04:00:63 (1) - Spacing.
04:01:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:46:42 (13) - New combo. Timing section goes 1/4 back.
Ending is too Insane.

IT HURTS TO MOD. I probably missed stuff. Update, and I'll edit it in after this.

EDIT:

Minus offset by around 10.

Did those fixes, but if anyone wishes to say anything about the 2x part or ending, please tell me.

I might have done it 1.5x faster, but that might look strange.

I don't think it updated. :/ Damn, I'll have to wait I guess...

Easy
Normal
StrawberryStyle

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:25:052 (1) - Try removing the finish here and leave it as a clap
00:31:044 (2) - Add claps to both ends of this?
No problems found

[Normal]
00:51:097 (2) - Move this back 1/2 a beat, then add notes at 00:52:037 and 00:52:056?
00:54:093 (2) - Same sort of thing here. Move back half a beat, then add notes at 00:55:052 and 00:55:072
No problems found

[StrawberryStyle]
No problems found

Pretty cool map. Starred

....I'll just leave these here, too.

[General]

Set your initial volume settings in the first timing section and remove the first inherited timing section.
01:16:044 - Make it quieter from this point until the end?

[Easy]

00:10:013 (1,2,3) - It might feel better if you repeated your previous pattern again. It's just easier to anticipate what's going on that way.
00:46:005 (2,3) - Put these at the same height as 1?
00:47:083 (1) - Use a finish or something instead? Sounds a bit weird.

[Normal]

00:16:044 (1) - Curve this a bit more so that the endpoint lines up with where 3 was, and shift the 2,3 up so that they stack with the previous combo.
00:54:093 (2) - Hard to predict the number of repeats in this slider, especially with a note coming up right after.

[Hard]

Timing is inconsistent in this difficulty compared to the others.

00:35:038 (1) - Start this 1/4 earlier? (or even 3/8, if you'd like)
00:48:001 (1) - ^
01:06:017 (1,2,3) - Didn't like this; hard to read, doesn't follow any predictable pattern in the music.
01:12:049 (1,2,3) - ^

[StrawberryStyle]

00:35:039 (1) - Same note about the spinners as Hard.

Waaait a second. This is identical to Hard. Wtf? Please full submit if this isn't what's supposed to happen.

Star~

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 4,58MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 152,00 - Offset: 650 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

I don't understand the placing of some new combos.

00:08:055 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:031 (1) - ^
00:14:087 (1) - ^
00:18:002 (1) - ^
00:21:018 (1) - ^
00:43:068 (4) - New combo.

[Normal]

00:28:048 (6) - New combo.
00:34:080 (5) - ^
00:40:013 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:012 (3) - New combo.

[StrawberryStyle]

No major problems found. Very nice map.

check this

[Easy]
No issues :3

[Normal]
01:02:23(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[StrawberryStyle]
01:12:50(1,2,3,4,5,1) - Distance seems little diffenent :3
01:16:44(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?

Ok.
Keep going :3

Here's my star :3

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

[Easy]


[Normal]
00:51:77 (2) - (Suggestion) Make this slider 1/2 long with 2 reverse arrows.
00:53:94 (2) - ^
00:54:93 (3) - ^


[Strawberry]
00:29:67 (2,3,4) - I suggest you don't place these beats under each other
01:05:39 (2) - Slightly off-screen

Great map and skin only minor things i found
*star*

Nope, I've got nothing. You got probably change the sliderball into a star... and maybe the approach circle?

Easy
looks good

Normal
wow, nice

StrawberryStyle
00:11:899 (7) - new combo?

wow, nice map, all i could see was one new combo in only one diff, nice going. and is there suppose to be a section-fail or w/e, just asking since there is a section-pass
*star

Nice skinning~
(though I'm kinda concerned about the score-x.png, just cuz I was distracted on how much room it took, lol)
You don't need the "Lucky Star" in tag if it's already in Source

Easy- Fair enough

Normal-
Mhm... fine~

Insane-
00:19:005 (7) - new combo, since vocal ended and this is mapped to music?
00:31:044 (6) - ^
00:34:794 (6) - ^ ?
00:41:110 (6) - ^ ?
00:47:228 (10) - ^

Hmmm... not really a fan of those whistle and clap mixes, though most parts do sound nice

Nice map and skin

only some suggestions on [strawberrystyle]
00:51:571 (1) distance snap
00:52:755 (1) ^
01:12:097 (3) ^

can't find any problems
Star~

Please rank this map because i am a huge Tsukasa Hiiragi fan >.<

I definitely wish it were that easy. @Tsukasalove

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