As usual, I am a nitpicker, so don't worry.
[General]
Your combo colors are blending with the BG very very much. Especially the yellow. I'd recommend a pale green instead of this yellow, a darker blue than this purple and a darker pink to contrast the BG better.
[Start]
nazimod inc
00:44:168 (2) - move up a bit to fit the blanket better (x:132, y:244). Readjust 00:45:368 (4) - and 00:45:068 (3) - then.
01:40:568 (4) - moving this a bit more to the left creates a better triangle with (2) and (3). (x:284, y:176)
02:06:218 (1) - this throwed me off, because the guitar already starts on the downbeat. You should add a note, stacked on the sliderbeginning, on the downbeat. Else it is really confusing.
02:10:268 (4) - move the sliderend one tick up to fit the blanket better
02:30:068 (5,1,2) - spacing starts to get inconsistent here, but no big deal imo
02:36:068 (3) - the gap between (1), (2) is different from the gap between (2) and (3), making it look untidy. Move (3) closer to (2) (x:336, y:236). Move 02:36:668 (4) - to x:436, y:244 to fit the blanket then.
02:43:268 (2) - move one grid right to line up with (3)
[Middle]
OD6? OD5 feels very low for me. I have no idea about difficulty settings, lol
Some patterns appear weird to me, especially in their shape
00:08:468 (1,2) - try this for the sake of flow: http://puu.sh/3Rshg.jpg
00:13:268 (1,2) - try this: http://puu.sh/3Rsjh.jpg
00:15:668 (1,2) - try this: http://puu.sh/3RsqK.jpg - if yes, you can flip 00:16:718 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to make it work again
00:34:868 (2,3,4) - this overlaps very ugly in playmode. Try to unstack them or at least make them not overlap anymore.
00:44:468 (4) - this one's slider end is way too close to (2) track, thus it makes it look quite weird. I'd rather rotate (4) a bit up or change the entire shape of that into something more circular and less elliptic
00:47:768 (4,1) - unnecessary, ugly overlap
00:51:968 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:56:168 (7,1) - this looks bad imo, because the repeater is covering so much. Maybe you find something better? ;_;
00:57:968 (1,2,3) - uh, yes. This just plays weird. Especially the copypasted (2) and (3) looks really boring. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/3RsMS.jpg
01:01:718 (2,3,4,1,2) - try to change them like I showed before
01:10:868 (1,2) - ^
01:22:868 (1,2,3) - this looks a bit untidy. (2) doesnt fit into (3)'s blanket perfectly. Try to fix it~
01:26:618 (4) - curve it like this? http://puu.sh/3RsX1.jpg (copied the shape from the curved sliders right before, lol)
01:30:968 (4,5) - don't use the blanket of (5), because the slider's curve doesnt make it look good.
01:43:568 (1,2) - unevenly placed. Try to readjust it. (2) should be x:116, y:276
01:44:468 (1) - ^ x:192, y:120
01:47:468 (4,5) - this looks uneven, because the bows of each do not flow into each other. Try to make it more tidy, please.
01:47:468 (4,5,4,5) - unevenly lined up
02:09:668 (1) - curve it? (see 01:26:618 (4) )
02:18:068 (1,2,3,4) - I must destroy your pretty sliders here, because they should end on white ticks, not on red ones, actually ;_____;
02:27:668 (1,3) - unnecessary overlap
02:29:168 (1,2,3) - this plays as weird as 00:57:968 (1,2,3) -
02:36:668 (6) - do you really want to keep this very very ugly slider when you have done so many pretty ones so far?
02:50:468 (4) - flip this please. The overlap is totally unneeded.
[Finish]
Spacing appears very random on many spots to me, try to readjust and make it more tidy, please - and have a concept when doing so. Right now, the spacing seems partially random to me.
00:09:968 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:12:443 (5) - remove this one, there is no need to place this here (overmapped)
00:17:918 (8,9) - flowkilling. Place (9) way more downwards from (8), like this: http://puu.sh/3RtN0.jpg
00:31:118 (3,4,5) - the angles are uneven, the spacing is uneven. Readjust please.
00:32:768 (2,3) - flowkilling, move (2) more below the slider end, unstack (3) from sliderend, like this: http://puu.sh/3RtTZ.jpg
00:36:218 (1,7) - ugly overlap is ugly
00:36:518 (5,6,7,8) - flowkilling. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/3RtY1.jpg
00:46:268 (1,1) - unnecessary overlap, flip the second (1)
00:47:468 (3,4) - untidy blanket filling, since the sliderend of (4) is too close to (3)'s sliderside
00:48:968 (8,1) - unnecessary overlap.
00:57:068 (3,4) - this overlap looks better to me, yet I don't like it, considering the concept of the map.
00:57:968 (6) - unstack and move this entire thing. Try this: http://puu.sh/3Ru9P.jpg
01:00:818 (3) - too close to (1)'s beginning
01:23:918 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing.
01:32:393 (2) - overmapped, remove
01:35:318 (2,3) - did you try to use the blanket? if not, try it.
01:36:668 (7,8) - uneven slider angle. make them have the same angle, plese.
01:39:293 (2) - move slightly to the left, please
01:51:668 (1) - line it better up with the repeater by moving it slightly upwards
01:57:593 (5) - overmapped, remove
01:59:018 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
02:01:718 (4) - this is not perfectly centralized?
02:04:118 (4) - ^
02:07:868 (1,2,3,4) - this made totally no sense to me.
02:09:818 (3,4) - (3) is too close to (4)'s sliderend, making it look cluttery
02:12:668 (6,8) - too close to each other, TOO CLOOOSE~
02:18:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - as in "Middle" diff
02:34:418 (3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistent spacing.
02:38:168 (3) - unstack, move to the right, else its hard to read and doesnt flow much.
02:41:018 (8,9) - make it fit the blanket better ;D
02:41:918 (3,4,5) - uneven angle, looks messy.
02:45:068 (7,8) - how is that supposed to flow? Move the sliderend towards the circle? at least make it point there, somewhat.
02:51:518 (1,2,3) - I don't like the way it looks, do the bow of the stream pointing to the bottom, not to the top D:
[General]
Your combo colors are blending with the BG very very much. Especially the yellow. I'd recommend a pale green instead of this yellow, a darker blue than this purple and a darker pink to contrast the BG better.
[Start]
nazimod inc
00:44:168 (2) - move up a bit to fit the blanket better (x:132, y:244). Readjust 00:45:368 (4) - and 00:45:068 (3) - then.
01:40:568 (4) - moving this a bit more to the left creates a better triangle with (2) and (3). (x:284, y:176)
02:06:218 (1) - this throwed me off, because the guitar already starts on the downbeat. You should add a note, stacked on the sliderbeginning, on the downbeat. Else it is really confusing.
02:10:268 (4) - move the sliderend one tick up to fit the blanket better
02:30:068 (5,1,2) - spacing starts to get inconsistent here, but no big deal imo
02:36:068 (3) - the gap between (1), (2) is different from the gap between (2) and (3), making it look untidy. Move (3) closer to (2) (x:336, y:236). Move 02:36:668 (4) - to x:436, y:244 to fit the blanket then.
02:43:268 (2) - move one grid right to line up with (3)
[Middle]
OD6? OD5 feels very low for me. I have no idea about difficulty settings, lol
Some patterns appear weird to me, especially in their shape
00:08:468 (1,2) - try this for the sake of flow: http://puu.sh/3Rshg.jpg
00:13:268 (1,2) - try this: http://puu.sh/3Rsjh.jpg
00:15:668 (1,2) - try this: http://puu.sh/3RsqK.jpg - if yes, you can flip 00:16:718 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to make it work again
00:34:868 (2,3,4) - this overlaps very ugly in playmode. Try to unstack them or at least make them not overlap anymore.
00:44:468 (4) - this one's slider end is way too close to (2) track, thus it makes it look quite weird. I'd rather rotate (4) a bit up or change the entire shape of that into something more circular and less elliptic
00:47:768 (4,1) - unnecessary, ugly overlap
00:51:968 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:56:168 (7,1) - this looks bad imo, because the repeater is covering so much. Maybe you find something better? ;_;
00:57:968 (1,2,3) - uh, yes. This just plays weird. Especially the copypasted (2) and (3) looks really boring. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/3RsMS.jpg
156,252,57968,6,0,P|149:212|137:182,1,72,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:01:01:718 (2,3,4,5) - ouuw, the spacing might just slightly inconsistent, but you see it so much while playing, that it makes it look untidy.
54,167,58268,2,0,P|60:206|72:236,1,72,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,304,58568,2,0,P|76:336|64:366,1,72,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,364,58868,6,2,P|229:359|302:323,1,144,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:01:718 (2,3,4,1,2) - try to change them like I showed before
01:10:868 (1,2) - ^
01:22:868 (1,2,3) - this looks a bit untidy. (2) doesnt fit into (3)'s blanket perfectly. Try to fix it~
01:26:618 (4) - curve it like this? http://puu.sh/3RsX1.jpg (copied the shape from the curved sliders right before, lol)
01:30:968 (4,5) - don't use the blanket of (5), because the slider's curve doesnt make it look good.
01:43:568 (1,2) - unevenly placed. Try to readjust it. (2) should be x:116, y:276
01:44:468 (1) - ^ x:192, y:120
01:47:468 (4,5) - this looks uneven, because the bows of each do not flow into each other. Try to make it more tidy, please.
01:47:468 (4,5,4,5) - unevenly lined up
02:09:668 (1) - curve it? (see 01:26:618 (4) )
02:18:068 (1,2,3,4) - I must destroy your pretty sliders here, because they should end on white ticks, not on red ones, actually ;_____;
02:27:668 (1,3) - unnecessary overlap
02:29:168 (1,2,3) - this plays as weird as 00:57:968 (1,2,3) -
02:36:668 (6) - do you really want to keep this very very ugly slider when you have done so many pretty ones so far?
02:50:468 (4) - flip this please. The overlap is totally unneeded.
[Finish]
Spacing appears very random on many spots to me, try to readjust and make it more tidy, please - and have a concept when doing so. Right now, the spacing seems partially random to me.
00:09:968 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:12:443 (5) - remove this one, there is no need to place this here (overmapped)
00:17:918 (8,9) - flowkilling. Place (9) way more downwards from (8), like this: http://puu.sh/3RtN0.jpg
00:31:118 (3,4,5) - the angles are uneven, the spacing is uneven. Readjust please.
00:32:768 (2,3) - flowkilling, move (2) more below the slider end, unstack (3) from sliderend, like this: http://puu.sh/3RtTZ.jpg
00:36:218 (1,7) - ugly overlap is ugly
00:36:518 (5,6,7,8) - flowkilling. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/3RtY1.jpg
00:46:268 (1,1) - unnecessary overlap, flip the second (1)
00:47:468 (3,4) - untidy blanket filling, since the sliderend of (4) is too close to (3)'s sliderside
00:48:968 (8,1) - unnecessary overlap.
00:57:068 (3,4) - this overlap looks better to me, yet I don't like it, considering the concept of the map.
00:57:968 (6) - unstack and move this entire thing. Try this: http://puu.sh/3Ru9P.jpg
01:00:818 (3) - too close to (1)'s beginning
01:23:918 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing.
01:32:393 (2) - overmapped, remove
01:35:318 (2,3) - did you try to use the blanket? if not, try it.
01:36:668 (7,8) - uneven slider angle. make them have the same angle, plese.
01:39:293 (2) - move slightly to the left, please
01:51:668 (1) - line it better up with the repeater by moving it slightly upwards
01:57:593 (5) - overmapped, remove
01:59:018 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
02:01:718 (4) - this is not perfectly centralized?
02:04:118 (4) - ^
02:07:868 (1,2,3,4) - this made totally no sense to me.
02:09:818 (3,4) - (3) is too close to (4)'s sliderend, making it look cluttery
02:12:668 (6,8) - too close to each other, TOO CLOOOSE~
02:18:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - as in "Middle" diff
02:34:418 (3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistent spacing.
02:38:168 (3) - unstack, move to the right, else its hard to read and doesnt flow much.
02:41:018 (8,9) - make it fit the blanket better ;D
02:41:918 (3,4,5) - uneven angle, looks messy.
02:45:068 (7,8) - how is that supposed to flow? Move the sliderend towards the circle? at least make it point there, somewhat.
02:51:518 (1,2,3) - I don't like the way it looks, do the bow of the stream pointing to the bottom, not to the top D:
