This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 2월 26일 화요일 at 오후 10:25:15

Artist: Chihara Minori
Title: SELF PRODUCER (TV Size)
Source: Oniichan dakedo Ai sae Areba Kankeinai yo ne!
Tags: Onii-Ai opening
BPM: 138
Filesize: 2442kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.91 stars, 228 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 308 notes)
3. Normal (2.94 stars, 103 notes)

Download: Chihara Minori - SELF PRODUCER (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - done! (by me)
Hard - done! (by me)
Insane - done! (by me)
My 3rd beatmap~!
I hope you can enjoy this
Taking every Mod..

올...맵 괜찮게 잘 만드셨네요..

별로 지적할만한게 안보여...ㄷ

[Insane]

00:14:048 (3) - x:256 y:192 로 옮겨주세요
00:14:266 (4) - x:56 y:144 로 옮겨주세요
01:17:744 (8) - x:376 y:88 로 옮겨주세요
01:28:613 (6) - 지워주시고,써클노트로 오버레이시켜주세요.

GL!

[Pisces] wrote:

올...맵 괜찮게 잘 만드셨네요..

별로 지적할만한게 안보여...ㄷ

[Insane]

00:14:048 (3) - x:256 y:192 로 옮겨주세요
00:14:266 (4) - x:56 y:144 로 옮겨주세요
01:17:744 (8) - x:376 y:88 로 옮겨주세요
01:28:613 (6) - 지워주시고,써클노트로 오버레이시켜주세요.

GL!

모딩 감사드려요! ㅎㅎ

M4M From my queue~

[General]

1. Add "Oniai" to the tag list (it's the abbreviation for the Anime title)
2. Artist Name: 茅原 実里

[Normal]

1. 00:09:048 (4,5,6) - Imo it looks better to make the slider end of 4 in a straight line with 5 and the begin of 6
2. 00:10:787 (1,2,3) - It looks a bit plain with the three sliders being straight, probably curve one of them a little
3. 00:14:266 (1) - It is possible to add a finish sound on the slider start here
4. 00:16:005 (3,4) - Maybe like this? Also, add finish sound on both slider beginnings
5. 00:17:744 (1,2) - this rhythm fits more imo, if you don't change then add finish sound on both slider begins
6. 00:32:092 (4) - Maybe turn it into a slider until 00:32:309?
7. 00:32:526 (5) - I think a finish sound fits more than a clap at the slider end
8. 00:39:483 (5) - Add finish on slider start
9. 00:50:787 (1) - Add finish sound
10. 00:54:483 (1) - Finish sound on slider end sounds also good
11. 00:56:005 (1) - You can add a finish sound at slider start here too
12. 01:02:961 (1) - ^
13. 01:09:918 (1) - Add finish
14. 01:18:613 (2) - ^ at slider begin
15. 01:19:266 (3) - ^
16. 01:20:352 (1,2) - As in 00:17:744

[Hard]

1. 00:02:744 (3) - CTRL + G
2. 00:04:266 (2) - ^ (Maybe for bit better flow)
3. 00:05:896 (2,3,4,5) - Probably make them symmetrical?
4. 00:21:874 (6) - The note placing is a bit weird under the stream end, probably move it on top of 7
5. 00:39:266 (7) - Move it under the end of 6 or so? Looks better
6. 00:39:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you shouldn't make the stream straight, give it a slight curving
7. 01:23:831 (1) - Many players don't like it and tablet users usually spin in the middle and it is pretty frustrating when a note comes directly after a fast spinner which is far from the middle. Perhaps move it a bit more to the middle

[Insane]

1. Overall: HP Drain -1? 8 seems a bit intense and would kill hardrock players xD
2. 00:13:831 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is off, I don't know if you did it intentional, but it usually feels a bit strange to play
3. 00:21:005 (1) - Remove NC
4. 00:37:526 (2) - This spacing feels a bit odd imo, but maybe it's just for me because I don't play Insanes
5. 00:46:657 (4) - CTRL + G?
6. 00:47:092 (6) - ^
7. 01:28:396 (4,5,6) - Move them to the very middle, because it looks cool

I had a lot of fun modding, because I love OniAi
Good luck with your map! :3

Tenshichan wrote:

M4M From my queue~

[General]

1. Add "Oniai" to the tag list (it's the abbreviation for the Anime title)
2. Artist Name: 茅原 実里

[Normal]

1. 00:09:048 (4,5,6) - Imo it looks better to make the slider end of 4 in a straight line with 5 and the begin of 6
2. 00:10:787 (1,2,3) - It looks a bit plain with the three sliders being straight, probably curve one of them a little
3. 00:14:266 (1) - It is possible to add a finish sound on the slider start here
4. 00:16:005 (3,4) - Maybe like this? Also, add finish sound on both slider beginnings
5. 00:17:744 (1,2) - this rhythm fits more imo, if you don't change then add finish sound on both slider begins
6. 00:32:092 (4) - Maybe turn it into a slider until 00:32:309?
7. 00:32:526 (5) - I think a finish sound fits more than a clap at the slider end
8. 00:39:483 (5) - Add finish on slider start
9. 00:50:787 (1) - Add finish sound
10. 00:54:483 (1) - Finish sound on slider end sounds also good
11. 00:56:005 (1) - You can add a finish sound at slider start here too
12. 01:02:961 (1) - ^
13. 01:09:918 (1) - Add finish
14. 01:18:613 (2) - ^ at slider begin
15. 01:19:266 (3) - ^
16. 01:20:352 (1,2) - As in 00:17:744

[Hard]

1. 00:02:744 (3) - CTRL + G
2. 00:04:266 (2) - ^ (Maybe for bit better flow)
3. 00:05:896 (2,3,4,5) - Probably make them symmetrical?
4. 00:21:874 (6) - The note placing is a bit weird under the stream end, probably move it on top of 7
5. 00:39:266 (7) - Move it under the end of 6 or so? Looks better
6. 00:39:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you shouldn't make the stream straight, give it a slight curving
7. 01:23:831 (1) - Many players don't like it and tablet users usually spin in the middle and it is pretty frustrating when a note comes directly after a fast spinner which is far from the middle. Perhaps move it a bit more to the middle

[Insane]

1. Overall: HP Drain -1? 8 seems a bit intense and would kill hardrock players xD
2. 00:13:831 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is off, I don't know if you did it intentional, but it usually feels a bit strange to play
3. 00:21:005 (1) - Remove NC
4. 00:37:526 (2) - This spacing feels a bit odd imo, but maybe it's just for me because I don't play Insanes
5. 00:46:657 (4) - CTRL + G?
6. 00:47:092 (6) - ^
7. 01:28:396 (4,5,6) - Move them to the very middle, because it looks cool

I had a lot of fun modding, because I love OniAi
Good luck with your map! :3

Thank you for modding~!

hi o.o/
request pm~

Remove Finish
NewCombo
00:14:266 - Nc00:17:092 - Remove Nc00:17:744 - Nc00:38:396 - Remove NcModding
My suggestion
01:22:092 - this slider end 01:23:613 -good luck~

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

hi o.o/
request pm~

General

1. I think LeadInsec2500→2000 is better ( all diff )
   [notice]

[notice]

Insane

• 
  hitsound

1. Add Finish
   
   SPOILER
2. 00:00:353 - 00:03:831 - 00:16:005 - 00:16:657 - 00:17:744 - 00:18:613 - 00:40:352 - 00:43:831 - 00:52:526 - 00:56:005 - 01:02:961 - 01:06:439 - 01:08:831 - 01:09:918 - 01:18:613 - 01:19:266 - 01:20:352 - 01:21:222 - 01:22:092 - 01:28:613 -

Remove Finish

SPOILER

00:54:809 -

NewCombo

SPOILER

00:13:396 - Remove Nc00:14:266 - Nc00:17:092 - Remove Nc00:17:744 - Nc00:38:396 - Remove Nc

Modding

SPOILER

I can't this diff o.o

Hard

1. skip sorry

Normal

1. Timing Setup
   
   SPOILER
2. 00:25:461 - delete green line
3. 01:23:831 - remove green line

My suggestion

SPOILER

00:29:048 - 01:19:918 - remove stack normal diff In difficult01:22:092 - this slider end 01:23:613 -

good luck~

大丈夫です
Modding ありがとうございます~

안녕하세요, 닭빵님의 모딩큐에서 왔습니다!

[Normal]

00:00:353 (1) - 시작 피니쉬

00:04:700 (2) - 시작 클랩

00:05:570 (3) - 시작과 끝 휘슬

00:19:483 (1) - 스핀을 00:22:961 까지 늘리시고 피니쉬는 어떠한가요?

01:04:266 (2) - x:344 y:120

01:27:744 (1) - NC

[Hard]

00:00:353 (1) - 시작 피니쉬

00:03:831 (1) - 피니쉬

00:16:005 (6) - NC

01:17:744 (2) - 오른쪽으로 한칸 이동

[Insane]

00:00:353 (1) - 시작 피니쉬

00:02:418 (2), 00:02:418 (2) - 간격 넓혀주세요!

00:09:048 (1) - NC

00:56:005 (1) - 키아이에서 첫번째, 세번째 하얀색줄에 휘슬을 놓아보는게 어떤가요?


Good Map, I hope your Rank!

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

안녕하세요, 닭빵님의 모딩큐에서 왔습니다!

[Normal]

00:00:353 (1) - 시작 피니쉬

00:04:700 (2) - 시작 클랩

00:05:570 (3) - 시작과 끝 휘슬

00:19:483 (1) - 스핀을 00:22:961 까지 늘리시고 피니쉬는 어떠한가요?

01:04:266 (2) - x:344 y:120

01:27:744 (1) - NC

[Hard]

00:00:353 (1) - 시작 피니쉬

00:03:831 (1) - 피니쉬

00:16:005 (6) - NC

01:17:744 (2) - 오른쪽으로 한칸 이동

[Insane]

00:00:353 (1) - 시작 피니쉬

00:02:418 (2), 00:02:418 (2) - 간격 넓혀주세요!

00:09:048 (1) - NC

00:56:005 (1) - 키아이에서 첫번째, 세번째 하얀색줄에 휘슬을 놓아보는게 어떤가요?


Good Map, I hope your Rank!

수정했습니다! 모딩 감사드려요 ㅎㅎ

Hi~ L-Len

From my modding queue ~!


[Normal]

00:22:526 this is spin -> 00:22:961 change?


[Hard]

00:00:787 (2,3) this slilder -> 1/4 Reverse arrow

00:02:526 (2,3) ^

00:04:266 (2,3) ^

00:04:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) this is stream difficult for Hard diff players

stream -> slider change please

00:21:222 (1,2,3,4,5) ^

00:23:396 (2,3,4,5,6) ^

00:28:179 (1,2,3) this is 3 stream -> 1/4 reverse arrow change please

00:31:113 remove note

00:36:222 (4,5,6) 1/4 reverse arrow change

00:39:483 (1,2,3,4,5) slider change please

00:46:439 (3,4,5,6,7,8) 1/4 reverse arrow change

01:06:983 remove note

01:12:852 ^

01:27:309 (1,2,3,4) slider change please


[Insane]

AR -1

00:05:352 (9) slider head add clap

00:33:179 add note


Good map

Good Luck~!

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi~ L-Len

From my modding queue ~!


[Normal]

00:22:526 this is spin -> 00:22:961 change?


[Hard]

00:00:787 (2,3) this slilder -> 1/4 Reverse arrow

00:02:526 (2,3) ^

00:04:266 (2,3) ^

00:04:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) this is stream difficult for Hard diff players

stream -> slider change please

00:21:222 (1,2,3,4,5) ^

00:23:396 (2,3,4,5,6) ^

00:28:179 (1,2,3) this is 3 stream -> 1/4 reverse arrow change please

00:31:113 remove note

00:36:222 (4,5,6) 1/4 reverse arrow change

00:39:483 (1,2,3,4,5) slider change please

00:46:439 (3,4,5,6,7,8) 1/4 reverse arrow change

01:06:983 remove note

01:12:852 ^

01:27:309 (1,2,3,4) slider change please


[Insane]

AR -1

00:05:352 (9) slider head add clap

00:33:179 add note


Good map

Good Luck~!

모딩 감사드립니다 ㅎㅎ

hello again

oh god that vid~

I swear, I was staring only at the video while modding

Again, your mapset is good, but there is a lack of claps in all difficulties. I'd like it to have more of them.

Tsusuko wrote:

hello again

oh god that vid~

• General

1. It's all good
   
   

   Normal

2. AP -1
3. 00:08:613 (3) Add clap
4. 00:12:092 (1) ^
5. 01:15:135 (1) Add finish
6. I want more claps!
   
   

   Hard

7. Seems good. Again, more claps.
   
   

   Insane

8. Also good. Claps.

I swear, I was staring only at the video while modding

Again, your mapset is good, but there is a lack of claps in all difficulties. I'd like it to have more of them.

fixed and add more claps thank you for moding~

hi~ request from PM

　
　
　
That's all~ you forgot use finish to hard diff?
anyway, nice mapset~
Good luck

Guy wrote:

hi~ request from PM

　

Insane

　●　00:16:005 (3) - add finish to slider start.
　●　00:39:048 (7) - add finish to slider end.
　●　00:55:354 (4) - NC
　●　01:24:485 (4,5,6) - suggestion. like this rhythm pattern? i think this rhythm is very match with song.

　●　01:25:787 (2,3,4) - hmm, this rhythm is very weird. like this? I think that you surely like this.

　●　01:27:744 (3) - not match rhythm~ like this?

　●　01:28:396 (5,6,7) - ah,spacing is very large. difficult aiming ><

　

Hard

　●　00:03:831 (1) - add finish to slider start.
　●　00:07:309 (1) - finish
　●　00:13:613 (1) - remove NC
　●　00:14:266 (2) - add NC
　●　00:14:266 (2) - add finish to slider start.
　●　00:16:005 (1) - ^
　●　00:16:657 (2) - ^
　●　00:17:744 (3) - ^
　●　00:18:613 (6) - ^
　●　00:19:483 (1) - finish
　●　00:26:005 (4) - add finish to slider start.
　●　00:30:787 (4) - slider end is 00:31:113 -
　●　00:43:831 (1) - add finish to slider start.
　●　00:45:570 (1) - ^
　●　00:47:309 (1) - ^
　●　01:02:961 (1) - ^
　●　01:06:439 (1) - ^
　●　01:08:179 (5) - overlap to 01:07:309 (3) -
　●　01:09:918 (1) - add finish to slider start.
　●　01:16:874 (1) - add finish to slider start and slider end.
　●　01:18:614 (6) - ^
　●　01:20:352 (3) - add finish to slider start.
　●　01:21:222 (5) - finish

　

Normal

　●　00:26:005 - not use green line?
　●　00:43:831 (4) - NC
　●　00:49:048 (4) - ^

That's all~ you forgot use finish to hard diff?
anyway, nice mapset~
Good luck

Thank you~ ><

crazy video o.o
[Normal]

fine
[Hard]

fine
[Insane]

ar +1 (its an insane-diff, also on ar8 the slider-jump-streams are hard to read imo)
00:10:135 (5) - why this jump here?
00:16:874 (5) - unstack. move to 512;168
00:38:396 (6) - move the slider-waypoint after the red one to 104;120 and end on 56;56 to improve the curve
01:19:483 (2) - unstack

*star*

phaZ wrote:

crazy video o.o
[Normal]

fine
[Hard]

fine
[Insane]

ar +1 (its an insane-diff, also on ar8 the slider-jump-streams are hard to read imo)
00:10:135 (5) - why this jump here?
00:16:874 (5) - unstack. move to 512;168
00:38:396 (6) - move the slider-waypoint after the red one to 104;120 and end on 56;56 to improve the curve
01:19:483 (2) - unstack

*star*

Thank you for modding and star~

Hi there, from my queue.

[Generic:]

• 
  I don't think that 01:23:613 is the best place to end the Kiai time.

[Normal:]

• 
  00:35:135 (3,4) Just a thought, but you might want to replicate the rhythm at 00:33:396 (1,2) to make it rhythmically symmetrical to an extent.
  00:50:352 (2,1) This feels weird when stacked, especially when 00:50:787 (1,2,3,4) is spaced out.
  01:15:135 (1) Imo, I don't think a spinner really fits in here too well.

[Hard:]

• 
  00:12:961 (7) I'm not sure, but it might sound better if this was deleted.
  00:50:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) I don't think these sliders are really necessary. You might just want to have circles on the start points.

[Insane:]

• 
  00:48:179 (4,5,6) Imo, you should probably unstack these since it doesn't occur anywhere else in the difficulty and doesn't really fit in as a result.
  01:28:505 (6) This circle isn't necessary and should just be deleted.

Sorry for the small mod, I couldn't find too much. Good luck with mapping.

Hi~L-Len
mod from PM (I managed to make it before my exam XD)

Nice map imo, and I like 茅原 実里 XD

[Normal]
00:07:744 (2) - Add a clap on the head
00:29:048 (5) - This overlapping is a little confusing in Normal, move it aside might be better
01:19:918 (4) - ^

00:41:657 - Add a note might be better

00:54:048 - You can consider adding a note here to make the time between 00:54:048 and 00:54:483 (1) a beat, which is easy for the players to read the slider.
01:17:526 (1) - The spinner will probably cover the note..move it aside?
01:22:092 (1) - The spinner ends on 01:23:831 might be better

01:23:613 - Kiai time should start/end on the white line. 01:23:831 is recommended, which fits the vocal.
(You slould edit all the diff to keep the kiai time the same if you take this mod.)


[Hard]
00:41:874 (6) - Cancel the overlap might be better.Players may mistaken it as 00:40:679 (3)

Imo, circles before a slider are easier to read than that after the slider

00:50:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Change them into circles is recommended.They're too fast for the Hard..though it's a good arrangement ._.

01:22:092 (1) - Ends on 01:23:831 is recommended, as well as the kiai time.So you might remove the notes here,or remap this part :p

[Insane]

00:10:135 (5) - Looks better like this:

00:14:048 (7) - x:48 y:256 to make the flow looks better. Overlap isn't the best choice sometimes, because it can be quite confusing

00:17:092 (6,7,8) - They are covered by 00:16:331 (4) ,which makes them hard to read...
Recommended:

00:21:005 (1) - Remove it. Too close to the end of a spinner is not a good choice.
look at http://osu.ppy.sh/s/2201 and you know why ._.

00:21:222 (2,3,4,5) - Arrange it as a short stream is better!
00:51:657 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:58:613 (4,5,6,7) - ^

00:22:961 (1,2,3) - Closer:
and place 00:23:831 (4) near X:24 Y:48 to make this flow a jump-style


01:24:266 (3) - Arrange like the short sliders like before might be better:
Or you can change 01:23:831 (1,2) into circles and make a jump:

01:28:396 (5,6,7) - X:160 Y:312 looks better. You needn't place it in the centre.


Good Luck~

CrestRising wrote:

Hi there, from my queue.

[Generic:]

• 
  I don't think that 01:23:613 is the best place to end the Kiai time.

[Normal:]

• 
  00:35:135 (3,4) Just a thought, but you might want to replicate the rhythm at 00:33:396 (1,2) to make it rhythmically symmetrical to an extent.
  00:50:352 (2,1) This feels weird when stacked, especially when 00:50:787 (1,2,3,4) is spaced out.
  01:15:135 (1) Imo, I don't think a spinner really fits in here too well.

[Hard:]

• 
  00:12:961 (7) I'm not sure, but it might sound better if this was deleted.
  00:50:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) I don't think these sliders are really necessary. You might just want to have circles on the start points.

[Insane:]

• 
  00:48:179 (4,5,6) Imo, you should probably unstack these since it doesn't occur anywhere else in the difficulty and doesn't really fit in as a result.
  01:28:505 (6) This circle isn't necessary and should just be deleted.

Sorry for the small mod, I couldn't find too much. Good luck with mapping.

Autumn wrote:

Hi~L-Len
mod from PM (I managed to make it before my exam XD)

Nice map imo, and I like 茅原 実里 XD

[Normal]
00:07:744 (2) - Add a clap on the head
00:29:048 (5) - This overlapping is a little confusing in Normal, move it aside might be better
01:19:918 (4) - ^

00:41:657 - Add a note might be better

00:54:048 - You can consider adding a note here to make the time between 00:54:048 and 00:54:483 (1) a beat, which is easy for the players to read the slider.
01:17:526 (1) - The spinner will probably cover the note..move it aside?
01:22:092 (1) - The spinner ends on 01:23:831 might be better

01:23:613 - Kiai time should start/end on the white line. 01:23:831 is recommended, which fits the vocal.
(You slould edit all the diff to keep the kiai time the same if you take this mod.)


[Hard]
00:41:874 (6) - Cancel the overlap might be better.Players may mistaken it as 00:40:679 (3)

SPOILER

Imo, circles before a slider are easier to read than that after the slider

00:50:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Change them into circles is recommended.They're too fast for the Hard..though it's a good arrangement ._.

01:22:092 (1) - Ends on 01:23:831 is recommended, as well as the kiai time.So you might remove the notes here,or remap this part :p

[Insane]

00:10:135 (5) - Looks better like this:

SPOILER

00:14:048 (7) - x:48 y:256 to make the flow looks better. Overlap isn't the best choice sometimes, because it can be quite confusing

00:17:092 (6,7,8) - They are covered by 00:16:331 (4) ,which makes them hard to read...
Recommended:

SPOILER

00:21:005 (1) - Remove it. Too close to the end of a spinner is not a good choice.
look at http://osu.ppy.sh/s/2201 and you know why ._.

00:21:222 (2,3,4,5) - Arrange it as a short stream is better!

SPOILER

00:51:657 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:58:613 (4,5,6,7) - ^

00:22:961 (1,2,3) - Closer:

SPOILER

and place 00:23:831 (4) near X:24 Y:48 to make this flow a jump-style


01:24:266 (3) - Arrange like the short sliders like before might be better:

SPOILER

Or you can change 01:23:831 (1,2) into circles and make a jump:

SPOILER

01:28:396 (5,6,7) - X:160 Y:312 looks better. You needn't place it in the centre.


Good Luck~

Some fixed thank you for modding~

Hi~
As your request~

[General]

• Lead-in should be same in all diff,I prefer 2000

[Normal]

• 00:17:309 (5) - (320,56)
  00:32:092 (1,2,1) - try this
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:39:483 (5) - separate 00:39:483 (5) - and 00:40:352 (1) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:50:787 (1) - (88,32)
  01:21:005 (2) - (488,232)

[Hard]

• 00:05:135 (4) - clap at the end of the slider
  00:08:179 (3) - Keep the same shape as 00:09:048 (5) -
  00:28:179 (1) - (136,48)
  00:40:135 (1) - Sampleset-Auto
  00:45:352 (4) - clap
  00:53:396 (7,8) - (256,224) looks better
  00:56:005 (1) - finish
  01:11:222 (4) - clap at the end of the slider
  01:12:961 (8) - remove the clap
  01:13:179 (1) - clap
  01:24:266 (2,3,4,5) - try this
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:25:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this
  
  SPOILER

  

[Insane]

• 00:15:787 (1) - clap
  00:16:874 (5) - remove the clap
  00:17:309 (8) - clap at the end of the slider
  00:18:179 (3) - remove the clap
  00:19:048 (7) - clap at the end of the slider
  00:47:744 (3) - remove the clap
  01:16:222 (5) - clap at the end of the slider

Nice map,good luck~

thou bad wrote:

Hi~
As your request~

[General]

• Lead-in should be same in all diff,I prefer 2000

[Normal]

• 00:17:309 (5) - (320,56)
  00:32:092 (1,2,1) - try this
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:39:483 (5) - separate 00:39:483 (5) - and 00:40:352 (1) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:50:787 (1) - (88,32)
  01:21:005 (2) - (488,232)

[Hard]

• 00:05:135 (4) - clap at the end of the slider
  00:08:179 (3) - Keep the same shape as 00:09:048 (5) -
  00:28:179 (1) - (136,48)
  00:40:135 (1) - Sampleset-Auto
  00:45:352 (4) - clap
  00:53:396 (7,8) - (256,224) looks better
  00:56:005 (1) - finish
  01:11:222 (4) - clap at the end of the slider
  01:12:961 (8) - remove the clap
  01:13:179 (1) - clap
  01:24:266 (2,3,4,5) - try this
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:25:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this
  
  SPOILER

  

[Insane]

• 00:15:787 (1) - clap
  00:16:874 (5) - remove the clap
  00:17:309 (8) - clap at the end of the slider
  00:18:179 (3) - remove the clap
  00:19:048 (7) - clap at the end of the slider
  00:47:744 (3) - remove the clap
  01:16:222 (5) - clap at the end of the slider

Nice map,good luck~

some fixed! thank you for modding

Hi! (omg when I was done modding this I accidentally closed chrome and lost it all ;___; let's hope I can remember everything)

[Normal]
AudioLeadIn should be 2000
I know this isn't much but this diff's star rate is 3.03 and the recommended for the easiest diff in the mapset is 3. Try to find some day to lower that 0.3 star
00:05:570 (3) - add new combo
00:15:135 (2) - either add a note here or remove the one at 00:17:309 (5) to keep the patterns consistent
00:28:396 (1,2,3) - this pattern is quite confusing for newbies. I suggest making this a little easier to read (avoid the overlap, esp)
00:32:526 (2) - this would sound better as a normal 1/1 slider. (remove the repeat and extend the slider by 1/2)
00:38:396 (4) - add new combo
00:40:352 (1,3) - these sliders look awful :<
01:08:179 (2) - add new combo
01:17:744 (2) - either add a note here or remove the one at 01:19:266 (2) to keep the patterns consistent
Also, something I noticed: the hitsound style you used in this diff wasn't the same used for Hard and Insane. The one you used in those diffs sounds way better, so I suggest you apply it in this one as well

[Hard]
+1 HP Drain Rate
+1 Overall Difficulty
00:16:005 (1) - make this blanket prettier!
00:16:548 (2) - add a note here (or extend the previous slider by 1/4)
00:25:461 (3) - the rhythm kinda changes here, so add new combo?
00:40:135 ~ 00:47:309 - I suggest slowing the SV down
00:45:570 (1,2) - they would look better like this http://puu.sh/1Heyv
01:07:092 (2) - move this note to 01:06:983 (or if you wanna keep it, at least add one at that point)
01:17:961 (3) - ugly overlap
01:18:396 (4) - add new combo
01:20:352 (3,4) - make them symmetrical
01:25:570 (1) - this would sound better if you shortened the slider and added notes at 01:25:896 and 01:26:005

[Insane]
Preview time should be 55570 to math other diff's
The AR is too fast. -2 or -1 at least
00:39:700 (8,9,10) - please don't
00:40:135 ~ 00:47:309 - I suggest slowing the SV down
00:46:439 (3,4,5,6) - asdasdasd
ok wait. the jumps here are just so random. the diff itself isn't that hard but you just added some nonsense jumps in some parts. it just doesn't flow right >.< call me again for a recheck in this diff when this issue is fixed

Wiinter wrote:

Hi! (omg when I was done modding this I accidentally closed chrome and lost it all ;___; let's hope I can remember everything)

[Normal]
AudioLeadIn should be 2000
I know this isn't much but this diff's star rate is 3.03 and the recommended for the easiest diff in the mapset is 3. Try to find some day to lower that 0.3 star
00:05:570 (3) - add new combo
00:15:135 (2) - either add a note here or remove the one at 00:17:309 (5) to keep the patterns consistent
00:28:396 (1,2,3) - this pattern is quite confusing for newbies. I suggest making this a little easier to read (avoid the overlap, esp)
00:32:526 (2) - this would sound better as a normal 1/1 slider. (remove the repeat and extend the slider by 1/2)
00:38:396 (4) - add new combo
00:40:352 (1,3) - these sliders look awful :<
01:08:179 (2) - add new combo
01:17:744 (2) - either add a note here or remove the one at 01:19:266 (2) to keep the patterns consistent
Also, something I noticed: the hitsound style you used in this diff wasn't the same used for Hard and Insane. The one you used in those diffs sounds way better, so I suggest you apply it in this one as well

[Hard]
+1 HP Drain Rate
+1 Overall Difficulty
00:16:005 (1) - make this blanket prettier!
00:16:548 (2) - add a note here (or extend the previous slider by 1/4)
00:25:461 (3) - the rhythm kinda changes here, so add new combo?
00:40:135 ~ 00:47:309 - I suggest slowing the SV down
00:45:570 (1,2) - they would look better like this http://puu.sh/1Heyv
01:07:092 (2) - move this note to 01:06:983 (or if you wanna keep it, at least add one at that point)
01:17:961 (3) - ugly overlap
01:18:396 (4) - add new combo
01:20:352 (3,4) - make them symmetrical
01:25:570 (1) - this would sound better if you shortened the slider and added notes at 01:25:896 and 01:26:005

[Insane]
Preview time should be 55570 to math other diff's
The AR is too fast. -2 or -1 at least
00:39:700 (8,9,10) - please don't
00:40:135 ~ 00:47:309 - I suggest slowing the SV down
00:46:439 (3,4,5,6) - asdasdasd
ok wait. the jumps here are just so random. the diff itself isn't that hard but you just added some nonsense jumps in some parts. it just doesn't flow right >.< call me again for a recheck in this diff when this issue is fixed fixed and I'll send pm

Thank you for modding >.<

Thanks for the request~ (via forum pm) Here my mod!

[General]

1. The video is kinda NSFW... I'm afraid that it is even unrankable, as the video is removed a ranked mapset of this song.
2. Tags: "Oniai" --> "Onii-Ai" in order to make a consistency with ranked お兄ちゃんだけど愛さえあれば関係ないよねっ's songs.

Good luck!

Naryuga wrote:

Thanks for the request~ (via forum pm) Here my mod!

[General]

1. The video is kinda NSFW... I'm afraid that it is even unrankable, as the video is removed a ranked mapset of this song.
2. Tags: "Oniai" --> "Onii-Ai" in order to make a consistency with ranked お兄ちゃんだけど愛さえあれば関係ないよねっ's songs.

Mod for Normal

1. 00:05:570 (1) - Why don't you add whistle on the reverse? It sounds good
2. 00:09:048 (4) - missing clap on the end.
3. 00:10:787 (1) - ^ on the first reverse arrow.
4. 00:12:526 (2) - ^ on the end.
5. 00:16:005 (3,4) - It's better to add finishes on the both heads as it sounds much better and the previous 00:14:266 (1) - uses such a method.
6. 00:17:744 (1,3) - add finishes on the head as well.
7. 00:26:439 (1) - add finish here?
8. 00:33:396 (1) - Add whistle or finish on the head, sounds nice to me.
9. 00:37:309 (2) - this slider's direction is not good since the reverse arrow is slightly hidden by 00:36:005 (4) - . It's better to find another direction which 00:36:005 (4) - doesn't cover.
10. 00:39:483 (5) - remove the clap?
11. 00:45:135 (2) - missing clap here
12. 01:02:961 (1) - try this one and copy it on 01:04:700 - ? it looks like [urlhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/549728]this[/url]. The below is the code.
    

    268,224,62961,6,0,P|244:332|444:332|420:224,1,260,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    
    Copy the code on the .osu file, or:
    The code means "Put the points on (268,224), (244,332), (444,332), (420,224)"

13. 01:09:048 (2,1) - move them 1 grid down (Grid level 3) to make better distance spacing.

Mod for Hard

1. Many triplets are used in this difficulty, but some are overmapped so it makes nonsense. For example, 01:06:983 (2) - is just overmapped and you should remove it for better difficulty spread and hitsounding.
2. Overall Difficulty -1 (set 6) as the current Normal-Hard difficulty spread is not good.
3. 00:19:483 (1,2,3) - Don't make such a big jump suddenly 7
4. 00:40:352 (2) - finish on the head
5. 00:45:570 (1) - ^

Mod for Insane

1. 00:55:352 (4) - Put New Combo to notice players that the anti-jump turns into jumps here.
   You should think of the hitsounds such as Claps to make gameplay more interesting. Acctualy this map needs more hitsounds and you can put them, so keep on working to that. - ok. I'll try add more hitsounds

Good luck!

Modding, Thank you!

[Normal]
00:18:613 (3) - Missed clap on end
00:30:787 (3) - Finish on end sounds good ^^
00:32:092 (1) - Clap
00:40:352 (1) - Clap on end
00:41:657 (2) - Remove clap
00:42:092 (3) - Clap on end
00:43:396 (4) - Remove clap
00:43:831 (1) - Clap on end
01:19:918 (2) - This stack is bad imo, try 344/232
01:27:744 (1,2) - Change it for this


[Hard]
00:08:179 (3,5) - Add repeats and remove the notes after?
00:18:070 (4) - Remove this note, its not needed and too difficult for hard diff because of the triplet before it
00:23:505 (3) - Remove
00:23:831 (6) - Remove 1 repeat
01:08:613 (6) - This slider should start 01:08:831
01:27:309 (1) - Why this slider? should be two 1/2 notes instead
This diff has too many triples and stacks =.=

[Insane]
00:31:874 (5) - This stack is bad.. try 220/244
01:28:505 (6) - Remove
Sorry, my mod on this diff short because I don't like this style

gl~

Mythol wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:613 (3) - Missed clap on end
00:30:787 (3) - Finish on end sounds good ^^
00:32:092 (1) - Clap
00:40:352 (1) - Clap on end
00:41:657 (2) - Remove clap
00:42:092 (3) - Clap on end
00:43:396 (4) - Remove clap
00:43:831 (1) - Clap on end
01:19:918 (2) - This stack is bad imo, try 344/232
01:27:744 (1,2) - Change it for this


[Hard]
00:08:179 (3,5) - Add repeats and remove the notes after?
00:18:070 (4) - Remove this note, its not needed and too difficult for hard diff because of the triplet before it
00:23:505 (3) - Remove
00:23:831 (6) - Remove 1 repeat
01:08:613 (6) - This slider should start 01:08:831
01:27:309 (1) - Why this slider? should be two 1/2 notes instead
This diff has too many triples and stacks =.= haha...I'll try reduce them

[Insane]
00:31:874 (5) - This stack is bad.. try 220/244
01:28:505 (6) - Remove
Sorry, my mod on this diff short because I don't like this style

gl~

Thank you

Happy New Year~
srry for the delay, been sick the past few days
gg anime and song

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Set audio lead-in on Normal to be 2000ms (edit the .osu file), right now its 2018ms
The last copy i had still contained the video, harsh reality of osu being "all-age" orz

[Normal]
00:37:309 (2) - i suggest you change the direction of this slider, rite now newbies might get confused and click on the repeat instead (i used to get trolled by these all the time back in the days)
00:39:483 (5) - add finish or clap to slider tail
00:45:570 (1,2,3,4) - a volume fade effect here would be very nice
00:54:483 (1) - add finish to slider head?
01:06:439 (1) - ^
01:15:570 (2) - clap on slider head to follow clap pattern of previous measure
01:25:570 (1) - please bring this closer to the center or end the spinner earlier, newbies wont have enough time to react to it

[Hard]
00:16:005 (1) - shorten this slider to 00:16:331, it follows the music better
00:26:657 (1) - finish sounds a bit strange here, take it off?
00:56:005 (1,2,3) - this triple doesnt really fit the music well, i would suggest replace 00:56:005 (1,2,3,4) with a repeat slider like 00:56:874 (5)
01:05:461 (3) - add note to follow vocals
01:20:244 (2) - ^
01:23:831 (1,4) - make these two more equal in shape like ur other sliders~

[Insane]
00:45:570 (1) - add finish on slider head (or other hitsounds to follow ur hitsound pattern)
01:04:918 (2,3,4,5) - i think rhythm should be like this, there should be a note on 01:05:461 to emphasis the vocals 01:08:831 (3) - this finish sounds kinda weird...if ur following the background finish sound then you might want to put it on the slider head of 01:08:505 (2) and 01:08:179 (1) as well

Thats about all, great mapset! Good luck in ranking ^_^

jonathanlfj wrote:

Happy New Year~
srry for the delay, been sick the past few days
gg anime and song

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Set audio lead-in on Normal to be 2000ms (edit the .osu file), right now its 2018ms
The last copy i had still contained the video, harsh reality of osu being "all-age" orz

[Normal]
00:37:309 (2) - i suggest you change the direction of this slider, rite now newbies might get confused and click on the repeat instead (i used to get trolled by these all the time back in the days)
00:39:483 (5) - add finish or clap to slider tail
00:45:570 (1,2,3,4) - a volume fade effect here would be very nice
00:54:483 (1) - add finish to slider head?
01:06:439 (1) - ^
01:15:570 (2) - clap on slider head to follow clap pattern of previous measure
01:25:570 (1) - please bring this closer to the center or end the spinner earlier, newbies wont have enough time to react to it

[Hard]
00:16:005 (1) - shorten this slider to 00:16:331, it follows the music better
00:26:657 (1) - finish sounds a bit strange here, take it off?
00:56:005 (1,2,3) - this triple doesnt really fit the music well, i would suggest replace 00:56:005 (1,2,3,4) with a repeat slider like 00:56:874 (5)
01:05:461 (3) - add note to follow vocals
01:20:244 (2) - ^
01:23:831 (1,4) - make these two more equal in shape like ur other sliders~

[Insane]
00:45:570 (1) - add finish on slider head (or other hitsounds to follow ur hitsound pattern)
01:04:918 (2,3,4,5) - i think rhythm should be like this, there should be a note on 01:05:461 to emphasis the vocals

SPOILER

01:08:831 (3) - this finish sounds kinda weird...if ur following the background finish sound then you might want to put it on the slider head of 01:08:505 (2) and 01:08:179 (1) as well

Thats about all, great mapset! Good luck in ranking ^_^

Fixed~ Thank you for modding!

Normal

1. 00:02:092 (1) - Put this note on y:304. (It follows the previous note)
2. 00:37:309 (2) - How about only a reverse arrow here? (check this picture) I think that way is more easy.

Hard

1. 00:31:222 (5) - I think it sounds better without this note

Insane

1. 00:21:222 (2,3,4,5) - Make a lined stream with these notes (check this image)
2. 01:20:352 (7) - Maybe a clap here (at the end of the reverse arrow)

Sorry for my bad mod! Your map is just perfect! Good Luck with your map \o

ShiroiYume wrote:

Normal

1. 00:02:092 (1) - Put this note on y:304. (It follows the previous note)
2. 00:37:309 (2) - How about only a reverse arrow here? (check this picture) I think that way is more easy.

Hard

1. 00:31:222 (5) - I think it sounds better without this note

Insane

1. 00:21:222 (2,3,4,5) - Make a lined stream with these notes (check this image)
2. 01:20:352 (7) - Maybe a clap here (at the end of the reverse arrow)

Sorry for my bad mod! Your map is just perfect! Good Luck with your map \o

some fixed! thank you for modding~

Just small mods
All Suggestion

[General]
Change the tags : remove "akiko" and add "anastasia" maybe? if I remember this singer is the CV

[Normal]
For Normal I think the CS is 4 (but its up to you)
00:09:700 remove this note?
00:38:179 its better to unstack this
00:55:570 add note here

Can't point anything anymore on Normal

[Hard]
00:00:787 remove all reverse arrow? (became normal slider)
(Below only applies if you follow the above one)
00:02:526 ^
00:04:266 ^
00:04:700 ^ and extend it to red tick
(Below applies to all)
00:21:222 reduce the arrow to 1,and add similar slider after it
00:23:831 same pattern as ^
00:24:700 ^
00:36:766 you should add note here
00:55:570 add note here? (this won't disturb your "triangle" if you put it outside "triangle" so you might need to disable distance snap here)
01:08:179 move this slider somewhere, its hard to see it because slider (3) was not "vanished" yet

[Insane]
OD is too high O_O,maybe -1?
from 00:51:657 - 00:52:309 remove the odd number circles (5 & 7)

Can't find anything else

OK I'm finished
Good luck to make this map ranked

Star 4 you

copolah123 wrote:

Just small mods
All Suggestion

[General]
Change the tags : remove "akiko" and add "anastasia" maybe? if I remember this singer is the CV

[Normal]
For Normal I think the CS is 4 (but its up to you)
00:09:700 remove this note?
00:38:179 its better to unstack this
00:55:570 add note here

Can't point anything anymore on Normal

[Hard]
00:00:787 remove all reverse arrow? (became normal slider)
(Below only applies if you follow the above one)
00:02:526 ^
00:04:266 ^
00:04:700 ^ and extend it to red tick
(Below applies to all)
00:21:222 reduce the arrow to 1,and add similar slider after it
00:23:831 same pattern as ^
00:24:700 ^
00:36:766 you should add note here
00:55:570 add note here? (this won't disturb your "triangle" if you put it outside "triangle" so you might need to disable distance snap here)
01:08:179 move this slider somewhere, its hard to see it because slider (3) was not "vanished" yet

[Insane]
OD is too high O_O,maybe -1?
from 00:51:657 - 00:52:309 remove the odd number circles (5 & 7)

Can't find anything else

OK I'm finished
Good luck to make this map ranked

Star 4 you

Thank you for modding and star~
some fixed!

안녕하세요, L-Len씨~
리크에스트해주셔서 감사합니다~

[General]

1. 노말태그에 aiko 추가

[Insane]

1. 00:00:787 (2) - http://puu.sh/1JsMW 더 자연스러운것 같습니다
2. 00:07:309 (1) - 클랩 삭제
3. 00:17:744 (1) - ^
4. 00:38:396 (6) - 시작점에 휘슬
5. 00:40:352 (1) - 클랩 삭제
6. 00:43:831 (1) - ^
7. 00:47:309 (1) - 클랩 삭제와 피니쉬추가
8. 00:56:005 (1) - 클랩 삭제
9. 01:02:961 (1) - ^
10. 01:06:439 (1) - ^
11. 01:08:179 (1) - ^
12. 01:09:918 (1) - ^
13. 01:27:309 (1) - Ctrl+G
14. 01:27:526 (2) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:07:309 (1) - 클랩 삭제
2. 00:17:744 (3) - ^
3. 00:46:439 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/1JsEW 이런건 어때세요?
4. 00:56:005 (1) - 클랩 삭제
5. 01:02:961 (1) - ^
6. 01:06:439 (1) - ^
7. 01:09:918 (1) - ^
8. 01:24:918 (5) - 01:25:135 (6)에 스택
9. 01:26:005 (2) - 01:26:222 (3) ^

[Normal]

1. 00:10:787 (1) - 과도한 왕복을 자꾸 사용하시는건 안좋습니다, 서클+왕복슬라이더(1왕복)로 바꾸시는게 좋습니다
2. 00:36:005 (4) - 노말/이지에서 슬라이더를 겹치는건 안좋습니다
3. 00:50:352 (2) - 이지가 없을땐 스택은 안하는게 좋습니다
4. 00:59:483 (1) - 겹쳐있음
5. 01:06:439 (1) - 과도한 왕복
6. 01:18:179 (2) - 스택
7. 01:18:613 (1) - 겹쳐있음
8. 01:25:570 (1) - 과도한 왕복과 겹치는 슬라이더

overall nice work, L-Len-san
도움이필요하시면 채팅으로 얘기해주세요
that's all, good luck!

Wreath wrote:

안녕하세요, L-Len씨~
리크에스트해주셔서 감사합니다~

[General]

1. 노말태그에 aiko 추가

[Insane]

1. 00:00:787 (2) - http://puu.sh/1JsMW 더 자연스러운것 같습니다
2. 00:07:309 (1) - 클랩 삭제
3. 00:17:744 (1) - ^
4. 00:38:396 (6) - 시작점에 휘슬
5. 00:40:352 (1) - 클랩 삭제
6. 00:43:831 (1) - ^
7. 00:47:309 (1) - 클랩 삭제와 피니쉬추가
8. 00:56:005 (1) - 클랩 삭제
9. 01:02:961 (1) - ^
10. 01:06:439 (1) - ^
11. 01:08:179 (1) - ^
12. 01:09:918 (1) - ^
13. 01:27:309 (1) - Ctrl+G
14. 01:27:526 (2) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:07:309 (1) - 클랩 삭제
2. 00:17:744 (3) - ^
3. 00:46:439 (3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/1JsEW 이런건 어때세요?
4. 00:56:005 (1) - 클랩 삭제
5. 01:02:961 (1) - ^
6. 01:06:439 (1) - ^
7. 01:09:918 (1) - ^
8. 01:24:918 (5) - 01:25:135 (6)에 스택
9. 01:26:005 (2) - 01:26:222 (3) ^

[Normal]

1. 00:10:787 (1) - 과도한 왕복을 자꾸 사용하시는건 안좋습니다, 서클+왕복슬라이더(1왕복)로 바꾸시는게 좋습니다
2. 00:36:005 (4) - 노말/이지에서 슬라이더를 겹치는건 안좋습니다
3. 00:50:352 (2) - 이지가 없을땐 스택은 안하는게 좋습니다
4. 00:59:483 (1) - 겹쳐있음
5. 01:06:439 (1) - 과도한 왕복
6. 01:18:179 (2) - 스택
7. 01:18:613 (1) - 겹쳐있음
8. 01:25:570 (1) - 과도한 왕복과 겹치는 슬라이더

overall nice work, L-Len-san
도움이필요하시면 채팅으로 얘기해주세요
that's all, good luck!

수정했습니다! 모딩 감사드려요 ㅎㅎ

Hi~ L-Len
From my queue

[General]
아티스트가 한자로 되있는데 영어로 바꿔주세요

[Normal]
00:40:352 (1) - Gris Size Tiny로해주신다음 한칸만 올려주세요
00:42:092 (3) - ^
00:46:439 (3) - 여기에 클랩
01:09:048 (2) - x:280 y:108에 놔주세요

[lHard]
00:43:396 (8,9,10) - 여기 연타부분을 00:43:179 (7) 쪽으로 옮겨주세요
00:52:526 (5) - 여기에 뉴콤보

[lInsane]
00:14:700 (3) - 여기에 노트 추가하셔도 괜찮을것같아요
00:19:483 (1) - 클랩?
01:27:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 여기에서 급 어려워진것 같은데 조금 더 쉽게 만들어보시는건 어떨까요?

맵 잘만드셧네요~
랭크되시길~

[Ranger] wrote:

Hi~ L-Len
From my queue

[General]
아티스트가 한자로 되있는데 영어로 바꿔주세요 음...이렇게 써도 된다고 하시던데,.ㅜ

[Normal]
00:40:352 (1) - Gris Size Tiny로해주신다음 한칸만 올려주세요
00:42:092 (3) - ^
00:46:439 (3) - 여기에 클랩
01:09:048 (2) - x:280 y:108에 놔주세요

[lHard]
00:43:396 (8,9,10) - 여기 연타부분을 00:43:179 (7) 쪽으로 옮겨주세요

00:52:526 (5) - 여기에 뉴콤보

[lInsane]
00:14:700 (3) - 여기에 노트 추가하셔도 괜찮을것같아요
00:19:483 (1) - 클랩?
01:27:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 여기에서 급 어려워진것 같은데 조금 더 쉽게 만들어보시는건 어떨까요?

맵 잘만드셧네요~
랭크되시길~

모딩 감사드립니다 ㅎㅎ

[Normal]
00:16:005 (3) - NC
00:59:483 (1) - whistle

[Hard]
:p

[Insane]
00:38:396 (6) - NC
00:44:266 (3) - whistle
01:27:309 (1) - whistle

bbj0920 wrote:

[Normal]
00:16:005 (3) - NC
00:59:483 (1) - whistle

[Hard]
:p

[Insane]
00:38:396 (6) - NC
00:44:266 (3) - whistle
01:27:309 (1) - whistle

수정완료! 모딩 감사드립니다 ㅎ