gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~From M4M queue.

General:
~Clean :3

Easy:
~03:13:041 (1) - I think you could skip this bit, cuz the reverse slider + stack could confuse beginners. Well, it doesn't to others o.o
~Nothing more.

Normal:
~01:07:823 (9) - NC. okay
~02:55:301 (4) - +1 reverse? no change, giving a player's chance to prepare for the spinner.

Hard:
~00:32:084 (1,2) - Swap combos. nahh, music changes.
~01:33:910 (11) - Doesn't really fit with the music. It does o_o
~02:27:128 (4) - NC. okay
~02:43:823 (6) - ^ no change, part of the pattern.
~02:57:388 (3) - This kind of reverse slider doesn't really feel right in the music. Don't really know why you mentioned this, consisting with the bingo diff.
~03:21:388 (6) - NC.okay
~03:22:432 (7) - same problem. same like before

Ready to Bingo:
~00:36:519 (1,2) - Triplet doesn't fit. Following the vocals here.
~01:32:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This was sudden to me, I thought it was going to be another triplet and so on... I suggest you follow the vocal here, since that's wat u did b4. nahh, following the music here is better, just gonna keep them.. for a while
~02:56:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ^ ^
~03:21:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ Jumps here work better. I don't want to make more jumps here ;_;
~Pretty nice map here

Overall the structure of ur map is excellent (wish I could do that ) I was quite fascinated by ur Bingo diff, it was great :3 Apart from Origin diff (that I felt) the mapset is pretty good. Keep it up! Hope this gets ranked :3 >3<

That's all from me! Good luck!

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~From M4M queue.

General:
~Clean :3


Origin:
~This diff is kinda weird..Many jumps dun fit and the distance spacing is also inconsistent leading to confusion.
I'm sorry I can't do a mod on this, cuz the map just doesn't feel right to me Furthermore, players need to hear the notes in the map and I think the volume is too soft + so many green lines. @@


Overall the structure of ur map is excellent (wish I could do that ) I was quite fascinated by ur Bingo diff, it was great :3 Apart from Origin diff (that I felt) the mapset is pretty good. Keep it up! Hope this gets ranked :3

That's all from me! Good luck!

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

SMEXI FWEE AN SINGUL AM REDY TU BINGO <3

modreq via in-game

SPOILER

07:58 VeeLaHee104: KAISUR
07:59 GrayKaiser82: Wuut? o.o
07:59 *VeeLaHee104 is listening to Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single
07:59 VeeLaHee104: Y U NO RANK THIS?
08:00 GrayKaiser82: olololololo
08:00 GrayKaiser82: hard to find BATs >3<
08:00 GrayKaiser82: Ehehehehehehehe
08:00 VeeLaHee104: then go find mods, hole shet..
08:01 VeeLaHee104: especially you got Gabe. why didn't you tell him to mod it?
08:01 GrayKaiser82: NO
08:01 GrayKaiser82: He's drunk >.<
08:02 VeeLaHee104: hahah okki, nevermind that, I'll mod your map ~
08:02 VeeLaHee104: if it's perfect i'll give you stars :)
08:03 GrayKaiser82: \:D/
08:04 GrayKaiser82: btw
08:04 *GrayKaiser82 is editing Super Junior - Sexy, Free & Single [Origin]
08:04 GrayKaiser82: ^ this diff is a GD
08:05 VeeLaHee104: for whom?
08:05 GrayKaiser82: You'll find out later, i'm sure :)
08:05 GrayKaiser82: Mod in arabic
08:05 GrayKaiser82: But mod Origin in English, GDer may not understand
08:07 VeeLaHee104: okkiiii ^3^
08:07 VeeLaHee104: Gonna mod your map soon ~

[General]

1. Sdeg "Origin" Huwa GD? dhifi Esmeh fi Tags.

1. S3uba ba3ad tam ~

What does this mean?
[Origin]
I'll mod this in english as you requested me.. Thanks.
00:36:519 (1,2,3) - fix x0.4 distance spacing. Spaced out the combos
00:43:823 (1,1) - remove NC, omg... Is it that annoying? I'll see what the XATs say
01:27:649 (4) - 2 grid up Thank you
01:29:736 (4) - Add NC because going to another pattern You're right.
01:34:693 (8,1) - this is kinda hard, the note (1) is almost hard to read for players.. Moved it down
01:37:562 (2,3) - big jump there! I'm perfectly capable of reaching it.
01:43:823 (3,4) - same like 00:36:519 (1,2,3) - Spaced out
01:50:606 (1,1) - same like 00:43:823 (1,1) - Space out
02:38:084 (2,3) - huehuehue.. overlap What do you mean?
02:53:214 (5) - Same like 01:29:736 (4) - Thank you
03:32:345 (3) - 4 grid left Deh OK

1. Nice difficulty, but too much jumps!! i hope it's allowed.

1. Mthil Origin, L1ken alqafz1t aqal... bs S3uba zein!

Another mutual mod, Zzk-Zzk! It's already perfect have some stars !
Now go find BATs and rank this before i lose my patience !! But all the BATs hate me~ *w*

Irreversible wrote:

no kd for this, please!

First of all, hi!

I've looked over your map, and I have to say that there are a quite few major issues which have to be fixed first.
Let's talk about your Origin diff. o_o

I had a look at CDFA's mod, and he was right: there are definetly too many jumps, which make no sense at all. Of course it is cool to give the map a bit more exciting stuff with putting jumps, but it's quite overused like this. I made it jumpy because the song was quite slow, so to make it harder, I made it up with jumps

00:05:214 (6,7) - For example this one, why is it there? 00:03:128 (1,2) - I could agree with you on that one, because it's like the begin, but still, this one mentioned above makes it odd to play. Symmetry

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4) - Next, things like this look weird, because you didn't use a certain distance snap, which you should in cases like this, just for readability. ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

By the way, all silenced slider starts are unrankable.I'll do something about it. I'll add some hitsounds, and ask Kaiser to ask them to the beatmap.

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You used jumps all over the way, so how is a player supposed to get this 1/4 jump? The 1/4 thing sounds a bit weird as well, first of all because it's silenced, and secondly because it doesn't really fit the background. When I was originally doing this part, I was listening to the little electronic sounds effects in the background

01:49:041 (10,11,12,13) - If you listen a bit more closely, you can hear that the background is quite quiet here, and you should give the lyrics the prioirty here, but that's up to you of course. OK

02:00:258 (2,3,4) - The using of different DS types with streams is also not really recommendable, it makes everything unconfortable to play, because the player has to think all the time whether its 1/2 or 1/4. I was in a rush...I'll do something

But of course there are good parts as well. For example 02:08:345 (1,2,3,4) - , this really flowed nice! You should use jumps like this more often, they're great. For me to do that, Super Junior would have to DRRAAAAAAGG out their words for it to work (In my case)

So, what I basically suggest is go over your Insanes again and rework most of it's parts, to make it more consistent and more fun to play, by help of using the things mentioned above. So for now that's the main advice for you, if you need some further help with patterns, or the jumps, don't hesitate to ask one of the QAT-Members, we'd be all glad to help you!~

-APXH wrote:

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

[General]

1. Sdeg "Origin" Huwa GD? dhifi Esmeh fi Tags.

1. S3uba ba3ad tam ~

What does this mean?

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

She's just asking if Origin is truly a GD, added your name on Tags already.

Anyways, Updated

-APXH wrote:

1. Why would she ask if it was a GD? The name of the difficulty doesn't fit in with the rest of the group -_-;;;
2. Did you include my hitsounds?

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~From M4M queue.

General:
~Clean :3

Origin:
~This diff is kinda weird..Many jumps dun fit and the distance spacing is also inconsistent leading to confusion.
I'm sorry I can't do a mod on this, cuz the map just doesn't feel right to me Furthermore, players need to hear the notes in the map and I think the volume is too soft + so many green lines. @@ I'm doing something about the hitsounds. The soft-hitnormal sound file is a small kick (drums). As for the jumps, the song is slow, and I hate it when people use DT on a good song. And for the green lines, too late~

Overall the structure of ur map is excellent (wish I could do that ) I was quite fascinated by ur Bingo diff, it was great :3 Apart from Origin diff (that I felt) the mapset is pretty good. Keep it up! Hope this gets ranked :3

That's all from me! Good luck!

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

- The combos are not really bright and don't have much contrast with the video. Consider making them a little brighter. okay

Easy

01:17:214 - You should add a circle or a 1/1 slider here, this place is very empty due to an element missing. It's also an important beat you missed. You really should put an element here. okay
01:51:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Quiet a few circles in a row. It's not an issue but for beginners this might get a little exhausting to play these in a row. Maybe add a slider in between to spice it. hmm.. okay
02:07:301 (1) - Remove NC, not needed here. forgot to remove that while remapping this before, fixed
02:11:997 (5,1) - Stacking is not good in an Easy difficultie. It can confuse beginners due to them only just started learning how to play. The patterns should be in a row and simple movments. okay
02:14:606 (3,1) - Spacing is changing here, you need to fix this. Symmetry, but nevermind.. fixed
02:22:954 (1,1) - There needs to be a 1/1 break between spinnerend and sliderstart. Beginners need time to prepare for next elements and need this space. I'll consider with it, if other modder mentions this again, i'll change it.
02:39:128 (2,3) - Spacing difference again. Fix this please. This can get quiet confusing even if its tiny for the beginners. okay
03:13:041 (1) - This is not good for Easys nor Normals. The player doesnt expect it due to them not being used to have so many repeats. They only get to know 1 repeat, or in a very long slider there can be more repeats, but this is not playable for them. Make a spinner or else but this is not good. spinner doesn't make sense in this part of music, but i'll remove it anyway
03:26:606 (1,2) - NC should be on the 2 slider and not on the short one. swapped them
03:31:823 (1,2) - Spacing difference again. okay
03:43:041 - Since you map to the vocal you should let the map end here, saying this for all difficulties. I've did that once, but i discovered that 1/2 would be hard for beginners to read, so no change

Normal

00:35:475 (2) - jericho2442 told me about those slow down sliders, they are neither allowed nor rankable nowadays. Please remove them and make something else instead. well, okay
00:58:432 (2,3) - The 3 is 0,3x spacing too far away from the 2. You need to make normal spacing here, don't break if because of symmetry. made 0.8x spacing
01:17:736 (3) - Spacing issue, needs to be further away. okay
01:58:954 (4,5) - Unstack these, it's not clearly visible. The circle is very hidden. Also since you stacked this before 01:58:432 (3,4) - this might be played as a 1/1 as well instead 1/2 okay
02:06:258 (2,3) - First, the spacing is wrong and needs to be fixed. Second, 02:05:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is a very long pattern and tough to play as well because its very close together. You need to remove a few circles or make a longer slider. It's a pattern which is used more in Hards. fixed spacing, second one changed a bit..
02:20:345 (1,2) - I don't really think this is suiting your previous vocal mapping. The 1/2 slider start 02:21:128 - doesn't relate to vocals and the vocal starts here 02:21:388 - . You should move the 1/1 slider to here 02:21:388 - . okay
02:26:867 (6,7) - Spacing difference, fix this please. using 1.0x spacing
02:45:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - That's again a very long snake and so clustered. Maybe you should delete a circle to make it less long. I think it's okay
03:22:432 (4) - Like on Easy. This is not good for Easys nor Normals. The player doesnt expect it due to them not being used to have so many repeats. They only get to know 1 repeat, or in a very long slider there can be more repeats, but this is not playable for them. Also, the sliderstream doesn't releate to anything in the music either. It actually a 1/8 stream. changed it to 1/2 slider
03:42:519 (5,6) - Unstack this please, the note is a little hidden and it doesn't make a good ending. made the (5) slider has one repeat

Hard

00:40:432 (1,2) - First you have this jump, which is only done for symmetry, and then you have the same spacing but not same playment 00:42:519 (5,1) - on this. You need to move the 1 circle further away or it might be considered as jump as well. It looks fine to me
01:08:606 - I think this will play better if you move the circle up. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1058715 distance looks bad, but i'll do it on my own way
01:30:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is really confusing to play. 01:31:301 (3,5) - This is the same spacing than the normal 1/2 spacing. You better rotate these parts 01:30:780 (1,2,3,4) - so its better to play and more visible how to play. Like this for example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1058724 okay
02:08:084 (6,1) - Wrong spacing again. Fix this. using 1.3x spacing as a small jump
02:10:693 (2,3,4,5,6) - These are way to many stacks and is confusing in gameplay. You need to spread this a little more so its better to play. 02:09:910 (1,3,5) - Since they are below the slider they are also hard to read. but i've seen a ranked map did this, but i'll change some
02:14:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same with this. 02:19:041 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same for copy paste. same as above

Origin

This difficulty is lack of spacing and general rhythm relating to the song. Either fix this up, remap it or delete the difficulty but this is just a mess. Deleting this difficulty will change the future, remapping would be better 8D

Ready to Bingo

- This is obviously an Insane and shouldn't have such a weird name. ikr?

00:20:606 (4) - If you move this a little lower you wouldn't of break your consistant spacing. okay
00:27:128 (3) - This is copy pasted and done for symmetry but the spacing is wrong overall. The actual problem is this slider 00:26:867 - Since its ending at the bottom of the screen. I suggest you to 00:26:345 (2) - make only a single slider here and add a circle 00:26:867 - here so you don't break your spacing. changed a bit
00:30:780 (3,4) - Again, compared with this spacing 00:31:041 (4,5) - it doesn't fit. It should be consistant and again, it's the same rhythm but spacing is different which is confusing and doesn't play well. okay
00:34:432 (6,7) - This obviously needs to be further away, since its too close. 00:33:388 (4,5) - You have this spacing and then you make that 00:34:432 (6,7) - . It's clustered and not good to play. Move 00:34:954 (7) - this further away so its actually playable. okay
00:39:780 (6) - Rhythmwise, there is no beat, melody or something relating to that, so please remove it. okay
00:39:910 (7,8,1) - Same problem like on the Origin difficulty. Spacing like this is not consistant. Its different every time and its not good to play. Its not a jump, its just a weird spacing change. The constant 1/2 rhythm makes it play even more weird. These spacing changes are just not good and they are through the whole map. They don't make sense at all and don't relate to some kind of beat or anything in the music. This is really random. You need to make these consistant. okay, gonna use 1.3x spacing
00:43:301 (7) - Same as 00:34:432 (6,7) - okay

I think this is ongoing through the map, you need to be aware of those things before you make pattern. I really recommend you to fix this up in the whole difficulty. The map has potential but it's clearly not ready yet. Overall you made a good first map though.

Good luck with further mapping (:

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o random mod!

[Easy]
00:26:084 (3) - I suggest adding a reverse on this slider, since vocals haven't finish yet. giving the player a little rest
00:53:214 (4) - NC okay
02:13:562 (2,3) - Bad flow,consider re-modelling these sliders. it looks fine to me
02:18:780 (4) - NC okay
02:25:041 (1) - Change clap on the head to a finish. since the chorus started, clap should go first
02:52:693 (3,1) - Needs to be blanketed better. it would get worse if i do that
03:21:910 - Missing a clap here on the slider tick following the little drum on the background music
03:23:997 (1,3) - Stack? okay

[Normal]
00:29:214 (2,4) - Stacking them will look better. okay
00:35:475 (2) - Try adding whistle on the reverse. okay
00:40:171 (4) - I don't really see the point of this slider having a twisty turn? Doesn't fit in both vocals nor the music in the background. okay
01:15:910 -Should have a note her to hit the 'da' note in geudael (romanized lyrics) okay
01:18:258 - Try this rhythm: okay

01:59:997 (5) - Place under 01:58:954 (4) - 's tail but BounceBabe mentioned this, it's really hidden and hard to read for players, no change
02:08:084 (2) - Remove clap,it breaks the hitsound pattern. consisting with other diffs
02:21:389 (3,4) - Doesn't follow the music. vocal following

[Hard]
00:52:432 (4,5) - Should be curved,for a better blanket. already blanketed better.
01:24:258 - You need to add a note here for the sake of consistency, not symmetry. okay
01:33:128 and 01:33:649 - ^ Consider re-mapping this part a bit. okay
02:31:823 (3) - Either make this a pointy slider, or make 02:30:258 (1,2) - curved sliders. Gonna consider, i'll change it if another modder says this.
02:50:084 (1,4,7) - Really should move them apart, since their tails are touching 02:51:128 (4) - 's head. okay

..Sorry, can't mod anything beyond this It's okay, i mostly need mods on these diffs

Hope this helps~! ^^

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I want this map to get ranked, so I'm modding it. >w< It's great to get a mod from a person i don't know, but lives in my country 8''>

[Easy]
01:52:693 -Make the slider shape like the slider on 01:54:258 Already shaped
02:08:867 -Whistle.
02:09:910 -^
02:18:780 -^
02:19:823 -^
02:22:954 -^
02:34:954 -Finish.
02:40:171 -Whistle.
03:25:041 -^
03:30:258 -^

All hitsounds are fixed~
[Normal]
01:20:084 -Add a note. Tiring
01:27:128 -Make the slider smaller till 01:27:649 I may break the blanket's flow
01:27:910 -Add a note 01:28:171 Add a note under the note at 01:27:910 ^
01:55:823 -Whistle.
01:58:954 -^
02:10:432 -^
02:19:823 -^
02:26:084 -^
02:27:128 -^
02:28:171 -^
02:29:214 -Clap.
02:31:301 -Whistle.
02:39:128 -^
02:40:171 -^
03:21:910 -^

All hitsounds fixed~
GL ~ ! ^^

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Nooooo ! This map went to graveyard. ;-;

Irreversible wrote:

no kd for this, please!

First of all, hi!
sexy babe

I've looked over your map, and I have to say that there are a quite few major issues which have to be fixed first.
Let's talk about your Origin diff.

I had a look at CDFA's mod, and he was right: there are definetly too many jumps, which make no sense at all. Of course it is cool to give the map a bit more exciting stuff with putting jumps, but it's quite overused like this.

00:05:214 (6,7) - For example this one, why is it there? 00:03:128 (1,2) - I could agree with you on that one, because it's like the begin, but still, this one mentioned above makes it odd to play.

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4) - Next, things like this look weird, because you didn't use a certain distance snap, which you should in cases like this, just for readability.

By the way, all silenced slider starts are unrankable.

00:36:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You used jumps all over the way, so how is a player supposed to get this 1/4 jump? The 1/4 thing sounds a bit weird as well, first of all because it's silenced, and secondly because it doesn't
really fit the background.

01:49:041 (10,11,12,13) - If you listen a bit more closely, you can hear that the background is quite quiet here, and you should give the lyrics the prioirty here, but that's up to you of course.

02:00:258 (2,3,4) - The using of different DS types with streams is also not really recommendable, it makes everything unconfortable to play, because the player has to think all the time whether its 1/2 or 1/4.

But of course there are good parts as well. For example 02:08:345 (1,2,3,4) - , this really flowed nice! You should use jumps like this more often, they're great.

The Ready to Bingo has quite the same issues, although the jumps has a symmetry pattern here, which helps to make it more readable again. I would reduce some forced symmetry jumps though, because they just let the player think: why is a jump here? :c

Easy, Normal and Hard look good though! I really like that special hitsound too.

So, what I basically suggest is go over your Insanes again and rework most of it's parts, to make it more consistent and more fun to play, by help of using the things mentioned above. So for now that's the main advice for you, if you need some further help with patterns, or the jumps, don't hesitate to ask one of the QAT-Members, we'd be all glad to help you!~

Yasora wrote:

The title describe me perfectly 8)
*runs

Insane :
I think u should lower the AR to 8
00:26:867 (8) - try to replace in somehere else because the distance to the next slider is too close
00:34:693 - try to add circle to feel the empty beat in x:256 y:160

Gamu wrote:

hello~ Request from Gamu's Standard Modding Queue

[ Easy]

1. OD +1 pls. It is too low. Okay
2. 00:34:954 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
3. 00:34:954 (1) - Add a normal-hitclap at the start point. It is missing. ^
4. 00:35:997 (2) - ^ ^
5. 00:44:867 (1) -Please change to normal-hitclap from whistle at the end point. It will be better. Nope, Following the "lalala" part
6. 00:46:432 (3) - ^ (at the start point). Okay
7. 01:13:041 (1) - Remove a new combo. Okay, and i also swapped NC on the previous note due to new track
8. 01:14:084 (3,1,2) - Let's change the placement in order to create a blanket sliders? Of course, I was pasted the code and image. Please use all means If you prefer it :3 Okay, but didn't use the code :/
   
   image & code

   
   

   364,248,74084,2,0,P|396:208|404:160,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   344,80,75128,21,8,0:0:0:0:
   244,80,75649,2,0,P|212:116|198:166,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:17:736 (4) - Add a finish. missing? Okay
10. 01:52:171 (2) - Please change to clap from whistle at the end point. ^
11. 01:52:693 (3) - Add a something like a clap sound at the slidertick. (it is normal-slidertick2) ^
12. 01:58:432 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
13. 01:59:997 (6,1) - Swap these new combos. They are breaking the consistency of the new combos. Okay
14. 02:03:649 (1,2) - ^ ^
15. 02:05:736 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
16. 02:18:780 (1) - ^ New track, but okay..
17. 02:38:084 (5,1) - Swap these new combos. Same as 01:59:667. Okay
18. 02:40:171 (3) - Add a finish at the end point. Okay

[ Normal]

1. HP +1 and OD +2 pls. Difficulty balance is bad. Okay
2. 00:21:910 (1) - Remove a new combo. Nope, the new track here is important
3. 00:34:954 (4) - Same as Easy diff, add a normal-hitclap at the start point. And the end point too, Okay
4. 00:45:388 (1) - Add a normal-hitclap at the start point because not enough. Okay
5. 00:46:432 (2) - ^ ^
6. 00:47:475 (3) - Move to x:404 y:92 in order to create the perfect Sliderbows. Okay, i hope it doesn't break the spacing gap.
   
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7. 00:59:475 (1) - Remove a new combo. Nope, same reason
8. 01:06:780 (1) - Beautiful blanket is collapsing. Therefore, Move to x:280 y:180. 01:07:301 (2) - Move to x:392 y:220. Okay
9. 01:09:910 (1) - 1 grid left in order to create the perfect Sliderbows. Nazi, but Okay
10. 01:14:084 (5,1) - Swap these new combos. They are breaking the consistency of the new combos. Okay
11. 01:29:736 (1,2) - ^ ^
12. 01:52:171 (2) - Add a normal-hitclap at the start point and remove a whistle at the end point. The clap is a necessary but whistle's unnecessary. ^
13. 01:53:214 (3) - ^ ^
14. 01:54:258 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
15. 01:58:954 (1,2) - Swap these new combos. The Reason has already been written (⇒ They are breaking the consistency of the new combos.) ik ik, Okay
16. 02:02:084 (1) - Remove a new combo. Okay
17. 02:04:693 (7,1) - Swap these new combos. Same as 01:58:954..etc ^
18. 03:28:171 (6,1) - ^ ^

[ Hard]

1. HP, AR and OD +1 pls. Okay
2. 00:45:388 (2) - Please change to normal-hitclap from whistle. It will be better. ^
3. 00:45:910 (4) - ^ at the end point. ^
4. 01:05:736 (7) - Add a new combo. ^
5. 01:11:997 (7,1) - Swap these new combos. I think so ^
6. 01:14:084 (7,1) - ^ ^
7. 02:15:388 (2,3) - I feel very strange it. Please try these. And i think it's fine, i followed vocals a little in this track
   
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8. 02:33:389 (1) - It makes the perfect stack? It is necessary to make modifications if you think so Spacing would look bad, but Okay
9. 02:37:041 (1,2) - Swap these new combos. Okay
10. 02:38:607 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
11. 03:16:693 (4,1) - Swap these new combos. ^
12. 03:27:649 (6) - Add a new combo. ^
13. 03:33:388 (6,1) - Swap these new combos. ^
14. 03:35:997 (6,1) - ^ ^
15. 03:42:258 (5,1) - ^ ^

[ Insane]

1. HP is too high >< HP7 would be better.
2. 00:34:954 (1) - Add a normal-hitclap. There is a backsound like a clap.
3. 00:35:997 (5) - ^
4. 00:45:910 (5) - Please change to normal-hitclap from whistle. Same as Hard diff.
5. 00:46:954 (9) - ^
6. 01:52:170 (3) - ^
7. 01:53:214 (7) - ^
8. 02:44:866 (1) - Remove a new combo.
9. 03:41:736 (1,4) - Swap these new combos.
   
   Uhmhmfmfmmhmf All fixed

Some new combos was a strange and some claps is missing.
I pointed out mainly them but there may be a place that have overlooked. Thanks for pointing it out
Well, I hope that this map is rank :3/ I hope the BAT i called can bubble this...

1. 00:53:606 - I can hear a vocal here, and I'd suggest you to follow that since it sounds so empty without that. Add a note here. Also, 00:53:867 (5) - this note is unnecessary to appear at here, I can't hear any sound here, and the rhythm feels awkward imo. Remove this note please.
2. 01:19:562 (6,1,2) - In my opinion, the distance between (6,1) and (1,2) should be same, since the music between them are really the same. You can move it to x:459, y:135 (or somewhere near that place), that would be a great flow, too.
3. 01:57:910 (1,2) - This rhythm feels awkward to me because it's not following anything. I think you can try to follow the vocals here, the players will be much easier to read how objects going.
   
4. 02:15:388 (4,5) - I'd prefer to follow the vocal "ah ah ah ah" and put notes on the red/white ticks, not two 1/4 sliders.
5. 02:33:388 (5) - / 02:37:562 (7) - Pretty sure you forget a new combo here. :p
6. 03:16:432 - This vocal sounds really important and you shouldn't miss that. It sounds really empty during the sliderslide since you didn't put any notes there. I think you can change 03:16:171 (5) - into a 1/2 slider and a note to fix this issue.
   

1. 02:15:388 (8,9) - Same as what I've pointed out here in Insane diff.
   Nice o.o/

Flask wrote:

Hi!

[Insane]

1. 00:53:606 - I can hear a vocal here, and I'd suggest you to follow that since it sounds so empty without that. Add a note here. Also, 00:53:867 (5) - this note is unnecessary to appear at here, I can't hear any sound here, and the rhythm feels awkward imo. Remove this note please. About the rhythm you told to add a circle, You'd really need to hear closer on the vocal 00:53:475 (2) -, and you might know it was from the 1/2 beat of the rhythm's track. Also, removing the circle here as I'm trying to follow the vocal on this part won't make sense. I'm using it for the vocal track's rhythm.
2. 01:19:562 (6,1,2) - In my opinion, the distance between (6,1) and (1,2) should be same, since the music between them are really the same. You can move it to x:459, y:135 (or somewhere near that place), that would be a great flow, too. Didn't move on the place you mentioned, but made it on my own way
3. 01:57:910 (1,2) - This rhythm feels awkward to me because it's not following anything. I think you can try to follow the vocals here, the players will be much easier to read how objects going. Nice, okay
   
4. 02:15:388 (4,5) - I'd prefer to follow the vocal "ah ah ah ah" and put notes on the red/white ticks, not two 1/4 sliders. You don't look like you're following the music background here, but okay, vocals can be heard more than it. ;_;
5. 02:33:388 (5) - / 02:37:562 (7) - Pretty sure you forget a new combo here. :p Omg, nice catch, kk :V
6. 03:16:432 - This vocal sounds really important and you shouldn't miss that. It sounds really empty during the sliderslide since you didn't put any notes there. I think you can change 03:16:171 (5) - into a 1/2 slider and a note to fix this issue. Okay
   

[Hard]

1. 02:15:388 (8,9) - Same as what I've pointed out here in Insane diff. Okay
   Nice o.o/ Not really ;^;

I don't see any big issues in easier difficulties, hope I can help you. Good luck!

Gray Veyron wrote:

^ plz quit osu soon ^

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Gray Veyron wrote:

^ plz quit osu soon ^

In your dreams lol

Sieg wrote:

Hello mr. Gray Veyron

General

1. You have 2 unused *.osb files in song dir, since you didn't use storyboard you can safety delete them both owps, Okay
2. Video quality is rather low Ofc, but if i increase it's definition, the filesize increases, it won't fit the beatmap submission. I think i will try to find one.
3. You can use 슈퍼주니어 as artist and Super Junior as romanised artist Okay
4. Also song title will be 섹시프리앤싱글 ^
5. Tags: suju, pop Okay, but not "pop" due that runaway BAT added it on the genre, so it's already counted there.
6. Hitsounds - hitnormal is too clunk, hard to hear Most can hear, if you mean by raising the volume, It'll be more clunky, I'll just keep it.
7. Combo colors seems a bit random :3 Well, yes it is random, especially the red and blue is for the kiai times :3

Insane

1. 00:23:997 (1,2,3) - extended sliders here they don't really reflect anything, just use of 1\2 suits better Okay, but a jump like you did doesn't fit much here. Since the song track or the vocals aren't strong enough for a bigger jump. Also, i might not make the exact pattern you made.
   
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2. 00:25:823 (5) - slider end on downbeat is rarely acceptable for insane level difficulties because it usually have strong empathized beat (which is your case). You can try triplet here Okay
3. 00:27:128 (1,2) - You missed ongoing sound from 00:27:388 () - to 00:27:649 () - Correct rhythm should be I think it's fine as the current rhythm is following it correct too, so I was moving them to the white lines for a better rhythm for the song track.
4. 00:30:519 (1,2,3) - why 0.3x DS here, it seems quite random, either stack or put you common DS I'll pick into the stack. I'm making a symmetry here.
5. 00:37:041 (3,4) - flow transition bad here, try Okay
   
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6. 01:07:562 (11,12,1) - better curve here Okay
7. 01:08:345 (2,3) - stack ends properly Okay
8. 01:33:388 (2,3) - that pattern look wat
9. 01:20:084 (8,9,1) - ^ ^
10. 02:08:084 (6,1) - way too close, try 1.7x DS I can't make a jump here, since the song track came up with the calm sounds, It would probably make no sense. I know it's a new track and a powerful beat here, but still can't do that. I'll stack instead
11. 02:16:432 (8,9,1) - stack this or make proper curve I'll pick into the stack.
12. 02:50:606 (2,3) - flow is pretty broken here Okay, I'll change this pattern into a Claw formation.
13. 03:40:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to space them more Likely no, since the song track is almost weak, there shouldn't be bigger spacing than the current one
14. 03:42:258 (1,2) - bigger jump will reflect music better here Okay, but i won't make the spacing you've made on the pattern
    
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15. General issue: spacing, diff is way too compressed for insane. You need a lot of work on that. orz But you still see nice patterns, eh? you already know spacing effects the pattern and the rhythm of the song track, but now you're saying this needs more work? orz

Hard

1. 00:24:780 (4) - skipping strong lyrics and beat on 00:25:041 (4) - is not a good idea Okay
2. 00:29:997 (5) - put this a bit away from 00:29:214 (3) - for better readability ^
3. 00:34:432 (4) - extended slider is not necessary here just 1\2 will be fine ^
4. 00:42:780 (5) - ^ ^
5. 01:56:867 (2) - same ^ ^
6. 00:38:084 (3) - looks meh atm, just blanket will be bette okeh
   
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7. 01:09:910 (1,2,3) - such pattern too confusing for hard level I think it's fine, as long as players would think it's a triplet due close spacing and vocals on the song track, It won't be much confusing.
8. 01:15:910 (6,7) - rotate them by ~30 degrees for a better flow Okay
   
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Normal

1. 00:21:910 (1,2) - flow can be improved here a bit It's already improved, since i was planning to make a blanket here.
   
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2. 00:38:084 (4,5) - also here, is not a really smooth transition Well, It was a symmetry with 00:39:128 (5,7) - on the past, but right now, It's not symmetry atm when a modder before you told me to add a note on 00:39:388 (6) - . So likely, I'll keep the current one.
3. 01:30:780 (1,2,3) - ^ Same here, but not symmetry, I'm making these sliders 01:29:736 (5,1,3) - a pattern to form a Sharp-to-Soft formation. In addition, a note on 01:31:562 (2) - .

Easy

1. 01:05:214 (5,2) - try to avoid such overlaps for easy, diff must be maximum clear to not confuse newbies I'm making a full blanket here, but okay.

You should put more work on insane here. Good Luck!

1. The video could look better, now has a low quality and looks kinda bad. I made one for you: Video (Actually I made 3 with 3 different video size, so feel free to use any of them)
2. The current BG is okay but I found another that you might like more (is on the .rar with the video).
3. It's me or the mp3 sounds quite bad?

1. 01:51:649 (1) - Make this finish a normal one instead a custom like you did in the others diffs.
2. 02:07:301 (4,1) - Add finish in each tail of the sliders.

1. The setup looks kinda low and this is a Hard diff, maybe +1 on all except Circle Size, AR 7 works nice with that SV for instance.
2. 00:38:084 (3) - Missing clap at the start.
3. 02:21:388 (3) - Considers Ctrl+Ging this slider, imo this change improves the flow of the previous circles and the next slider.
4. 03:43:301 (8) - Considers remove this circle, I mean, the music ends on the previous red tick, also the finish sounds too loud with anything on the track. If you don't add with this at least remove the finish, and if you add with this remove the finish on all diffs. (Maybe you want emphasize the end of the song but really the finish doesn't fit at all)

1. 03:43:301 (3) - Same as Hard.

Kenezz wrote:

I'm heeeeereee~
from my queue

[General]

1. The video could look better, now has a low quality and looks kinda bad. I made one for you: Video (Actually I made 3 with 3 different video size, so feel free to use any of them) Okay, picked 720x480
2. The current BG is okay but I found another that you might like more (is on the .rar with the video). Ofc i like it, but it looked really simple and squarely. I think i'll go with the current one, due it's fancier than the suggested one, But thanks for your effort.
3. It's me or the mp3 sounds quite bad? It's because the mp3 is 128kbps, That's the reason it sounded bad.

[Easy]

1. 01:51:649 (1) - Make this finish a normal one instead a custom like you did in the others diffs. owps, Didn't see that when updating from Sieg's mod, Good catch!
2. 02:07:301 (4,1) - Add finish in each tail of the sliders. Okay

[Hard]

1. The setup looks kinda low and this is a Hard diff, maybe +1 on all except Circle Size, AR 7 works nice with that SV for instance. Okay
2. 00:38:084 (3) - Missing clap at the start. Forgot to add that ;_; Okay
3. 02:21:388 (3) - Considers Ctrl+Ging this slider, imo this change improves the flow of the previous circles and the next slider. Okay
4. 03:43:301 (8) - Considers remove this circle, I mean, the music ends on the previous red tick, also the finish sounds too loud with anything on the track. If you don't add with this at least remove the finish, and if you add with this remove the finish on all diffs. (Maybe you want emphasize the end of the song but really the finish doesn't fit at all) Okay, Just going to remove the circle, and there it goes! The inconsistency between Easy/Normal and Hard/Insane.

[Insane]

1. 03:43:301 (3) - Same as Hard. Okay

Sexy, Free & Single I'm ready too, Bingo!
Hope this can help you, I'll re-check later o3o/