Ello, I like this map.
[TRaSH]
Consider renaming to Black Another
00:31:100 (3,4) - Overlap; Either rotate 4 or move 3.
00:32:200 (2,3,4) - Move 2 slightly to the left, due to it's overlap with slider 1, Move 3 slightly up due to it's overlap with slider 2, Move 4 slightly to the right due to it's overlap with three. It should look something like this:
http://puu.sh/cDpSV/d43248619a.jpg00:34:870 (8) - NC
00:37:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider curving out this stream more, perhaps something like this but neater:
http://puu.sh/cDqgs/fbbcd0cc5a.jpg00:49:477 (4,5,6) - I like the concept of this, but I don't like the execution. Try one of the following:
http://puu.sh/cDqqc/881bf5c575.jpg or
http://puu.sh/cDquF/3b2ee0d44e.jpg00:54:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Please make this into a proper deathstream. By that I mean, curve it out more and make it seem like it actually is a continuous stream as opposed to four mini streams. If you want to represent the music better, try adding kinks into your stream like this
http://puu.sh/cDr8N/b3fbe750c5.jpg. My last recommendation for this stream is that you increase the spacing to 0.8-1.0x
01:04:713 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:05:812 (3) - This note isn't snapped
01:07:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I recommend turning this into a stacked stream.
01:32:985 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:54:660
01:29:844 (5) - NC
[TAKA's Another]
Disable Kiai time at 153849 and consider changing the offset of this inherited timing section to 153927.
The timing section at 130524 is unnecessary. Change the volume of the timing section at 130053 to either 80% or 100% to get rid of the ai mod errors.
00:30:472 (1,2,1) - Overlaps everywhere. Consider changing the angle of 00:30:786 (1) and moving 00:31:257 (2) the same distance or try this:
http://puu.sh/cDskO/617d1f4309.jpg00:40:524 (1,2,1) - ^
01:00:629 (2,1) - Fix your slider bow
01:13:195 (2) - Move this slider down, as it overlaps with the next slider.
01:14:294 (2) - Move up so that the tail of this slider lands on the slider that starts on the next measure. Ex:
http://puu.sh/cDzTC/cec953ae7e.jpg01:17:592 (3,4,5) - Space these out more so that they don't overlap
01:19:791 (1) - Move down so that it doesn't overlap with the previous slider
01:59:373 (1,1,1) - Space these out a bit more and remove the NC at 01:59:687
02:02:514 (2) - Move this slider so that the head starts where 02:02:200 (1) starts. EX:
http://puu.sh/cDA71/68f21e795f.jpg02:06:598 (2) - Increase the Sloe of this and move it so that the tail lands where 02:06:126 (1) begins. EX:
http://puu.sh/cDAeI/b59147032c.jpg02:12:566 (2) - Move this slider so that the head starts where 02:12:252 (1) starts (See 02:02:514 for example)
02:19:477 (1,1,1) - Same as 01:59:373
02:22:304 (2,1) - Space these out a bit so that they don't overlap. My recommendation:
http://puu.sh/cDAsm/78037584ed.jpg02:24:975 (1,2,3) - This isn't consistent with the rest of your map. Stack these triplets and remove the unnecessary bezier point on this slider.
02:25:917 (6,1) - Fix this sliderbow
02:27:488 (1) - Move this slider so that it doesn't overlap with 02:27:174 (4)
02:28:901 (1) - I'm not certain this is rankable, consider remapping
[Hyper]
00:33:142 (1,2) - Fix this sliderbow
00:58:430 (2) - Consider moving this note here:
http://puu.sh/cDAOL/cc7d1008ba.jpgI'll leave the rest to someone more capable (Not good with lower difficulties), good luck on rank!