jomnhnk wrote:

80% of the Muzukashii diff was completed.

That the New Year is a busy time of conflict.
Sorry too late to make.
I will make every effort to 20% of the rest.
Please be patient.

1. Nothing, I suppose

1. 00:24:503 - remove one of two duplicating offsets
2. 00:28:273 (1) - add a finish?
3. 00:30:786 (1) - add whistle to complete hitsound pattern, maybe
4. 00:38:325 (1) - finish?
5. 00:40:838 (1) - whistle? The same as above
6. 00:47:121 (1) - sorry, I think it's quite short for Easy. You need to fix it either by removing the spinner and mapping through the gap or by extending it (and it needs more than just one extra white tick)
7. 00:48:692 (1) - finish

1. 00:55:917 (1) - it requires finish
2. 00:58:430 (5,1) - ^. Okay, I think you're competent enough to listen to the music and fix the rest of finishes missing by yourself
3. 01:26:075 (2) - move it to the right for less overlap
4. 01:41:153 (3) - why can't you make it curvy? ;_; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565970 Also, it needs a new combo
5. 02:10:838 (1) - I wouldn't recommend you to put a note, which goes after spinner, at the red tick, because it can be hard to catch it and get 300 from the first time
6. 02:16:807 (3,4) - please no, it's too sudden, so beginners will miss the note for sure

1. 00:50:734 (3,4,1,2) - short 1/2 slider followed by two 1/2 notes and slider with 1.4 spacing, which is followed by two 1/2 notes again
2. 00:54:503 (2,3,4,5,6) - a single 1/2 note followed by four short sliders in a row
3. 01:09:739 (3,4,5) - sliders with 3/4 gap between them that can deceive players
4. 01:25:446 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - looks more like an endurance contest or something
5. 01:40:053 (2,3) - don't follow the music in any way (or it's just me being unable to hear them)

1. 00:27:645 (1,2) - please, no. You sholdn't make such a jump in the very beginning. Map it with solid spacing, then do what you want
2. 00:33:456 (2,3) - claps don't sound nice here, being mixed with whistles. I suggest removing whistles
3. 00:28:273 (1) and other notes with finish on — how about using normal whistles instead, as you did with almost all the notes to follow the music? They sound better, in my opinion

1. 01:33:142 (2,3) - unstack them for better readability
2. 01:38:011 (1) - please change its shape, the one it has now looks broken and unfitting
3. 01:47:435 (1) - don't use so many repeats, better map through them since the player can break his combo by getting a sliderbreak here
4. 01:55:760 (4) - it overlaps 01:56:388 (2) so you need to move either this slider or the note under it
5. 01:59:687 (1) - unnecessary new combo
6. 02:04:242 (3) - looks unbalanced. Mind rebuilding? Just remove it and map the same slider, so it will be perfectly rounded
7. 02:06:126 (1,2) - unnecessary overlap
8. 02:07:383 (1) - lol broken slider again, do what I said above (remove, then put it again)
9. 02:11:153 (1) - ^
10. 02:12:566 (2) - ^ (meh)
11. 02:14:922 (1) - ^
12. 02:17:592 (1,2) - well, you know what to do (^)
13. 02:19:791 (1) - unnecessary new combo?
14. 02:20:106 (1) - add finish, remove clap. Also, don't spam claps here, they may ruin the music or don't follow it
15. 02:28:901 (1) - I hear something stream-ish here. How about mapping something that follows the music better? Repeating sliders, or notes mixed with repeating sliders... etc
16. 02:33:927 — kiai needs to be turned off at this point

1. 00:31:257 (4,5) - please, don't abuse long sliders. They don't fit here and feel like overmap
2. 00:41:624 (5,1,2,3) - same as ^
3. 00:48:064 (1) - are you sure you need it sped-up? This is a bit sudden, also I hear 1/4 notes at this moment, so you better continue the stream you already have
4. 00:57:331 (2,3,4) - doesn't look good for me, try rotating slider clockwise to prevent it from being overlapped
5. 00:58:430 (1) - you skipped an important beat at 00:58:744 which should be mapped. Seriously, it will give a better play experience if player will be able to play it by clicking
6. 01:10:917 (8) - better replace it with two 1/4 notes
7. 01:15:865 (5,6,1) - fix the spacing (should be 0.9)
8. 01:49:634 (1) - this speed-up again. I am still not sure if you really need it
9. 01:53:247 (1,2,3,4) - what I said before about overmap
10. 01:59:844 (5,6,1) - fix the spacing
11. 02:03:614 (1,2,3,4) - well, you know what I'm going to say
12. 02:06:127 (2) - I personally don't like its shape, mind removing and doing it again to get an ideal one?
13. 02:09:740 (1) - better start kiai at 02:10:053
14. 02:22:776 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - spacing increase looks ugly here, please compress the whole stream
15. 02:29:844 (1) - what I said before about putting a stream part instead of it

1. 気合タイムはいらないのかい！？

1. 00:34:399 - d追加してもいいかも？
2. 00:35:655 - そしてここにkを追加！
3. 00:37:854 - d追加！
4. 00:48:142 (119) - 太鼓難しいで3連打が2回続くのは難しいと思うからこれ消してもいいと思うー
5. 00:54:660 (155,156,157,158,159,160,161) - 難しいかも(´・ω・｀)　これを消して
   00:54:032 - ここからd d d k d d k　d　k k d みたいな感じで入れるといいかも？
6. 00:55:917 (164) - finishでもよさげ！
7. 01:04:712 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221) - 上と同じくこれを消して
   01:04:085 - ここからd d d k d d k　d d k k かなー
8. 01:27:645 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - これを削除
   01:27:645 - ここにK
   01:27:959 - d
   01:28:116 - ここからddk
9. 02:21:362 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - 02:22:776 (172,173,174,175,176,177) - この辺むずいかもしれんw

1. 00:48:613 (166) - これを消して00:48:692 (167) - ここにfinish追加！
2. 00:58:587 (254) - これはfinish外してもおkかなー
3. 02:09:818 (831,832,833) - これを削除
4. 02:10:053 (831) - ここにfinishを！

ReySHeL wrote:

じょむやっほいw
from in game chat~!

[General]

1. 気合タイムはいらないのかい！？

[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:399 - d追加してもいいかも？
2. 00:35:655 - そしてここにkを追加！
3. 00:37:854 - d追加！
4. 00:48:142 (119) - 太鼓難しいで3連打が2回続くのは難しいと思うからこれ消してもいいと思うー
5. 00:54:660 (155,156,157,158,159,160,161) - 難しいかも(´・ω・｀)　これを消して
   00:54:032 - ここからd d d k d d k　d　k k d みたいな感じで入れるといいかも？
6. 00:55:917 (164) - finishでもよさげ！
7. 01:04:712 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221) - 上と同じくこれを消して
   01:04:085 - ここからd d d k d d k　d d k k かなー
8. 01:27:645 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - これを削除
   01:27:645 - ここにK
   01:27:959 - d
   01:28:116 - ここからddk
9. 02:21:362 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - 02:22:776 (172,173,174,175,176,177) - この辺むずいかもしれんw

[jom's Taiko Onii]

1. 00:48:613 (166) - これを消して00:48:692 (167) - ここにfinish追加！
2. 00:58:587 (254) - これはfinish外してもおkかなー
3. 02:09:818 (831,832,833) - これを削除
4. 02:10:053 (831) - ここにfinishを！

以上！！
ナイスマップ(｀・ω・´)!
ランク目指してがんば！！

jomnhnk wrote:

ReySHeL wrote:

じょむやっほいw
from in game chat~!

[General]

1. 気合タイムはいらないのかい！？

[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:399 - d追加してもいいかも？
2. 00:35:655 - そしてここにkを追加！
3. 00:37:854 - d追加！
4. 00:48:142 (119) - 太鼓難しいで3連打が2回続くのは難しいと思うからこれ消してもいいと思うー
5. 00:54:660 (155,156,157,158,159,160,161) - 難しいかも(´・ω・｀)　これを消して１つ減らしたよー＞＜
   00:54:032 - ここからd d d k d d d　k k d みたいな感じで入れるといいかも？多分こーゆー意味かな！更新したよー
6. 00:55:917 (164) - finishでもよさげ！
7. 01:04:712 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221) - 上と同じくこれを消して
   01:04:085 - ここからd d d k d d k　d d k k かなー
8. 01:27:645 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - これを削除
   01:27:645 - ここにK
   01:27:959 - d
   01:28:116 - ここからddk
9. 02:21:362 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - 02:22:776 (172,173,174,175,176,177) - この辺むずいかもしれんw

同じ色の配列似あわせたけど難しいかなー（後ほど吟味してみるｗ
[jom's Taiko Onii]

1. 00:48:613 (166) - これを消して00:48:692 (167) - ここにfinish追加！
2. 00:58:587 (254) - これはfinish外してもおkかなー
3. 02:09:818 (831,832,833) - これを削除ここだけは、消すとおかしくなるような・・・時間ミスかな？
4. 02:10:053 (831) - ここにfinishを！
   Oniに関してはすべて変更しました。All OK fixed

以上！！
ナイスマップ(｀・ω・´)!
ランク目指してがんば！！

Code Miki wrote:

应邀前来mod

[RH]
00:27:331 (1) - 这个尾巴有必要消音吗 有点怪怪的
00:29:058 (4) - 这里用1/1的slider感觉打击感不太好
00:39:111 (1) - ^
00:58:430 (1) - 这个折返点不做出个打击点感觉挺可惜的
01:02:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 不如之前的那个圆润啊
01:09:739 (1,2,3,4) - 略丑
01:39:582 (3) - 这个note删掉会不会好点
01:50:734 (4) - 同前
02:00:787 (1) - ^

[TAKA]
有几个地方有挡到slider的reverse arrow,别的地方都很完美

太鼓不懂 简单diff懒得看 就这样

tsuka wrote:

操你妈的干你妈的 写了一遍然后服务器抽风全美丽
[jysb hardcore]
00:27:802 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 不够圆润,稍微重排下
00:40:838 (1,2,3,4) - 水平方向的几个折返跳感觉不太搭,垂直的倒是还好
01:07:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 四个哨子大概就够了 太多嫌吵
01:17:278 (4) - 前面都是折线slider,这个要不要统一下
01:26:467 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 慢速听的话节奏完全没问题,但是打起来总感觉怪怪,你自己权衡
02:22:304 (1) - 建议重排

taka op

jysb

我是中华小当家

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Heatherfield & jomnhnk

[jom's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:51:519 (137,138,139,140) - kdkd
01:13:273 (263) - move to 01:13:430, or add a note at 01:13:430
01:40:367 (428) - d
01:48:613 (x) - add a note
02:17:592 (138) - why big slider here?
02:30:472 (212) - only a note here, imo, plz let me use "lonely" to describe my feel, how about a spinner or slider?

[jom's Taiko Oni]
01:02:514 (285,286) - kd
01:31:886 (521) - 01:38:168 (576) - this part confuse me. I'd like to see all the tri-notes are similarly arranged, instead of sometime using kdd sometime using kkd. I know maybe it is follow the song, while you can see the famous beatmap "Nami Nakagawa - DON'T CUT".

[Beginner]
01:08:482 (1,2,1) - not smooth for connection
01:22:933 (2,3,4) - set the (2,3,4) in the center of (1)

Nice song and nice map, while [Beginner] need more work. GL~

391,343,142304,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,343,142383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,343,142462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,343,142540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,306,142619,5,2,0:0:0:0:
251,286,142697,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,267,142776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,248,142854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,229,142933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,209,143011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,190,143090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,171,143168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,151,143247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
151,132,143325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,113,143404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
126,94,143482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,74,143561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,55,143639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,36,143718,5,2,0:0:0:0:

fanzhen0019 wrote:

还有良心

fanzhen0019 wrote:

大太监

变成hyper了sad 我要不要再改改

Kodora wrote:

Where are BATs :\

kiddly wrote:

这是你逼我的
你妈拉面逼的
[TRaSH]
AR可以调高一点 不过不调也无所谓好像高点确实好看 不过9也没啥问题 暂时不动
00:29:687 (2) - Ctrl G我说支持
00:39:739 (2) - ^
00:57:488 (4) - 不太好看确实 没想好怎么改 回头再说
01:22:304 (1,2,3,4) - 音量偏小fixed
01:51:676 (3,4,5,6) - 这个节奏怪怪的 要不把三连放后面虽然是白线起不过意外的合理 fixed
02:01:729 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Another]
AR+0.5小数点真是神奇的发明
02:22:933 (2) - 反转箭头被挡住了等我问问taka这里怎么改
[Hyper]
原先是normal?既然改成Hyper了那AR+1吧好 od也+1
[Normal]
my sister can't pass

ur mom's noodle is great

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
Kiaitime统一？taka难度的kiaitime不一致
GD似乎没关系吧?
[TRaSH]
物件没有对齐时间轴！ 01:05:186
物件没有对齐时间轴！ 01:05:500
物件没有对齐时间轴！ 01:05:814fixed
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00:31:257 (4) - 这种3/4滑条的尾巴切换成Soft-Sampleset好点吧，听起来没那么违和 换了一下 反而感觉怪怪的 打了一年多已经习惯了 .-.
01:21:362 (1,2) - 这里用1/1比较好？..所以我已经没法下手改这图 感觉都很自然另外总感觉01:21:912 - 得加个note 似乎没有音
01:27:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 竟然把soft铃改了，把01:28:273 - 绿线切soft？soft铃也是用过 感觉还不如normal啊 后面切soft倒是确实可以

[TAKA's Another]
00:58:901 (2) - 这note放着有种微妙违和感...(feel strange)

[Hyper]
01:40:053 (2,3) - 这两感觉比较奇怪...我觉得还是从前面白线起比较好

[Normal]
同一时间有两个计时点（红线）！ 00:24:503
你说得对
[ps]
我觉得现在没什么图值得我射星了，还不如一次射完。 太浪费了!!!简直就是犯罪!!!

Heatherfield wrote:

太浪费了!!!简直就是犯罪!!!

lkx_Shore wrote:

我真的很不错（点赞手势

那你想散射到哪几张图里